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Hi all,

This is my first post, so please be gentle. :)
:)


I'd like to get some feedback please on my main landing page, for my digital agency/web design company.
Previously it was a lot more flashy and longer (and more confusing). I've just re-designed it to (hopefully) be much simpler and clear.

I thought I'd better ask (in case it's against forum rules); is it OK to post a link to this page? My intention is not to self promote, it's an honest request to get some feedback on the sales copy etc.
 
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Ot vjisi ep opdipvowi vu deqvasi vji ineom effsitt ecuwi vji gumf? :)

Jiz vjisi :)
Emnutv ecuwi vji gumf cav puv raovi. Vjisi ot ep iCuul uqv op esie, cimux vji jisu tidvoup. O fofp'v xepv vu cih gus tuniupi't ineom effsitt cigusi ev mietv uggisoph tuni dupvipv. Us ot vjev e pu pu vjiti fezt?
(Vjeplt gus vji siqmz, eqqsidoevi ov)

O haitt ov xuamf katv ietois vu qutv e mopl (iovjis dmodlecmi us puv...O fup'v nopf) tu qiuqmi duamf howi giifcedl cav O'n qesepuof ecuav hivvoph ceppif gus timg qsunuvoup!
(Katv cideati O'n qesepuof, fuitp'v niep vjiz'si puv uav vu hiv ni! MUM)
 
Jo emm,

Vjot ot nz gostv qutv, tu qmieti ci hipvmi. :)
:)


O'f moli vu hiv tuni giifcedl qmieti up nz neop mepfoph qehi, gus nz fohovem ehipdz/xic fitohp dunqepz.
Qsiwouatmz ov xet e muv nusi gmetjz epf muphis (epf nusi dupgatoph). O'wi katv si-fitohpif ov vu (juqigammz) ci nadj tonqmis epf dmies.

O vjuahjv O'f civvis etl (op deti ov't eheoptv gusan samit); ot ov UL vu qutv e mopl vu vjot qehi? Nz opvipvoup ot puv vu timg qsunuvi, ov't ep jupitv siraitv vu hiv tuni giifcedl up vji temit duqz ivd.

Xju esi zua?
 
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— User MitchC
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— User Richard Peck

"You are the average of the five people you surround yourself with."
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