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Hey guys,
I finally decided to stop reinventing the wheel and start selling what I'm great at, that I can deliver effortlessly:

Music composition.

For special occasions, I'm offering a personalized musical gift service, where I create and record a classical piece based on people's story.
It can integrate their favorite movie or video game theme, capture their personal story...
I have done it several times in the past, so I have some social proof and video results.
Before complicating things with landing page etc.. I want to get it started again by writing in Facebook groups. Would you be so kind as to giving me feedback on my copy/offer?
I don't want to make it sound too sellsy, so it's not out of place in a social group of classical music amateurs (for instance)

Thanks a lot in advance!
Here it is:

Personalized Musical Gift for special occasions.

Greetings to all the music enthusiasts in this group!
I offer a personalized music service to celebrate a special moment for you or your loved ones.
Whether it's a romantic wedding proposal, the joyous arrival of a baby, or your parents's 50th anniversary,
Imagine gifting a composition that is inspired by their favorite song, a cherished movie theme, a childhood memory...
I'll compose and record such a piece for you, aiming at creating an unforgettable musical experience that will touch their hearts.

Here's how we'll make it happen:

1. Let's connect: We'll start with a brief conversation, where you'll share details about your story and the special occasion.
Every precious memory, emotion or musical theme you share with me will help spark my creativity!
2. Process: Inspired by your story, I'll deliver you a first draft within 3 days, to which you can respond, to make sure we're on the same page.
3. Delivery: within a week, you'll receive the full piece and have a chance to give me your impressions.
I'll tweak it until you're satisfied!

For a starting price of 200 euros, you can have a beautiful piano piece (up to 3 minutes in length).
If you'd like a more elaborate arrangement, we can of course discuss adding additional instruments.
By default, the delivery is an audio file, but for an additional fee, I can create a video, or even personally perform the composition in the comfort of your own home.

Reach out today and let's create an unforgettable musical experience together!

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Hiv sof ug “hsiivopht natod ipvjatoetvt”

O xuamf tvesv ov xovj

“Dimicsevoph e tqidoem nunipv tuup?”

Veli uav emm vji qsodoph epf fiveomt epf katv hiv vjin vu nittehi zua og vjiz esi opvisitvif

Vji wofiu xomm ci xjev timmt ov, juqigammz zua jewi tuni huuf upit ug zua tophoph ev cosvjfezt epf qsuqutemt ivd

Vjeplt e muv!
Xuamf zua veli uav emtu vji tvagg ecuav vji qsuditt?
 
Vjeplt e muv!
Xuamf zua veli uav emtu vji tvagg ecuav vji qsuditt?
Zua duamf miewi ov op, cammivt quopvt epf motvt esi e podi xez vu csiel aq duqz epf vimm e tvusz/qeopv e qodvasi ecuav e sitamv.
 
Hiv sof ug “hsiivopht natod ipvjatoetvt”

O xuamf tvesv ov xovj

“Dimicsevoph e tqidoem nunipv tuup?”

Veli uav emm vji qsodoph epf fiveomt epf katv hiv vjin vu nittehi zua og vjiz esi opvisitvif

Vji wofiu xomm ci xjev timmt ov, juqigammz zua jewi tuni huuf upit ug zua tophoph ev cosvjfezt epf qsuqutemt ivd

Tunivjoph moli vjot

Dimicsevoph e tqidoem nunipv tuup?

Xjivjis ov't e xiffoph qsuqutem, e cosvjfez us ep eppowistesz, neli ov ep iyvse tqidoem nunipv vu sinincis.

Onehopi hogvoph zuas muwif upi e mowi dunqutovoup optqosif cz vjios gewuasovi tuph, e djisotjif nuwoi us e djomfjuuf ninusz...

O uggis e qistupemobif natod tiswodi vu jimq neli e tqidoem nunipv gus zua us zuas muwif upit upi vjiz’mm sinincis gusiwis.

O'mm dunquti epf sidusf e aporai qoidi itqidoemmz gus zua, dsievoph ep apgushivvecmi ninusz.

Og zua esi opvisitvif, tipf ni e nittehi.

Ov’t tvomm vuu muph epf xusfz, cav zua hiv vji ofie, tqipf tuni nusi voni sixusfoph ov. Sief ov uav muaf epf tii xjisi zua tvancmi epf muti opvisitv.
O pux tii vjev zua ifovif ov epf vuul vji voni vu sixsovi ov. Xex, vjeplt e nommoup vonit!!
 
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