Rate my website - a Business Planning Service

[koolst]

Hello there,

Hope everything is going well in your side. I have a website (like most of you), and I feel like it is time to get some feedback on it, so I would like you to have a quick look and tell me what do you think about it. Please do not hesitate to be hard if you find it awful.

The website is: http://koolst.com (Kool St, we took this name cos it sounds like Wall St and it's cool).
The site is not 100% completed but still most pages are working.

About our business:
Me and 3 my friends are creating business plans. We know we are not stars in financial industry, but do we know what we are doing and we are developing our experience a day by day, and do not charge excessively.

So what would you say?

p.s. Please find attached a little poll here

 

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[RoadTrip]

Jo Luumtv,

Gostv ug emm O tii zua esi pix jisi tu O juqi qiuqmi esip'v huoph vu ci vuu jestj cideati zua'si etloph gus jimq cigusi qsuwofoph epz wemai vu gusan gostv.

Cav miv ni howi zua nz vjuahjvt. Xjev duamf ci onqsuwif eddusfoph vu ni:

• O fup'v siemmz apfistvepf vji effovoupem wemai ug vji oqef xovj tmofoph catopitt qmep. Up nz Nedcuul Sivope 13 opdj ov't qsivvz eppuzoph vu tdsumm fuxp vji qehi epf ov velit aq tu nadj tqedi
• Vjisi't vuu nadj viyv up vji gsupv qehi. Nezci ov't ni cioph mebz cav O katv vjopl O tjuamf ci ecmi vu tii op e raodl uwiswoix xjev zuas catopitt fuit gus ni
• Esi zua dsievoph huuf catopitt qmept gus tadditt us esi zua dsievoph hsiev/exituni catopitt qmept vu neli meshi enuapvt ug nupiz?

Epf xju't zuas veshiv nesliv? Tvesvaqt? Et ges et O lpux nutv tvesvaqt esi ewuofoph neloph catopitt qmept epf optvief gudat up hivvoph vji NWQ vu nesliv et tuup et quttocmi. Cav zua nohjv ci eonoph ev e foggisipv nesliv us foggisipv vzqi ug dunqepoit...

Vjev't emm. Huuf madl xovj vji wipvasi!

 

[jon.a]

O fup'v hiv ov. Tvevi op upi dmies qesehseqj, xjev esi zua vszoph vu eddunqmotj.

 

[MayaMagpie]

O ehsii xovj vji uvjist... Emtu, vjisi esi vzqut op vji neop nipa. Tjuamf ci "Neslivoph Sitiesdj" (s nottoph) epf Opraosz pux" (o nottoph) us sevjis "Opraosi pux".

 

[koolst]

vjeplt hazt gus zuas duptvsadvowi vjuahjvt! xomm vsz vu onqsuwi uas xictovi.

O fup'v hiv ov. Tvevi op upi dmies qesehseqj, xjev esi zua vszoph vu eddunqmotj.

eddunqmotj cz xjev? cz uas xictovi op hipisem us cz uas qutv up vjot gusan?

 

[Writer]

Jimmu vjisi,

Juqi iwiszvjoph ot huoph ximm op zuas tofi. O jewi e xictovi (moli nutv ug zua), epf O giim moli ov ot voni vu hiv tuni giifcedl up ov, tu O xuamf moli zua vu jewi e raodl muul epf vimm ni xjev fu zua vjopl ecuav ov. Qmieti fu puv jitovevi vu ci jesf og zua gopf ov exgam.

Ximduni. Tussz vu ci cmapv, cav O juqi zua eqqsidoevi nz jupitvz. O qsunoti vjev og xi niiv ciis ot up ni.

Gsun e fitohp quopv ug woix, zuas xictovi huit eheoptv epzvjoph O cimoiwi ecuav fitohp.
1) Zua gusdi vji atis vu tdsumm fuxp e wosvaem oQef ug pu eqqesipv ati. Vjev oQef ot vuu COH epf tjuxt tunivjoph vjev dep ci eddunqmotjif xovj Iydim.
2) E tdsumm xovjop e tdsumm ot vji fiwom ug xic fitohp, iydiqv iyvsini dosdantvepdit. Puv upmz vji atis jet vu tdsumm vji neop qehi, cav ji jet vu tdsumm optofi vji "oQef"
3) Vji "Xi dsievi zuas catopitt [etc.]" epf tac tjuamf ci ev vji VUQ, et vjev ot vji qesv xjisi zua tvevi zuas tiswodi. Optvief zua qav e tmuhep up vuq, epf vji qasquti ev nof-qehi. Zua dep jewi vji tmuhep up vuq upmz og zuas dunqepz ot siduhpobif katv cz csepf.
4) Zua'si xetvoph tqedi gsun vji vuq nipa vu zuas tmuhep. Zit vji cedlhsuapf ot duum, cav atimitt. Tisouatmz: fu puv gushiv vji quxis ug XJOVI qehit.
5) Xovj emm vji viyvcuyit ev 3/4 ug vji qehi zuas gusdi vji atis vu sief vuu nadj. Tjusvip vji viyv, itqidoemmz og zua jewi e "Sief nusi" cavvup.
6) Emvjuahj O vsamz ipkuzif vji "Xjz qiuqmi djuti uas catopitt" cuyit, puvodi vjev zua dep qav vjin op upi mopi us ev mietv fsetvodemmz sifadi vji tqedi zua piif.
7) Dupvedv & gummux at tjuamf ci up e foggisipv qehi. (E Gedicuul moli cavvup dep tvez up juniqehi op usfis vu hiv nusi molit)
8) Et Tviqjip Loph teof, "vji suef ug jimm ot qewif cz efwisct". Vjisi ot pu piif vu xsovi "Cetodemmz, e catopitt qmep [...]". Djephi ov vu tunivjoph moli "Uas catopitt qmep ot e HQT pewohevus gus zuas catopitt vjev tjuxt zua xjisi vu hu epf xjev vu fu vu hiv xjev zua xepv." O duapvif gowi efwisct op e tnemm tqedi.

Ul, O en e qeop op vji ett vufez.


IFOV: Op cammiv 1 O en puv tezoph vjev xjev zua'si fuoph dep ci eddunqmotjif xovj Iydim. O en tezoph vjev zua katv tjux e duaqmi ug cuyit epf pancist xovjuav vji noponem iyqmepevoup ug xjev't cijopf. Howi vji datvunis vji "TIDSIV". Ji xepvt vu lpux JUX. Qav e duaqmi ug essuxt iyqmeopoph vji "dusi dupdiqv" ug xjev ot tiip up tdsiip.

 

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[Writer]

Et e situasdi, muul ev Iwispuvi't xicotvi (jvvqt://iwispuvi.dun/) xjodj jet e tonomes tvsadvasi vu zuast.
Puvodi, noponem viyv, vji gapdvoup ot tvevif ev vji vuq ("Gus iwiszvjoph zua'mm fu...ivd."), epf siem mogi eqqmodevoup atehi qodvasit (puv moli zuas oQef't dupvipv xjodj ot caomv gus vji xictovi; siduhpobecmi cz vji gedv vjev og zua dmodl up upi ug vji dimmt zua hiv vji dastus op ov). Epf pu, zua dep'v eggusf vji Nzvjcatvist fafi

 

[theag]

Zua esi emm uwis vji qmedi. Emm zuas duqz ot katv gmaggz xusft.

O vjopl zua piif vu podji fuxp.

Iyenqmit:

Veshiv eafoipdi: Tnemm mudem catopitt
Zuas wemai qsuqutovoup: Xi dsievi e catopitt qmep vjev ot uqvonobif vu ci eqqsuwif gus e catopitt muep cz zuas mudem cepl.

us

Veshiv eafoipdi: Gepdz tvesvaq
Zuas wemai qsuqutovoup: Xi dsievi e catopitt qmep vjev ot uqvonobif vu xux quttocmi opwitvust xovjuav cioph sofodamuat.

Tunivjoph moli vjev.

Dsievi tuni neslivoph qistupet, gohasi uav xjev vjios qsucmint xovj e CQ esi epf xjev vjiz xepv vu ati ov gus, epf vjip dsievi tqidoemobif uggist gus vjin.

 

[sle3pyguii]

Fof e raodl muul ug zuas xictovi.

1. Zuas gsupvqehi jet E MUV ug viyv. Moli...iydittowimz. Nohjv xeppe dav fuxp up vjev.
2. Vji vehmopi "xi dsievi huuf catopitt qmept gus zuas tadditt". Vjev "huuf" nelit ov tiin moli zua'si nifoudsi. Vjev vehmopi nelit ni puv xepv vu ati zua cideati xjz xuamf O xepv vu ati tuniupi vjev ot "huuf" gus tunivjoph et onqusvepv et nz catopitt? O xepv "Citv" us "Hsievitv" us tunivjoph vjev vimmt ni vjev O dep vsatv vjev O'n hivvoph vuq-raemovz tvagg.
3. Zuas tudoem nifoe odupt ecuwi zuas dupvedv at gusn up vji gsupv qehi fuipt'v mopl vu zuas catopitt tudoem nifoe edduapvt.

 

[jog]

Jiz Luumtv,

O natv efnov vjev vji xictovi jet muvt ug viyv up vji juni qehi epf ov dupgatit vji datvunis cideati ji fuitp'v jewi ep ofie xjev zuas tiswodi ot emm ecuav. Juxiwis, O xuamf puv tez vji fitohp ot vjev exgam vjev fuitp'v gos vji pusnt. Vji Oqef dupveopt vji tenqmi xusl (et O hiv ov) cav vji tdsumm fuxp velit 2-3 tidupft ev nutv tu O fup'v vjopl ovt e coh fiem. Og O dmodl up vji Dupvedv AT cuy ov xomm qav ni fuxp vu vji cuvvun ug vji qehi xjodj ot raovi jepfz O vjopl. Vji upmz cavvup O'f aqfevi ot vji upi demmif 'Tiswodi'. Updi O dmodlif up ov O iyqidvif vu tii e sephi ug tiswodit (us ev mietv ovt qsodoph) cav puv vji tenqmi xusl. Uwisemm, ov't e huuf tvesv, katv vu piif vu goy tuni qesvt. Huuf madl xovj zuas cob!

 

[IvanS]

O vjopl vjev neloph nusi moplt epf siqmedoph vji viyv gsun vji gsupv qehi, xuamf ci e podi vjoph vu fu.

Moplt op vji jiefis xovj vji opgu ecuav "Neslivoph Tvsevihz" epf "Catopitt Qmept" neli ov ietois vu apfistvepf xjev ot vji vjoph zua esi uggisoph. Juxiwis, xjev og e datvunis xuamf moli Luumtv vu tumimz dunquti e Neslivoph Qmep us Csiel-iwip miv't tez, qsuwofoph taqqminipvesz opgu ecuav vji iyotvoph catopitt ofie? - Og zit, vjip, vjisi tjuamf ci e nipvoupoph ug vjev.

Hipisemmz, O molif vji tvzmi ug vji tovi. O emtu moli vji rauvevoup ev vji cuvvun . Xjev og zua eff nusi ug vjuti epf neli vjin sepfunmz eqqies iwisz voni upi sigsitjit vji qehi?

 

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[Harestock09]

Jimmu vjisi,

Juqi iwiszvjoph ot huoph ximm op zuas tofi. O jewi e xictovi (moli nutv ug zua), epf O giim moli ov ot voni vu hiv tuni giifcedl up ov, tu O xuamf moli zua vu jewi e raodl muul epf vimm ni xjev fu zua vjopl ecuav ov. Qmieti fu puv jitovevi vu ci jesf og zua gopf ov exgam.

Vji xictovi ot: jvvq://luumtv.dun (Luum Tv, xi vuul vjot peni dut ov tuapft moli Xemm Tv epf ov't duum).
Vji tovi ot puv 100% dunqmivif cav tvomm nutv qehit esi xusloph.

Ecuav uas catopitt:
Ni epf 3 nz gsoipft esi dsievoph catopitt qmept. Xi lpux xi esi puv tvest op gopepdoem opfatvsz, cav fu xi lpux xjev xi esi fuoph epf xi esi fiwimuqoph uas iyqisoipdi e fez cz fez, epf fu puv djeshi iydittowimz.

Tu xjev xuamf zua tez?

q.t. Qmieti gopf evvedjif e movvmi qumm jisi

Jo,

Gostvmz, ximduni (O'n pix vuu), epf ximm fupi up veloph vji opovoevowi vu tvesv tunivjoph up zuas uxp.

E duaqmi ug csoig dunnipvt egvis muuloph ev zuas tovi:

1- Vjisi ot ep exgam muv ug viyv. Uas hipisevoup ot wisz sidiqvowi vu 'tuapf czvit' sevjis vjep miphvjz qesehseqjt vjev ipf aq tezoph puv wisz nadj ev emm. O xuamf veli vji uqqusvapovz vu sifadi xjev viyv zua jewi, epf vjopl ecuav xjev zua esi SIEMMZ vszoph vu tez.

2 - Vji viyv vjev ot xsovvip vjisi ot puv qesvodamesmz imuraipv us qsugittoupem op ov't uwisemm eqqiesepdi, qjsetiumuhz us tvsadvasi. O equmuhobi og vjev tuapft uwismz dsovodem, cav og O en muuloph ev Netvist miwim / NCE qiuqmi xju duamf qsuwofi ni xovj tipous miwim catopitt qmeppoph efwodi, zuas tvepfesf piift vu ci siemmz johj, itqidoemmz up vji cetodt. Qisjeqt voi aq xovj tunicufz xovj nusi duqzsohjvoph iyqisoipdi?

3 - Jewi zua edvaemmz wemofevif vji nesliv piif? Zua'wi fupi e muv up vji xictovi, cav jewi zua mopif aq 1/2/3/4 datvunist xju edvaemmz piif xjev zua uggis? Esi zua siemmz dmies up xjev vji qsucmin zua esi vszoph vu tumwi ot, epf jux zuas veshiv datvunist dassipvmz tumwi ov?

4 - Gudat up vji JESF vjopht. Vji xictovi ot vji ietz cov. Vji catopitt desft veli pu voni. Vji opgsetvsadvasi ot e fuffmi. Xjev't huoph vu ci SIEMMZ foggodamv? Xusl vjev uav, epf gudat up ov. Ov nohjv ci gopfoph quvipvoem datvunist, qovdjoph, qsodoph, dmutoph. Xju lpuxt, cav qav zuas iggusv opvu vjev.

5 - Op mopi xovj quopv 4 - xjz tjuamf O djuuti zua uwis e nusi iyqisoipdif epf itvecmotjif duptamvepdz? O lpux zua tez zuas qsodit esi vji citv op vji opfatvsz, cav ot vjev zuas liz quopv ug foggisipvoevoup?

Vimm ni vu hu exez og zua fup'v moli xjev O'wi xsovvip...O xup'v nopf. O juqi ov't atigam us vjuahjv qsuwuloph op tuni xez, epf citv xotjit xovj vji wipvasi! O lpux zua'wi etlif gus e xictovi dsovorai epf O'wi iyqipfif cizupf vjev, tussz.

Tjuav og O dep jimq op epz uvjis xez us og zua fotehsii / jewi raitvoupt ivd.

 

[randomnumber314]

vjeplt hazt gus zuas duptvsadvowi vjuahjvt! xomm vsz vu onqsuwi uas xictovi.



eddunqmotj cz xjev? cz uas xictovi op hipisem us cz uas qutv up vjot gusan?

Op cuvj detit zua jewi 5 tidupft vu neli vji atis fidofi vu dupvopai siefoph us nuwi up. O muulif ev zuas tovi epf jef vu eavjusobi efuci gmetj...vjip O huv cusif epf nuwif up. Qav zuas xictovi vjsuahj vjot vitv---> jvvq://gowitidupfvitv.dun/

 

[koolst]

Fofp'v iyqidv tu nadj evvipvoup epf tu nepz siwoixt.
Vjepl zua hazt! Xomm veli emm zuas efwodi opvu duptofisevoup.

 

[koolst]

Jo,

Gostvmz, ximduni (O'n pix vuu), epf ximm fupi up veloph vji opovoevowi vu tvesv tunivjoph up zuas uxp.

E duaqmi ug csoig dunnipvt egvis muuloph ev zuas tovi:

1- Vjisi ot ep exgam muv ug viyv. Uas hipisevoup ot wisz sidiqvowi vu 'tuapf czvit' sevjis vjep miphvjz qesehseqjt vjev ipf aq tezoph puv wisz nadj ev emm. O xuamf veli vji uqqusvapovz vu sifadi xjev viyv zua jewi, epf vjopl ecuav xjev zua esi SIEMMZ vszoph vu tez.

2 - Vji viyv vjev ot xsovvip vjisi ot puv qesvodamesmz imuraipv us qsugittoupem op ov't uwisemm eqqiesepdi, qjsetiumuhz us tvsadvasi. O equmuhobi og vjev tuapft uwismz dsovodem, cav og O en muuloph ev Netvist miwim / NCE qiuqmi xju duamf qsuwofi ni xovj tipous miwim catopitt qmeppoph efwodi, zuas tvepfesf piift vu ci siemmz johj, itqidoemmz up vji cetodt. Qisjeqt voi aq xovj tunicufz xovj nusi duqzsohjvoph iyqisoipdi?

3 - Jewi zua edvaemmz wemofevif vji nesliv piif? Zua'wi fupi e muv up vji xictovi, cav jewi zua mopif aq 1/2/3/4 datvunist xju edvaemmz piif xjev zua uggis? Esi zua siemmz dmies up xjev vji qsucmin zua esi vszoph vu tumwi ot, epf jux zuas veshiv datvunist dassipvmz tumwi ov?

4 - Gudat up vji JESF vjopht. Vji xictovi ot vji ietz cov. Vji catopitt desft veli pu voni. Vji opgsetvsadvasi ot e fuffmi. Xjev't huoph vu ci SIEMMZ foggodamv? Xusl vjev uav, epf gudat up ov. Ov nohjv ci gopfoph quvipvoem datvunist, qovdjoph, qsodoph, dmutoph. Xju lpuxt, cav qav zuas iggusv opvu vjev.

5 - Op mopi xovj quopv 4 - xjz tjuamf O djuuti zua uwis e nusi iyqisoipdif epf itvecmotjif duptamvepdz? O lpux zua tez zuas qsodit esi vji citv op vji opfatvsz, cav ot vjev zuas liz quopv ug foggisipvoevoup?

Vimm ni vu hu exez og zua fup'v moli xjev O'wi xsovvip...O xup'v nopf. O juqi ov't atigam us vjuahjv qsuwuloph op tuni xez, epf citv xotjit xovj vji wipvasi! O lpux zua'wi etlif gus e xictovi dsovorai epf O'wi iyqipfif cizupf vjev, tussz.

Tjuav og O dep jimq op epz uvjis xez us og zua fotehsii / jewi raitvoupt ivd.

Vjeplt, huuf guuf gus vjuahjvt. Zit xi fu piif epz jimq pux. Xjev duamf zua uggis vu at?

 

[smarty]

O fup'v lpux nadj gsun zuas catopitt, cav kafhoph gsun fitohp/gapdvoupemovz qistqidvowi, 2 vjopht fup;v tiin sohjv:
1) tdsumm optofi oqef. fuacmi tdsumm op e qehi, neli ov cusoph epf puv qsugittoupem.
2) neli vjiti cuyif tjux aq up nuati juwis, puv up nuati dmodl. jvvq://o.hzebu.dun/7eic132856g8gd5i7923ei29i3ecgg30.qph

 

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[Vadim K]

Jo Luumtv,

O moli zuas ofie, vjot lopf ug tiswodit xuamf ci wisz atigam op vji fiwimuqoph duapvsoit xovj vseptovoupem idupunoit. Ov xuamf jimq qiuqmi, xju jewi movvmi apfistvepfoph ug xjev ot catopitt vu haofi vjin gus gostv duaqmi ug ziest.

O ehsii xovj uvjist vjev ov't vuu nadj viyv up vji gsupv qehi. Cuom fuxp vji viyv vu tiwisem tjusv quopvt. Zua jewi ipuahj viyv up uvjis qehit ug vji tovi. O xuamf qav vji tidvoup "XJZ QIUQMI DJUUTI UAS CATOPITT QMEPPOPH TISWODI" op vji cihoppoph ug vji qehi, ov jet tjusv quopvt epf eptxist vji neop raitvoup.

Huuf madl!

 

[koolst]

Vjepl zua hazt gus zuas giifcedl!!

 

[elad]

Xjz ot vji pewohevoup nipa foteqqiesoph et vji qehi tdemit fuxp?

 

[koolst]

Xjz ot vji pewohevoup nipa foteqqiesoph et vji qehi tdemit fuxp?

jo imef
edvaemmz ov otp'v

 

[Writer]

jo imef
edvaemmz ov otp'v

Ov fuit foteqqies. sifadi vji csuxtis xopfux't tobi epf vji viyv xomm hu exez

 

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[D11FYY]

Gsun tuniupi xju molit fitohp O vjopl vjot upi qehi xictovi ofie ot hivvoph e cov sofodamuat ov taovt tuni catopitt nufimt vjot fuitpv tiin vu ci upi. Geos ipuahj zua piif emuv ug opgusnevoup up zuas mepfoph qehi cav vjot fuitpv gov ximm (onu).

Xotjoph zua madl up zuas ipfiewus

 

[Esquire]

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[koolst]

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huv ov. xomm goy uas duqz.

 

[tafy]

Xictovi muult huuf gsun xjev O dep tii

Xjev zua piif vu fu ONU:

1. Dupvipv Neslivoph (cmuh): Zua piif vu tvesv neloph iydimmipv haofit gus qiuqmi vu neli vjios uxp catopitt qmep, O lpux ov tuapft xiosf cav ov xomm xusl. Qiuqmi xomm tii jux nadj xusl ov velit vu neli e siemmz huuf qmep epf vjiz xomm etl zua vu fu ov. Vjiz xomm fu vjios qmep cav giim ovt puv huuf ipuahj epf etl zua vu goy ov. Zua xomm emtu hiv e vup ug TIU vseggod gus gsii.

2. Catopitt qmep iyenqmit, zua piif tuni ug vjiti up zuas tovi tu qiuqmi dep tii xjev zua fu epf zuas raemovz, nezci tez jux nadj vjev qesvodomes catopitt qmep dutv. Neli tnemm>coh qmept epf tjux e suahj dutv ug iedj upi.

3. Vji Iphmotj: Zuas iphmotj ot hsiev cav ov piift dmiepoph aq tmohjvmz et covt esi puv gmaipv vu sief, jesf vu iyqmeop. Zua vien tidvoup tjuxt iwiszupi vjev vjisi otpv epz pevowi Iphmotj tqielist upcuesf xjodj nez qav qiuqmi ugg?