How do i make a successful banner?

[Kalactose]

I'm running a laundry shop and want to increase my outreach by posting multiple banners across other areas. My goal is people see this, and then call me, I offer free pickup and delivery.

This is the structure I wanted to show my graphics designer.
"Alpha4 Laundry Services
Free Pickup and delivery across the area
Just call 090....
Quality and trusted"

Do you think I can modify it so that I can increase sales and conversion rates?
Also, how will I structure it so that I can show I am trusted and reliable and will not runaway with their stuff?

 

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[Vasudev Soni]

I'm running a laundry shop and want to increase my outreach by posting multiple banners across other areas. My goal is people see this, and then call me, I offer free pickup and delivery.

This is the structure I wanted to show my graphics designer.
"Alpha4 Laundry Services
Free Pickup and delivery across the area
Just call 090....
Quality and trusted"

Do you think I can modify it so that I can increase sales and conversion rates?
Also, how will I structure it so that I can show I am trusted and reliable and will not runaway with their stuff?

You can hire professional designer services, or you can yourself create a banner on websites like Canva.

 

[Kalactose]

You can hire professional designer services, or you can yourself create a banner on websites like Canva.

What I'm looking is the copywriting part to increase sales not the actual designing part. Do you have any tips?

 

[xShepherdx]

Maybe try something like this?

100% “Done For You” Laundry Service
FREE Pick Up And Delivery
Residential & Commercial
(123) 456-7890
www.yourwebsite.com​

Instead of putting your business name at the top, put your best possible offer.

Then sweeten the deal with a bonus / something to overcome objections.

Make sure to clarify who the offer is actually for. (Businesses, residential homes, people who live in apartments, bulky items like bedding, etc.)

Include your preferred contact method which seems to be your phone number.

Add a website/place for them to get more info about your business if they want it.

This is super basic but should help you structure things. Hope it helps!

 

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[Kalactose]

Maybe try something like this?

Wow! Thanks. I'll do something similar to this.

 

[xShepherdx]

Wow! Thanks. I'll do something similar to this.

I edited the post to give a bit of context for each line. Feel free to use and modify the copy as necessary to fit your offer.

Good luck and be sure to report back with results!

 

[Oso]

What I'm looking is the copywriting part to increase sales not the actual designing part. Do you have any tips?

ChatGPT and Rytr.me are two amazing tools for generating copy. I recommend editing whatever is generated to give it a "human vibe" before publishing.

 

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[Kalactose]

ChatGPT and Rytr.me are two amazing tools for generating copy. I recommend editing whatever is generated to give it a "human vibe" before publishing.

Completely forgot about AI generated content. Would give it a try! Thanks.