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Ok, this is a follow-up post on a thread I made a month or two ago about improving conversions on my landing page (original here).
Now, I'm actually sending some traffic to my page, and even my improved page doesn't convert very well.
My ads are getting clicks, so it seems like the interest there, but I'm just losing the interest on my landing page.
So, let's tear my landing pages apart again to get them converting.
I'm currently split-testing 2 versions with Google website optimizer, and I'm about to make another version to test right now.
Here are the 2 versions:
Original Version 1 | Version 2
What do you think? What can I do to improve it?
BY THE WAY:
I'm about to make a single page version to test right now (by single page I mean it's a single step lead capture, currently it's a 3 step/page lead capture process).
Also, I know I need customer testimonials and "as seen on" badges. I'm working on those, but since this is brand-new, I haven't been able to do too much here.
I'm also working on getting a video made to put on the page too.
Thanks in advance!
Now, I'm actually sending some traffic to my page, and even my improved page doesn't convert very well.
My ads are getting clicks, so it seems like the interest there, but I'm just losing the interest on my landing page.
So, let's tear my landing pages apart again to get them converting.
I'm currently split-testing 2 versions with Google website optimizer, and I'm about to make another version to test right now.
Here are the 2 versions:
Original Version 1 | Version 2
What do you think? What can I do to improve it?
BY THE WAY:
I'm about to make a single page version to test right now (by single page I mean it's a single step lead capture, currently it's a 3 step/page lead capture process).
Also, I know I need customer testimonials and "as seen on" badges. I'm working on those, but since this is brand-new, I haven't been able to do too much here.
I'm also working on getting a video made to put on the page too.
Thanks in advance!
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