Sales copy and general design/usability feedback for a web design landing page.

[webinfinitynz]

Hi all,

This is my first post, so please be gentle.

I'd like to get some feedback please on my main landing page, for my digital agency/web design company.
Previously it was a lot more flashy and longer (and more confusing). I've just re-designed it to (hopefully) be much simpler and clear.

I thought I'd better ask (in case it's against forum rules); is it OK to post a link to this page? My intention is not to self promote, it's an honest request to get some feedback on the sales copy etc.

 

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[Entre Eyes]

Is there an incentive to capture the email address above the fold?

 

[webinfinitynz]

Is there an incentive to capture the email address above the fold?

Hey there
Almost above the fold but not quite. There is an eBook opt in area, below the hero section. I didn't want to beg for someone's email address before at least offering some content. Or is that a no no these days?
(Thanks for the reply, appreciate it)

I guess it would just easier to post a link (either clickable or not...I don't mind) so people could give feedback but I'm paranoid about getting banned for self promotion!
(Just because I'm paranoid, doesn't mean they're not out to get me! LOL)

 

[George Appiah]

Hi all,

This is my first post, so please be gentle.

I'd like to get some feedback please on my main landing page, for my digital agency/web design company.
Previously it was a lot more flashy and longer (and more confusing). I've just re-designed it to (hopefully) be much simpler and clear.

I thought I'd better ask (in case it's against forum rules); is it OK to post a link to this page? My intention is not to self promote, it's an honest request to get some feedback on the sales copy etc.

Who are you?

 

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