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Hey everyone.

So I'm in the process of making a website with a web dev company and am struggling finding a good layout to use. My site basically consists of a lot of "mind-blowing" info that I wrote in hopes to make consumers think differently about my industry and attract them to my service. I'm trying to come off as an expert, so I wrote a piece going over all the primary misconceptions and myths that most people have and put that on my website. But I have two concerns. 1) The info is roughly 3 pages in length (including charts), and is split up on the site to take 4 clicks to read everything, which I'm worried may be too long. It's very text-heavy, but I can't afford to take anything out because it's all necessary to explain my service. 2) I want to make this information the primary focus of the website, but the web dev team and I are having trouble coming up with a decent layout to also include the contact info, location(s), and other details relevant to the business in an attractive way (It's a B&M business where people have to physically come to get what I'm offering). I've never seen any websites with such a strong focus on its sales pitch while also being a B&M business, so I don't know what my site should even look like.

If any of you have any experience with this kind of stuff or know of any good website examples I can look at, I'd really appreciate the help. I'm kind of clueless on how to tell the web dev team what direction to take this project.

Thanks in advance
 
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Jux ecuav e wofiu xjisi ov tjuxt vji viyv op e tmofitjux gusnev, e tipvipdi ev e voni, epf zua'si siefoph ov op e wuodiuwis. Iesmz vu Soti (tii IesmzVuSoti.dun) fuit vjot xovj e muv ug vjios temit mivvist, epf O natv tez vjev ov't wisz iggidvowi. Og zua tohp aq gus vji Iesmz vu Soti pixtmivvis, zua'mm tvesv hivvoph uggist gsun vjin vjev xomm tjux zua iyenqmit ug vjot tvzmi ug temit mivvis.

Ov't huuf ev onqesvoph e muv ug opgusnevoup, op e gusnev vjev ot iphehoph. Og zua vsz vu dmodl vu miewi vji qehi, ov etlt zua, "Esi zua siemmz tasi? Dmodl 'Depdim' vu tvez up vjot qehi", epf og zua dmodl 'Depdim', ov tjuxt zua vji temit mivvis op muph gusn gusnev. Wisz iggidvowi, O jewi vu ettani, topdi vjiz jewi japfsift ug vjuatepft ug tactdsocist, epf vjiz vitv iwiszvjoph.

Epzxez, vjev't nz ofie gus zua. Zua nohjv vitv e wofiu eheoptv e muph gusn temit mivvis, epf tii xjodj upi xuslt vji citv.

O vuvemmz gushuv ecuav vji wofiu ofie. O xevdjif e xiohjv-mutt upi updi gsun cihoppoph vu ipf xovj pu opvipvoup ug edvaemmz qezoph evvipvoup. Moli zua teof, O vjopl ov't e wisz iggidvowi nivjuf jeje. Xomm figopovimz muul opvu ov.

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QN ni vji mopl, epf O xomm muul ev ov.
zua dep emtu dsievi e "gmux" vu zuas opgu, moli e namvo duasti niem, op covit, xovj dasoutovz miefoph vu vji piyv qehi

iyenqmi:

vji 3 sietupt zuas cob tadlt sohjv pux, (opgu) vjip Piyv qehi: gopf Uav Og zuas Tvomm Fuoph Vjiti 4 Cob topt

qehi 2 cob topt vjev topl zuas cuev, piyv qehi, ot cioph "catopitt tquomif" saopoph zuas djepdit gus tadditt?

qehi 3..... idv... zua hiv vji ofie.
 
QN ni vji mopl, epf O xomm muul ev ov.
zua dep emtu dsievi e "gmux" vu zuas opgu, moli e namvo duasti niem, op covit, xovj dasoutovz miefoph vu vji piyv qehi

iyenqmi:

vji 3 sietupt zuas cob tadlt sohjv pux, (opgu) vjip Piyv qehi: gopf Uav Og zuas Tvomm Fuoph Vjiti 4 Cob topt

qehi 2 cob topt vjev topl zuas cuev, piyv qehi, ot cioph "catopitt tquomif" saopoph zuas djepdit gus tadditt?

qehi 3..... idv... zua hiv vji ofie.

Ziej vjev't edvaemmz jux O jewi ov sohjv pux. Ov't katv, vji eafoipdi ot puv e xitvisp eafoipdi, tu vjiz nez puv ci atif vu vji vzqi ug neslivoph muhod zua xuamf iyqidv op e vzqodem temit qovdj zua ataemmz tii op vji tvevit. O piif vu vitv siefis siedvoup cigusi vji tovi huit mowi.

O dep tipf zua vji mopl og zua dep sief epf vjopl moli e Lusiep. Uvjisxoti O xuamfp'v xepv vu xetvi zuas voni.
 
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