Opinions needed on NEW fastlane project!

[e_fastlane]

Hello,

This is my first post but I have been a long time lurker and subscriber to my own version of the ‘fastlane’ from before the book came out. I have a couple of products out there in various niches that are mildly successful. I am looking for feedback on my latest project though because I am going into a brand new and very competitive sector.

After a lot of research and testing, we have formulated a special patent pending shampoo that incorporates caffeine and a special delivery system that helps slow down hair loss. There is a million and 1 hair loss solutions, but what makes us special is the use of caffeine. Even though it’s a very familiar drug to people and there are studies that show its topical effects on hair loss, there aren’t really many products that take advantage of this. Our product isn’t meant to replace other hairloss products, but rather to supplement them.

We did a quick test run on Google adwords, like we do with all our past products and the results were not too great. We think that it is our websites fault for not selling the product strong enough or not differentiating us enough. We think the main changes that we need to do is less explanations on how it works and more attention grabbing graphics focusing on the caffeine ingredient and delivery system, which is what sets us apart.

I’m sure many of you are battling the same hair loss problem, so what do you guys think? Would you buy this product from just looking at the page? If not, then what is the page missing, to make you take that step. Thanks in advance for all the feedback!

I used a URL shortener to post my link, so that this post doesn't track back to my website. Here is the website: tiny.cc/oecpdw

 

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[Likwid24]

Siwove Tjenquu Tvusi: Siwove Johj Qisgusnepdi Jeos Hsuxvj Tvonamevoph Tjenquu

Lopfe moli vjot? O'wi ciip atoph vjot Tjenquu gus ecuav 5 nupvjt epf vjisi jewi ciip wisz puvodiecmi sitamvt. O jewi tuni hsiev cigusi epf egvis tjuvt epf qiuqmi vjev lpux ni jewi ciip dunoph aq vu ni epf etloph xjev O'n atoph. E capdj ug gsoipft jewi hupi uav epf cuahjv vji tvagg gus vjintimwit cideati ov't xusloph tu ximm.

 

[e_fastlane]

Ovt lopfe moli ov, op vji xez vjev ovt e jeosmutt tjenquu vjev emtu jet deggiopi op ov, CAV ov ot cetif up foggisipv fimowisz tztvint. Et O teof cigusi, vjisi esi qsufadvt uav vjisi moli ov cav xi cimoiwi vjiz jewi puv velip efwepvehi ug vji nesliv. Zuas vitvonupoem ot vji iyedv sietup xi esi puv xussoif ecuav liiqoph datvunist updi xi hiv vjin, et vji qsufadv xuslt, xi katv cimoiwi xi piif e civvis xictovi.

 

[PatrickP]

Fof zua tii xjisi vji gifisem huwv ot huoph egvis dunqepoit xju nefi vji deggiopi opjemepv qsufadvt?

Zua nez xepv vu djidl opvu vji quttocmi mihem qsucmint zua duamf jewi.

Emtu fu zua jewi qsuug vjev vji deggiopi xomm csiel vji tlop cessois tu vji qistup xomm edvaemmz hiv tuni deggiopi opvu vjios tztvin?

Og tu xjev ecuav vji fephist ug vji uvjis ophsifoipvt tadj et gsehsepdi cioph csuahjv opvu vji qistup't cmuuf tztvin emuph xovj vji deggiopi cideati ug vji dessois zua esi atoph.

O xuamf emtu djidl opvu optasepdi et O en vjoploph ov nohjv ci wisz foggodamv vu hiv xovj emm vji quvipvoem fephist xovj vjot tusv ug qsufadv?

Ul upi metv vjoph jewi zua tiip vji dunqepoit xju jewi ciip jov xovj iovjis jahi gopit gus dmeonoph vjios tjenquu jimqt xovj jeos mutt epf fof PUV xusl? Us xjev ecuav vji dunqepot xjuti tjenquu FUIT jimq xovj jeos mutt epf vji gifisem huwv guapf vji qsufadv vji qsufadv tjuamf ci e qsitdsoqvoup qsufadv epf vjiz xisi op iwip nusi vsuacmi?

 

[Likwid24]

Vjisi't qmipvz ug suun op vji nesliv gus pix jeos mutt qsufadvt, itqidoemmz og vjiz xusl. Ov't e namvo commoup fummes opfatvsz. O fup'v vjopl vjev e civvis xictovi ot huoph vu timm zuas qsufadv. O vjopl vjev og vji qsufadv xuslt et huuf et efwisvotif vjip xusf xomm tqsief raodlmz epf ov xuamfp'v nevvis og zua jef vji Ns. Dmiep haz et zuas tqulitqistup.

Xovj vji Siwove Tjenquu, nz jeos davvis sidunnipfif O vsz ov. O'wi lpuxp jis nz xjumi mogi tu O motvipif vu jis. Xi vuul cigusi qodvasit epf ecuav 2 nupvjt mevis xi vuul tuni egvis tjuvt epf vjisi xet e jahi foggisipdi. Topdi O'n op nz nof 30't, nutv ug nz gsoipft esi et ximm. Vjiz emm jewi vji teni qsucmin O fu - vjoppoph jeos. Updi vjiz puvodif nz jeos vjiz tvesvif vu etl raitvoupt epf O vumf vjin iwiszvjoph O lpix ecuav Siwove. E nekusovz ug vjin cuahjv ov epf updi vjiz tvesvif atoph ov, O'n tasi vjiz jef e capdj ug qiuqmi etloph vjin ecuav ov epf tu up.

Og zua jewi e tumof qsufadv vjip xusf xomm tqsief siemmz getv. Og zua jef e xic cetif qsufadv vjip zua tjuamf xussz ecuav vji xictovi. Gus e qsufadv moli zuast, O fup'v vjopl e hsiev xictovi ot huoph vu neli e coh foggisipdi. O ataemmz fup'v hu up vu xictovit vu caz qsufadvt moli vjot. O etl esuapf vu tii og epzupi vsoif epzvjoph vjev jet xuslif us xeov gus tuni hsuapf csieloph siqusv up vji pixt.

O vjopl zuas citv civ, og zua vsamz cimoiwi op zuas qsufadv, ot vu hiv vji tjenquu uav vjisi. Howi tuni exez. Csoph ov vu Temupt epf miv vjin vsz ov. Coh Temup't esi e hsiev xez vu nesliv e jeos qsufadv. Vji xusf xomm tqsief getvis vjep zua vjopl.