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Tanapiko

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Hey, guy this is my first website, it focuses on the mental preparation for athletes through the principles of think and grow rich by napoleon hill.
The Mind of Victors
 

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Timmy C

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Hi Bud,

So how exactly do you plan on making money of this what value are you providing?

I cant see anything. I dont understand what your trying to do.
 
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Tanapiko

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Hi Bud,

So how exactly do you plan on making money of this what value are you providing?

I cant see anything. I dont understand what your trying to do.
At first we will try to get money through sport related ads and affiliate marketing, the primary goal is to get a certain amount of readers, to start pushing workout and nutrition plans, my partner is in exercise science
 

Timmy C

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''At first we will try to get money through sport related ads and affiliate marketing, the primary goal is to get a certain amount of readers, to start pushing workout and nutrition plans, my partner is in exercise science''

You need to provide value first before you take money provide value.


To be honest I think its a terrible idea.


Also meal and nutrition plans have been beaten to shit there so many of them its ridiculous.

Write some better copy.

I dont know if there is a need for this at all to be honest.

Entry is easy to.

Your about page and everything is a bit cringe aswell.
 
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Tanapiko

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''At first we will try to get money through sport related ads and affiliate marketing, the primary goal is to get a certain amount of readers, to start pushing workout and nutrition plans, my partner is in exercise science''

You need to provide value first before you take money provide value.


To be honest I think its a terrible idea.


Also meal and nutrition plans have been beaten to sh*t there so many of them its ridiculous.

Write some better copy.

I dont know if there is a need for this at all to be honest.

Entry is easy to.

Your about page and everything is a bit cringe aswell.
Thanks a lot for the advice, i can only get better from here on
 

Chris25

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Hey Tanapiko,

This website needs a bit more polishing. You don't have a section dedicated to the Privacy Policy and Terms Of Use, and those are very important. There is also no clear navigation menu. And your logo seems uneven.

These are just some technical things that are not hard to do as a start, but they will help your website look legit . Also try adding a few more posts before you start promoting.
 
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Tanapiko

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Hey Tanapiko,

This website needs a bit more polishing. You don't have a section dedicated to the Privacy Policy and Terms Of Use, and those are very important. There is also no clear navigation menu. And your logo seems uneven.

These are just some technical things that are not hard to do as a start, but they will help your website look legit . Also try adding a few more posts before you start promoting.
Thank you good sir, i appreciate the feedback, for the privacy and terms part, do i write it my self, or there are resources to get them
 

Chris25

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Thank you good sir, i appreciate the feedback, for the privacy and terms part, do i write it my self, or there are resources to get them
You can find free Privacy Policy generators online, but do no just copy them. Read through the agreements and change it to suit your website, take out parts that do not apply and modify something if needed.

I suggest you do a header menu where your put things like Blog, About us, Join... And then move Privacy, Contact and so on in the footer menu. Try to link social media accounts somewhere too.
 

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