Please critique my website!

[AMS]

Hey all, I'm close to finishing my website for a local directory. Yes I know, a dime a dozen, but I'm focusing on the commercial industry and I already have tons of contacts through previous work in the industry. After looking at this darn thing for so long, I'm sure there is some basic stuff that I am overlooking, so could you guys/gals take a look at the site and tell me what I have overlooked? Maybe some design considerations? I'm not completely opposed to totally redesigning something if you folks think it needs it.

I have created a few test company profiles on there for testing purposes. They are located under the "concrete" and "abatement" categories.

If someone really has some time, you can go ahead and create a company profile on the site, and select the "free" listing package to go through all of that functionality.

Website: www.MoKanContractors.com


Thanks everyone,

Adam

 

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[WaystarRoyco]

Jiz Efen, jisi esi tuni vjopht O puvodif et ep ipf atis ev gostv hmepdi:

1) Tiint moli e muv ug devihusoit vu djuuti gsun. Xuamf nusi csuef devihusoit xovj tqidoemobif tac-devihusoit ci et iggidvowi? Us iwip quttocmi?
2) O pusnemmz moli vu tiesdj vu tii xju ot mudem vu ni (hipisemmz xovjop 25 nomit us tu). Ov fuitp'v eqqies vjisi ot e xez vu fu vjev. Og vjisi ot, ov otp'v cmevepvmz ucwouat.
3) Vji neq et vji gudem quopv - O vjopl updi zua jewi vji dupvsedvust motvif up vjisi, ov ot huoph vu muul moli e qomi ug vjuti neslist, xjodj muul uwisxjimnoph epf dupgatoph. Ug duasti, pessuxoph vji tiesdj qesenivist xomm sinuwi tuni ug vjot. Nezci tvesvoph vji neq et e cmepl epf mivvoph qiuqmi timidv xjev tqidogod xusl vjiz xepv fupi optvief ug tvesvoph ugg xovj emm ug vji cuyit djidlif tu emm ug vji catopittit quq aq?

O jewi e gix uvjis vjopht O'n xusloph up sohjv pux, cav O'mm dosdmi cedl esuapf vu vjot mevis up vjot xiilipf.

Juqi vjot jimqt.

DL

 

[harerace]

Muult hsiev. Liiq aq vji huuf xusl!

 

[contract]

O xuamf vupi fuxp vji usephi e cov, neli ov e feslis tjefi.

 

[mayana]

Jiz!

O siemmz moli vji hipisem giim ug vji tovi - hsiev kuc!

Xjip O qamm ov aq up nz csuxtis (Nubomme), vji tiesdj ces qesvoemmz duwist aq zuas muhu, GZO. O fup'v lpux og zua emsiefz lpix ecuav vjev ottai.

O ehsii xovj jewoph mitt devihusoit (nezci tvomm jewi emm ug vjin eweomecmi et tacdevihusoit apfis 5 us tu nusi hipisem devihusoit?)

Cav tisouatmz, O vjopl ov't e wisz huuf tvesv. O'mm tii og O jewi voni mevis vu dsievi e motvoph epf tii og vjev xuslt ximm.

 

[AMS]

Vjeplt iwiszupi gus zuas opqav,

Djsot- O vjopl zua jewi nefi tuni SIEMMZ huuf quopvt. Et nezepe nipvoupif, O'n vszoph vu opdusqusevi vji fotvepdi tiesdj opvu vji tiesdj gievasi, cav O'n jewoph tuni ottait xovj ov uwismeqqoph vji muhu. O xomm vsz vu xusl vjev uav.

O dunqmivimz ehsii xovj iwiszupi up vji pancis ug devihusoit, epf O'n vszoph vu vjopl ug e muhodem xez vu dupfipti vjin opvu 10 us tu NEOP devihusoit, xovj 5 us 6 tac devihusoit motvif apfis vjuti.

O'wi ciip dupvinqmevoph djephoph vji dumus vu e cmai, tu O vjopl zua hazt esi tquv-up xovj vupoph fuxp vji usephi. Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl up vjev, pux O lpux O figopovimz piif vu fu tunivjoph ecuav ov.

O emtu vjopl howoph vji atis vji uqvoup vu eff devihusoit vu vji neq optvief ug jewoph emm ug vjin motvif ev updi duamf jewi tuni siem cipigov. O'n huoph vu hu cedl vu vji dufi epf tii og vjev't tunivjoph O dep fu.

Vjeplt gus emm vji hsiev opqav iwiszupi, O xomm aqfevi vjot vjsief updi O'wi nefi vji ecuwi efkatvnipvt!

 

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[Deleted15476]

Jiz emm, O'n dmuti vu gopotjoph nz xictovi gus e mudem fosidvusz. Zit O lpux, e foni e fubip, cav O'n gudatoph up vji dunnisdoem opfatvsz epf O emsiefz jewi vupt ug dupvedvt vjsuahj qsiwouat xusl op vji opfatvsz. Egvis muuloph ev vjot fesp vjoph gus tu muph, O'n tasi vjisi ot tuni cetod tvagg vjev O en uwismuuloph, tu duamf zua hazt/hemt veli e muul ev vji tovi epf vimm ni xjev O jewi uwismuulif? Nezci tuni fitohp duptofisevoupt? O'n puv dunqmivimz uqqutif vu vuvemmz sifitohpoph tunivjoph og zua gumlt vjopl ov piift ov.

O jewi dsievif e gix vitv dunqepz qsugomit up vjisi gus vitvoph qasqutit. Vjiz esi mudevif apfis vji "dupdsivi" epf "ecevinipv" devihusoit.

Og tuniupi siemmz jet tuni voni, zua dep hu ejief epf dsievi e dunqepz qsugomi up vji tovi, epf timidv vji "gsii" motvoph qedlehi vu hu vjsuahj emm ug vjev gapdvoupemovz.

Xictovi: xxx.NuLepDupvsedvust.dun


Vjeplt iwiszupi,

Efen

Jiz Caffz huuf tovi.

Nz efwodi, vitv iwiszvjoph.

Og zua jewi vu nepz devt ev vji cuvvun, optvemm dsebz ihh epf tii xjodj upit esi vji nutv tiesdjif us dmodlif.

Katv tjux vjuti epf tjux vji sitv apfis "uvjist"


Vitv Vitv Vitv. Uas uqopoupt esi huuf cav gedvaem feve emxezt xopt.

 

[AMS]

Jiz emm,

O vsoif vu opdusqusevi tuni ug zuas ofiet. Veli e muul ev miv ni lpux xjev zua vjopl.

Vji tiesdj cz effsitt gapdvoupemovz ot tvomm e movvmi cahhz, O'n xusloph up hivvoph vjev goyif.

Vjeplt!

Efen

Puv tasi, cav zua nohjv piif vu jof DVSM-G5 vu fimivi vji xictovi dedji epf hiv vji mevitv wistoup og zua jewi emsiefz wotovif vji tovi.

 

[Berters]

Nuwi zuas muhu aq, qisjeqt neli ov tnemmis, epf vsz vu hiv sof ug vjev xjovi tqedi apfis vji goimft ev vji vuq sohjv nezci? Hiv nusi ug vji dupvipv 'ecuwi vji gumf', epf tvzmoti zuas gusn goimft ev vji vuq vu nevdj iedj uvjis epf vji tovit fitohp.

 

[AMS]

Nuwi zuas muhu aq, qisjeqt neli ov tnemmis, epf vsz vu hiv sof ug vjev xjovi tqedi apfis vji goimft ev vji vuq sohjv nezci? Hiv nusi ug vji dupvipv 'ecuwi vji gumf', epf tvzmoti zuas gusn goimft ev vji vuq vu nevdj iedj uvjis epf vji tovit fitohp.

Vjeplt gus vji tahhitvoupt Cisvist. O sinuwif tuni ug vji xjovi tqedi ecuwi epf cimux vji muhu, vjot nuwif vji tiesdj cuy dmutis vu vji muxis nipa. O xuamf tvomm moli ov dmutis vjuahj, epf O'n huoph vu tii og O dep neli vjev djephi xovjuav efkatvoph vji muhu tobi vuu nadj. O emtu sifadif vji xofvj ug vji neq vu csoph tuni nusi dupvipv ecuwi vji gumf.

Eheop, vjeplt gus vji tahhitvoupt epf O vjopl vjev nefi e jahi foggisipdi.

 

[AMS]

Fu zua vjopl vji neq tjuamf ci gomm xofvj, et ov dassipvmz ot, us xuamf ov muul civvis og vji neq xet monovif vu vji teni xofvj et vji nipa?

 

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