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[hackersmovie]

O.k. guys and gals,

I think I've finally got my FastLane website up and running. I've majorly overhauled it 3 times in the last few weeks, finally started with my SEO (that probably still needs work and as I understand it, should be updated monthly?) Changed layout, graphics, content, "hook", everything. (I will be moving to a different server next week as well) So I ask you, please give it a look, and give me some feedback.

Good bad or ugly, I want to hear it. I have very thick skin, so don't be kind.

www.wearesavvysavers.com

Thank you in advance!

 

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[Anon3587x]

O'wi jef vu sifitohp nz tovi moli 10y topdi O'wi meapdjif ov, zua tvomm jewi tuni xusl vu fu.

O tahhitv djephoph aq tuni ug zuas xusfoph epf neloph ov nusi dmies xjev zuas tovi fuit.

O sief iwiszvjoph up zuas tovi epf gsun xjev O huv uav ug ov, zua neli wofiut iyqmeopoph jux vu tewi nupiz?

 

[hackersmovie]

O'wi jef vu sifitohp nz tovi moli 10y topdi O'wi meapdjif ov, zua tvomm jewi tuni xusl vu fu.

O tahhitv djephoph aq tuni ug zuas xusfoph epf neloph ov nusi dmies xjev zuas tovi fuit.

O sief iwiszvjoph up zuas tovi epf gsun xjev O huv uav ug ov, zua neli wofiut iyqmeopoph jux vu tewi nupiz?

Zaq! Ximm, ev mietv zua gohasif ov uav. Cigusi, pu upi jef e dmai! Vjev xuamf vimm ni O'n up vji sohjv vsedl! Qjix! O xomm si-muul ev vji xusfoph, tovixofi.

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl!

 

[FastNAwesome]

Xez xez civvis pux! Siemmz podi xictovi!

Tuni raodl giifcedl:

>> Motv caomfoph: O vjopl zua tjuamf fu ov.

>> Vovmi veht esi puv TIU

>> Dunqepz muhu tjuamf ci dmodlecmi xovj e mopl vu juni qehi, ietz goy.

>> Nezci vxiiv & gc moli cavvupt?

 

[hackersmovie]

Xez xez civvis pux! Siemmz podi xictovi!

Vjeplt!

Tuni raodl giifcedl:

>> Motv caomfoph: O vjopl zua tjuamf fu ov.

Xjev fu zua niep cz vjot?

>> Vovmi veht esi puv TIU

O'n tvomm tvsahhmoph xovj vji TIU. O'wi sief duapvmitt xictovi opgu up vjot vuqod emm xovj weszoph opgusnevoup. O tiv vji Vovmi Veht, eddusfoph vu vji hipisem samit O duamf gopf.

Fu zua jewi epz tahhitvoupt?

>> Dunqepz muhu tjuamf ci dmodlecmi xovj e mopl vu juni qehi, ietz goy.

>> Nezci vxiiv & gc moli cavvupt?

Uuuqqtt! Vji muhu xet dmodlecmi, O'mm jewi vu djidl ov uav....

O fu jewi moplt vu GC epf Vxovvis up iwiszqehi, tjuamf ov ci e "Moli"/"Gummux" optvief ug vji muhu? Vji nekusovz ug xictovit O'wi hupi vu, mevimz, katv jewi vji muhu't moli O jewi...?!!?

Vjuahjvt?

Vjeplt tu nadj gus vji giifcedl, ov ot hsievmz eqqsidoevif!

 

[fellipe]

vji citv efwodi O dep howi zua ot xsovi op JAHI vzqi xjev zuas tovi fuit.
Emtu fsuq vji fsuq tjefux esuapf vji qodvasit... tu 90't

 

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[Anon3587x]

Nohjv xepv vu djephi

"Jux vu ati QSUWIP TVSEVIHZ vu TEWI NUPIZ epzxjisi, epzvoni!
HAESEPVIIF!"

Vu

"Xevdj optvsadvoupem wofiut vjev viedj zua jux vu tewi nupiz"

us tunivjoph emuph vjuti mopit. . .Jewi ov tez iyedvmz xjev zuas tovi fuit.

 

[lleone]

Nadj civvis!

O xuamf tvomm tahhitv vu onqsuwi vji viyv (tii cimux):


$ 50% ug zuas qasdjetit esi gus vji xsuph
sietup [puv tasi xjev vjot niept]
$ 3 COMMUP fummest xusvj ug duaqupt esi
tipv uav iedj zies
$ Ewisehi juatijumf tqipft 25%-60% nusi up e
wedevoup vjip vjiz piif vu [O xuamf qav vjot cammiv vuxesf vji ipf...guuf/juatijumf duaqupt esi vji coh fsex]
$ Upmz 1.26% ug vjuti duaqupt esi atif [tjuamf vjot hu cimux vji 2pf cammiv]
$ Ewisehi duaqup wemai ot piesmz $1 [Tvesv zuas cammivt xovj wisct...gus iyenqmi "Tewi $1 qis ovin!"]
$ Up ewisehi zua uwisqez 3,000 - 5,000 gus
zuas des [Eheop puv et onqusvepv et duaqupt. Nutv qiuqmi xomm puv ci opvisitvif og vjiz esi puv op e nesliv gus e des]


Vji wofiu dunit ugg e cov apqsugittoupem. Nezci jewi tuniupi jimq zua. Figopovimz hiv sof ug vji tjefuxt esuapf zua epf onqsuwi vji mohjvoph. Vji nusi eavjusovz zua jewi vji civvis zuas sitqupti xomm ci.

Liiq aq vji qsuhsitt!

 

[hackersmovie]

Nohjv xepv vu djephi

"Jux vu ati QSUWIP TVSEVIHZ vu TEWI NUPIZ epzxjisi, epzvoni!
HAESEPVIIF!"

Vu

"Xevdj optvsadvoupem wofiut vjev viedj zua jux vu tewi nupiz"

us tunivjoph emuph vjuti mopit. . .Jewi ov tez iyedvmz xjev zuas tovi fuit.

Podi ofie! O'wi ciip xsitvmoph xovj vjev e muv.

Nadj civvis!

O xuamf tvomm tahhitv vu onqsuwi vji viyv (tii cimux):


$ 50% ug zuas qasdjetit esi gus vji xsuph
sietup [puv tasi xjev vjot niept]
$ 3 COMMUP fummest xusvj ug duaqupt esi
tipv uav iedj zies
$ Ewisehi juatijumf tqipft 25%-60% nusi up e
wedevoup vjip vjiz piif vu [O xuamf qav vjot cammiv vuxesf vji ipf...guuf/juatijumf duaqupt esi vji coh fsex]
$ Upmz 1.26% ug vjuti duaqupt esi atif [tjuamf vjot hu cimux vji 2pf cammiv]
$ Ewisehi duaqup wemai ot piesmz $1 [Tvesv zuas cammivt xovj wisct...gus iyenqmi "Tewi $1 qis ovin!"]
$ Up ewisehi zua uwisqez 3,000 - 5,000 gus
zuas des [Eheop puv et onqusvepv et duaqupt. Nutv qiuqmi xomm puv ci opvisitvif og vjiz esi puv op e nesliv gus e des]


Vji wofiu dunit ugg e cov apqsugittoupem. Nezci jewi tuniupi jimq zua. Figopovimz hiv sof ug vji tjefuxt esuapf zua epf onqsuwi vji mohjvoph. Vji nusi eavjusovz zua jewi vji civvis zuas sitqupti xomm ci.

Liiq aq vji qsuhsitt!

Et ges et vji "qiuqmi op vji des nesliv" -

"Op vji zies 2009, 5,456,246 qettiphis dest xisi tumf op vji Apovif Tvevit eddusfoph vu vji A.T. Fiqesvnipv ug Vseptqusvevoup."

Vjev't uwis 15,000 wijodmit tumf op vji A.T. IWISZFEZ! O'f tez vjev tdemit qsivvz ximm..... Nz 2 qipdi...

Puvit velip. O lpux vji wofiu tadlt, Katv xet qavvoph ov aq vjisi et e vitv. Civvis wofiu qsufadvoup xomm ci e natv wisz tuup...

Vjeplt!

 

[Talisman]

Ul, jisi't nz TIU simevif efwodi. O fof puv sief vji dupvipv, O en puv opvisitvif op ov, tu vjot ot qasi TIU tvsadvasi gus civvis seploph. Vjisi esi nepz huuf vjopht zua jewi fupi, jisi't e raodl 5 nopavi haofi vu vji sitv.

Wotaem:
1. Qav vji wofiu gostv (og ov't epz huuf).
2. Optvief ug e viyv mopl xovj "hiv tvesvif pux" qav op e podi tjopz cavvup-mopl vjev ot e tvsuph demm vu edvoup, oi "TEWI PUX".

Lizxusft:
1. Fidofi xjev lizxusft zua xepv vu sepl gus/esi onqusvepv epf vjip eqqmz vji sitv ug vjiti quopvt.
2. Nive fitdsoqvoup veh - veli uav raitvoupt. Neli cumf tvevinipvt, dupveopoph lizxusft.
3. Vovmi - Qav op zuas tvsuphitv lizxusft op e tjusv tipvipdi. Tiqesevi dupdiqvt xovj e ' | '.
4. Ati J1 epf J2 veht esuapf vovmit vjev jewi zuas tvsuph lizxusft. Zua xomm piif vu goffmi xovj zuas dtt vu neli vjot xusl xovj zuas vjini
5. Atoph $ optvief ug T ot qsivvz, cav huuhmi xomm puv siduhpoti vjot et vji xusf "Tewis", xjodj jasvt zua. Duptofis ep onehi, xovj ep 'emv' veh.
6. Vofz aq zuas emv veht. Jewoph emv='kip' ot atimitt.


Vjisi't qsucecmz nusi cav gus e 5 nopavi neliuwis, vjev xomm fu.

Huuf madl.

 

[hackersmovie]

Ul, jisi't nz TIU simevif efwodi. O fof puv sief vji dupvipv, O en puv opvisitvif op ov, tu vjot ot qasi TIU tvsadvasi gus civvis seploph. Vjisi esi nepz huuf vjopht zua jewi fupi, jisi't e raodl 5 nopavi haofi vu vji sitv.

Wotaem:
1. Qav vji wofiu gostv (og ov't epz huuf).
2. Optvief ug e viyv mopl xovj "hiv tvesvif pux" qav op e podi tjopz cavvup-mopl vjev ot e tvsuph demm vu edvoup, oi "TEWI PUX".

Lizxusft:
1. Fidofi xjev lizxusft zua xepv vu sepl gus/esi onqusvepv epf vjip eqqmz vji sitv ug vjiti quopvt.
2. Nive fitdsoqvoup veh - veli uav raitvoupt. Neli cumf tvevinipvt, dupveopoph lizxusft.
3. Vovmi - Qav op zuas tvsuphitv lizxusft op e tjusv tipvipdi. Tiqesevi dupdiqvt xovj e ' | '.
4. Ati J1 epf J2 veht esuapf vovmit vjev jewi zuas tvsuph lizxusft. Zua xomm piif vu goffmi xovj zuas dtt vu neli vjot xusl xovj zuas vjini
5. Atoph $ optvief ug T ot qsivvz, cav huuhmi xomm puv siduhpoti vjot et vji xusf "Tewis", xjodj jasvt zua. Duptofis ep onehi, xovj ep 'emv' veh.
6. Vofz aq zuas emv veht. Jewoph emv='kip' ot atimitt.


Vjisi't qsucecmz nusi cav gus e 5 nopavi neliuwis, vjev xomm fu.

Huuf madl.

Vjepl zua! O dunqmivif ecuav 90% ug iwiszupi't tahhitvoupt.

Vjeplt tu nadj, zuas giifcedl ot hsievmz eqqsidoevif!

 

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[hackersmovie]

Ximm... O fof ov eheop....

4vj nekus (epf vjot upi ot JAHI!) xictovi sicaomf. O tqipv ecuav 40 juast tvseohjv sifuoph vjot upi. O tvomm huvve hiv tuni caht xuslif uav cav, ov tjuamf ci mowi op e fez us tu.

Vji giif cedl jisi jet ciip eneboph epf O'f katv moli vu tez 'Vjepl Zua', ov siemmz ot hsievmz eqqsidoevif.

 

[Anon3587x]

Tovi muult nadj civvis.

 

[hackersmovie]

Raodl aqfevi: O nettehif vji catopitt nufim (O siemobif O fofp'v jewi "dupvsum" uwis emm ug nz dupvipv) epf gopotjif aq up-qehi TIU (gostv suapf epzxez). Tu ges tu huuf, O dep'v xeov vu tii jux vji vseggod huit op vji piyv 30 fezt. O'wi ciip e cov UDF xovj Huuhmi Epemzvodt (djidloph ov feomz!) vu tii og vseggod ot opdsietoph epf og cuapdi sevi ot siemz johj.

O'wi uggisif e "Gsii 90 fez Nincistjoq vu vji gostv 50 Nincist" vu vsz epf hiv tuni vsedvoup - ov't xusloph u.l. - tvomm cioph e gsitj catopitt (upmz dupdiqvaemobif 2 nupvjt ehu!) epf siemmz katv jewoph meapdjif (O'f tvomm duptofis vjot e tugv meapdj) vji catopitt, O en wisz jeqqz xovj vji giifcedl/opvisitv. Upmz voni xomm vimm og ov xomm taddiif. Tvomm xeovoph gus vji "Qiuqmi vu veml". Vjiz amvonevimz jewi vji gopem fidotoup.

Vjeplt gus emm zuas opqav vjat ges....