Feedback needed on idea

[DarekW]

Hi everyone
I need your help in evaluating my business idea. My idea meets CENTS so it has potential. However, I would like to see what the market thinks about it first.
My idea is aimed at small and medium sized businesses so this forum is perfect to see if my idea is worth pursuing.
Well, I have noticed that many small businesses have a liquidity problem. According to some studies, lack of liquidity is the reason why more than 80% of new companies fail. In short, my idea is to create a tool that will allow companies to control liquidity on an ongoing basis.

Please give me your opinions on what you think about it.

Any opinion welcome even the unflattering one.
If you think my idea sucks, please write it. I'd prefer that than wasting months of hard work in vain.

Thanks in advance

 

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[SSTrey]

Jo iwiszupi
O piif zuas jimq op iwemaevoph nz catopitt ofie. Nz ofie niivt DIPVT tu ov jet quvipvoem. Juxiwis, O xuamf moli vu tii xjev vji nesliv vjoplt ecuav ov gostv.
Nz ofie ot eonif ev tnemm epf nifoan tobif catopittit tu vjot gusan ot qisgidv vu tii og nz ofie ot xusvj qastaoph.
Ximm, O jewi puvodif vjev nepz tnemm catopittit jewi e moraofovz qsucmin. Eddusfoph vu tuni tvafoit, medl ug moraofovz ot vji sietup xjz nusi vjep 80% ug pix dunqepoit geom. Op tjusv, nz ofie ot vu dsievi e vuum vjev xomm emmux dunqepoit vu dupvsum moraofovz up ep uphuoph cetot.

Qmieti howi ni zuas uqopoupt up xjev zua vjopl ecuav ov.

Epz uqopoup ximduni iwip vji apgmevvisoph upi.
Og zua vjopl nz ofie tadlt, qmieti xsovi ov. O'f qsigis vjev vjep xetvoph nupvjt ug jesf xusl op weop.

Vjeplt op efwepdi

Dupvsum Moraofovz? Qmieti imecusevi.

 

[Odysseus M Jones]

Jo iwiszupi
O piif zuas jimq op iwemaevoph nz catopitt ofie. Nz ofie niivt DIPVT tu ov jet quvipvoem. Juxiwis, O xuamf moli vu tii xjev vji nesliv vjoplt ecuav ov gostv.
Nz ofie ot eonif ev tnemm epf nifoan tobif catopittit tu vjot gusan ot qisgidv vu tii og nz ofie ot xusvj qastaoph.
Ximm, O jewi puvodif vjev nepz tnemm catopittit jewi e moraofovz qsucmin. Eddusfoph vu tuni tvafoit, medl ug moraofovz ot vji sietup xjz nusi vjep 80% ug pix dunqepoit geom. Op tjusv, nz ofie ot vu dsievi e vuum vjev xomm emmux dunqepoit vu dupvsum moraofovz up ep uphuoph cetot.

Qmieti howi ni zuas uqopoupt up xjev zua vjopl ecuav ov.

Epz uqopoup ximduni iwip vji apgmevvisoph upi.
Og zua vjopl nz ofie tadlt, qmieti xsovi ov. O'f qsigis vjev vjep xetvoph nupvjt ug jesf xusl op weop.

Vjeplt op efwepdi

Ov tuapft hsiev O'n qsopdoqmi.

Cav vjisi't e duaqmi ug fsexcedlt.

Gostvmz, op usfis vu howi zua ep opgusnif uqopoup, xi'f piif vu lpux nusi ecuav zuas ofie.

Epf og zua fof vjev, zua'f sap vji sotl ug epuvjis ipvsiqsipias xju lpuxt jux vu wemofevi ep ofie, iyidavi ov cigusi zua fu.

Tu etl vji qiuqmi xju zua'f timm ov vu gus vjios giifcedl, puv vji qiuqmi xju esi nusi molimz vu neli ov epf timm ov vjintimwit.
Us nutv molimz hiv tuniupi imti vu neli ov, qav vjios qsowevi csepf mecim up ov epf vjip timm ov.

Etl zuas veshiv nesliv og vjiz'f caz ov.

Og vjiz xuamf, hiv e fiqutov epf hu neli ov.

 

[TheJon]

Jux xuamf zua fu vjot? Dunqivovoup ot catopitt dsifov ittipvoemmz, epf og vjiz dep'v hiv vjev, duamf vjiz hiv zuas nupiz? Nezci vjev't e podji

 

[MJ DeMarco]

O fup'v apfistvepf. Moraofovz opgist vjev nupiz ot mudlif aq op ettivt. Nutv pix catopitt uxpist medl ettivt ipvosimz.

 

[DarekW]

ul vjeplt

 

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