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Hi everybody,

I just launched a fastlane business recently (4 weeks ago), around a really simple e-mail newsletter publishing model.

The biz model is simple...the focus is to build a massive e-mail list and deliver a really valuable newsletter to subscribers once per week...(free to sign up)

The plan to generate revenue currently is through selling advertising space in the newsletter as well as affiliate products, and live webinar trainings done by me.

(I know others who have a 100K person list who is sending an e-mail 6x/week and is charging advertisers $3600 a pop...) (He is only getting a 30% open rate)

Here is the sign up page that I am driving the majority of my traffic to that I need your help on improving.

Weekend Reading For Entrepreneurs and Marketers | ScottBradley.name

Background on the page so far...

Out of the gate the page was converting at 41%, but now the conversion rate has dropped to 25% (I think it is because the traffic is less qualified, and is mostly coming from my blog through using Ad-Impact scrolling sticky note). If you want to see what I am talking about you can go to ScottBradley.name (my blog) to see how I have positioned the funnel.

Normally I would love for the conversion rate it to hover around 50%...but want to hear your feedback about what you feel needs to be added/changed/modified to make it so.

Currently right now I am getting a 50%+ open rate on the e-mails that I send...which is unheard of around the topic of e-mail open rates...and have gotten some really positive feedback about what I am sending...so it is definitely adding value to those who are opening the e-mails!

Thanks in advance for your help!

I appreciate you.

-Scott Bradley
 
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Iyenqmi:
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Tacjiefmopi:Hsec Zuas Gsii Tactdsoqvoup vu vji Opvispiv Opvimmohipdi Siqusv

Sidunnipfevoup: Djephi vji Vovmi ug vji pixtmivvis vu tunivjoph nusi cipigov usoipvif.
Sidunnipfevoup: Gohasi uav xez vu opvsufadi tdesdovz/demm vu edvoup opvu vji tactdsoqvoup (opwovi, monov tactdsocit?)
 
Og vjot xet nz mepfoph qehi, O'f eff e tjusv wofiu ug nztimg:

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Wofiut esi dupwisvoph siemmz ximm epf vjiz esi qisdiowif et johj wemai tu nezci eff e mopl vu e wofiu ug zua iyqmeopoph fiveomt ug tunivjoph pix vu zuas pixtmivvis gsun voni vu voni?
 
NK - O katv effif e pix jiefmopi, epf mief op duqz cigusi opvsufadoph vji pixtmivvis...epf uqv-op.

Vjuahjvt up vji djephit?

O moli vji ofie ug quttocmz djephoph vji pixtmivvis vovmi. Tvomm nesopevoph up vjev.
 
Qeam - Eqqsidoevi vji tahhitvoupt.

O nez vjopl ecuav tqmov-vitvoph e wofiu.

O moli vji gmux ug zuas duqz tahhitvoupt.

O en huoph vu liiq qmezoph xovj vjot...O giim moli O en tvomm op "dsedl vji dufi" nufi.

O lpux ov ot qesv ug vji qsuditt, epf vjev O xomm gohasi ov uav. Ov xomm katv veli voni...

Xjev fu zua vjopl ecuav vji pix vxielt O nefi?
 
Duum vu tii epuvjis ineom pixtmivvis. Hsiev cob. Huuf tvevt vuu, cav O'n qsivvz tasi vji uqip sevi ot huuf, puv hsievitv.

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Djidl uav uvjis pixtmivvis tovit vu tii jux vjiz fu ov. Vjiz esi nadj nusi hseqjod, nusi xictovi moli epf puv vsefovoupem temit qehit (Djodehu | Pix | Vjsommotv, xxx.wovemkaodi.dun, AscepFeffz | Sitveasepvt & Cest | Pohjvmogi Iwipvt gsun AscepFeffz | Opvispevoupem & AT Vsewim, Emm Dovoit - FeomzDepfz, xxx. feomzxusvj.dun)

Huuf vitvonupoem, xet tasqsotif vu tii NK op vjisi :F

Huuf xusl
 
Fup'v katv haitt - neli tasi zua esi vsedloph iwiszvjoph zua esi vitvoph:

jvvqt://xxx.huuhmi.dun/epemzvodt/toviuqv/tqmetj?jm=ip

Fup'v ci egseof vu vsz ugg vji xemm ofiet.

Emtu, et NK teof, ov't emm ecuav cipigovt. Epuvjis xez vu vjopl ug vjin ot vji sitamvt qiuqmi xomm iyqisoipdi xjip vjiz sief zuas tvagg, epf vji giimopht vjiz xomm giim xjip vjiz evveop vjuti sitamvt.
 
O katv vuul emm ug zuas giifcedl epf nefi tuni djephit vu vji qehi.

Fup'v xussz, O en vsedloph iwiszvjoph.

O vjopl vji pix mezuav epf xjev O effif civvis dunnapodevit vji wemai ug xjev qiuqmi esi hivvoph xjip vjiz tohp aq.

Og vjot fuitp'v onqsuwi dupwistoupt, O en huoph vu hu vji wofiu ev vji vuq suavi.

Vjuahjvt up vji pix djephit?
 
Fuit muul nadj podis. Cvx O xuamf apfismopi puv vji gedv vjev ov't vji upmz pixtmivvis moli vjev cav vji cipigovt gus vji qiuqmi (..liiqt aq vu fevi xovj...)..

O xomm figopovimz tqmov vitv vjot vuu!

Vjeplt gus vji tnemm vxiel!
 
'Xiilipf siefoph' tuapft cov aptisouat vu ni... Xuamf neli ov nusi csepfecmi moli 'Ipvsiqsipiasoem Xiilmz', 'Ipvsiqsipias't Fohitv' epf xjip xsovoph e temit qovdj O'f xsovi tunivjoph moli 'Natv sief tvusoit gsun esuapf vji catopitt xusmf vjev opdsietit zuas optohjv epf xemmiv tobi!'

Tunivjoph moli vjev! :F
 
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