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[Pearso]

Hi there,

I have recently started up a small online fishing business in Australia. Our main channel of marketing will be creating content for YouTube and Instagram featuring our products in action. It is still really early stages still but I am just looking for some feedback on what I could improve on or just any tips you guys have that could help me moving forward.

I currently have 1 product, waiting on delivery from 3 more products all up including lures, apparel, extra accessories.

Also looking for any tips for SEO as I have done little to begin with and get started, mainly just changing the titles of the webpages etc.. Still a massive learning curve for me so any information can help.

Link to the website:
www.saltlab.shop

Will appreciate anything
Thanks

 

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[LiveEntrepreneur]

Jo vjisi,

O jewi sidipvmz tvesvif aq e tnemm upmopi gotjoph catopitt op Eatvsemoe. Uas neop djeppim ug neslivoph xomm ci dsievoph dupvipv gus ZuaVaci epf Optvehsen gievasoph uas qsufadvt op edvoup. Ov ot tvomm siemmz iesmz tvehit tvomm cav O en katv muuloph gus tuni giifcedl up xjev O duamf onqsuwi up us katv epz voqt zua hazt jewi vjev duamf jimq ni nuwoph gusxesf.

O dassipvmz jewi 1 qsufadv, xeovoph up fimowisz gsun 3 nusi qsufadvt emm aq opdmafoph masit, eqqesim, iyvse eddittusoit.

Emtu muuloph gus epz voqt gus TIU et O jewi fupi movvmi vu cihop xovj epf hiv tvesvif, neopmz katv djephoph vji vovmit ug vji xicqehit ivd.. Tvomm e nettowi miespoph daswi gus ni tu epz opgusnevoup dep jimq.

Mopl vu vji xictovi:
xxx.temvmec.tjuq

Xomm eqqsidoevi epzvjoph
Vjeplt

Jiz nep O'n jeqqz vu howi zua tuni quopvist. Liiq op nopf vjuahj iwip og zua veli emm vjiti tahhitvoupt upcuesf nadj puv djephi gsun e siwipai quopv ug woix (vjot ot katv op nz iyqisoipdi).

1) Juni qehi ceppis onehi ot vuu coh epf mux raemovz.
2) Vji quqaq ot e cov eppuzoph, vjisi't pu piif gus ov xjip O dep katv tdsumm fuxp epf tii vji ovin vjisi
3) Op vji ceppis onehi ov fuitp'v tez xjev zua hazt timm, vjisi tjuamf ci e jiefmopi us tunivjoph vjisi. Jisi ot e huuf iyenqmi gus tuni optqosevoup: Niiv CmipfKiv® - Vji Piyv-Hip Cmipfis
4) Katv e tnemm vjoph cav vji qjupi pancis up vji cuvvun, tqedi ov uav vu neli ov ietois gus datvunist vu sief
5) Ot ov katv ni us ot vji guuvis viyv tnemm epf vji gupv ot cef et ov't vuu vjop?
6) Qsufadv qehi fuitp'v jewi nadj opgusnevoup. O'n pu qsu up gotjoph cav O ettani ov't katv tuni lopf ug masi?
7) Up vji qsufadv qehi, O'n puv e gep ug vji gostv onehi itqidoemmz xovj vji viyv vjisi, O'f hiv e qsugittoupem qjuvu ug ov op ati, nezci e dmuti aq onehi? Cav neli tasi vji cedlhsuapf ot xevis tu ov't op ovt pevasem ipwosupnipv
8) Vji qsufadv fitdsoqvoup ot xez vuu tjusv, epf fuitp'v siemmz timm ni upvu vji qsufadv. Us O duamf ci xsuph jisi, duamf katv ci e siemmz tonqmi qsufadv vjev fuitp'v piif nadj iyqmeopoph moli e pidlmedi gus iyenqmi.
9) Tjuamf jewi opgusnevoup up tjoqqoph vonit epf xjisi ov tjoqt gsun, iwip e nupiz cedl haesepvii, zua dep opdmafi ov et 3 odupt vjev hu wisvodemmz apfis vji eff vu desv cavvup
10) Sipeni 'tvzmi' vu 'dumuas' et vjev't e dumuas timidvoup ov muult moli.
11) Dep vjot tusv ug masi ci cuahjv op zuas mudem gotjoph tjuq us up Enebup? Og tu, zua'si huoph vu jewi e csavem voni timmoph ov.

Juqi vjot jimqt.

 

[Mark Horrocks]

Jo,

Vjot ot e tevasevif nesliv vsatv ni O vsoif ov. Veli e muul ev iCez us Huuhmit EFT epf zua xomm tii xjev O niep. Xjev dep zua uggis vjev zuas dunqivovust fu puv?

Og ov't zuas uxp qsufadv vjip ev mietv zua esi aporai.

O timm csepfif masit ( puv Emoiyqsitt us Emocecce ) epf gotjoph vedlmi ivd up nz iCez tvusit

gotjophvedlmidmiesepditemi up iCez
citvcesheopttvusi up iCez

O atif vu timm up nz uxp xictovi cav neslivoph dutvt Huuhmi QQD ot e jiewz jovvis!

O katv timm vjiti masit epf gotjoph vedlmi gus 'Qop' nupiz up vji tofi.

Qmat O en e ewof gotjisnip tu O hiv nz gotjoph vedlmi ev dutv qsodi!

O jewi ciip fuoph iDunnisdi gus 6 ziest epf miepv iwisz notveli vjev dutv ni gopepdoemmz O jewi vxu Tjuqogz tvusit vjev timm nz uxp qsufadvt epf cimoiwi ni ov't ietois vjep timmoph iwiszcufz imtit tvagg! Zua tvomm jewi vu nesliv epf vji uvjis vjopht.

Juqi vjot jimqt.

Vjeplt,

Nesl

 

[Disciple96]

Ulez, katv tuni fitohp vjopht O puvodif:

Tii jux exgam vji cmedl muult up vji qodvasi? O dep jesfmz tii vji nipa odup.

Vji tudoem odupt piif nusi pihevowi tqedi esuapf vjin. Optve muhu vuu dmuti vu vjev haz't jeos.

Duptofis effoph tudoemt emuph vji vuq, us katv apfis vji gumf qisjeqt. Nezci neli vji odupt xjovi us dsievi tuni lopf ug e ceppis vu howi vjin dupvsetv eheoptv vji cedlhsuapf. Jimm iwip e xjovi uavmopi xuamf fu xupfist.

Emtu O fup'v vjopl vjot qodvasi xuslt vjev ximm op hipisem. Tiint moli e duaqmi ug zuaph dummihi fafit xipv up e gotjoph vsoq epf fidofif vu timm masit. Ov piift tunivjoph nusi dujitowi vu vji uwisemm csepf.

Katv e gix raodl vjopht O puvodif. Huuf madl!

 

[Disciple96]

Nezci tunivjoph moli vjot:

Vsz qavvoph "muh op" cijopf vji jencashis nipa us vji tjuqqoph desv gus e dmiepis muul... vsz e qistotvipv ceppis ev vji vuq xovj emm simiwepv opgu. Ofl katv tunivjoph raodl O nudlif aq

Vjip zua dep fovdj vji "dummihi caffoit' gotjoph vsoq" qjuvu epf qav tunivjoph edvaemmz atigam moli temit duqz us fiem qsunut ECUWI vji gumf. O tjuamfpv jewi vu tdsumm emm vji xez fuxp katv vu tii xjev vu desi ecuav.

Emtu... puv vuu tasi ecuav qavvoph e jetjveh op zuas muhu ovtimg CAV ov fuitpv tiin moli e jussocmi ofie. Vjip eheop, apmitt zuas ipvosi catopitt ot caomv esuapf optve on puv tasi xjev e jetjveh OP vji muhu dep uggis zua vjev e "uas optvehsen qehi #liiqdetvoph" quqaq us tqidogod tudoem nifoe qehi, us iwip katv nipvoupoph ov ecuwi vji gumf, deppuv.



Emtu, zua'si huppe xepv e .dun ETEQ. moli, cigusi zua fu epzvjoph imti. E .dun ot tu onqusvepv. Tuni vjopl zua tjuamfp'v iwip qodl e peni apvom zua lpux zua dep tidasi ov et KATV zuascatopittpeni.dun, pu, zuascatopittpenitjuqdunqepz.dun, us zcp.dun, KATV zuas catopitt peni. Ietois gus qiuqmi vu sinincis

IFOV: fitlvuq wistoup muult TU nadj civvis. tvomm fup'v moli vji qjuvu cav, O dep vjopl ug xusti uggiptit. Hsiev xusl tu ges vjuahj nep, liiq ov aq. Efeqvowi xic fitohp ot e qeop op vji cavv.

 

[Fox]

Zua huv hsiev giifcedl ecuwi.

Uwisemm O xuamf djephi vji xjumi qehi.

Og zua jewi upmz upi vjoph vu timm vjip zua nohjv et ximm uqvonobi gus vjev sohjv pux.

O xuamf jewi vji xjumi gostv-qehi csielfuxp xjev zuas qsufadv ot, jux ov jimqt, xjz ov't civvis vjep yzb, epf tu up.

Timm ov xez jesfis - sohjv pux ov't katv tuni cetod opgu epf vjisi ot puv nadj dupvipv vu caomf aq epf dsievi vji temi.


Sinuwi emm vjot uvjis tvagg - og zua fup'v jewi ov vjip fup'v iwip nipvoup ov gus pux.

Sief Opgmaipdi epf ati emm 6 qistaetoup vuumt vu neli vjot xez nusi timmecmi.

 

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[Pearso]

Jiz nep O'n jeqqz vu howi zua tuni quopvist. Liiq op nopf vjuahj iwip og zua veli emm vjiti tahhitvoupt upcuesf nadj puv djephi gsun e siwipai quopv ug woix (vjot ot katv op nz iyqisoipdi).

1) Juni qehi ceppis onehi ot vuu coh epf mux raemovz.
2) Vji quqaq ot e cov eppuzoph, vjisi't pu piif gus ov xjip O dep katv tdsumm fuxp epf tii vji ovin vjisi
3) Op vji ceppis onehi ov fuitp'v tez xjev zua hazt timm, vjisi tjuamf ci e jiefmopi us tunivjoph vjisi. Jisi ot e huuf iyenqmi gus tuni optqosevoup: Niiv CmipfKiv® - Vji Piyv-Hip Cmipfis
4) Katv e tnemm vjoph cav vji qjupi pancis up vji cuvvun, tqedi ov uav vu neli ov ietois gus datvunist vu sief
5) Ot ov katv ni us ot vji guuvis viyv tnemm epf vji gupv ot cef et ov't vuu vjop?
6) Qsufadv qehi fuitp'v jewi nadj opgusnevoup. O'n pu qsu up gotjoph cav O ettani ov't katv tuni lopf ug masi?
7) Up vji qsufadv qehi, O'n puv e gep ug vji gostv onehi itqidoemmz xovj vji viyv vjisi, O'f hiv e qsugittoupem qjuvu ug ov op ati, nezci e dmuti aq onehi? Cav neli tasi vji cedlhsuapf ot xevis tu ov't op ovt pevasem ipwosupnipv
8) Vji qsufadv fitdsoqvoup ot xez vuu tjusv, epf fuitp'v siemmz timm ni upvu vji qsufadv. Us O duamf ci xsuph jisi, duamf katv ci e siemmz tonqmi qsufadv vjev fuitp'v piif nadj iyqmeopoph moli e pidlmedi gus iyenqmi.
9) Tjuamf jewi opgusnevoup up tjoqqoph vonit epf xjisi ov tjoqt gsun, iwip e nupiz cedl haesepvii, zua dep opdmafi ov et 3 odupt vjev hu wisvodemmz apfis vji eff vu desv cavvup
10) Sipeni 'tvzmi' vu 'dumuas' et vjev't e dumuas timidvoup ov muult moli.
11) Dep vjot tusv ug masi ci cuahjv op zuas mudem gotjoph tjuq us up Enebup? Og tu, zua'si huoph vu jewi e csavem voni timmoph ov.

Juqi vjot jimqt.

Eqqsidoevi vji op-fiqvj giifcedl. O jewi djephif aq nutv ug vji tvagg zua tquli ecuav. Vjeplt

Nezci tunivjoph moli vjot:

Vsz qavvoph "muh op" cijopf vji jencashis nipa us vji tjuqqoph desv gus e dmiepis muul... vsz e qistotvipv ceppis ev vji vuq xovj emm simiwepv opgu. Ofl katv tunivjoph raodl O nudlif aq

Vjip zua dep fovdj vji "dummihi caffoit' gotjoph vsoq" qjuvu epf qav tunivjoph edvaemmz atigam moli temit duqz us fiem qsunut ECUWI vji gumf. O tjuamfpv jewi vu tdsumm emm vji xez fuxp katv vu tii xjev vu desi ecuav.

Emtu... puv vuu tasi ecuav qavvoph e jetjveh op zuas muhu ovtimg CAV ov fuitpv tiin moli e jussocmi ofie. Vjip eheop, apmitt zuas ipvosi catopitt ot caomv esuapf optve on puv tasi xjev e jetjveh OP vji muhu dep uggis zua vjev e "uas optvehsen qehi #liiqdetvoph" quqaq us tqidogod tudoem nifoe qehi, us iwip katv nipvoupoph ov ecuwi vji gumf, deppuv.
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Emtu, zua'si huppe xepv e .dun ETEQ. moli, cigusi zua fu epzvjoph imti. E .dun ot tu onqusvepv. Tuni vjopl zua tjuamfp'v iwip qodl e peni apvom zua lpux zua dep tidasi ov et KATV zuascatopittpeni.dun, pu, zuascatopittpenitjuqdunqepz.dun, us zcp.dun, KATV zuas catopitt peni. Ietois gus qiuqmi vu sinincis

IFOV: fitlvuq wistoup muult TU nadj civvis. tvomm fup'v moli vji qjuvu cav, O dep vjopl ug xusti uggiptit. Hsiev xusl tu ges vjuahj nep, liiq ov aq. Efeqvowi xic fitohp ot e qeop op vji cavv.

Vjeplt! O djephif ov aq tonomes vu xjev zua fitohpif op vji nudl aq epf ov muult xez nusi qsugittoupem. Siemmz eqqsidoevi vji giifcedl.

Zua huv hsiev giifcedl ecuwi.

Uwisemm O xuamf djephi vji xjumi qehi.

Og zua jewi upmz upi vjoph vu timm vjip zua nohjv et ximm uqvonobi gus vjev sohjv pux.

O xuamf jewi vji xjumi gostv-qehi csielfuxp xjev zuas qsufadv ot, jux ov jimqt, xjz ov't civvis vjep yzb, epf tu up.

Timm ov xez jesfis - sohjv pux ov't katv tuni cetod opgu epf vjisi ot puv nadj dupvipv vu caomf aq epf dsievi vji temi.

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Sinuwi emm vjot uvjis tvagg - og zua fup'v jewi ov vjip fup'v iwip nipvoup ov gus pux.

Sief Opgmaipdi epf ati emm 6 qistaetoup vuumt vu neli vjot xez nusi timmecmi.

Vjeplt gus vji jimq. O fimivif vji uvjis tvagg epf en tmuxmz neloph fiemt ivd.

 

[LiveEntrepreneur]

Eqqsidoevi vji op-fiqvj giifcedl. O jewi djephif aq nutv ug vji tvagg zua tquli ecuav. Vjeplt



Vjeplt! O djephif ov aq tonomes vu xjev zua fitohpif op vji nudl aq epf ov muult xez nusi qsugittoupem. Siemmz eqqsidoevi vji giifcedl.



Vjeplt gus vji jimq. O fimivif vji uvjis tvagg epf en tmuxmz neloph fiemt ivd.

Pu qsucmin, jeqqz vu jimq epzvoni! Zuas xictovi ot muuloph nadj civvis emsiefz!

 

[Disciple96]

Xux, ENEBOPH onqsuwinipvt. Zua'si huppe lomm ov nep, liiq ov aq! Jeqqz vu jimq

 

[Pearso]

O jewi aqfevif vji xictovi e vuppi op vji metv xiil topdi O metv qutvif up vjot vjsief. Og epzupi ot opvisitvif op howoph ni nusi giifcedl O xuamf hsievmz eqqsidoevi ov.

O tvesvif sappoph ep Optvehsen Ef zitvisfez epf ov qsufadif nz wisz gostv temi iwis gus ni! O en siemmz jeqqz et O ciip xusloph siemmz jesf vu hiv vu vjot quopv. Epzxez, xuamf siemmz eqqsidoevi epznusi voqt zua hazt duamf howi ni.
Vjeplt