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What's up everybody. If there's one thing I've learned, it's that sharing knowledge and pushing boundaries is one of the few things that will push our species forward.

Becoming antiquated and locked into less-than-optimal ruts of thinking causes irrefutable harm to the future iterations of society as a whole, and it's not just a "Boomer" thing.

Life requires paying attention to and rewarding ourselves internally in whatever activity we pursue, not from the glimmering idea of wealth, or multitudinous relationships and gold stars....no it's our own Self-congratulatory, Pat-On-The-Back that gets us through when life gets tough.

For that reason I've dedicated myself to undertaking the one thing that brings me to the edge......Psychedelic Science & Comedy.

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Enjoy.

View: https://youtu.be/97yDSoKcUo4
 

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What's up everybody. If there's one thing I've learned, it's that sharing knowledge and pushing boundaries is one of the few things that will push our species forward.

Becoming antiquated and locked into less-than-optimal ruts of thinking causes irrefutable harm to the future iterations of society as a whole, and it's not just a "Boomer" thing.

Life requires paying attention to and rewarding ourselves internally in whatever activity we pursue, not from the glimmering idea of wealth, or multitudinous relationships and gold stars....no it's our own Self-congratulatory, Pat-On-The-Back that gets us through when life gets tough.

For that reason I've dedicated myself to undertaking the one thing that brings me to the edge......Psychedelic Science & Comedy.

Brought to you in the form of Educational YouTube videos.

Enjoy.

View: https://youtu.be/97yDSoKcUo4

Quick notes when watching:

Jumping all over the place with your writing and changing directions all the time.

The video is not named a brief history of psychedelics.

Music cuts out abruptly and changes too often keeping up with your jumping all over the place. Bad selection also, jumping from genre to genre and from high quality to low quality. Different volumes as well. Get rid of elevator music.

Text font and size is all over the place. I get you wanted to make the video in a psychedelic vein, but it didn't work. There is good and bad art - this is bad art.

You sound bored, melancholic. Playing at 1.5 somewhat alleviated the problem.

Your own selfie shot just came out of nowhere, you need to change the looks because the glasses and mustache brings up a pedophile stereotype up, supported by Mickey Mouse hoodie.

There was no comedy elements only tragedy ones.

Connect everything together and to me whatever that comes up on the screen is too distracting to watch. You can't keep my focus and don't have a steady view of what you want to accomplish. Usually I found this to be the case with life long psychonauts.

Take it on the chin, learn and get better. There's a lot of work to do. Good luck!
 

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Quick notes when watching:

Jumping all over the place with your writing and changing directions all the time.

The video is not named a brief history of psychedelics.

Music cuts out abruptly and changes too often keeping up with your jumping all over the place. Bad selection also, jumping from genre to genre and from high quality to low quality. Different volumes as well. Get rid of elevator music.

Text font and size is all over the place. I get you wanted to make the video in a psychedelic vein, but it didn't work. There is good and bad art - this is bad art.

You sound bored, melancholic. Playing at 1.5 somewhat alleviated the problem.

Your own selfie shot just came out of nowhere, you need to change the looks because the glasses and mustache brings up a pedophile stereotype up, supported by Mickey Mouse hoodie.

There was no comedy elements only tragedy ones.

Connect everything together and to me whatever that comes up on the screen is too distracting to watch. You can't keep my focus and don't have a steady view of what you want to accomplish. Usually I found this to be the case with life long psychonauts.

Take it on the chin, learn and get better. There's a lot of work to do. Good luck!
You are a croaker that's for sure
 

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You are a croaker that's for sure

It was quite solid feedback - I am sure it took some time to watch and type it up.

Kinda weird response from you. Were you hoping for feedback or just lots of views?
 

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Quick notes when watching:

Jumping all over the place with your writing and changing directions all the time.

The video is not named a brief history of psychedelics.

Music cuts out abruptly and changes too often keeping up with your jumping all over the place. Bad selection also, jumping from genre to genre and from high quality to low quality. Different volumes as well. Get rid of elevator music.

Text font and size is all over the place. I get you wanted to make the video in a psychedelic vein, but it didn't work. There is good and bad art - this is bad art.

You sound bored, melancholic. Playing at 1.5 somewhat alleviated the problem.

Your own selfie shot just came out of nowhere, you need to change the looks because the glasses and mustache brings up a pedophile stereotype up, supported by Mickey Mouse hoodie.

There was no comedy elements only tragedy ones.

Connect everything together and to me whatever that comes up on the screen is too distracting to watch. You can't keep my focus and don't have a steady view of what you want to accomplish. Usually I found this to be the case with life long psychonauts.

Take it on the chin, learn and get better. There's a lot of work to do. Good luck!
In addition you lack the concentration
It was quite solid feedback - I am sure it took some time to watch and type it up.

Kinda weird response from you. Were you hoping for feedback or just lots of views?
A croaker croaked, I simply noted the phenomenon.

I understand his feedback perfectly. Although whoever croaker is, it's obvious he lacked the insight to further look around my channel as a whole, upon which he would find both Psychedelic Science AND Comedy videos.

In addition, my mustache and mickey mouse hoodie are widely loved by women and children alike. I don't know, can croakers grow mustaches?

Also maybe he could glean a thing or two from paying attention and rewarding himself internally....


Also we've never spoken before Fox?

I sent you a message once that you never responded to, was that supposed to "teach" me something?
 

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Also if it's too "FASTLANE" of a video for you, YouTube has a slower speed setting lmao!
 

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Instead of trying to win a clever argument I would just take what he said at face value - could anything he said be useful to improve future videos?

I’ll check your PM - I’m behind with responding to a few.
 

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Instead of trying to win a clever argument I would just take what he said at face value - could anything he said be useful to improve future videos?

I’ll check your PM - I’m behind with responding to a few.
Like I said, I understand his feedback.

and no need to reply, web design is not for me.
 

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Honesty? Maybe a couple jests and laughs? Nothing too complicated Mr. Black. Although I'm learning more about the users of this forum by the minute!
 

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In addition you lack the concentration

A croaker croaked, I simply noted the phenomenon.

I understand his feedback perfectly. Although whoever croaker is, it's obvious he lacked the insight to further look around my channel as a whole, upon which he would find both Psychedelic Science AND Comedy videos.

In addition, my mustache and mickey mouse hoodie are widely loved by women and children alike. I don't know, can croakers grow mustaches?

Also maybe he could glean a thing or two from paying attention and rewarding himself internally....


Also we've never spoken before Fox?

I sent you a message once that you never responded to, was that supposed to "teach" me something?
I have to apologize my intention wasn't to insult you, but to give feedback for improvement. Sorry!
 

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I have to apologize my intention wasn't to insult you, but to give feedback for improvement. Sorry!

That was clear - he just can’t accept it.
 

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Honesty? Maybe a couple jests and laughs? Nothing too complicated Mr. Black. Although I'm learning more about the users of this forum by the minute!

You’re projecting in every comment.

He was trying to help and so was Andy and I.

Anyway wish you all the best.
 

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At the end of the day, if you actually watch, consume, and ACT on the video I originally posted, the value you get (which is the core philosophy of this forum aka PROVIDING VALUE) is beyond words, literally.

That is the power of Neuroscience, whether or not it comes cloaked in a guy with a mustache and a boring, melancholic voice.

In fact that's why the video is made with fancy text and changing "elevator" music..... because it is precisely calculated to fit each part of the script. It is a mood, an emotion.

That is bound to be lost on a few.

Also, the feedback I received from various other forums with people I've never met before was overwhelmingly positive.

Not to mention the video itself, which for my small a$$ channel is like a meteoroid just hit earth.

Oh and the feeling in my gut that what I'm doing matters.

Which is the only thing that drives each of us forward, neuroscientifically proven by the way.

Which I state exactly in the video at 20:54

Amen
 

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I gather that you already know everything, so I am not sure why you are asking for advice or commenting on what others are saying about the video?

A friend of mine is a successful business man, who started a new venture with a radio show that is doing quite well, amazingly well for the year it has been operational. You know what questions he asks me without fail every single week? He wants my honest feedback on what needs to be improved, and any issues that I can come up with. I am also brutally honest with him. He has never taken offense, and we both learn from the experience.

Even masters in their field can benefit from additional eyes and ears giving them honest feedback. I suppose that is what makes them eventual masters, the willingness to learn.
 

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I gather that you already know everything, so I am not sure why you are asking for advice or commenting on what others are saying about the video?

A friend of mine is a successful business man, who started a new venture with a radio show that is doing quite well, amazingly well for the year it has been operational. You know what questions he asks me without fail every single week? He wants my honest feedback on what needs to be improved, and any issues that I can come up with. I am also brutally honest with him. He has never taken offense, and we both learn from the experience.

Even masters in their field can benefit from additional eyes and ears giving them honest feedback. I suppose that is what makes them eventual masters, the willingness to learn.
I never asked for any feedback lmao. But good for your buddy, seriously.

I am just showing my execution.....that is the context of this thread is it not?

Do yourself a favor and pay more attention maybe.
 

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What's up everybody. If there's one thing I've learned, it's that sharing knowledge and pushing boundaries is one of the few things that will push our species forward.

I never asked for any feedback lmao. But good for your buddy, seriously.

I am just showing my execution.....that is the context of this thread is it not?

Do yourself a favor and pay more attention maybe.

These seem to totally contradict each other.
 

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These seem to totally contradict each other.
? Ya lost me. Unless you're referring to the title? Or are you trying to find the part where I said "please give feedback" that doesn't exist?

It seems anger is clouding judgement in this thread lmao
 

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? Ya lost me. Unless you're referring to the title? Or are you trying to find the part where I said "please give feedback" that doesn't exist?

It seems anger is clouding judgement in this thread lmao
*"my ego"
 

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It seems anger is clouding judgement in this thread
It does seem that way.

Look. No-one is out to get you. You posted in a forum, someone spent some of their time watching your video, and was kind enough to give their feedback.

It’s hard to get anyone to give us their attention. Even harder to get them to give their honest feedback.

You got feedback when maybe you didn’t want it. I think that goes with the territory when you join team producer.

You’ve produced something, and you’ve put it out there. Hats off to you there. That’s more than most people will ever do.

This is a forum of people who are on team producer or want to join team producer. We want to help people be the best they can be and to produce their best.
 

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I never asked for any feedback lmao. But good for your buddy, seriously.

I am just showing my execution.....that is the context of this thread is it not?

Do yourself a favor and pay more attention maybe.

At some point you have to ask yourself who the common denominator is.

In ten posts you have managed to shit on 3 highly respected members of the forum and also others who were offering up what looks like honest and valuable dialogue. They took the time to interact with you. FOR FREE! They didn't owe you any favors.

My critique of you is this... You can't handle candid discussion... THAT, is a BIG hinderance to pretty much every ambition one can have. Work on that, FOR YOUR OWN GOOD, not ours.
 

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sorry everyone i was angry please forgive me. It's that I finally made something I believe in and know has value
 
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sorry everyone i was angry please forgive me. It's that I finally made something I believe in and know has value
A little line that might help:

“Be curious, not furious.”


Good for you for having the self-awareness and then courage to post that btw.
 

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This comment was the first funny one in the whole thread

Now that you're not angry any more do you think there is value in rereading the feedback and working on addressing it?
Somewhat. Im wary of taking advice from anyone I can't see, hear, and feel.
 

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