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Practice project trying to learn video editing. My first video. I liked the results.

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Trying to expand my reach wit YouTube so I’ve been trying my hand at video editing, so I finally cracked open Final Cut. I’m happy with the results.. at least for a practice project.

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=42xxMHeU7fY

But I’ll take whatever compliments or criticism. Pretend like this were a real project and I were really going to publish this. Since the goal is to publish video, all compliments or criticism is welcome. I don’t like the title and I got lazy in choosing a font. Normally I would have designed something.
 
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very nice!
 

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The beginning was a waste of opportunity. Sky shots can be used as a breakaway, but not for an ongoing scene.

However, the second half was very well done.

Could have had a stunning ending that would have been thought provoking, instead of just stopping.

Definitely liked the message!
 

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The beginning was a waste of opportunity. Sky shots can be used as a breakaway, but not for an ongoing scene.

However, the second half was very well done.

Could have had a stunning ending that would have been thought provoking, instead of just stopping.

Definitely liked the message!
Yea, i kinda felt like it needed a finale too, but I ran out of music and got tired of messing
with it lol. This is the original.

I’ll ruminate on the cloud thing. Thanks.

I should have also leveled out the volume 2/3rds in as the background music starts overtaking the voice.

Minor stuff.

very nice!
Thanks!
 

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The beginning was a waste of opportunity. Sky shots can be used as a breakaway, but not for an ongoing scene.

However, the second half was very well done.

Could have had a stunning ending that would have been thought provoking, instead of just stopping.

Definitely liked the message!

I fixed the end based on your input:

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A0Zr-HGT4RQ


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