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Just started a new website (more details below) and would love your help critiquing it. Local Made belts, made to last!

50% off for forum members, use the above link... I'm willing to lose money on a few sales just to get your feedback on the experience.

How it started?
We have a home-based business that makes and sells harness, we have been selling belts in a local store (and doing decently) but would like to push it one step further.
I spent maybe 4 hours on a website (1 hour last Saturday and 3 hours today) to get a website up and running on Shopify.

Photos were already shot before for our main business, so didn't need to change anything there.
Descriptions were already created, I just tweaked a bit..
We did try Amazon, spent at least $1000 on ads and having two "geniuses" help us with the setup... both were a total and utter waste of money.

Local Made belts, made to last! 50% off for forum members, use code FASTLANE50 at checkout.

I would love your feedback on anything (layout/photos/shopping cart/etc..)
 
Amazon, Yup, that's us :)
Awesome suggestions, I'll come back to this later and work on it, got some things I need to do outside...
 
Updated... I like the idea of a "survey" ... but don't know how to do that yet... will look at it later on to see if it's possible with shopify
 
Just started a new website (more details below) and would love your help critiquing it. Local Made belts, made to last!

50% off for forum members, use the above link... I'm willing to lose money on a few sales just to get your feedback on the experience.

How it started?
We have a home-based business that makes and sells harness, we have been selling belts in a local store (and doing decently) but would like to push it one step further.
I spent maybe 4 hours on a website (1 hour last Saturday and 3 hours today) to get a website up and running on Shopify.

Photos were already shot before for our main business, so didn't need to change anything there.
Descriptions were already created, I just tweaked a bit..
We did try Amazon, spent at least $1000 on ads and having two "geniuses" help us with the setup... both were a total and utter waste of money.

Local Made belts, made to last! 50% off for forum members, use code FASTLANE50 at checkout.

I would love your feedback on anything (layout/photos/shopping cart/etc..)

Great start, I was pleasantly surprised as I expected these belts to be a lot more expensive!
I'll leave product comments to people with more experience, just one thing:

Soon, you will want to use your own domain, i.e. "evermore-belt.com", so that customers don't see the "myshopify.com". It's super easy to do
 
Headline gets me intrigued - its good painpoint and USP.

The snippet below needs to be worked on.
Its three lines long sentece, font and colors a bit hard to read ('casue background is partially bright).
The first thing i would do is splitting that sentence in to shorter ones
or shorten it all together.

And i'm not sure about emoticon.

But overall seems like solid thing.
 
Great start, I was pleasantly surprised as I expected these belts to be a lot more expensive!
I'll leave product comments to people with more experience, just one thing:

Soon, you will want to use your own domain, i.e. "evermore-belt.com", so that customers don't see the "myshopify.com". It's super easy to do
that's the plan :)
might even go with another website name due to google rankings for a keyword that I think will be more legit than evermore :)
 

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