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[Ronnie Bryan]

Hello Forum if the goal is to be in the top 10% what are some suggested changes in me based on what you have experienced in knowing or knowing of me.I do not intend to be dead weight and even Peter Vooge called me out on VALUE at one point in my life. If I am not insatiable I am wasting life .Help a brother out post feedback please,

 

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[Antifragile]

Hello Forum if the goal is to be in the top 10% what are some suggested changes in me based on what you have experienced in knowing or knowing of me.I do not intend to be dead weight and even Peter Vooge called me out on VALUE at one point in my life. If I am not insatiable I am wasting life .Help a brother out post feedback please,

Write better.

 

[Ronnie Bryan]

Write better.

Got you , hmm look Grammer Ly keyboard works for android.

 

[Mikkel]

You need to re-read what you write. You have a lot of grammatical errors which makes it difficult to read.

Be concise.

 

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[Ronnie Bryan]

You need to re-read what you write. You have a lot of grammatical errors which makes it difficult to read.

Be concise.

Today, I found some tools to use in improving my writing in the Google app store.