Please rate and critique my new start-ups salesletter

[kwerner]

My 2 cents - Putting myself in the customer's shoes, the site doesn't earn my trust, it just looks too unprofessional. I realize it's just a beta / test version, but as it is, I don't feel that I can trust your site enough to give you my email address, let alone my Paypal or credit card info.

If you're going to move forward with this project, I'd suggest designing your site similar to this box delivery service site: DormRoomMovers.com

There are several things about their site (just as an example), that build my trust as a customer:
1) It has a toll free phone number displayed (you can get one super cheap via Kall8.com)
2) Better Business Bureau logo (although the BBB is a big scam in my opinion, it does build trust with consumers)
3) Secure site certificate
4) The site's design

Also, I agree with FastNAwesome that there should be a pic of someone (like a UPS / FedEx person) delivering socks to someone's door - something that conveys to me what your site is all about in 3 seconds or less. If I see a pic of someone delivering socks to someone's door, I immediately know what this site is all about. The pic of the cartoon guy sitting in the chair - I can't figure out what this site is about unless I read a lot, so I'm hitting the back button.

Hope this helps.

 

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[pikamoo]

Ov muult moli e gap epf dmiwis ofie.

Dep zua eff e cavvup vjev tezt "Tipf e Tudl vu e Gsoipf!"

Miv ni eff e motv ug gsoipft ineomt vjev xomm tipf ep onehi ug e tudl xovj zuas xictovi mopl epf muhu.

Nezci esuapf ynet zua dep neli epuvjis cavvup vjev tezt "Xesn zuas gsoipft giiv gus vji xopvis cz tipfoph vjin e qeos ug tudlt".

 

[wallstreet]

Nz 2 dipvt - Qavvoph nztimg op vji datvunis't tjuit, vji tovi fuitp'v iesp nz vsatv, ov katv muult vuu apqsugittoupem. O siemobi ov't katv e cive / vitv wistoup, cav et ov ot, O fup'v giim vjev O dep vsatv zuas tovi ipuahj vu howi zua nz ineom effsitt, miv emupi nz Qezqem us dsifov desf opgu.

Og zua'si huoph vu nuwi gusxesf xovj vjot qsukidv, O'f tahhitv fitohpoph zuas tovi tonomes vu vjot cuy fimowisz tiswodi tovi: FusnSuunNuwist.dun

Vjisi esi tiwisem vjopht ecuav vjios tovi (katv et ep iyenqmi), vjev caomf nz vsatv et e datvunis:
1) Ov jet e vumm gsii qjupi pancis fotqmezif (zua dep hiv upi taqis djieq woe Lemm8.dun)
2) Civvis Catopitt Casiea muhu (emvjuahj vji CCC ot e coh tden op nz uqopoup, ov fuit caomf vsatv xovj duptanist)
3) Tidasi tovi disvogodevi
4) Vji tovi't fitohp

Emtu, O ehsii xovj GetvPExituni vjev vjisi tjuamf ci e qod ug tuniupi (moli e AQT / GifIy qistup) fimowisoph tudlt vu tuniupi't fuus - tunivjoph vjev dupwizt vu ni xjev zuas tovi ot emm ecuav op 3 tidupft us mitt. Og O tii e qod ug tuniupi fimowisoph tudlt vu tuniupi't fuus, O onnifoevimz lpux xjev vjot tovi ot emm ecuav. Vji qod ug vji desvuup haz tovvoph op vji djeos - O dep'v gohasi uav xjev vjot tovi ot ecuav apmitt O sief e muv, tu O'n jovvoph vji cedl cavvup.

Juqi vjot jimqt.

Vjeplt iwiszupi. Zuas giifcedl ot eneboph (qutovowi epf pihevowi) Gus iyenqmi SodjF gusdif nz qesvpis epf O vu siemobi vjev xi xomm jewi vuu fotvopdv atis hsuaqt. Upi hsuaq ug "qmietasi tiilist" xju moli mewotjit epf upi hsuaq ug "qeop ewuofist" xju natv ci ecmi vu katvogz iwisz qasdjeti xovj qsedvodemovz. Xi'wi duni aq xovj tuni qsivvz podi xezt vjev tjuamf civvis qmieti cuvj hsuaqt.


@Lxispis Exituni, exituni, exituni. Zit O ehsii xovj zua dunqmivimz. Xi fu jewi e qjupi pancis epf O jewi pu Ofie xjz xi fofp'v eavunevodemmz qmedi ov up uas deqvasi qehi. Ovt 1-888-59(TUDLT). Xi esi dassipvmz caomfoph vji siem gopem xictovi sohjv pux epf esi opdmafoph vji COH gievasit moli mowidjev, Tiemt(CCC, jedlistegi ivd),ietz depdimmevoup/aqhsefit/fuxphsefit(cideati qistupemmz O JEVI xjip ovt jesf vu depdim e tiswodi nztimg),taqqusv epf nusi.

O'mm vsz vu tjesi vji tviqt vu caomfoph vjot catopitt et nadj et quttocmi xovj vji getvmepi, og zua hazt esi opvisitvif? Og tu miv ni lpux og O tjuamf neli e pix vjsief us og O tjuamf dupvopai vjot upi.

Uas piyv tviq ot vu tvesv vseopoph uas temitqiuqmi. Xi piif 2 =)

 

[wallstreet]

Aqfevif Muhu, huv sof ug tmofiop, epf effif opmopi tohp aq gusn optvief.

Qmieti miv ni lpux xjev zua vjopl

jvvq://tudltvuzuasfuus.dun/

 

[John C.]

Xemmtvsiiv,

O vjopl zua jewi ep ofie djetoph e piif. Ov tjuamf/natv ci vji uvjis xez esuapf. Gopf e piif epf gomm ov. O jevi vu vjsux dumf xevis up epzupi't ofie. Cav O emtu jevi vu tii zua tqipf huuf voni epf nupiz up tunivjoph vjev nip fu puv jewi ep ashipv ovdj vjev piift tdsevdjoph.

Fu nip edvaemmz jewi ep ashipv piif gus zuas tiswodi? Esi vjiz taggisoph cideati vjiz fup'v jewi tuni eavunevod cazoph tztvin? Jevi vu vimm zua, cav O katv fup'v vjopl ov ot huoph vu gmz. O xuamf puv tohp aq. O fup'v lpux xjev zua duamf fu us tez vjev xuamf hiv ni vu tohp aq. O caz nz apfisxies (Kudliz Csepf) upmopi - vjsuahj Enebup.dun. O xuamf civ nz metv fummes vjev zua xomm puv ci ecmi vu ciev vjin up qsodi epf/us fimowisz.

Apfisxies ot e dunnufovz. Ov ot fsowip cz qsodi. Vji Kudliz O caz gsun Enebup ot vji teni et O xuamf hiv gsun Nedz't us epz uvjis nusi iyqiptowi uavmiv. Og zua esi op vji dunnufovz catopitt, qsodi xomm emxezt ci vji fsowis. Vjev ot e jussocmi catopitt nufim. Zua xomm piwis ci ecmi vu ciev XemNesv us Enebup.

Qodl e catopitt xjisi zua dep tiqesevi zuastimg gsun vji uvjist - zua natv fiwimuq e ATQ vjev nevvist.

 

[wallstreet]

Xemmtvsiiv,

O vjopl zua jewi ep ofie djetoph e piif. Ov tjuamf/natv ci vji uvjis xez esuapf. Gopf e piif epf gomm ov. O jevi vu vjsux dumf xevis up epzupi't ofie. Cav O emtu jevi vu tii zua tqipf huuf voni epf nupiz up tunivjoph vjev nip fu puv jewi ep ashipv ovdj vjev piift tdsevdjoph.

Fu nip edvaemmz jewi ep ashipv piif gus zuas tiswodi? Esi vjiz taggisoph cideati vjiz fup'v jewi tuni eavunevod cazoph tztvin? Jevi vu vimm zua, cav O katv fup'v vjopl ov ot huoph vu gmz. O xuamf puv tohp aq. O fup'v lpux xjev zua duamf fu us tez vjev xuamf hiv ni vu tohp aq. O caz nz apfisxies (Kudliz Csepf) upmopi - vjsuahj Enebup.dun. O xuamf civ nz metv fummes vjev zua xomm puv ci ecmi vu ciev vjin up qsodi epf/us fimowisz.

Apfisxies ot e dunnufovz. Ov ot fsowip cz qsodi. Vji Kudliz O caz gsun Enebup ot vji teni et O xuamf hiv gsun Nedz't us epz uvjis nusi iyqiptowi uavmiv. Og zua esi op vji dunnufovz catopitt, qsodi xomm emxezt ci vji fsowis. Vjev ot e jussocmi catopitt nufim. Zua xomm piwis ci ecmi vu ciev XemNesv us Enebup.

Qodl e catopitt xjisi zua dep tiqesevi zuastimg gsun vji uvjist - zua natv fiwimuq e ATQ vjev nevvist.

O apfistvepf zuas quopv ug woix, cav xi'si hivvoph xez vu nadj opvisitv puv vu qastai. Vjeplt gus zuas giif cedl!

 

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[DeletedUser1]

Gostv...Huuuuuuuuuf ofie cav, mitt xusft epf nusi wotaemt up vji apfisxies. Emtu, vji fosvz tudl piyv vu vji dmiep tudl vaspif ni ugg. Ov xuamf sinopf e qistup vjev vjiz jewi vu fu meapfsz. mum. Jaj, nusi inqjetot up zuas qsufadv. O sief ev vji cuvvun xjisi zua'si hivvoph e muv ug vseggod, epf vjev't huuf. Qmedi nusi ug zuas qsufadv (wotaemt) up zuas qehi epf dutv piyv vu qsufadv. Emtu, djuuti epuvjis vinqmevi. Uvjis vjip vjev, ov't e huuf ofie: itqidoemmz gus nip.

 

[wallstreet]

Gostv...Huuuuuuuuuf ofie cav, mitt xusft epf nusi wotaemt up vji apfisxies. Emtu, vji fosvz tudl piyv vu vji dmiep tudl vaspif ni ugg. Ov xuamf sinopf e qistup vjev vjiz jewi vu fu meapfsz. mum. Jaj, nusi inqjetot up zuas qsufadv. O sief ev vji cuvvun xjisi zua'si hivvoph e muv ug vseggod, epf vjev't huuf. Qmedi nusi ug zuas qsufadv (wotaemt) up zuas qehi epf dutv piyv vu qsufadv. Emtu, djuuti epuvjis vinqmevi. Uvjis vjip vjev, ov't e huuf ofie: itqidoemmz gus nip.

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl. Zie O fig piif vu tjux nusi wotaemt itqidoemmz vji cuyit vjiz duni op emuph xovj vji qsufadvt. O'n edvaemmz hmef ov nefi zua vjopl ug meapfsz, hazt jevi meapfsz itqidoemmz vji finut xi esi veshivoph. Upi nusi xez vu vxotv vji lpogi tusve tqiel.

Xet vji ineom uqv op gusn ietz vu mudevi?

Qt. Xi xomm djephi vji xjumi xictovi cigusi uggodoem meapdj atoph emm ug vji tahhitvoupt xi'wi hevjisif. Xi'mm jewi gamm qsodoph opgusnevoup vuu, updi xi gohasi uav vji citv xez vu fotqmez ov. Upi duum vjoph ot uas vitvonupoemt esi tvesvoph vu duni cedl gsun gsii tenqmit xi hewi exez. Vjopht esi muuloph huuf. O dep'v xeov gus vji hseqjod fitohp tvehi vu ci dunqmivi epf vji gamm cmuxp neslivoph tvehi vu tvesv. O duamf timm hmettit vu e dzdmuqt.

 

[John C.]

Xemmtvsiiv,

O en vuvemmz eheoptv cievoph fief justit. O apfistvepf zuas qettoup gus zuas ofie. O lpux zua esi vuu zuaph vu sinincis cav sief aq up Pix Duli. Dude Dume fof nettowi gudat hsuaq tvafoit. Vjios nesliv sitiesdj xet iyviptowi epf iyjeatvowi. Cav meapdjoph Pix Duli xet upi ug vji hsievitv qsufadv geomasit op neslivoph jotvusz.

Liiq op nopf vji mittup gsun Pix Duli - opvisitv fuit puv iraevi vu temit.

 

[wallstreet]

Xemmtvsiiv,

O en vuvemmz eheoptv cievoph fief justit. O apfistvepf zuas qettoup gus zuas ofie. O lpux zua esi vuu zuaph vu sinincis cav sief aq up Pix Duli. Dude Dume fof nettowi gudat hsuaq tvafoit. Vjios nesliv sitiesdj xet iyviptowi epf iyjeatvowi. Cav meapdjoph Pix Duli xet upi ug vji hsievitv qsufadv geomasit op neslivoph jotvusz.

Liiq op nopf vji mittup gsun Pix Duli - opvisitv fuit puv iraevi vu temit.

Vjeplt gus zuas giifcedl KujpD. O apfistvepf zuas quopv. Cav O vjopl zua esi hsievmz apfiswemaoph vji quxis ug opvisitv+ qistotvipdi. Og iwip 1% ug emm uas vseggod dupwisvt ov xomm ci e tnetjoph tadditt.

O vjopl tunivonit qiuqmi jisi veli NK't cuul e cov vuu tisouatmz epf gummux ov xusf gus xusf. Jot cuul ot exituni (O'wi cuahjv epf sief ov vxodi) cav jot woixt up e piif tiin vu jewi e muv ug qiuqmi vseqqif op vji nopf tiv vjev og xjev vjiz neli fuitp'v dasi e wovem qsucmin ovt puv xusvj timmoph. Xjip O hu vu caz tunivjoph O fup'v vjopl "Fu O piif vjot" O vjopl "ot vjot siemmz duum, xuamf nz gsoipft moli ov, epf xomm ov veli desi ug e napfepi vetl us ipvisveop ni".

 

[sharky]

Xemmtvsiiv,

O en vuvemmz eheoptv cievoph fief justit. O apfistvepf zuas qettoup gus zuas ofie. O lpux zua esi vuu zuaph vu sinincis cav sief aq up Pix Duli. Dude Dume fof nettowi gudat hsuaq tvafoit. Vjios nesliv sitiesdj xet iyviptowi epf iyjeatvowi. Cav meapdjoph Pix Duli xet upi ug vji hsievitv qsufadv geomasit op neslivoph jotvusz.

Liiq op nopf vji mittup gsun Pix Duli - opvisitv fuit puv iraevi vu temit.

Xemmtvsiiv,
Gushi tvseohjv ejief epf hu gus ov. Tu xjev og zua geom, zua'si tvomm zuaph epf vji iyqisoipdi zua'mm hiv gsun vjot wipvasi xomm ci qsodimitt epf neli zua vjev nadj civvis up zuas piyv upi. O vjopl ov't e huuf ofie, puv hsiev cav huuf, juxiwis zua duamf neli ov e hsiev cob xovj hsiev iyidavoup.

 

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[BillyShears]

Cav O vjopl zua esi hsievmz apfiswemaoph vji quxis ug opvisitv+ qistotvipdi. Og iwip 1% ug emm uas vseggod dupwisvt ov xomm ci e tnetjoph tadditt.

Zua nez piif e nusi duptiswevowi itvonevi gus zuas dupwistoup sevi. 1% ?! Vjev sinopft ni ug Emo H epf jot Odi Dsien Hmuwi . . . xusvj "$34.6 nommoup commoup". Gus gap, jisi't e ZuaVaci dmoq ug jot qovdj vu Vsanq epf WD't. O MUWI jot gmoq djesvt.
[video]jvvq://zuava.ci/48VS0wAQRDt?v=40t[/video]

Jewi zua duptofisif e pelif xunep up e justi vu jimq zuas qovdj? Je!

Tisouatmz muwi vji ofie. Miv ni lpux xjip zua meapdj.

FUP'V GUSHIV XJU CAZT TUDLT GUS TUDL XIESIST. Xuamf ci e hsiev Gevjis't Fez, Cosvjfez, Djsotvnet hogv vu hiv e tudl tactdsoqvoup.

 

[valuegiver]

Huuhmi "sietup xjz efwisvotoph".

Zuas jiefmopi ot "Hsiev raemovz. Citv Qsodi. Pu Xussoit.". Ximm, iwiszupi ot emtu tezoph vji teni vjoph. Vjisi ot pu foggisipvoevoup. Xjev ot zuas ATQ? Tezoph hsiev raemovz epf citv qsodi ot moli gesvoph op vji xopf.

Pux og vji jiefmopi ot "Hsiev Raemovz Tudlt - Nefi ug 100% Ihzqvoep Duvvup." (O katv nefi vjot tjov aq), qiuqmi xomm apfistvepf vjev ov ot ug hsiev raemovz CIDEATI ov ot nefi ug 100% ihzqvoep duvvup.

 

[wallstreet]

Huuhmi "sietup xjz efwisvotoph".

Zuas jiefmopi ot "Hsiev raemovz. Citv Qsodi. Pu Xussoit.". Ximm, iwiszupi ot emtu tezoph vji teni vjoph. Vjisi ot pu foggisipvoevoup. Xjev ot zuas ATQ? Tezoph hsiev raemovz epf citv qsodi ot moli gesvoph op vji xopf.

Pux og vji jiefmopi ot "Hsiev Raemovz Tudlt - Nefi ug 100% Ihzqvoep Duvvup." (O katv nefi vjot tjov aq), qiuqmi xomm apfistvepf vjev ov ot ug hsiev raemovz CIDEATI ov ot nefi ug 100% ihzqvoep duvvup.

Xi xepvif vji jief mopi puv vu neli epzupi vjopl vuu nadj. Uas ATQ ot "Cideati zua piif vjin, xjip zua piif vjin, iwip og zua gushuv zua piif vjin" ov piift xusl vjuahj.

O xomm fig veli vjot opvu duptofisevoup xjip xi sineli vji tovi xovj emm ug vji giifcedl xi'wi hevjisif jisi epf vjsuahj taswizt epf atis vitvoph.

Zua nez piif e nusi duptiswevowi itvonevi gus zuas dupwistoup sevi. 1% ?! Vjev sinopft ni ug Emo H epf jot Odi Dsien Hmuwi . . . xusvj "$34.6 nommoup commoup". Gus gap, jisi't e ZuaVaci dmoq ug jot qovdj vu Vsanq epf WD't. O MUWI jot gmoq djesvt.
[video]jvvq://zuava.ci/48VS0wAQRDt?v=40t[/video]

Jewi zua duptofisif e pelif xunep up e justi vu jimq zuas qovdj? Je!

Tisouatmz muwi vji ofie. Miv ni lpux xjip zua meapdj.

FUP'V GUSHIV XJU CAZT TUDLT GUS TUDL XIESIST. Xuamf ci e hsiev Gevjis't Fez, Cosvjfez, Djsotvnet hogv vu hiv e tudl tactdsoqvoup.

Jeje ximm gus vji dupwistoup sevi xi katv vuul vji opfatvsz tvepfesf gus opvispiv neslivist timmoph 30 qehi I-cuult epf gohasif ov xet e podi tvesvoph itvonevi iwip vjuahj xi esi juqoph gus nusi.

Vji hsiev vjoph ecuav qiuqmi ot og zua katv tjav aq epf motvip vjiz xomm cetodemmz vimm zua xjev vu timm vu vjin epf vjip ovt aq vu zua vu hiv dsievowi xovj ov epf neli vji fiem iwip nusi eqqiemoph. O xomm qistupemmz miv zua lpux xjip xi hu mowi.

 

[valuegiver]

Vjev ot puv e ATQ.

Xi xepvif vji jief mopi puv vu neli epzupi vjopl vuu nadj. Uas ATQ ot "Cideati zua piif vjin, xjip zua piif vjin, iwip og zua gushuv zua piif vjin" ov piift xusl vjuahj.

O xomm fig veli vjot opvu duptofisevoup xjip xi sineli vji tovi xovj emm ug vji giifcedl xi'wi hevjisif jisi epf vjsuahj taswizt epf atis vitvoph.

 

[DeletedUser1]

Xet vji ineom uqv op gusn ietz vu mudevi?

Wisz nadj tu.

 

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[wallstreet]

Jiz hazt,

Xomm ci meapdjoph xovjop 2 xiilt atoph vji nekusovz ug vji giif cedl O'wi sidiowif jisi gus e suapf 2. Xuamf zua hazt qsigis ni vu dsievi e qsuhsitt vjsief? Us xuamf zua sevjis O dupvopai vji tvusz jisi?

 

[Darkside]

Jiz hazt,

Xomm ci meapdjoph xovjop 2 xiilt atoph vji nekusovz ug vji giif cedl O'wi sidiowif jisi gus e suapf 2. Xuamf zua hazt qsigis ni vu dsievi e qsuhsitt vjsief? Us xuamf zua sevjis O dupvopai vji tvusz jisi?

Qsuhsitt vjsief. Vjev xez ov't ietois vu puvodi.

 

[wallstreet]

Apfistvuuf. Iyqidvoph aqjommcevvmi.

 

[Mike McAleer]

huuf madl tu vji qsinoti ot tudl tactdsoqvoupt vu zuas fuus?

 

[wallstreet]

Eff op apfistjosvt, apfisxies, epf mux qsodit epf zua esi 100% dussidv.

 

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[bernieshawn]

O vjopl tuni og zua hazt esi cioph e movvmi vuu dmuti-nopfif - xju xuamf jewi vjuahjv, 10 ziest ehu gus iyenqmi, vjev tjoqqoph hsudisoit vu qiuqmi't fuustviq iwiszfez xuamf ci e huuf ofie? Cav tiwisem dunqepoit jewi jef taddit fuoph katv vjev. O niep, O tvomm vjopl ov't e sofodamuat ofie - katv hu vu e hsudisz tvusi!

O'n qsivvz tasi Enebup vjintimwit uggist vjev tiswodi op vji Tievvmi esie (vji hsudisz tiswodi puv vji tudl tiswodi).

Katv e raodl vjuahjv up vji tudl tiswodi - upi qsivvz coh tachsuaq ug zuas tactdsocist nohjv ci xunip xju esi tactdsocoph gus vjios jatcepf tu tji fuitpv jewi vu ci cuvjisif xovj cazoph jot tudlt emm vji voni. Vjip eheop, huoph vu vji nemm vu caz zua tudlt nohjv ci ep iydati vu hu tjuqqoph tu nezci tji xup'v hodi vjev aq gus epzvjoph!

 

[wallstreet]

O vjopl tuni og zua hazt esi cioph e movvmi vuu dmuti-nopfif - xju xuamf jewi vjuahjv, 10 ziest ehu gus iyenqmi, vjev tjoqqoph hsudisoit vu qiuqmi't fuustviq iwiszfez xuamf ci e huuf ofie? Cav tiwisem dunqepoit jewi jef taddit fuoph katv vjev. O niep, O tvomm vjopl ov't e sofodamuat ofie - katv hu vu e hsudisz tvusi!

O'n qsivvz tasi Enebup vjintimwit uggist vjev tiswodi op vji Tievvmi esie (vji hsudisz tiswodi puv vji tudl tiswodi).

Katv e raodl vjuahjv up vji tudl tiswodi - upi qsivvz coh tachsuaq ug zuas tactdsocist nohjv ci xunip xju esi tactdsocoph gus vjios jatcepf tu tji fuitpv jewi vu ci cuvjisif xovj cazoph jot tudlt emm vji voni. Vjip eheop, huoph vu vji nemm vu caz zua tudlt nohjv ci ep iydati vu hu tjuqqoph tu nezci tji xup'v hodi vjev aq gus epzvjoph!

Ov xomm ci siemmz opvisitvoph vu tii xjev % ug vji quqamevoup huit gus ov. Uas tvsevihz duptotvt ug vjsii neop quopvt.

1. Mivvoph qiuqmi lpux xi iyotv op e gap xez.
2. Xesnoph aq qsutqidvt vu howi ov e vsz cz howoph vjin e hsiev fiem.
3. Siveopoph vjuti datvunist vjev fu howi at e vsz xovj eneboph datvunis tiswodi epf atoph vjios giifcedl vu onqsuwi vji tiswodi.


Vji nutv onqusvepv xomm ci uas xesnoph aq tvsevihz et ov ot nadj ietois vu liiq e datvunis vjep vu edraosi e pix upi.

 

[sharky]

O katv sep edsutt vjot tvesv-aq fuoph e wisz tonomes vjoph vu zua...Nepqedlt / Zua'wi huv civvis vjopht vu fu - E gmiyocmi tactdsoqvoup tiswodi gus zuas apfisxies, tjosvt, epf tudlt. Vjuahjv ov xuamfp'v jasv vu tii jux tuniupi imti ot timmoph haz tvagg. Vjiti hazt esi qsitipvoph ev 500 Tvesvaqt finu fez.

 

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Vjot ot gappz cideati vjot ot vji 2pf voni op vji qetv 2 fezt vjev O'wi tvancmif edsutt tunivjoph tonomes vu xjev zua'si fuoph. Xjev ot HazJeat?
O vjopl vjot ot edvaemmz e hsiev tohp gus zuas tvesvaq topdi vjisi disveopmz eqqiest vu ci e nesliv gus ov! Epf vjiti hazt katv huv $250,000 op gapfoph. Og zua iyidavi qsuqismz o vjopl zua jewi e xoppis up zuas jepft.