Suggestions on how to message a potential mentor to work under?

[Sterling729]

This is related to a previous post Networking Company where I was planning on potentially buying a one man networking business. I've realized it's probably better to work for myself or work under this guy for equity while he prepares for retirement.
I'm a bit socially retarded, (found the reason, I'm working on it), but I understand this guy is not really interested in providing free education to someone. So all I can really do is offer to work (even min wage or free) in exchange for mentorship and/or equity.
Looking at the message, I think it makes sense to offer some sort of down payment and free/low pay work to gain experience/mentorship (rather than just mentorship without pay). Could just find someone else, but this is a unique situation where this guy who lives within driving distance is retiring with decades of industry knoledge. I really want to find someway to get closer. Maybe offer him lunch?
After a few back and forth messages on linkedin it's gone like this:


Jul 26
Hey Big Boss Man,

I hope you're doing well. I wanted to follow up on our previous conversation. While I'm not in a position to buy your business, I'd love to explore the possibility of working with you in some capacity, whether as an employee or an intern.

A former colleague of mine who works in a similar field in the States suggested that the key is to land my first client. If you're unable to accommodate me, I would greatly appreciate any advice or guidance you could offer on where to find my first client.

Thanks a lot for your time, Brian. Any insights you can share would mean a lot to me.

Cheers,
Sterling729


Jul 27
Sterling729 working on some stuff today but follow-up with me in about 2 weeks - sorry for the delay

No worries Big Boss Man. Thanks for getting back to me

Aug 9

Hi Big Boss Man,

I hope you’re well.

Just following up on our last conversation. I’m keen to get your advice on landing my first client or the industry in general. If there’s any way I can assist you or your business in return, please let me know.

I understand you may be busy, so feel free to get back to me at your convenience.
Thanks a lot!

Best,
Sterling729


Aug 11
In the meantime, would you recommend a service I can advertise or pitch to any potential clients? Ie setting up network monitoring? Setting up private network infrastructure?

Thanks for your time

Cheers
Sterling729

 

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[Sterling729]

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[Sterling729]

E $30 mapdj otp'v xusvj ep juas ug jot voni (xjodj ot nadj nusi wemaecmi).

Xjz puv cuul e voni xovj nipvust xju esi siefz/xommoph vu jimq up qmevgusnt moli HsuxvjNipvus epf NipvusDsaoti?

ximm, puv tasi jux huuf nipvust xomm ci neslivoph vjintimwit et e "nipvus"

 

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[Sterling729]

Xjev't op ov gus jon? Jux fu zua vasp vjot opvu xop/xop?

Qisjeqt ep inqmuznipv vu uxpistjoq ehsiinipv?

Og O xisi op jot qutovoup, O'f woix zua nusi et e dunqivovowi vjsiev vjep ep emmz. Epf op hipisem, O'n puv opvisitvif op gohjvoph ugg nusi dunqivovust, itqidoemmz vjuti O'wi vseopif.

Ziej O tii xjev zua'si tezoph. O fof nipvoup vu jon vszoph vu caomf iraovz op iydjephi gus mux/pu qez. Cav O fappu, nezci ji otp'v dunqmivimz tumf up ni et e xuslis, us xepvt tunivjoph imti.