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Discussion in 'Ideas, Needs, Concept Feedback' started by T0b3n, Nov 27, 2018.

Could this work

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  2. hell no

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    Your website welcomes me with two bad choices:
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    If i haven't had any reasons to doubt your service, now i do.
     
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    Hey, thanks for the feedback.
    I spoke to 10 people and they told me that these were the first thoughts that came to their mind so I decided to address bring a call to action on those. I will definitely consider reworking this. Is there anything you would specifically recommend?

    I'm considering changing the left button to find out more or something along those lines. I could also remove the buttons all together, any input?
     
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    Yes, the left button, could be something like "Great! I want to learn more" (and possibly keep the right button).

    Making such two buttons would impose a thought that you do in fact offer unlimited offer.

    If you want to address the objections (which is wise), make small link beneath the buttons.

    Anyway keep us posted, maybe someone else will chime in with more insights.
     

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