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Maybe try something like this?
Then sweeten the deal with a bonus / something to overcome objections.
Make sure to clarify who the offer is actually for. (Businesses, residential homes, people who live in apartments, bulky items like bedding, etc.)
Include your preferred contact method which seems to be your phone number.
Add a website/place for them to get more info about your business if they want it.
This is super basic but should help you structure things. Hope it helps!
Instead of putting your business name at the top, put your best possible offer.100% “Done For You” Laundry Service
FREE Pick Up And Delivery
Residential & Commercial
(123) 456-7890
www.yourwebsite.com
Then sweeten the deal with a bonus / something to overcome objections.
Make sure to clarify who the offer is actually for. (Businesses, residential homes, people who live in apartments, bulky items like bedding, etc.)
Include your preferred contact method which seems to be your phone number.
Add a website/place for them to get more info about your business if they want it.
This is super basic but should help you structure things. Hope it helps!
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