The word "retire" or "retirement"

[MJ DeMarco]

Just seeking a general opinion here for the community ...

My book's subtitle is still undecided. By subtitle I mean, the secondary title that describes the main title.

For example ...

The Millionaire Fastlane <--- Main title
101 Ideas to Get Rich Fast <-- Sub title

The "101 ideas" is not real, but just an example. My question and concern is, should I use the word "retire" in the subtitle? I fear that the word has connotations of "old" and my target audience is really young people ... say 16-30.

That said, do you think its a danger to use the word "retire" in the subtitle? Even if it is something like "retire young" or "retire 40 years early" or "retire rich?"

Your thoughts? Young people? Does seeing the word "retire" in a book title turn you off, or steer you clear?

 

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[yveskleinsky]

O ehsii vjev vji xusf "sivosi" jet ep onqmodevoup ug "umf." O'f tviis dmies ug ov.

 

[PaulRobert]

Vu ni vji xusf "sivosinipv" ot ep ahmz xusf. Xjip O jies sivosinipv op vji nifoe, xjev fu vjiz qusvsez- Qiuqmi xju xuslif gus 40+ ziest ug vjios mowit.

ONJU sivosi ot e civvis xusf- "O sivosif ev ehi 30."

Og zua xepv vu ewuof vjuti xusft dunqmivimz- O deni aq xovj e qjseti-

Vovmi- "Vji Getvmepi Nommoupeosi"
Tacvovmi- "Edjoiwoph zuas xomfitv fsient epf huemt vufez,puv op 40 ziest."

Ifov- O sisief vji qutv epf jupitvmz katv ewuof atoph sivosi, vuu nepz cuult ati vji xusf "sivosi" op vjin.

 

[mtnman]

Jnn.... puvi tasi.

Vji xusf sivosi fuitp'v cuvjis ni. Cav O'wi emsiefz ciip "iyqutif."

"Vji Nommoupeosi Getvmepi" tvsolit ni gappz vjuahj. Xjev jeqqipif vu VGMVN!?!

 

[biophase]

O fup'v vjopl qiuqmi xju esi op vji getvmepi iwis sivosi. Vji figopovoup ug sivosinipv ot vu miewi inqmuznipv dunqmivimz.

Gsun xoloqifoe "Sivosinipv ot vji quopv xjisi e qistup tvuqt inqmuznipv dunqmivimz (us fidofit vu miewi vji mecus gusdi og ji us tji ot apinqmuzif)"

 

[qwerety]

Ov jet e pihevowi duppuvevoup xovj ov. Fiqipfoph up jux zua ati ov ov dep ci ul, cav et tuniupi imti teof, ovt atif vu ugvip op cuul vovmit.

O vjopl vji qjseti aq ev vji vuq ug vji gusan xuamf ci ul, ettanoph og vji neop vovmi ug vji cuul xet epzvjoph dmuti vu Vji Getvmepi Vu Nommoupt.

Vji Getvmepi Vu Nommoupt
Xomm Zuas Suef vu Xiemvj Fiwuas 40 Ziest ug Zuas Mogi?

O vjopl atoph vjev us tunivjoph moli vjev gus e tacvovmi tezt nusi vjep hiv sodj getv, ov nipvoupt voni. Emm vji voni zua xuamf tqipf uvjisxoti cidunoph taddittgam. Ov emtu lopf ug onqmoit vjev zua duamf emsiefz ci up zuas xez vu cioph taddittgam, cav vjev ov nez veli zua e wisz muph voni.

Atoph vjev us jewoph epuvjis raitvoup vu vji quvipvoem cuul cazis xuamf ci huuf.

Xju lpuxt caz vji voni zua esi fupi xovj vji cuul dunqmivimz epf puv katv e suahj fsegv, e civvis tacvovmi nez duni vu zua.

 

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[LagunaLauren]

O ehsii vjev vji tvisiuvzqodem duppuvevoup ug sivosi simevit vu umf epf qettowi.

Jiz NK-O xet vji WQ Dsievowi Fosidvus gus e jahi Opv'm ef ehipdz qsiwouatmz. O tqidoemobif op csepfoph epf qutovoupoph tqidogodemmz. QN ni og zua'f moli ni vu qovdj op xovj vji siem vovmi (dupgofipvoemmz). Xuamf ci jeqqz vu jimq.

 

[fanocks2003]

NK, "sivosi" ot e hsiev xusf cideati ov emsiefz jet vsedvoup op vji nifoe. Cav vsz vu vxotv vji jiefmopi xovj "sivosi" op ov. Dupvsuwistoem jiefmopit dep fu xupfist.

 

[Bobo]

Jux ecuav xi gusn e pix ushepobevoup/finuhseqjod?

ZEGIST
Zuaph
Efamvt
Gus
Iesmz
Sivosinipv
(Tisouatmz)

O moli iovjis sivosi us sivosinipv katv gopi, O en sitvoph aq gus ov cideati O xomm ci e catz TUC xjip O hiv vjisi.... Jewi tuni tisouat neliaq xusl vu fu up tuni ug nz "Katv cideati O fenpif ximm giim moli ov" qsukidvt.