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You did the same thing I did when I brought in my first Asian sourced product. You're way too excited about this, way too over promising this, and your listing is confusing. This is a simple product that you have made complicated.
- What woman wants to buy from a company named VikingRobotHipster? What the F*ck is that?
- Does the product say SXY mirrors on it? The main image makes it look like it does. It shouldn't.
- Is SXY mirrors a brand name? Does a 40 year old professional traveler female want to buy a SXY mirror?
- Your first image needs to be just a white background professional image.
- Why are you emphasizing in your main image the fact that you ship Canada post? Nobody cares. That is NOT a selling feature.
- Why are your first four images essentially the same thing?
- Why are you showing a picture of your cheap shitty generic chinese packaging?
- I am a half dozen images in before I am getting to images I like.
- Why are you charging $10 canadian for shipping?
- 19 year old girls don't shop on eBay, so why are you pushing SXY mirror branding?
- Why a cute narative story about it being cold outside? What if it is summer in Canada?
- Why can't I use this at home? Your customer is limited to females, traveling in the cold, in the dark, in a car, that didn't put on makeup before they left?
- Did you have a female review this listing for you? You wrote it like a man trying to sell a product to a female, Viking Robot.
- You said professional retail packaging. You have overpromised. It is in a poly bag with a generic chinese header card. Don't oversell. Don't over hype.
- Does it come with batteries? What type? Can you add an AC adapter?
- Why 75 available? No sense of urgency then. You have too many listed.
- Why is your headline so short?
- Why do you have a bunch of other garbage available when I click to see what else you sell? Is this a flea market item or are you a serious brand? I think you answered that question already though with the Viking Robot store name.