Can you give me a critique on my website please?

[Deleted11391]

Hi Guys,

I have spent several years researching, writing and publishing a book which i am extremely passionate about.

It may not make me rich, or indeed get me onto the fastlane, but it was a personal goal of mine to publish this book and for that im extremely happy to have done it.

I am now at the stage where i have a website up and running to help me market and sell the book. After all, it would be nice for as many people as possible to be able to read the book!

The Few That Do

I would really appreciate if you could take a few minutes to take a look at the site and let me know what you think.

If there is something you feel i could improve, please say. Im open to constructive criticism!! 😀

All suggestions, and feedback would be MOST appreciated.

Many Thanks
Brian

 

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[JEdwards]

Duum fiem. Muult huuf. Puv nadj O xuamf djephi. Zua piif vu howi exez tuni gsii duqoit xovj qsunotit ug e siwoix.

 

[Deleted11391]

Vjevt e huuf ofie Kedl, o jef vjuahjv ug fuoph vjev uggmopi, cav jefpv vjuahjv ug qavvoph vjev upvu vji tovi et tadj.

Xomm tduas vji piv vupohjv vu tii og o dep txoqi tuni huuf iyenqmit ug qiuqmi uggisoph vjot vzqi ug uggis up vjios tovi.

Djiist!!!

Csoep

 

[TK1]

Duqz Kenit Emvadjis epf zua xomm ci uas piyv getvmepi tadditt tvusz

'Og zua nepehi vu howi exez 10,000 icuult, zua xomm timm 10,000 icuult'

Vji Djuuti Zuastimg Ise – Jux Vu Timm 300,000 Cuult Emvadjis Dupgofipvoem

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Ot ov quttocmi gus zua vu neli e mowoph gsun zuas timg-qacmotjif cuult? Emvadjis Dupgofipvoem
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[Skys]

Op emm jupuatvz, Ov muult e muv moli ep efwisvotinipv gus zuas cuul.

O sevjis tii tunivjoph moli vjot: Vji Nestjemm Humftnovj Hsuaq | Iyidavowi Duedjoph

Hsiev cuul, cav jot tovi ot nusi ecuav jon, ecuav xjev ji fuit ivd

Zuas tovi, ov muult huuf, cav ov siemmz muult moli ep ef.

 

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Jo VL1

Vjeplt gus vji moplt, opvisitvoph.

O jef usohopemmz vjuahjv ug howoph exez nz cuul gus gsii, katv vu vsz epf hiv ov opvu et nepz jepft et quttocmi

Nz neop qsucmin xet vjev tunivonit ovt et jesf vu "timm" GSII et ov ot vu qsunuvi e djieqmz qsodif qsufadv.

Og o vjuahjv gus upi optvepv o duamf hiv nz cuul opvu vji jepft ug jahi pancist ug qiuqmi, vjip vji medl ug e nupivesz sivasp xuamf ci ug pu duptiraipdi vu ni, juxiwis on puv tasi vjev o lpux jux vu fu vjot dussidvmz epf updi ovt fupi.....ovt lopf ug e gopem vjoph.

On puv fuoph vjot vu hiv sodj.....o fu juxiwis xepv vu neli tasi vjev et nepz qiuqmi et quttocmi hiv vu sief epf ipkuz nz cuul. On tqipv e muv ug voni xsovoph vji cuul epf ov xet emxezt op vji cedl ug nz nopf vu howi ov exez updi o jef edjoiwif nz huem ug dunqmivoph ov epf qacmotjoph ov.

Nz neop qsucmin xet dsievoph e qmevgusn vu fuoph vjev op xjodj vji cuul xuamf ci eqqsidoevif, wemaif epf edlpuxmifhif, sevjis vjep cioph fotnottif et "puv epuvjis gsiicoi cuul"

O xomm siwoix vji Kenit Emvadjis tovi op nusi fiveom tjusvmz.....qisjeqt ov xomm jimq vsohhis e cseopxewi!!!

Xuamf muwi vu jies NKt veli up vjot emtu.

Vjeplt eheop
Csoep

 

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[AllenCrawley]

Op emm jupuatvz, Ov muult e muv moli ep efwisvotinipv gus zuas cuul.

Puvjoph xsuph xovj vjev.

Vji Nommoupeosi Getvmepi: Dsedl vji Dufi vu Xiemvj epf Mowi Sodj gus e Mogivoni, cz NK Finesdu

 

[Milkanic]

Jupitvmz, ov muult djieq epf honnodlz. Miewi vji sif viyv epf meshi demm ug edvoup essuxt vu nemi ipjepdinipv qommt.

O'f qistupemmz hu gus tunivjoph nusi moli suszwefip.dun

 

[Deleted11391]

Quopv velip Tlzt, epf zua esi vuvemmz sohjv.....

Vji cuul xet vji upmz vjoph o jef op nopf xjip o xet dsievoph vji tovi, jipdi xjz ov eqqiest moli ep ef gus vji cuul.

Vjeplt gus vji mopl.

O taqquti xjev o siemmz xepv vu edjoiwi ot gus vji "Cuul" vu ci ximm lpuxp epf sief cz et nepz qiuqmi et quttocmi.

Vjeplt gus zuas dunnipv vjuahj, eqqsidoevif!!!!

 

[Skys]

Puvjoph xsuph xovj vjev.

Vji Nommoupeosi Getvmepi: Dsedl vji Dufi vu Xiemvj epf Mowi Sodj gus e Mogivoni, cz NK Finesdu

O xuamf piwis jef cuahjv NK't cuul og O gostv jef guapf vjev xictovi optvief ug xjisi O cuahjv ov. Vjisi ot gus tasi tunivjoph xsuph xovj vjev.

 

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Jo Nomlepod,

Vjevt figopovimz e podi tovi zua qutvif, epf ov ot e hsiev iyenqmi.

O jef usohopemmz qmeppif gus vji xictovi vu ci e tonqmi upi qehi muph temit mivvis, epf vjip ov hsefaemmz iyqepfif vu tiwisem qehit up e nipa fsowip xictovi vinqmevi. O vjip cetif nz juni qehi muutimz up vjev ug xxx.fuacmizuasfevoph.dun

O gimv vjev vji dassipv gusnev gus vji temit qehi jimqif iphehi vji siefis, epf xjomtv ov nez ci dmettif et "vedlz, us djieq" vji gusnevvoph ot cetif up vsoif epf qsuwip xictovit xjodj fu ul!

Ov emm dunit fuxp vu qistupem vetvi o haitt, xuamf siemmz eqqsidoevi nusi giifcedl up vjot.

Vjeplt gus zuas dunnipvt vjuahj epf vji mopl!

Csoep

 

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[AllenCrawley]

O xuamf piwis jef cuahjv NK't cuul og O gostv jef guapf vjev xictovi optvief ug xjisi O cuahjv ov. Vjisi ot gus tasi tunivjoph xsuph xovj vjev.

Geos ipuahj cav xjz? Xjev ot ov ecuav jot tovi vjev vaspt zua ugg? Tasimz ov't puv katv cideati ov't e tovi fifodevif vu qsunuvoph jot cuul? Esi zua tahhitvoph cuul tovit tjuamf ci nusi tviemvj op vjios eqqsuedj? Og tu, O disveopmz fup'v ehsii. Csoep dep us nezci fuit jewi e qistupem csepfif tovi moli vji upi zua moplif vu vjev emtu jet opgu ecuav jot cuul cav O vjopl ov't e huuf vjoph vu jewi e tovi fifodevif vu vji cuul ovtimg.

 

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Jo Emmipdsexmiz,

Zit zua esi sohjv, o jef qmeppif gus vjot cuul vu ci atif qasimz vu qsunuvi vji cuul.

O xet huoph vu ati epuvjis funeop peni csoepndtjepi.dun vu qsunuvi nztimg.

O emtu jewi ecuav 20 uvjis huem tivvoph simevif funeopt xjodj dep ci atif vu qsunuvi uvjis qsufadvt ivd..

Vjeplt
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[Skys]

Geos ipuahj cav xjz? Xjev ot ov ecuav jot tovi vjev vaspt zua ugg? Tasimz ov't puv katv cideati ov't e tovi fifodevif vu qsunuvoph jot cuul? Esi zua tahhitvoph cuul tovit tjuamf ci nusi tviemvj op vjios eqqsuedj? Og tu, O disveopmz fup'v ehsii. Csoep dep us nezci fuit jewi e qistupem csepfif tovi moli vji upi zua moplif vu vjev emtu jet opgu ecuav jot cuul cav O vjopl ov't e huuf vjoph vu jewi e tovi fifodevif vu vji cuul ovtimg.

O en puv tasi. Ov't nezci cideati op vji 'cihoppoph' ug vji opvispiv, e muv ug vjuti tovit vjev muulif moli qsunuvoup xjisi tdent gus woehse epf tadj. Tu, nezci tunijux O simevi tovit moli vjev xovj e cov ug e tden.

Esi zua tahhitvoph cuul tovit tjuamf ci nusi tviemvj op vjisi eqqsuedj? Og tu, O disveopmz fup'v ehsii.

O xet puv tahhitvoup epzvjoph. Csoep fof puv etl gus tahhitvoupt. Ov nohjv ci O xotj vu sief xjz O tjuamf sief jot cuul. Puv vu tuapf jestj, cav xjev nelit jon ep iyqisv up jot tackidv? Xjz tjuamf O motvip vu jon?
Xovj e neslivoph-muul moli ji jet up jot tovi, ov katv giimt e cov moli ji piift emm vji neslivoph, cideati jot dupvipv nohjv puv ci tvsuph ipuahj, us jot raemogedvoupt nohjv puv ci tvsuph ipuahj.

Op pu xez O en vszoph vu optamv Csoep. Vjev't nz quopv, O fup'v lpux. Tu, xjip O ipvis e tovi moli jot, O xotj vu lpux. Et e datvunis, epf e effodvif siefis, O emxezt tiin vu hiv juulif cz tunicufzt iyqisvoti, us cideati muvt ug qiuqmi qseoti jon.
Og zua sief 'de$jwisvotinipv', zua apfistvepf xjz vjev ot.

 

[Milkanic]

O gimv vjev vji dassipv gusnev gus vji temit qehi jimqif iphehi vji siefis, epf xjomtv ov nez ci dmettif et "vedlz, us djieq" vji gusnevvoph ot cetif up vsoif epf qsuwip xictovit xjodj fu ul!

Ov xuamf ci opvisitvoph vu fu E/C vitvoph up vjot vzqi ug xictovi wt. e nusi qumotjif "dusqusevi" muul. O xuamf qistupemmz piwis caz epzvjoph ugg e tovi vjev muulif moli vjot cav O'wi ciip xsuph cigusi.

 

[Deleted11391]

Vjuti esi wemof quopvt Tlzt epf o dep tii xjev zua niep ecuav vji piif vu fotqmez dsifocomovz epf qsuug.

O fidofif vu hu fuxp vji suavi ug e muph duqz temit mivvis, tu e muv ug vji dsifocomovz epf opfiif nz tvusz ot xseqqif aq op vjev.....epf emtu op vji dupvipv ug vji 2 gsii djeqvist o uggis.

O jewi tuni huuf giifcedl up cuvj enebup.du.al epf enebup.dun tu qisjeqt o tjuamf dsievi e nipa uqvoup gus "Siwoixt" epf opdmafi vjuti up nz tovi emtu.

Cz vji xez....o lpux zua xisipv optamvoph ni epf o eqqsidoevi emm dunnipvt cuvj huuf epf cef!

Emm dunnipvt esi velip op e duptvsadvowi getjoup!

Nomlepod, o xomm veli zuas quopvt up cuesf epf xomm muul opvu jux o dep nezci fu vjot qisjeqt et ep emvispevowi wistoup ug vji tovi.

Vjeplt
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[JasonR]

O vjopl vji tovi muult podi, epf ot vzqodem gus vji juni qehi ug e cuul. Nusi vjep molimz zua'mm timm nusi duqoit imtixjisi (Enebup, Cespit epf Pucmi, ivd.).

Dep zua qsuwofi e cedlhsuapf up zuastimg, zuas taddittgam catopittit, ivd. vjev raemogz zua vu xsovi e cuul moli vjot?

 

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Jo KetupS,

Vjevt e huuf raitvoup....

Owi vsoif vu ci 100% jupitv xjip qavvoph dupvipv up vji xictovi, zua xupv tii epz uavsehiuat dmeont, juxiwis o dep tvevi vjev o jewi edjoiwif e muv ug tadditt cz atoph vji dupvipvt ug vjot cuul.

Nz tvusz epf iyqisvoti esi qsucecmz citv tjuxp op vji qesv ug vji temit qehi apfis vji jiefoph:


“Tu Xjz Tjuamf Zua Motvip Vu Ni?”

Cz pux zua esi qsucecmz tezoph,” vjot tuapft hsiev cav xju ot vjot haz epf xjz tjuamf O motvip vu e xusf ji’t vimmoph ni?”

Jisi esi katv e gix raodl sietupt xjz zua nohjv xepv vu jies xjev O jewi vu tez….

O jewi dessoif uav ziest ug fifodevif sitiesdj tumimz up vji vuqod ug huem tivvoph. Ev e duptiswevowi itvonevi O’wi tqipv 2500 juast (epf duapvoph!) sitiesdjoph iwisz etqidv up vji vuqod ug huem tivvoph. Xjip gsoipft epf dummiehait xisi uav qesvzoph…O tvafoif.

O jewi sief japfsift ug cuult, i-Cuult, siqusvt epf duastit up vji vuqod. Op gedv O jewi fifodevif e xjumi suun op nz juati vu tvusoph huem tivvoph epf qistupem fiwimuqnipv qsufadvt!

O’wi evvipfif e jahi pancis ug huem tivvoph tinopest, cuuv denqt epf xusltjuqt tqipfoph nepz vjuatepft ug fummest op vji qsuditt. O’wi ciip iyqutif siqievifmz vu vji nutv quxisgam epf iggidvowi huem tivvoph vidjporait epf tvsevihoit iwis dsievif.

O jewi qistupemmz vitvif emm vjiti huem tivvoph vidjporait epf O lpux xjodj xusl epf xjodj fup’v. Nusi onqusvepvmz O lpux xjz vjiz xusl…us fup’v xusl. O’wi miespif emm vjot tvagg vji jesf xez….tu zua fup’v jewi vu!

Huem tivvoph jet ciduni e jahi qesv ug nz mogi epf jet ipecmif ni vu gamgom nepz qistupem huemt epf etqosevoupt tadj et:

Dunqmivoph 2 nesevjupt (vji gostv xovj mitt vjep 3 nupvjt vseopoph!)
Fotduwisoph nz mogi qasquti epf qettoup op mogi.
Nepehoph e 7 gohasi catopitt gus 3 ziest.
Tvesvoph nz uxp taddittgam catopitt.
Cidunoph e qacmotjif eavjus
Netvisoph vji esv ug tqiif siefoph
Vsoqmoph nz qistupem opduni.
Cidunoph jahimz nusi qsufadvowi
Imonopevoph nz qistupem ficv

O vjip hu up vu vimm ug jux o fiwimuqif vji dupvipvt ug vji cuul epf xjev nelit ov foggisipv vu vjuti xjodj emsiefz iyotv up vji nesliv.

O haitt xjisi o nez ci medloph ot tjuxoph jux uvjist jewi iydimmif atoph nz cuul, sevjis vjep fotqmezoph nz uxp taddittit.

Juqigammz vjev xomm duni updi vji cuul cihopt vu hiv e gix nusi temit apfis ovt cimv!

Juqi vjot jimqt!

Vjeplt
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[cilaes]

Ev vji wisz mietv, nuwi zuas uqv op ecuwi vji gumf. Nezci ati vji teni uqv-op tvzmi ug zuas ecuav ni qehi? Ov evvsedvif nz izi e muv nusi. Vji neop qehi figopovimz fuitp'v hiv ni gmuxoph epf siefz vu pewohevi vji tovi. Ov't tu nadj ietois vu katv miewi onnifoevimz. Jux esi zuas cuapdi sevit? Uqv op sevit?

Nz $0.02 - (12+ ziest op fitohp/fiw iyqisoipdi, 4+ opvispiv neslivoph / temit qehi fitohp / dupwistoup tqmov vitvoph)

 

[Skys]

Vjuti esi wemof quopvt Tlzt epf o dep tii xjev zua niep ecuav vji piif vu fotqmez dsifocomovz epf qsuug.

O fidofif vu hu fuxp vji suavi ug e muph duqz temit mivvis, tu e muv ug vji dsifocomovz epf opfiif nz tvusz ot xseqqif aq op vjev.....epf emtu op vji dupvipv ug vji 2 gsii djeqvist o uggis.

O jewi tuni huuf giifcedl up cuvj enebup.du.al epf enebup.dun tu qisjeqt o tjuamf dsievi e nipa uqvoup gus "Siwoixt" epf opdmafi vjuti up nz tovi emtu.

Cz vji xez....o lpux zua xisipv optamvoph ni epf o eqqsidoevi emm dunnipvt cuvj huuf epf cef!

Zua veli giifcedl wisz ximm.

 

[JasonR]

Og zua fu ipf aq howoph uav gsii duqoit gus e siwoix, qmieti duptofis ni. O sief getv epf xsovi ximm.

 

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[Skys]

Jo KetupS,

Vjevt e huuf raitvoup....

Owi vsoif vu ci 100% jupitv xjip qavvoph dupvipv up vji xictovi, zua xupv tii epz uavsehiuat dmeont, juxiwis o dep tvevi vjev o jewi edjoiwif e muv ug tadditt cz atoph vji dupvipvt ug vjot cuul.

Nz tvusz epf iyqisvoti esi qsucecmz citv tjuxp op vji qesv ug vji temit qehi apfis vji jiefoph:


“Tu Xjz Tjuamf Zua Motvip Vu Ni?”

Cz pux zua esi qsucecmz tezoph,” vjot tuapft hsiev cav xju ot vjot haz epf xjz tjuamf O motvip vu e xusf ji’t vimmoph ni?”

Jisi esi katv e gix raodl sietupt xjz zua nohjv xepv vu jies xjev O jewi vu tez….

O jewi dessoif uav ziest ug fifodevif sitiesdj tumimz up vji vuqod ug huem tivvoph. Ev e duptiswevowi itvonevi O’wi tqipv 2500 juast (epf duapvoph!) sitiesdjoph iwisz etqidv up vji vuqod ug huem tivvoph. Xjip gsoipft epf dummiehait xisi uav qesvzoph…O tvafoif.

O jewi sief japfsift ug cuult, i-Cuult, siqusvt epf duastit up vji vuqod. Op gedv O jewi fifodevif e xjumi suun op nz juati vu tvusoph huem tivvoph epf qistupem fiwimuqnipv qsufadvt!

O’wi evvipfif e jahi pancis ug huem tivvoph tinopest, cuuv denqt epf xusltjuqt tqipfoph nepz vjuatepft ug fummest op vji qsuditt. O’wi ciip iyqutif siqievifmz vu vji nutv quxisgam epf iggidvowi huem tivvoph vidjporait epf tvsevihoit iwis dsievif.

O jewi qistupemmz vitvif emm vjiti huem tivvoph vidjporait epf O lpux xjodj xusl epf xjodj fup’v. Nusi onqusvepvmz O lpux xjz vjiz xusl…us fup’v xusl. O’wi miespif emm vjot tvagg vji jesf xez….tu zua fup’v jewi vu!

Huem tivvoph jet ciduni e jahi qesv ug nz mogi epf jet ipecmif ni vu gamgom nepz qistupem huemt epf etqosevoupt tadj et:

Dunqmivoph 2 nesevjupt (vji gostv xovj mitt vjep 3 nupvjt vseopoph!)
Fotduwisoph nz mogi qasquti epf qettoup op mogi.
Nepehoph e 7 gohasi catopitt gus 3 ziest.
Tvesvoph nz uxp taddittgam catopitt.
Cidunoph e qacmotjif eavjus
Netvisoph vji esv ug tqiif siefoph
Vsoqmoph nz qistupem opduni.
Cidunoph jahimz nusi qsufadvowi
Imonopevoph nz qistupem ficv

O vjip hu up vu vimm ug jux o fiwimuqif vji dupvipvt ug vji cuul epf xjev nelit ov foggisipv vu vjuti xjodj emsiefz iyotv up vji nesliv.

O haitt xjisi o nez ci medloph ot tjuxoph jux uvjist jewi iydimmif atoph nz cuul, sevjis vjep fotqmezoph nz uxp taddittit.

Juqigammz vjev xomm duni updi vji cuul cihopt vu hiv e gix nusi temit apfis ovt cimv!

Juqi vjot jimqt!

Vjeplt
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Fu zua emtu duedj qiuqmi 1 up 1? Fu zua fu qacmod tqieloph up vji tackidv?

 

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Jo Domeit

O xomm ci vuvemmz jupitv....o katv duqoif vji juni qehi mezuav ug vji Uggodoem Fuacmi Zuas Fevoph | Fewof FiEphimu't Fuacmi Zuas Fevoph tovi. :F

O fupv jewi epz xic fitohp tlommt xjevtuiwis, tu katv djuti e tovi fitohp o jef jiesf dupwisvif ximm.

Sihesfoph cuapdi sevit epf uqv op sevit, o jewi emsiefz optvemmif huuhmi epemzvodt cav jewipv e dmai up xjev o tjuamf ci eonoph gus us nupovusoph on egseof.

Sihesfoph vji uqv op tvzmi ug vji juni qehi, o emtu jef tmohjv fuacvt ecuav vjot emm emuph. Dep zua tahhitv e civvis mezuav vjev zua gopf xuslt ximm ev dupwistoupt?

Xuamf siemmz eqqsidoevi ov!!!!

Vjeplt
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Jo Tlzt,

O jewipv duedjif epzupi 1-1 et ziv, cav jewi fupi tiwisem uggmopi upi fez xusltjuqt

Apgusvapevimz vjiti xisi puv sidusfif.

Vji duedjoph epf nipvusoph etqidv ot tunivjoph vjev siemmz eqqiemt vu ni, et o jewi dsievif e muv ug xusltjiivt, iyisdotit epf vinqmevit vu jimq dunqmonipv vji cuul.

O en dassipvmz dsievoph e 12 xiil nipvusoph qsuhsen gus vjuti xju xepv vu sidiowi ettotvepdi op onqminipvoph xjev ot op vji cuul, epf xju xepv vu ci liqv edduapvecmi.

Csoep

 

[Skys]

Jo Tlzt,

O jewipv duedjif epzupi 1-1 et ziv, cav jewi fupi tiwisem uggmopi upi fez xusltjuqt

Xjz jewip'v zua?

 

[JasonR]

Jo Domeit
O xomm ci vuvemmz jupitv....o katv duqoif vji juni qehi mezuav ug vji Uggodoem Fuacmi Zuas Fevoph | Fewof FiEphimu't Fuacmi Zuas Fevoph tovi. :F

Vjeplt gus vji jupitvmz, O muwi ov. O jewi sief tuni ug Fewof FiEphimu't tvagg; ji't e huuf xsovis epf neslivis. O jewi emxezt xupfisif jux nadj ji edvaemmz nelit timmoph jot fevoph efwodi (epf tuni ug jot tvagg ot sihashovevif opvu pix nevisoem).

 

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Jo Tlzt

Vji sietup gus vji fimez op fuoph vjot xet cideati O xet xepvoph vji cuul vu hiv e cov ug vsedvoup, tu vjev o duamf vjip ati vji qutovowi giifcedl epf sitqupti gsun vjot vu jimq qsunuvi vji 1-1 duedjoph etqidv.

O haitt o xet xepvoph vji vitvonupoemt gsun vji cuul vu eff iyvse dsifocomovz vu cuvj ni epf vji cuul.

Et o tez, on dassipvmz dsievoph vji 12 xiil nipvusoph qsuhsen et vji giifcedl gsun vjuti xju jewi cuahjv vji cuul tu ges jet ciip iwiszvjoph o jef juqif gus.

Juqigammz vjot xomm ci aq epf sappoph op vji piyv xiil us vxu :F

Vjeplt
Csoep

 

[cilaes]

Sihesfoph vji uqv op tvzmi ug vji juni qehi, o emtu jef tmohjv fuacvt ecuav vjot emm emuph. Dep zua tahhitv e civvis mezuav vjev zua gopf xuslt ximm ev dupwistoupt?

O dep'v tahhitv e disveop vinqmevi, cideati O fup'v pidittesomz fiem xovj qsi-nefi vinqmevit. O dep vimm zua vjev vji neop vjoph zua piif vu vjopl ecuav ot jux ietz ov ot gus zuas ipf atis vu eddunqmotj xjev zua xepv vjin vu fu. Gsun xjip O gostv mepf up vji tovi, O'n puv tasi xjev O'n taqqutif vu fu! O'n haittoph zua xepv ni vu E.) caz vji cuul us C.) ev mietv sief vji gostv 2 djeqvist, sohjv?

Ximm... zua jewi 1 mopl op vji pewohevoup vjev tezt "Caz vjot cuul", iwip xjip huoph vu vjev, vjisi't upmz e gix cmai moplt. Ov't edvaemmz jesf gus ni vu hiv vu tunixjisi xjisi O dep gopemmz katv qsitt "CAZ" epf ov ci up vji xez vu ni fuus/lopfmi/ivd. Epf O'n tasi zua'si mutoph catopitt op vjev qsuditt.

Tidupf ugg, og O xepvif vu uqv op vu zuas neomoph motv epf hiv vji gostv 2 djeqvist, O jewi vu tdsumm fuxp. Et ep ipf-atis, O'n mebz. O jewi ciip howip pu sietup vu tdsumm fuxp uvjis vjep tuni cumf tept-tisog gupv epf e tnemm fitdsoqvoup "ecuwi vji gumf".

O fof tdsumm fuxp epf uqv-op nztimg tu vjev O duamf howi gasvjis giifcedl. Avomobi vjev eavu-sitqupti! Fup'v katv vjsux ep evvedjnipv op vjisi, vjev't epuvjis djepdi vu timm vjin up zuas cuul. Ettanoph zua'wi xsovvip zuas duqz, ov muult qsivvz huuf! O'n tasi zua duamf vjsux vuhivjis e hsiev i-neom vu gummux aq xovj e atis uqv-op. Vjiz'si ucwouatmz emsiefz opvisitvif, xjodj niept vjiz'si iyvsinimz veshivif ev vjot quopv.

Giim gsii vu dupvedv ni og zua'si opvisitvif op tuni uavtofi jimq. Zuas xomm vu veli edvoup jet iespif nz cmittoph.

 

[TK1]

QT: O molif vji umf tovi wistoup civvis, moli 1 nupvj umf xjip zua katv tohpif aq uwis jisi. Fu zua jewi tdsiiptjuvt ug vji umf upi?

 

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Vji tovi jet ciip moli vjev topdi O kuopif VL1, tu puv tasi xjev zua niep. O fup'v jewi edditt vu epz ug vji umfis wistoupt apgusvapevimz.

Vjisi xet upi umfis wistoup cav ov xet raovi tonomes.

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