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OK, here’s my honest feedback and it’s going to be harsh.
First, I have no idea who you are, and why I should listen to your advice. To me, youtube is the same thing as like reading a book. I need to know who the author is, and why his advice is better than other advice.
After watching your video for a few minutes it’s clear to me that it is a very generic video. this video is the same as hundreds of other generic advice videos on YouTube.
I kept waiting to hear the actual advice in the video, and it just never came. In your video on why you should stop setting goals. When does your first channel differentiation information appear on the video? I kept waiting and waiting for the intro to be over.
Step one is to write down what do you want to achieve. Why didn’t you start the video with you? Just saying, what do you want to achieve in life this video will teach you how to do it by not creating goals and by doing something totally different.
Have you ever watched MrBeast videos which start with the action in the first three seconds?
I would have done it some thing like this, “let me show you how to never set a goal again. In this video, I will show you how to create a system that will guarantee that you will be successful in reaching your goal within six months. if you used to set a goal and never came close to it, I was the same way. It wasn’t until I discovered that by doing this I was able to crush my goal of swimming 1 mile in six months. This is a photo of me, learning how to swim on day one, and this is what happened on the day 92”.
I just did the above paragraph using speech to text and purposely did not go back up to edit it. I wanted you to hear what came out of my brain when just thinking about how I would try to convince somebody that my system of setting processes worked for me.
When I want to learn something on, YouTube, for example, stretching, I will watch about 3 to 7 videos about stretching. If they’re are one or two videos that has information that is different or unique compared to the other videos then I will subscribe. Else those other videos are the same as every other one, and there’s no reason for me to subscribe to them.
First, I have no idea who you are, and why I should listen to your advice. To me, youtube is the same thing as like reading a book. I need to know who the author is, and why his advice is better than other advice.
After watching your video for a few minutes it’s clear to me that it is a very generic video. this video is the same as hundreds of other generic advice videos on YouTube.
I kept waiting to hear the actual advice in the video, and it just never came. In your video on why you should stop setting goals. When does your first channel differentiation information appear on the video? I kept waiting and waiting for the intro to be over.
Step one is to write down what do you want to achieve. Why didn’t you start the video with you? Just saying, what do you want to achieve in life this video will teach you how to do it by not creating goals and by doing something totally different.
Have you ever watched MrBeast videos which start with the action in the first three seconds?
I would have done it some thing like this, “let me show you how to never set a goal again. In this video, I will show you how to create a system that will guarantee that you will be successful in reaching your goal within six months. if you used to set a goal and never came close to it, I was the same way. It wasn’t until I discovered that by doing this I was able to crush my goal of swimming 1 mile in six months. This is a photo of me, learning how to swim on day one, and this is what happened on the day 92”.
I just did the above paragraph using speech to text and purposely did not go back up to edit it. I wanted you to hear what came out of my brain when just thinking about how I would try to convince somebody that my system of setting processes worked for me.
When I want to learn something on, YouTube, for example, stretching, I will watch about 3 to 7 videos about stretching. If they’re are one or two videos that has information that is different or unique compared to the other videos then I will subscribe. Else those other videos are the same as every other one, and there’s no reason for me to subscribe to them.