Why I launched my website today!!

[jaxon 24]

Ive been lurking on this forum for sometime. I read about people's motivational stories, how they started and managed businesses.
I always wanted to start a business that has scale worldwide while i operate from Ghana or anywhere in the world. MJs book opened my eye. Im very grateful.
Today I went live after a couple of works on my website www.exposemediagh.com.
This website is aimed at promoting brands on social media. Its a social media marketing website.
We manage social media accounts for organizations, brands, clubs, celebrities etc.. our target market is start up companies.
Y'all check out the site and critique it. Site is still work in progress.
We had to come live Today so we get feedback.
We dont automate followers and likes. We craft hand written post for your marketing niche. We manage post and give reports to our clients. Our aim is to make our clients be heard everywhere on social media.

Im finding it hard time to set up my sites seo for my site. I will be grateful for your help.
Thanks.
Lets see how www.exposemediagh.com transform likes to sales.

 

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[Gale4rc]

Great job launching your website.

Feedback:
Website looks very old school and not something I would trust in todays world...

''Social media is SHIFTING from CREATING AWARENESS to GENERATING REVENUE''

SIGN UP NOW! lets show you how"

- What does that even mean and why do I care?

The bottom half of the webpage has so much that I refuse to read it after the headline that confused me and information overload of information that is probably irrelevant to me.

And they're all competing for my attention: http://take.ms/ydME8

 

[Clenrock]

Hi Jaxon, launching is mostly the hardest thing to do!

What's important about a website that when people visit your homepage that 2 things are really clear in a glimpse.
The first one is that it has to be clear what you and the second one has to be what benefit the people will get when they go to you.

Neighter are really clear when I visit your website. I see a small sentence in the top that says: 'Transforming likes to sales'. I now kinda know what this website is about but I'm not sure. Also I don't see why I should choose your website, what benefit I would get.


What would be better in my opinion:

EXPOSE MEDIA GH

Helping your company to grow on social media.

Why people love us:
- Great communication between EXPOSE MEDIA GH and the client
- We get the job done faster than the speed of light



The other thing that bothers me a little bit are all the different types of fonts, and especially the bits with the font Comic Sans. No professional company uses Comic Sans!

I hope you can do something with this feedback!

Good luck with your site!

-Clen

 

[TJPB]

Welcome. Yea, my brain hurts after 4 seconds on your site. Don't trade quality design and content for an expedient launch.

 

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[JoeB]

Congrats on launching...............but:

"The BIGGEST thing to ever happen!" (really?)

"lets show you how"

"social media Fellowers"

"we begin posting whiles ensuring"

"your account is active, interactive an on-point topic content"

Definitely needs proofreading.

 

[smarty]

Welcome. Yea, my brain hurts after 4 seconds on your site.

This. My brain hurts too.

@jaxon 24 instead of clearly comunicating ONE SINGLE problem that you would solve for me as a potential customer, on your page you give like 3-4 half-ideas that never give me a clear idea about what your site does FOR ME. This equals in BOUNCE and I quickly browse somewhere else.

What pain point do you resolve for me as a user/customer?
Why should I signup?
What is it all about?

Stop the social-media rhetoric, show me why should I (as a potential customer) give you money.

Watch this video and make appropriate changes:

 

[jaxon 24]

Hi Jaxon, launching is mostly the hardest thing to do!

What's important about a website that when people visit your homepage that 2 things are really clear in a glimpse.
The first one is that it has to be clear what you and the second one has to be what benefit the people will get when they go to you.

Neighter are really clear when I visit your website. I see a small sentence in the top that says: 'Transforming likes to sales'. I now kinda know what this website is about but I'm not sure. Also I don't see why I should choose your website, what benefit I would get.


What would be better in my opinion:

EXPOSE MEDIA GH

Helping your company to grow on social media.

Why people love us:
- Great communication between EXPOSE MEDIA GH and the client
- We get the job done faster than the speed of light



The other thing that bothers me a little bit are all the different types of fonts, and especially the bits with the font Comic Sans. No professional company uses Comic Sans!

I hope you can do something with this feedback!

Good luck with your site!

-Clen

Thanks for ur valuable information. Im grateful. Im going work on it as soon as possible.

 

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[jaxon 24]

Great job launching your website.

Feedback:
Website looks very old school and not something I would trust in todays world...

''Social media is SHIFTING from CREATING AWARENESS to GENERATING REVENUE''

SIGN UP NOW! lets show you how"

- What does that even mean and why do I care?

The bottom half of the webpage has so much that I refuse to read it after the headline that confused me and information overload of information that is probably irrelevant to me.

And they're all competing for my attention: http://take.ms/ydME8

Thanks guys. I appreciate the feedback

Welcome. Yea, my brain hurts after 4 seconds on your site. Don't trade quality design and content for an expedient launch.

Congrats on launching...............but:

"The BIGGEST thing to ever happen!" (really?)

"lets show you how"

"social media Fellowers"

"we begin posting whiles ensuring"

"your account is active, interactive an on-point topic content"

Definitely needs proofreading.

This. My brain hurts too.

@jaxon 24 instead of clearly comunicating ONE SINGLE problem that you would solve for me as a potential customer, on your page you give like 3-4 half-ideas that never give me a clear idea about what your site does FOR ME. This equals in BOUNCE and I quickly browse somewhere else.

What pain point do you resolve for me as a user/customer?
Why should I signup?
What is it all about?

Stop the social-media rhetoric, show me why should I (as a potential customer) give you money.

Watch this video and make appropriate changes:

 

[Ninjakid]

Congrats on launching the website.

I highly recommend you redesign the entire thing.

I feel like if I click a link on the website my computer is going to be infected with malware.

The grey background isn't helping.

But really, congrats on actually getting it started.

 

[jaxon 24]

Congrats on launching the website.

I highly recommend you redesign the entire thing.

I feel like if I click a link on the website my computer is going to be infected with malware.

The grey background isn't helping.

But really, congrats on actually getting it started.

Thanks. Im working on it now

 

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[Yeezy]

Have you thought about using a website template or outsourcing your web design.
Congrats on taking action, but i'm really sorry to say that the site at the moment will most likely not get you any sales.

Good luck!

 

[Franky Neizer]

@jaxon 24 Good job man, just stumbled upon your post and checked out your website (well done, though still more work to be done). Will link up more so you can promote my brand after I launch. Keep up the work...

 

[Kingsta]

Website design is poor. You can find free templates online and put them together if you know basic HTML. If dont know how PM me and I can help you.

 

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