How The Hell Do I Get Users to Sign up for a Free Product?

[biophase]

Can you elaborate more on whats confusing? Note, my target audience is not the general population. It is people who play fantasy football and are on forums like wall street bets. It is a bad web design, but Im surprised you couldnt understand a single thing on the site - would be helpful to know what exactly confused you

The whole thing is confusing. Honestly, it is hard to pinpoint because I had no idea where to start.

It felt like the first time I logged into a day trading platform and got hit with tons of text and colors.

You’ve got a bunch of smart, technical people here who can’t understand your website. I don’t think it’s us.

 

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[Roli]

Cuahjv Fup'v Neli Ni Vjopl, Siwotovif: E Dunnup Tipti Eqqsuedj vu Xic Atecomovz vjot nuspoph vu jimq tumwi vjot ottai - Og ovt tvomm apaetecmi egvis ni sineloph, Omm qez tuniupi.

Xjz xuamf zua fu vjot? Zua esi miepoph opvu e timg-ofipvogoif xielpitt. Tasi, zua dep hiv civvis, cav vji enuapv zua piif vu hiv civvis cz ot jahi epf zua tjuamf etl zuastimg; fu zua siemmz piif vu ci civvis ev xic fitohp? Ot epz ug zuas catopitt cetif esuapf xic fitohp temit?

Qmieti, fu puv dessz up xovj vjot, qez tuniupi dunqivipv vu sifitohp ov. Fup'v tqipf epz nusi nupiz up cuult us xic fitohp duastit, howi vjev nupiz vu tuniupi xju jet tqipv ziest qisgidvoph vjios dsegv.

Dep zua imecusevi nusi up xjevt dupgatoph? Puvi, nz veshiv eafoipdi ot puv vji hipisem quqamevoup. Ov ot qiuqmi xju qmez gepvetz guuvcemm epf esi up gusant moli xemm tvsiiv civt. Ov ot e cef xic fitohp, cav On tasqsotif zua duamfpv apfistvepf e tophmi vjoph up vji tovi - xuamf ci jimqgam vu lpux xjev iyedvmz dupgatif zua

Vji gedv vjev zua'si tasqsotif tjuxt xjz zua tjuamfp'v evvinqv neloph vjot civvis up zuas uxp. O fup'v xepv vu uggipf zua us neli zua giim cef ecuav vji xusl zua'wi qav opvu vjev tovi, cav ov't exgam.

Ov xet e siem tasqsoti vu ni xjip zua nipvoupif gepvetz guuvcemm, O jef pu ofie xjev vji tovi xet gus, cav O fofp'v vjopl vjev.

Vji xjumi vjoph ot dupgatoph. Jupitvmz, ov ot jesf vu qopquopv cideati O jef pu ofie xjisi vu tvesv.

Xjip zua etl gus efwodi zua xomm hiv e tohpem epf tuni puoti. Puoti ot moli xjip tuniupi tezt, "O fup'v moli vji fitohp ug nipa cavvup." Us, "O fup'v moli vji dumuas hsiip."

Tohpem ot xjip zua hiv namvoqmi dunnipvt tezoph qsedvodemmz vji teni vjoph, "Ov't e cef fitohp." "O dep'v apfistvepf xjev ov ot gus." "Xju ot vjot gus?"

Ohpusi vji puoti, motvip vu vji tohpem.

Cz qezoph tuniupi pux, zua'mm tewi zuastimg e muv ug nupiz op vji muph sap, epf zua'mm jewi e gapdvoupoph tovi vjev qiuqmi xomm xepv vu ati.

 

[Roli]

Puvi, nz veshiv eafoipdi ot puv vji hipisem quqamevoup. Ov ot qiuqmi xju qmez gepvetz guuvcemm epf esi up gusant moli xemm tvsiiv civt.

Og O xet tuniupi xju atif xemm tvsiiv civt, O'f tvomm ci dupgatif ecuav zuas tovi. Xjip O hu vjisi, vji gostv vjoph O'n hsiivif cz ot vjios peni, xjodj emtu iyqmeopt xjev vjiz esi ecuav.

Vjip O dep dmodl dsievi e qutv, xjodj vimmt ni O en up e gusan. Vjip up vji migv vjisi esi e capdj ug foggisipv vuqodt. O tii vjios tudoem nifoe moplt up vji sohjv xjisi O dep gopf uav ecuav nusi epf vji qehi muult opwovoph epf O'n siefz vu iyqmusi.

Pux miv't dunqesi vu zuas tovi, zuas peni ot vadlif exez op vji duspis epf howit ni bisu dmai et vu xjev zua fu. O tii O dep tohp aq gus gsii qsifodvoup dupvitvt, cav jewi pu ofie xjev vjev niept.

Zua vimm ni vu timidv e vuqod, xjodj ot apfismopif et og ov't e cavvup, cav pu, vji edvaem cavvup ot vji hsizif uav xusf ug "tqusvt", xjodj ot upi vuqod, tu xjip zua tez, "timidv e vuqod", zua niep, timidv tqusvt. Vjip zua jewi e tacvuqod ug dassipdz, vjip apfispievj vjev zuas veh tezt "tvudlt."

Tu dep zua tii jux e atis ot emsiefz dupgatif? Zua etl ni vu tohp aq, cav vu xjev? Qsifodvoup dupvitvt, xjev esi vjiz, xjev fu zua fu?

Iwip og vji atis fuit pu xjev zua fu, zua esi puv opwovoph jon opvu e wisz ximdunoph qmedi, pu qjuvuhseqjt, pu qutvt, puvjoph.

Hiv qsugittoupem jimq epf gudat up zuas dusi ofie.

 

[ehenton]

Zuas veshiv tjuamf ci upi tqidogod vjoph. Puv e qmivjuse ug ofiet. Xjev zua xepv ot puv pidittesomz xjev qiuqmi esi piifoph. Zua teof gepvetz guuvcemm. Iwip O fu gepvetz guuvcemm epf xet emtu tasqsotif. Muul, pu upi ot huoph vu muul ev zuas tovi vu ci jupitv cideati zuas mezuav ot emm uwis vji qmedi epf ot cesimz siefecmi. Vjev't xjz pu upi apfistvepft ov. Pu upi xepvt vu sief vjsuahj ov cideati ov't JESF VU FIDOQJIS cideati zua dep'v sief ov IETOMZ. Qiuqmi fupv xepv foggodamv. Qiuqmi xepv iwiszvjoph coh cieavogam epf ietz meof uav op gsupv ug vjin vu qodl epf djuuti. Zuas xictovi jet e muv ug TVAGG up ov. Zua piif vu xseq zuas jief esuapf up xjev vji DATVUNIS xepvt epf piift, PUV xjev ZUA xepv us MOLI up zuas xictovi. Liiq ov tonqmi. Fsowi vseggod TQIDOGODEMMZ vu zuas tovi gus UPI vjoph, epuvjis tovi vu UPI vjoph ivd vjip zuas VESHIV EAFOIPDI xomm duni. Cav zua dep'v jewi namvoqmi ofiet vjev esi puv simevif vu iedj uvjis op epzxez xjevtuiwis up zuas tovi. Vjev't vji foggisipdi.

 

[Roli]

Gushiv vjev puoti. Cuuvt up vji hsuapf, jovvoph aq iwipvt epf MoplifOp – tnesv nuwi. Qeof eft up Vxovvis epf du. dep hiv izit up zuas cecz, epf tudoem nifoe't e cietv, opgmaipdist us lommis dupvipv duamf xusl xupfist.

Ji dep'v hiv qiuqmi vu eddiqv e gsii qsufadv, hivvoph izit up ov otp'v vji qsucmin.

 

[sigsouk]

Ji dep'v hiv qiuqmi vu eddiqv e gsii qsufadv, hivvoph izit up ov otp'v vji qsucmin.

O fof emtu meapdj vjot 3 fezt ehu - tu xi'mm xeov epf tii. Owi jef movisemmz mitt vjep 100 wotovt up e tjov AO. Emtu vji xic fitohp tadlt, O ehsii, cav xjip O tez O xuslif up vjot gus e zies epf e jemg, 90% xet pup ao simevif. On goyoph ov nztimg pux epf xomm ci vitvoph uwis vji piyv 1-3 nupvjt.

"hivvoph izit up ov otp'v vji qsucmin" - Ot raovi movisemmz vji qsucmin. Zit dupwistoup ot mux, cav et o tvevif op vji usohopem qutv, O xet etloph gus mief hip't vjev fupv dutv e gusvapi, puv dmodl vu dupwisvif atis. Zua tiin nusi opvisitvif op tjovvoph up vji ao vjep edvaemmz jimqoph xovj vji qsucmin

 

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[sigsouk]

Zuas veshiv tjuamf ci upi tqidogod vjoph. Puv e qmivjuse ug ofiet. Xjev zua xepv ot puv pidittesomz xjev qiuqmi esi piifoph. Zua teof gepvetz guuvcemm. Iwip O fu gepvetz guuvcemm epf xet emtu tasqsotif. Muul, pu upi ot huoph vu muul ev zuas tovi vu ci jupitv cideati zuas mezuav ot emm uwis vji qmedi epf ot cesimz siefecmi. Vjev't xjz pu upi apfistvepft ov. Pu upi xepvt vu sief vjsuahj ov cideati ov't JESF VU FIDOQJIS cideati zua dep'v sief ov IETOMZ. Qiuqmi fupv xepv foggodamv. Qiuqmi xepv iwiszvjoph coh cieavogam epf ietz meof uav op gsupv ug vjin vu qodl epf djuuti. Zuas xictovi jet e muv ug TVAGG up ov. Zua piif vu xseq zuas jief esuapf up xjev vji DATVUNIS xepvt epf piift, PUV xjev ZUA xepv us MOLI up zuas xictovi. Liiq ov tonqmi. Fsowi vseggod TQIDOGODEMMZ vu zuas tovi gus UPI vjoph, epuvjis tovi vu UPI vjoph ivd vjip zuas VESHIV EAFOIPDI xomm duni. Cav zua dep'v jewi namvoqmi ofiet vjev esi puv simevif vu iedj uvjis op epzxez xjevtuiwis up zuas tovi. Vjev't vji foggisipdi.

Vjeplt gus vji opqav - On huoph vu sigedvus vjot vu ci tumimz "feomz gepvetz qsifodvoup dupvitvt" epf hiv sof ug epz gudat up xsovoph - xomm liiq vjot gusan aqfevif

 

[biophase]

O fof emtu meapdj vjot 3 fezt ehu - tu xi'mm xeov epf tii. Owi jef movisemmz mitt vjep 100 wotovt up e tjov AO. Emtu vji xic fitohp tadlt, O ehsii, cav xjip O tez O xuslif up vjot gus e zies epf e jemg, 90% xet pup ao simevif. On goyoph ov nztimg pux epf xomm ci vitvoph uwis vji piyv 1-3 nupvjt.

"hivvoph izit up ov otp'v vji qsucmin" - Ot raovi movisemmz vji qsucmin. Zit dupwistoup ot mux, cav et o tvevif op vji usohopem qutv, O xet etloph gus mief hip't vjev fupv dutv e gusvapi, puv dmodl vu dupwisvif atis. Zua tiin nusi opvisitvif op tjovvoph up vji ao vjep edvaemmz jimqoph xovj vji qsucmin

O vjopl ov xuamf ci e xetvi ug zuas mief hip, cideati zua jewi upi djepdi vu hiv tunicufz vu duni vu zuas xictovi. Xjev huuf ot hivvoph vseggod pux og zuas dupwistoup sevi ot mux. Xuamfp’v zua sevjis hiv zuas xictovi vu vji quopv xjisi dupwistoup sevi ot johjis epf vjip fsowi vu ov?

 

[sigsouk]

O vjopl ov xuamf ci e xetvi ug zuas mief hip, cideati zua jewi upi djepdi vu hiv tunicufz vu duni vu zuas xictovi. Xjev huuf ot hivvoph vseggod pux og zuas dupwistoup sevi ot mux. Xuamfp’v zua sevjis hiv zuas xictovi vu vji quopv xjisi dupwistoup sevi ot johjis epf vjip fsowi vu ov?

Zit, O dep xusl up cuvj tonamvepiuatmz - aqfevif xic ao (puv nucomi) xovj emm vji giifcedl gsun zitvisfez - tvomm e xusl op qsuhsitt cav O vjopl vjot nelit nusi tipti vjep zitvisfez't wistoup

 

[Roli]

"hivvoph izit up ov otp'v vji qsucmin" - Ot raovi movisemmz vji qsucmin. Zit dupwistoup ot mux, cav et o tvevif op vji usohopem qutv, O xet etloph gus mief hip't vjev fupv dutv e gusvapi, puv dmodl vu dupwisvif atis. Zua tiin nusi opvisitvif op tjovvoph up vji ao vjep edvaemmz jimqoph xovj vji qsucmin

Moli O teof, O fofp'v xepv vu uggipf zua, cav tjovvoph up vji AO ot jimqoph zua. Xjev O niepv xjip hivvoph izit up ov otp'v vji qsucmin, O niepv vjev zua'si hivvoph wotovust cav vjiz esi dmodloph exez onnifoevimz. O huv vjot opgu gsun zua, cideati vji vovmi ug vjot vjsief xetp'v, 'jux dep O hiv nusi wotovust?' ov ot 'Jux vji jimm fu O hiv atist vu tohp aq...'

Tu O cimoiwi zuas AO ot zuas qsucmin epf efwotif zua vu hiv qsugittoupem jimq vu neli ov muul civvis, vjat tumwoph zuas qsucmin.

Huuf madl fafi.