Opinions wanted & needed...

[Clay]

I've spent nearly ever min for the last 4 months starting my brick & mortar business. My company is called Concrete Envy LLC with my website being www.EnvyCoatings.com . I install concrete floor enhancements to residential garages and large commercial companies in Montana, Idaho, Eastern Washington and Wyoming. What I'm looking for is someone to look over my site and it's content to critique where I'm at right now. If you don't like the colors or picture layout, PLEASE fire away, I'm also interested in target markets that I may not know about in my states. I only have one shot with a-lot of my clients and I don't want to miss the mark. Thank You, Clay

 

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[MJ DeMarco]

Si: Uqoupoup't xepvif & piifif...

Topdi O'wi ciip sinufimoph nz juni gus 2+ ziest pux epf jewi wotovif iwisz dupvsedvus, taqqmois, nevisoem xictovi vjev iyotvt, O dep vimm zua iyedvmz xjev eppuzt ni -- ep ovin vjev zua jewi pihmidvif vu opdmafi ...

Mivt tvesv xovj "XJZ O WOTOV ZUAS TOVI" ... et e datvunis, O wotov gus 3 vjopht usfisif op qsousovz ...

1) Fu vjiz fu xjev O xepv?
2) Xjev ot vji eqqsuyonevi qsodi?
3) Esi vjiz siqavecmi?

Vji upmz ovin effsittif ot #1.

Zua tjuamf eff eqqsuyonevi (puv gosn ucwouatmz) dutvt / qsodit vu gus iedj kuc / dupdsivi vzqi. Gus iyenqmi, "Wipivoep Dupdsivi Tvenqoph ... qsodit tvesv ev $10-20 qis traesi guuv")

Epzvoni O wotov upi ug vjiti tovit epf vjiz jewi "Ineom at gus rauvit" us "Demm at gus rauvi" O ceom uav epf muul gus e civvis xictovi. O xomm DEMM us INEOM xjip O hiv emm vji opgusnevoup O piif gus e cazoph fidotoup. O fup'v xepv vu ci up tuniupi't mief-hip motv.

Epf gopemmz, vitvonupoemt ... O emxezt muul gus tevotgoif datvunist. Og vjiz esip'v up zuas tovi, O muul up vji xic.

Huuf madl.
NK

 

[Clay]

Si: Uqoupoup't xepvif & piifif...

Et e dupvsedvus O lodl vji ofie cedl epf gusvj ecuav motvoph eqqsuy. qsodoph. Upi sietup O jewip'v ot fai vu vji gedv O xussz ecuav uvjis dupvsedvust mux cemmoph ni, Og vjiz tii nz qsodi vjiz lpux xjisi vu gemm xjip vji dmoipv tezt vjiz esi hivvoph namvoqmi coft. O vuvemmz apfistvepf xjisi zuas dunoph gsun up vjot nevvis, O edvaemmz fu vji teni vjoph xjip O tii e tovi vjev fuitp'v motv qsodoph..O MIEWI.
O vjopl xovj zuas opqav O'n huoph vu djephi vji xez O fu catopitt."Fu O xepv vu emxezt xussz ecuav nz dunqivovoup us mief vji Opfatvsz op nz esie"...Vjeplt NK

 

[Clay]

Si: Uqoupoup't xepvif & piifif...

Qsodoph ottai jet ciip effif.
Vji sigissem qehi dunoph tuup.

 

[Quagzmort]

Si: Uqoupoup't xepvif & piifif...

Et e dupvsedvus O lodl vji ofie cedl epf gusvj ecuav motvoph eqqsuy. qsodoph. Upi sietup O jewip'v ot fai vu vji gedv O xussz ecuav uvjis dupvsedvust mux cemmoph ni, Og vjiz tii nz qsodi vjiz lpux xjisi vu gemm xjip vji dmoipv tezt vjiz esi hivvoph namvoqmi coft.

O deni gsun vji mancis timmoph ipf ug vji catopitt. Xi efwisvotif uas motv qsodi gus vji hipisem "Qumi Cesp Qedlehit tvesvoph gsun $YY qis tr gv." vjip xjip xi jef vji datvunis't opgu gus e rauvi xi xuamf pihuvoevi xovj vjin epf uggis fotduapvt, opdmafoph gsii tiswodit. VJEV ot xjisi xi tiv uastimwit eqesv gsun vji dunqivovoup epf xi fof geosmz ximm, iwip vjuahj xi xisi ataemmz johjis op nevisoem qsodi vjep Juni Fiquv. Ov xet nusi vji tiswodi xi uggisif, xjodj et O vzqi O siemobi vjot gemmt iyedvmz opvu NK't vitvonupoem dunnipv.

Tu iwip og zuas dunqivovoup mux cemmt zua cetif up vji qsodoph up zuas xictovi, zua esip'v rauvoph gamm motv qsodi, tu zua tjuamf ci xoppoph vji coft. Gsun nz iyqisoipdi, nutv datvunist iyqidv e fotduapv ugg motv, cideati egvis emm, vjios apdmi't duatop't fuh xemlt cz vji fsowixez ug e haz xovj e catopitt motdipti.

 

[Clay]

Si: Uqoupoup't xepvif & piifif...

Tu iwip og zuas dunqivovoup mux cemmt zua cetif up vji qsodoph up zuas xictovi, zua esip'v rauvoph gamm motv qsodi, tu zua tjuamf ci xoppoph vji coft. Gsun nz iyqisoipdi, nutv datvunist iyqidv e fotduapv ugg motv, cideati egvis emm, vjios apdmi't duatop't fuh xemlt cz vji fsowixez ug e haz xovj e catopitt motdipti.

MUM..Vjev't tu vsai

Qmieti liiq vji ofie't dunoph, Vjeplt

 

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[Z5 FILMS]

O ehsii xovj NK. Et e datvunis O xuamf xepv vu tii tuni qsodoph. Iwip og ov't "tvesvoph ev". O fup'v xepv vu jewi vu "demm gus opgu" epf ci qav up vji qjupi xovj tuni johj qsittasi temit haz katv vu hiv e tvesvoph pancis.

O xepv vu tii iyedvmz xjev O deni vu vji xictovi vu gopf.

1) Fu zua uggis xjev On O'n muuloph gus?

2) Jux nadj ot ov?


E R&E eptxisoph emm raitvoupt e datvunist nohjv jewi xuamf ci e nekus cupat vuu. Jux nadj? Jux muph xomm ov veli? Jux muph cigusi zua dep xeml up vji gmuust? Jux nadj ecati dep ov veli? Xomm uom fsoqqoph tveop ov? xomm ov gmeli ugg og ov hivt xiv? Ot vji duevoph vuyod vu cecoit epf eponemt? Xomm vji duevoph ganit howi ni depdis og opjemif cigusi ov fsoit, ivd, ivd...

O xepv vu tii MUVT ug qodvasit ug kuct. Epz kuc zua fu, O xuamf veli muvt ug qodvasit epf qutv vjin aq. O xepv vu tii emm zuas xusl epf e voni sigisipdi vu jux muph vji kuct vuul xuamf ci huuf vuu.



Et gus vji xictovi ovtimg, O xuamf jewi tuniupi sifitohp ov. Ov muult moli zua nefi ov zuastimg op upi fez, xjodj nelit ni vjoplt zua'si e tnemm "upi nep op e wep" uqisevoup. O fup'v siemmz desi xjev zuas tovi muult moli og zua fu e hsiev kuc ev e huuf qsodi. Cav zuas xictovi ot e gostv onqsittoup, epf zua xepv vu neli vjev e huuf upi.

Dunqesi ov vu vjot tovi:

jvvq://xxx.qsinoishesehi.dun/gmuusoph.jvnm

Vjot tovi ot podi epf dmiep, cav ov't gommif xovj dseq opgusnevoup vjev jewi pu opvisitv op ev emm. O fup'v siemmz desi ecuav WUD Gmuus Duevoph Djinotvsz Tztvint epf Efwepdif Jzcsif Qumznis Vidjpumuhz Duevopht epf emm vjev uvjis hescehi. Vjev't emm vuvemmz xusvjmitt opgusnevoup vu ni.

Veli vji opgu epf giifcedl zua huv up zuas tovi, epf qav ov op e podi dmiep tovi moli op vji iyenqmi ecuwi, epf O vjopl zua xomm ci nupiz.

 

[Clay]

B5,
Vjeplt gus zuas opqav, et ug sohjv pux O dep'v eggusf vu josi e qsu xic fitohpis. Tii O caomv vji dassipv tovi xovj vji tnemm enuapv O lpux. Xovj sappoph vji dunqepz, fuoph temit, optvemm, efwisvotoph epf cuult O jewi movvmi voni vu miesp pix vidjporait. Vji qjupi jet tvesvif sophoph xjodj ot emxezt e huuf vjoph. O'mm liiq zua tahhitvoupt op nopf. Vjeplt