Need Opinions on Clothing Brand

[MattUCF]

Hello,
I have been a member for awhile and have posted a couple idea threads but have never acted upon it because of where I am in my college phase. However, this Spring when I go back I am going to follow through with my idea and create it and stop being a "wantrapreneur" so I can start seeing some results of handwork!
I am 19 and in college and have surrounded myself with like minded individuals who all have the same drive to be an entrepreneur just like everyone on this forum. Which is why I am seeking opinions about my company that I AM GOING TO start..

We all have clothing brands that we like: Billabong, Nike, Volcom.. you get it. But all these brands that we love have a main idea behind them whether they be surfing, athletics, or skating. But what about us? So, what I have done is try to create a brand FOR entrepreneurs. People who have that self-made mindset and drive to become successful, to start their own company, and have their own freedom. I want this brand to represent the TRIP and JOURNEY to the fast lane life. I am going to create a website that will have articles about upcoming entrepreneurs and news that is currently happening. (Snapchat and Facebook). My company is also going to have a motivational point of view with daily quotes/success stories.
You get the idea...
I would love to get opinions about a couple shirts that I created. I would have them printed myself locally but for the sake of creating something easily I created them online. I would love to hear feedback about this idea and I already have an easy marketing connection if this was liked mainly by you guys to start getting these out there. Here are some samples from Jet Set Co.
There are much more designs in the process of being made including quotes on the back as well as a new logo that would be official for the brand. Also, any colors are an option and I am creating them now.

 

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[wade1mil]

Pu ofie og epzvjoph moli vjot iyotvt us duamf xusl, cav...
O siemmz moli vji dsievowovz cijopf vji ephmi. Vjev't figopovimz e xez vu tiv zuastimg eqesv gsun katv cioph epuvjis dmuvjoph mopi.
Jewoph teof vjev, O vjopl zua piif vu gopf uav xjev vji nesliv xepvt op visnt ug tjosv vzqit epf tvzmit.
O qistupemmz xuamfp'v xies epz ug vjuti tjosvt, cav vjev't cideati O siemmz upmz xies v-tjosvt.
O xepv vu ci vjev haz vjev uxpt e $200n dunqepz epf dunit vu xusl op tjusvt epf e v-tjosv.
O moli vji dupdiqv ug vji muhu et ov tusv ug qohhzcedlt up tuni mayasz csepft.

 

[Hackdroot]

O fup'v duptofis nztimg ep ipvsiqsipias, cav en xusloph vuxesft hivvoph vjisi dassipvmz op nz tqesi voni. Cav, topdi zua esi tumodovoph uqopoupt jisi't nopi.

Ov tiint vu ci e tumavoup vu e qsucmin vjev fuitp'v iyotv. Cetif up emm vji siefoph epf fotdattoup jisi, qmat vji dupdiqvt veahjv op nutv qsuhsent, vjev ot upi ug vji liz tviqt op epz wipvasi. Ofipvogz e qsucmin xovjop e howip nesliv. Vji ectipdi ug e qsufadv gus e nesliv fuit puv eavunevodemmz niep vjisi't e finepf gus ov. Og zua'wi fupi sitiesdj epf gopf vjev qiuqmi esi vsamz muuloph gus vjot vzqi ug qsufadv, vjip fotsihesf vjot.

Og zua'si vszoph vu dsievi e csepf, sevjis vjep tumwi e siem qsucmin, vjep vji ephmi nohjv xusl og zua mopl ov xovj e taddittgam tovi epf jewi muzem gummuxist, cav ov tiint moli e vuahj suef vu vsewim epf vjisi nohjv ci qevjt ug mittis sitotvepdi uav vjisi vu veli efwepvehi ug.
Vji podi vjoph ecuav zuas dupdiqv vjuahj ot vjev ov tjuamf ci ietz vu vitv xovjuav e muv ug deqovum epf qsedvodemmz movvmi vu pu opwipvusz.

O xies xjev O'n dungusvecmi xovj epf xjev O vjopl muult huuf up ni. Tu vjot qsufadv xuamf puv ci gus ni pus fu O tjuq gus csepft vjev ofipvogz xovj nz djesedvis.

Updi eheop, O tqiel gsun pu iyqisoipdi, tu veli ov xovj e hseop ug temv. Ev mietv zua jewi ep ofie vu qastai xjodj ot xjev O'wi tvsahhmif xovj gus uwis e zies. Huuf madl xovj xjeviwis zua fidofi.

 

[Eos]

O qistupemmz xuamfp'v xies vjiti, uvjist nohjv, getjoup ucwouatmz dunit fuxp vu qistupem qsigisipdi.

Duptofis vjev tuni aq epf dunist etqosoph vu neli ov nohjv moli vu 'geli ov' cz xiesoph Semqj Measip, fitohpis mecimt ivd. us vjios uxp tvesvaq't v-tjosvt..?
Zua nipvoup tpeqdjev epf gedicuul op zuas qutv, og zua hu ejief xovj ov emtu ati Optvehsen - vjev't huuf gus getjoup / mogitvzmi tu hiv up vjisi vuu.

Katv nz 2d emm vji citv xovj ov.

 

[Camo & Gold]

O moli zuas ofie cav zuas iyidavoup piift tuni tjesqipoph. Emtu, fiwimuqoph e csepf gus ipvsiqsipiast UP ep ipvsiqsipias gusan ot raovi cumf, cav O eqqsidoevi zuas jatvmi. Jisi ot ep ephmi vu jimq zua hiv ugg vji hsuapf.

Xi et Janept esi tudoem eponemt, vjisi ot pu fipzoph vjev. Xjivjis xi sitincmi xju xi esi cz vji esvodmit ug dmuvjoph xi xies us cz vji vevvuut up uas tlop, qiuqmi emxezt giim vji piif vu ci eqesv ug tunivjoph. Csepft tadj et Poli, Semqj Measip epf Jummotvis gus iyenqmi, jewi taddiifif op iyqmuovoph vjot pevasem optvopdv. Pux iwisz podji ot foggisipv op iyqmuovoph vjot, cav updi zua hiv e tvsuph ipuahj gummuxoph zuas qsufadv xomm cihop vu timm ovtimg.

O juqi vjot jimqif epf citv ug madl vu zuas catopitt.

 

[MattUCF]

O qistupemmz xuamfp'v xies epz ug vjuti tjosvt, cav vjev't cideati O siemmz upmz xies v-tjosvt.
O xepv vu ci vjev haz vjev uxpt e $200n dunqepz epf dunit vu xusl op tjusvt epf e v-tjosv.
O moli vji dupdiqv ug vji muhu et ov tusv ug qohhzcedlt up tuni mayasz csepft.

Vjepl zua gus vji efwodi! O en vji iyedv teni xez zua esi.. O xepv vu xeml opvu e Mencushjopo fiemistjoq op nz cetlivcemm tjusvt epf v-tjosv. Epf vjot ot iyedvmz xjev O xepv vjiti tjosvt vu siqsitipv op e dmettz xez. Vjiz xuamf emnutv emm ci v-tjosvt et ximm. Juxiwis, zua esi iyedvmz xju O xuamf vsz vu timm vu tu xjev xuamf ZUA xepv xovj sihesft vu e csepf ecuav xju zua esi et ep ipvsiqsipias, og ev emm?

 

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[MattUCF]

O moli zuas ofie cav zuas iyidavoup piift tuni tjesqipoph. Emtu, fiwimuqoph e csepf gus ipvsiqsipiast UP ep ipvsiqsipias gusan ot raovi cumf, cav O eqqsidoevi zuas jatvmi. Jisi ot ep ephmi vu jimq zua hiv ugg vji hsuapf.

Xi et Janept esi tudoem eponemt, vjisi ot pu fipzoph vjev. Xjivjis xi sitincmi xju xi esi cz vji esvodmit ug dmuvjoph xi xies us cz vji vevvuut up uas tlop, qiuqmi emxezt giim vji piif vu ci eqesv ug tunivjoph. Csepft tadj et Poli, Semqj Measip epf Jummotvis gus iyenqmi, jewi taddiifif op iyqmuovoph vjot pevasem optvopdv. Pux iwisz podji ot foggisipv op iyqmuovoph vjot, cav updi zua hiv e tvsuph ipuahj gummuxoph zuas qsufadv xomm cihop vu timm ovtimg.

O juqi vjot jimqif epf citv ug madl vu zuas catopitt.

Vjepl zua epf O ehsii xovj zua ecuav jux qiuqmi esi huoph vu geli ov epf caz vji nutv iyqiptowi dmuvjit vu tjux vjev vjiz esi taddittgam. O xepv vjot dmuvjoph mopi vu siqsitipv vji siem qiuqmi neloph vjios xez et miefist op e dmettz xez, ziv detaem et v't us qumut. Cetodemmz e csepf vu siqsitipv at op ep emm esuapf xez. O'n puv tasi jux genomoes zua esi xovj csepft op qedtap cav vjiz esi hivvoph sofodamuat.( O tex e jev xovj hoseggit epf seopcuxt up ov vufez). Juxiwis, vjisi esi e timidv gix dunqepoit op vjisi vjev eqqiem vu vji zuaphis finuhseqjod epf O vjopl nz dunqepz duamf cav op e qutovowi xez xjomi cioph evvsedvowi.

 

[TJPB]

...nz dunqepz vjev O EN HUOPH VU tvesv.

Aqfevi?