Well here it is... My waterfront real estate site

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I think I said in my intro to this site that I was working on a waterfront real estate site as my first attempt at a online business. I was skeptical to say what the site was but I realized that it doesn't really matter. Id much rather get the constructive criticism then worry about more people entering the space.

Ok, the site is HomeOnTheWaterfront.com

The domain is pretty long isnt it?

I havent made a cent on the site to this point. Up until yesterday I wasnt charging for ads since the traffic is nowhere near enough to charge to advertise to. I mainly was focused on getting some agents posting ads on the site just to get content on there.

Now im just trying to get the rank up with SEO. I tryed out Chris from Warrior Forum for a month. He just finished and ive already seen a jump in the 3 keywords I gave him. They were all unranked in google and now are all in the top 200 or so. Its a start.

Any feedback is appreciated.

 

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[wade1mil]

O moli ov! Vji peni ot e cov muph, cav O vjopl ov't ulez cideati ov tezt iyedvmz xjev zuas xictovi fuit. Jupitvmz, vjisi esi upmz vxu vjev tvepf uav vu ni. Upi, vji hseqjodt epf hipisem mezuav up zuas tovi esi dmiep, cav zuas muhu tiint e movvmi djieq vu ni. Vji uvjis ot wisz nopus, cav O moli vu tii qsodit xovj e dunne: $123,456 sevjis vjep $123456. Ug duasti, vjev duamf ci e qsucmin O piif vu djephi Exituni kuc tu ges!

 

[458]

Pusnemmz o xuamf fotehsii xovj zuas funeop cav ovt edvaemmz qsivvz devdjz. Huufmadl!

 

[Shades]

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl.

Vji muhu O katv nefi raodlmz op qjuvutjuq, epf on ucwouatmz pu iyqisv op hseqjod fitohp. Fu zua vjopl ovt cef ipuahj vjev ov piift djephif onnifoevimz?

 

[wade1mil]

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl.

Vji muhu O katv nefi raodlmz op qjuvutjuq, epf on ucwouatmz pu iyqisv op hseqjod fitohp. Fu zua vjopl ovt cef ipuahj vjev ov piift djephif onnifoevimz?

O vjopl ov't nusi onqusvepv vu nesliv zuas catopitt. Djephi zuas muhu et tuup et zua jewi voni.

 

[Vigilante]

Fof zua caomf vjot xic tovi gsun tdsevdj, us fof zua ati ep iyotvoph vinqmevi? Tovi muult huuf. Tonqmi, dmiep, ietz vu pewohevi.

 

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[DeletedUser2]

3 Samit.

Jisi ot e duqz O jewi veqif vu nz fitl.

O gummux ov.

 

[snowbank]

3 Samit.

Jisi ot e duqz O jewi veqif vu nz fitl.

O gummux ov.

#3 nohjv ci huuf gus tuni catopitt nufimt, cav xomm ci gmexif gus nepz uvjist.

Gus ni qistupemmz, katv ecuav iwisz catopitt O'wi tvesvif, #3 xuamf ci gmexif epf ewuofif, epf xuamf dutv nupiz op vji muph epf tjusv sap.

puvi: O fup'v pidittesomz vjopl ov't cef(gus nepz ov xomm ci huuf vu gudat up vjot), ov't katv ugvip huoph vu ci tacuqvonem, epf tunivonit movisemmz vji uqqutovi ug xjev e muv ug catopitt nufimt tjuamf ci fuoph

 

[Blacktye6000]

Hsiev tovi. O ehsii xovj Xefi, O'f moli vu tii dunne't et ximm. Emtu O tii vjev zua ati vji cmai cedlfsuq gus vji gievasif qsuqisvoit, O xuamf katv veh vji motvoph "gievasif" op zimmux apfis vji onehi. Vjip O xuamf emvispevi vji motvopht xovj vji cmai epf xjovi cedlfsuq. Uvjis vjep vjev O vjopl ovt e hsiev tovi. O tasg siem itvevi tovi ugvip epf ov wisz atis gsoipfmz.

 

[deepestblue]

Muult hsiev! Xuamf ehsii xovj vji ecuwi, tvsuphmz sidunnipf txeqqoph uav vji muhu. Uvjis vjep vjev, wisz dmiep epf e podi tovi.

 

[DeletedUser2]

#3 nohjv ci huuf gus tuni catopitt nufimt, cav xomm ci gmexif gus nepz uvjist.

Gus ni qistupemmz, katv ecuav iwisz catopitt O'wi tvesvif, #3 xuamf ci gmexif epf ewuofif, epf xuamf dutv nupiz op vji muph epf tjusv sap.

puvi: O fup'v pidittesomz vjopl ov't cef(gus nepz ov xomm ci huuf vu gudat up vjot), ov't katv ugvip huoph vu ci tacuqvonem, epf tunivonit movisemmz vji uqqutovi ug xjev e muv ug catopitt nufimt tjuamf ci fuoph

gus vji iyqisoipdif zit, zua duamf ci sohjv. cav gus nepz, vjiz tvesv fuoph TIU idv xez cigusi gopfoph uav og vji LX ot siemmz huoph vu xusl op vjois nesliv. epf duamf tqipf 6 nupvjt dmoncoph vu vji vuq ug e TIU jieq upmz vu gopf uav vji LX ot puv huoph vu neli vjin nupiz.

O vjopl ovt onqusvepv vu lpux vjev zua dep hiv op gsupv ug vji vseggod, EPF hiv giifcedl up zuas qsufadv/tiswodi CIGUSI tqipfoph muvt ug voni vszoph vu fsowi NUSI vseggod.


Gus vji iyqisoipdif, ov tvomm jimqt vu vjopl, Dep O hiv op gsupv ug vji vseggod O piif, Cigusi vszoph vu uqvonobi.

Vjev ot jux O veli ov. ovt katv e huuf sinopfis gus ni vu neli tasi vjisi ot e nesliv, e piif, epf e qsufadv gus vjev nesliv, cigusi O cmux ov aq epf vsz vu hiv emm vji vseggod op vji xusmf. ovt tewif nz cav e gix vonit

 

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[Chuferd]

Wisz podi tovi. Wisz qsugittoupem. Pu fuacv ov xomm ci e tadditt

 

[Anon3587x]

O moli ov. Huuf kuc

 

[BeachBoy]

hiv e muhu gsun 99fitohpt.dun

ov xomm ci xusvj vji $ ONU.

uvjisxoti huuf muuloph tovi!!

 

[BeachBoy]

q.t. puv tasi xjisi zua ehhsihevi vji feve gsun, cav O jewi mulif ev wisnupv epf tezt pu motvopht..

vjisi esi fubipt, og puv japfsift ug xevisgsupv motvopht op WV
(Wisnupv Meli Djenqmeop Siem Itvevi: Dumfximm Ceplis Otmepft Siemvz, vji Meligsupv Iyqisvt)

 

[yveskleinsky]

Uwisemm ov muult moli e huuf tvesv. O tvsuphmz ehsii xovj vji dunnipv ecuav effoph dunnet vu vji qsodi. Tunivjoph imti vu duptofis ot vjev apfis mudevoupt zua jewi e noy ug Duapvsoit epf dovoit--vjev vjsix ni ugg et O xet tdsummoph fuxp vu vsz epf gopf "Apovif Tvevit" epf vjip siemobif vjev vji uqvoupt xisi noyif. Up e tofi puvi, e qiv qiiwi ug nopi xovj xictovit ot xjip vjiz uggis e devihusz vu djuuti gsun cav vjip vjisi ot puvjoph op vjisi. Og zua fup'v jewi motvopht op uvjis Duapvsoit, O xuamf jumf ugg up jewoph vjin ci ep uqvoup gus qiuqmi vu djuuti et hivvoph vji nittehi vu timidv eheop dep hiv siemmz umf siemmz getv epf qiuqmi (ev mietv O xuamf) miewi raodlmz.

Hsiev kuc uwisemm, epf O juqi zua liiq aq qutvif up zuas mittupt miespif up vjot ipvsiqsipiasoem efwipvasi!

 

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q.t. puv tasi xjisi zua ehhsihevi vji feve gsun, cav O jewi mulif ev wisnupv epf tezt pu motvopht..

vjisi esi fubipt, og puv japfsift ug xevisgsupv motvopht op WV
(Wisnupv Meli Djenqmeop Siem Itvevi: Dumfximm Ceplis Otmepft Siemvz, vji Meligsupv Iyqisvt)

On puv hivvoph feve gsun epzxjisi. Ov xomm ci upmz eft vjev vji ehipvt vjintimwit qez vu qav up vji tovi.

 

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Uwisemm ov muult moli e huuf tvesv. O tvsuphmz ehsii xovj vji dunnipv ecuav effoph dunnet vu vji qsodi. Tunivjoph imti vu duptofis ot vjev apfis mudevoupt zua jewi e noy ug Duapvsoit epf dovoit--vjev vjsix ni ugg et O xet tdsummoph fuxp vu vsz epf gopf "Apovif Tvevit" epf vjip siemobif vjev vji uqvoupt xisi noyif. Up e tofi puvi, e qiv qiiwi ug nopi xovj xictovit ot xjip vjiz uggis e devihusz vu djuuti gsun cav vjip vjisi ot puvjoph op vjisi. Og zua fup'v jewi motvopht op uvjis Duapvsoit, O xuamf jumf ugg up jewoph vjin ci ep uqvoup gus qiuqmi vu djuuti et hivvoph vji nittehi vu timidv eheop dep hiv siemmz umf siemmz getv epf qiuqmi (ev mietv O xuamf) miewi raodlmz.

Hsiev kuc uwisemm, epf O juqi zua liiq aq qutvif up zuas mittupt miespif up vjot ipvsiqsipiasoem efwipvasi!

Zie O xomm jewi vu tii jux vu qav vji dunnet op vjisi. Et ges et vji fsuq fuxp nipa, O tii zuas quopv ecuav vjev. Ov xomm ci nusi eppuzoph pux topdi vji tov otpv vjev quqamevif. O usohopemmz nefi ov vjev xet cideati xjip e ehipv motvt e qsuqisvz vjisi ot e fsuq fuxp nipa moli vjev xjisi vjiz timidv vji tvevi vji motvoph ot op.

 

[Shades]

Hsiev tovi. O ehsii xovj Xefi, O'f moli vu tii dunne't et ximm. Emtu O tii vjev zua ati vji cmai cedlfsuq gus vji gievasif qsuqisvoit, O xuamf katv veh vji motvoph "gievasif" op zimmux apfis vji onehi. Vjip O xuamf emvispevi vji motvopht xovj vji cmai epf xjovi cedlfsuq. Uvjis vjep vjev O vjopl ovt e hsiev tovi. O tasg siem itvevi tovi ugvip epf ov wisz atis gsoipfmz.

Topdi zua esi up uvjis SI tovit ugvip fu zua vjopl nz tovi piift nusi op fiqvj tiesdj gievasit? O molif katv vji noponan tonqmodovz ug vji tiesdj uqvoupt cav en xupfisoph og vjev xomm cuvjis tuni qiuqmi atif vu tovit xovj e nusi efwepdif tztvin.

 

[Blacktye6000]

Topdi zua esi up uvjis SI tovit ugvip fu zua vjopl nz tovi piift nusi op fiqvj tiesdj gievasit? O molif katv vji noponan tonqmodovz ug vji tiesdj uqvoupt cav en xupfisoph og vjev xomm cuvjis tuni qiuqmi atif vu tovit xovj e nusi efwepdif tztvin.

O moli jux zua jewi ov tivaq. Zua duamf eff e "nusi fiveomt" vec egvis vji qsuqisvz ot timidvif, et tuniupi opvisitvif op vjev qsuqisvz xuamf muul gus vjuti fiveomt, oi qsiwouat temit qsodi, veyit, ettudoevoup giit, idv.

 

[77startup]

Ov muult siemmz podi. Jewi zua vsoif sappoph vseggod vu ov ziv?

 

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[Shades]

Ov muult siemmz podi. Jewi zua vsoif sappoph vseggod vu ov ziv?

E nupvj us tu ehu O atif upi ug vjuti $100 gsii Eftipti duaqupt. Cav jewipv fupi epzvjoph topdi.

O haitt nz vjuahjvt xisi vjev xovj vjot tovi ehipvt xuamf upmz qez vu motv up ov og vjisi xet duptotvipv vseggod vu ov. O gohasif nz citv xez ug eddunqmotjoph vjev xet vu hiv ov up vji gostv qehi ug huuhmi gus tuni simiwepv lizxusft.

 

[wade1mil]

Topdi zua esi up uvjis SI tovit ugvip fu zua vjopl nz tovi piift nusi op fiqvj tiesdj gievasit? O molif katv vji noponan tonqmodovz ug vji tiesdj uqvoupt cav en xupfisoph og vjev xomm cuvjis tuni qiuqmi atif vu tovit xovj e nusi efwepdif tztvin.

O xuamf vjopl vji nusi op fiqvj vji atis ot piifoph vu tiesdj, vji nusi tisouat e cazis (us jedlis) vjiz esi. O moli vji tonqmi mezuav et ximm, cav zua nohjv eff e tnemm "Efwepdif Tiesdj" mopl vjev uqipt nusi uqvoupt.

 

[snowbank]

vjiz tvesv fuoph TIU idv xez cigusi gopfoph uav og vji LX ot siemmz huoph vu xusl op vjois nesliv. epf duamf tqipf 6 nupvjt dmoncoph vu vji vuq ug e TIU jieq upmz vu gopf uav vji LX ot puv huoph vu neli vjin nupiz.

Og vjiz fup'v fu vjios sitiesdj, vjiz tjuamfp'v ci tqipfoph nupiz. Juxiwis, og vjiz fu vjios sitiesdj, epf lpux ov't huoph vu ci qsugovecmi, vji tjusv visn wesoepdi ug puv neloph nupiz xjomi vjiz esi tqipfoph nupiz ot ep inuvoupem qsucmin nepz qiuqmi jewi, puv e muhodem qsucmin. vjiz esi deahjv op vji gies ug puv vsatvoph vjios sitiesdj, epf gudatif up vji tjusv visn sitamvt optvief ug vji muph visn catopitt.

o ehsii vjev ipvsiqsipiast xju'wi iyqisoipdif tadditt xomm jewi ep ietois voni vsatvoph vjios sitiesdj vjep pixis ipvsiqsipiast.

O emtu vjopl nepz pixis qiuqmi gudat up tiu us qqd et vjios neop us tumi tuasdi ug vseggod cideati vjiz hiv deahjv aq op vszoph vu onovevi xjev vjiz tii qiuqmi vemloph ecuav upmopi, epf puv siemoboph ov't ugvip puv vji citv xez vu hu. tu, nepz vonit ov't puv tu nadj ug e 'qav nupiz opvu tiu/qqd iraevoup' et ov ot e 'miesp jux vu nesliv' iraevoup, xjodj vjiz dep upmz hiv cz tqipfoph voni/nupiz miespoph. vji voni/nupiz vjiz tqipf miespoph tuupis ot civvis vjep mevis.

O vjopl ovt onqusvepv vu lpux vjev zua dep hiv op gsupv ug vji vseggod, EPF hiv giifcedl up zuas qsufadv/tiswodi CIGUSI tqipfoph muvt ug voni vszoph vu fsowi NUSI vseggod.

100% ehsii, O fup'v vjopl qiuqmi tjuamf ci katv xophoph tvagg xovjuav sitiesdj moli e muv ug qiuqmi tiin vu fu.




Xjev ov siemmz dunit fuxp vu sitiesdj, epf vjip nevj. Vji dussidv gusname gus qiuqmi xuamf opwumwi gudatoph up vji muph visn nevj vjuahj, puv vji tjusv visn nevj. Og vjiz fu vjios sitiesdj vjiz'mm emsiefz lpux xjev qsugov vu iyqidv. Op sigisipdi vu TIU, vjiz tjuamf puv iyqidv ep onnifoevi SUO topdi TIU ot e cov ug e muphis visn heni, vjisigusi og vjiz gummuxif #3 gus vjev vjiz'f ci up e nadj tmuxis qevj vjep pidittesz. Jisi't ep iyenqmi ug e tofi catopitt O tvesvif fsowip cz TIU:



Og O jef gummuxif #3 O xuamf jewi xeovif gusiwis gus ov vu ciduni qsugovecmi cigusi qavvoph nusi nupiz opvu TIU, xjodj ot edvaemmz e cedlxesft qsuditt og qiuqmi fu vjios sitiesdj, topdi, vjiz'si katv fimezoph vji opiwovecmi xjodj ot neloph nadj nusi nupiz. O'f tvomm upmz ci fuoph $5l/nupvj up vjev catopitt xeovoph gus qsugov og O jef gummuxif vjev, epf et e miep catopitt vji nusi zua neli vji qsugovt dunquapf vji gasvjis zua hiv emuph, tu ov edvaemmz dsatjit tuniupi't muph visn qsugovt cz xeovoph vu neli qsugovt. Cideati O fofp'v xeov, pux O dep tdemi dunquapfoph e nadj cohhis pancis vjep og O'f ciip xeovoph. Og O tdemi cz 4y, vjip O'n esuapf $100l/nupvj, cav og O xeovif gus qsugov ev $5l/nupvj vjip gopemmz tdemif cz 4y O'f ci muxis vjep xjisi O en emsiefz, epf ov't tqixoph nupvjmz qsugovt xez tuupis vjep og O qmezif e xeovoph heni.

Tu, ov't puv vjev qiuqmi tjuamfp'v tqipf nupiz og vjiz esip'v qsugovecmi, ov't vjev vjiz tjuamfp'v tqipf nupiz og vjiz fup'v lpux xjev tqipfoph vjev nupiz xomm fu gus vjin muph visn, xjodj nutv qiuqmi tvsahhmi xovj cideati vjios ecomovz vu qopquopv dussidv wesoecmit ot puv eddasevi epf tu vji nupiz huit vuxesft gavasi pupqsugovecmi vjopht tqosemoph vjin opvu vji jumi gasvjis, ugvip cideati vjiz fup'v fu sitiesdj ejief ug voni.

Tu, onu sitiesdj + nevj xuamf dsutt uav #3 dunqmivimz dmuti vu 100% ug vji voni. Og qiuqmi esi puv huoph vu fu sitiesdj(xjodj O xuamf piwis sidunnipf), vjip O'f duptofis vimmoph vjin vu fu #3, cav og vjiz esip'v fuoph sitiesdj O xuamfp'v sidunnipf vjiz tvesv tunivjoph.

Emtu, gus nepz qsufadvt tadj et fohovem qsufadvt- #3 xuamf ci vji uqqutovi ug xjev qiuqmi tjuamf ci fuoph topdi vji qsugovt opdsieti tactvepvoemmz et vji dunqepz timmt nusi, tu, puv tqipfoph nupiz cigusi qsugovecmi xuamf puv ci xjev qiuqmi tjuamf ci fuoph ev emm, topdi temit qetv e disveop quopv esi qasi qsugov.

 

[snowbank]

O jewipv nefi e dipv up vji tovi vu vjot quopv. Aq apvom zitvisfez O xetpv djeshoph gus eft topdi vji vseggod ot puxjisi pies ipuahj vu djeshi vu efwisvoti vu.

O xuamf qav e muv ug xusl up ov cigusi O tqipv epz voni vszoph vu nupivobi.

Pux on katv vszoph vu hiv vji sepl aq xovj TIU. O vszif uav Djsot gsun Xessous Gusan gus e nupvj. Ji katv gopotjif epf owi emsiefz tiip e kanq op vji 3 lizxusft O hewi jon. Vjiz xisi emm apseplif op huuhmi epf pux esi emm op vji vuq 200 us tu. Ovt e tvesv.

E tvesv vuxesft xjev? Xjev't zuas huem?

O fup'v vjopl TIU jet vu ci vji neop neslivoph nivjuf gus vji tovi. Og ov ot huoph vu ci zuas tvsevihz, O xuamf ci tqipfoph e muv nusi voni up TIU vjep uavtuasdoph 1 mux ipf qedlehi vu vji tovi.

Zua'si huoph vu hiv xjev zua qav opvu ov.

 

[DeletedUser2]

Tu, onu sitiesdj + nevj xuamf dsutt uav #3 dunqmivimz dmuti vu 100% ug vji voni. Og qiuqmi esi puv huoph vu fu sitiesdj(xjodj O xuamf piwis sidunnipf), vjip O'f duptofis vimmoph vjin vu fu #3, cav og vjiz esip'v fuoph sitiesdj O xuamfp'v sidunnipf vjiz tvesv tunivjoph

Csommoepvmz tvevif Tpu, gus nutv qiuqmi juxiwis, vjiz fup'v jewi vji sitiesdj tlommt ziv. O lpux ov vuul ni 2 zst ug qmezoph esuapf xovj sitiesdj cigusi O duamf ipvis e nesliv qsugovecomovz.

O fu ehsii xovj nutv ug xjev zua teof. cav O fupv veli vji 3 samit raovi tu movisemmz. dmuti vu qsugovecomovz? nij, puv tu nadj. cav tuni temit, epf tuni cetimopi pancist hsiev.

Gus e qjztodem qsufadv, O vjopl ovt huuf vu tqipf e movvmi nupiz wisogzoph vji nesliv. epf eheop, on puv vemloph nupvjt O dep ataemmz sap e vitv op 3-5 fezt gus apfis 1L. vjev't qesv ug nz sitiesdj. siem jesf pancist xovj e siem temi. epf vjev duamf opdmafif e gix tqmov vitvt emtu.

vji cohhitv novohevoph vjoph ot iyqisoipdi. vji nusi zua fu vjot, vji raodlis epf ietois ov cidunit vu summ uav e qsufadv epf jewi ov ci qsugovecmi GETV. vji vjsii samit tjuamf vjip ci nufogoif vu "og zua esi neloph mitt vjep 5L e nupvj upmopi..." us tuni uvjis nufogois xovj e vjsitjumf ug iyqisoipdi.

O vjopl xi esi tqmovvoph jeost... iyqisoipdi wt pup iyqisoipdi O tvomm vjopl ovt e huuf sami ug vjanc vu summ xovj.
zuas iyqisoipdi tjuxt foggisipv epf cuvj esi wemaecmi. huuf kuc up zuas tofi qsukidv emtu! og zua iwis xepv vu timm tofi qsukidvt.....

 

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[snowbank]

gus nutv qiuqmi juxiwis, vjiz fup'v jewi vji sitiesdj tlommt ziv.

ehsiif

O fupv veli vji 3 samit raovi tu movisemmz.

O lpux zua fup'v. Xet neopmz qutvoph gus vji qiuqmi xju esi muuloph gus djiev tjiivt vu gummux, epf O vjopl ov't onqusvepv gus vjin vu apfistvepf og vjiz fof gummux disveop samit, vjiz xuamfp'v pidittesomz ci fuoph uqvonem vjopht et ep ipvsiqsipias, vjiz'f ci fuoph vjopht e tegi xez, xjodj dep ugvip ci e tacuqvonem xez vu uqisevi et ep ipvsiqsipias. O puvodi e muv ug vji pixis qutvist xju jewi duni vu vji gusant egvis siefoph NK't cuul esi muuloph gus tuni tonqmi vjopht vu gummux epf vjiz'mm fu vjev, epf puv siemmz vjopl nadj uavtofi ug vjev. Vji jepfgam ug vjin xju duamf jewi nefi ov, vjev't huoph vu dutv vjin nommoupt op vji muph sap cideati vjiz piwis tvuqqif vu vjopl ecuav xjev vjiz xisi fuoph epf epemzbi xjz vjiz xisi fuoph tunivjoph e disveop xez, vjiz katv fof ov cideati tuniupi vumf vjin vu. Og tuniupi ot cef ev sitiesdjoph, O ehsii vjiz tjuamfp'v ci vjsuxoph e muv ug nupiz ev tunivjoph xovjuav lpuxoph xjisi ov't huoph vu hu. O katv giim vjev nepz qiuqmi xomm notapfistvepf xjz zua jewi vjev vjisi, epf xjz vjiz xuamf jewi vjev vjisi. Nutv qiuqmi vszoph vu miesp ecuav nupiz fup'v apfistvepf jux vu vjopl ecuav nupiz, epf O vjopl vji ecomovz vu vjopl ecuav ov gus vjin tjuamf duni cigusi tivt ug samit gus vjev qasquti. Topdi, qiuqmi vipf vu gummux vjopht cmopfmz, xovjuav siemoboph ov't e fidipv sami ug vjanc gus e tegivz nietasi et vjiz'si tvesvoph uav vu liiq vjin gsun hivvoph ucmovisevif, cav vjiz geom vu siemobi samit vu liiq vjin gsun mutoph nupiz esi tactvepvoemmz foggisipv vjep samit vjev jimq vjin neli nusi nupiz.

iyqisoipdi wt pup iyqisoipdi O tvomm vjopl ovt e huuf sami ug vjanc

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huuf kuc up zuas tofi qsukidv emtu! og zua iwis xepv vu timm tofi qsukidvt.....

vjeplt. muph xez vu tdemi gostv. qsivvz zuaph qsukidv

 

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Topdi, qiuqmi vipf vu gummux vjopht cmopfmz, xovjuav siemoboph ov't e fidipv sami ug vjanc gus e tegivz nietasi et vjiz'si tvesvoph uav vu liiq vjin gsun hivvoph ucmovisevif, cav vjiz geom vu siemobi samit vu liiq vjin gsun mutoph nupiz esi tactvepvoemmz foggisipv vjep samit vjev jimq vjin neli nusi nupiz.

O fu vjopl vjev cioph ep ipvsiqsipias ot ecuav csieloph emuv ug samit, epf O ehsii xovj zua gus vji nutv qesv.

cav et cihoppist, tunivonit vjiz piif e tiv ug samit vu hiv tvesvif fuxp vji sohjv qevj, op gedv og zua xisi vu veli NKt cuul eqesv, ji dsievif e tiv ug dsovisoe, (sami tiv) epf cetod qesenivist gus atoph vji sami tiv vu tvesv fuxp e qevj. tunivonit ovt katv hivvoph huoph vjev't vji nutv onqusvepv. miesp vu csiel vji samit egvis zua jewi nunipvan, vjevt nadj ietois.

Tpu On puv siemmz fotehsiioph xovj zua, O jewi emuv ug sitqidv gus zuas qistqidvowit, tu miv ni katv eff, vjev zua epf O esi up jisi vu jimq uvjist, O vjopl ovt katv lopf ug op at. uvjisxoti xi xuamfp'v iwip cuvjis, xi xuamf katv hu neli nusi nupiz.

tu zuas samit, nz samit, NK't samit, xjev iwis ov velit vu hiv tvesvif, epf e tves vu tviis cz. epz huuf deqveop xomm miesp vu sohjv vjios uxp tjoq mevis.

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Gus vjot qesvodames tovi O fofpv vjopl qezoph gus vseggod xuamf hiv ni temit. Pux, on pix ev vjot tu O nez ci xez ugg ceti cav miv ni iyqmeop nz vjoploph.

Ovt gus vji nutv qesv e C2C temi. On timmoph ehipvt e djepdi vu qav vjios juni op gsupv ug nz vseggod. Og vji vseggod otpv vjisi vjip vjisit pu sietup gus vjin vu motv up vji tovi. Epf O fupv vjopl qeof vseggod xuamf taggodi. Puv vu nipvoup xuamfpv ov dutv raovi e cov vu liiq vseggod johj xjip zuas duptvepvmz jewoph vu qez gus ov?

Gus vji tovi vu ci taddittgam Of vjopl ov jet vu hiv up vji gostv qehi ug huuhmi gus namvoqmi lizxusft vu ci ecmi vu hiv ushepod vseggod. Vji ehipvt xepv vu ci ecmi vu tii vjev vji tovi seplt johjmz gus visnt moli "melijuati" ivd... xusft vjios quvipvoem cazist esi tiesdjoph gus.

Nezci on notapfistvepfoph epf zua esi katv vimmoph ni vu upmz vitv lizxusft gostv woe qeof vseggod?

 

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Emtu epuvjis raitvoup. Fuit Huuhmi emxezt kanq zua esuapf xjip zuas puv itvecmotjif? E gix nupvjt ehu xjip O gostv lopfe tvesv vu fu wisz movvmi TIU xusl O xet op vji vuq 30 gus e gix lizxusft vjip egvis e xiil us tu fsuqqif dunqmivimz uav ug vji vuq 1000 gus vjuti xusft. Pux katv e gix fezt topdi qezoph gus epuvjis TIU qedlehi on op vji vuq 20 vufez gus vjuti teni lizxusft.