Would you read this novel? Imagine you're an average female lol. I wanted to connect with 16-45 yr old women, her being young, innocent, handsome guy, and all that = youth crowd, and then being overweight, love= older women. I think a lot of people can relate. This will be told in 1st person. Tearjerker all the way through.
On the cover will be a huge juicy burger, with fries, and someone eating it probably lol. It will grab your attention, and make you hungry.
Plus the autism part will be good for marketing.
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The novel is about an obese woman name Sue, cries herself to sleep, she's autistic, and her normal sister takes her to a place to meet a handsome man. She has never been kissed, and lives with her parents. The guy tried to stay away from her at first, because he thought she wouldn't accept his career. He also had a snobby girlfriend, who dumps him freeing him to know Sue.
Now this guy goes to Sue, she confines to him, they enter into a happy relationship. Yet, he puts her on a regime to make her lose weight in a supportive yet authoritarian manner, changes her appearance, and now she becomes attractive... she wasn't aware she was pretty before. He liked her because he could use her weaknesses which he did unconsciously.
It became overwhelming to her for many reasons, and she breaks down. She eventually goes to the family priest because she thought she was going against the Bible, and the priest uses her innocence for sexual pleasures. She has no recollection of what happen, breaks down, and goes insane (or something) The boyfriend takes a look back and analyzes everything, maybe she commits suicide...
On the cover will be a huge juicy burger, with fries, and someone eating it probably lol. It will grab your attention, and make you hungry.
Plus the autism part will be good for marketing.
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The novel is about an obese woman name Sue, cries herself to sleep, she's autistic, and her normal sister takes her to a place to meet a handsome man. She has never been kissed, and lives with her parents. The guy tried to stay away from her at first, because he thought she wouldn't accept his career. He also had a snobby girlfriend, who dumps him freeing him to know Sue.
Now this guy goes to Sue, she confines to him, they enter into a happy relationship. Yet, he puts her on a regime to make her lose weight in a supportive yet authoritarian manner, changes her appearance, and now she becomes attractive... she wasn't aware she was pretty before. He liked her because he could use her weaknesses which he did unconsciously.
It became overwhelming to her for many reasons, and she breaks down. She eventually goes to the family priest because she thought she was going against the Bible, and the priest uses her innocence for sexual pleasures. She has no recollection of what happen, breaks down, and goes insane (or something) The boyfriend takes a look back and analyzes everything, maybe she commits suicide...
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