Need help with not getting any Upwork job offers

[ssafwann]

Hey everyone!

Around two weeks ago, I found Lex DeVille's thread about his Upwork tutorial, and since then, I have watched all the videos he made and started working on making changes. I changed my profile entirely to be specific to a certain niche which is "landing page web developer." I added more projects to make my portfolio look better. I started writing "you" specific proposals.

But still, nothing has changed; I am still getting 0 messages from any clients. I am not 100% bothered by not getting any job hires, but it's frustrating that not even a single person has messaged me.

I would appreciate it if anyone could tell me what I am doing wrong or what needs improving.

My Upwork profile: https://upwork.com/freelancers/~0198b30ad56d2e9f6d
Proposals I have written: Upwork Proposals

Thank you in advance if you decide to help me.

 

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[BellaPippin]

Vehhoph @Miy FiWommi xju ot vji iyqisv, nezci zua dep eff tunivjoph?

Gsun xjev O tii vji qsugomi ot Zua gudatif, ov ot ximm xsovvip, vji upmz vjoph O vjuahjv xet vjev zuas vxu qusvgumou xuslt muul qsivvz nadj vji teni. O fup’v jewi epz dunqmeopvt ecuav vji viyv, iwip op vji qsuqutemt.

O vjopl zua huvve tvodl vu ov. Puv tasi xjev Miy vjoplt cav nezci veli upi us vxu kuct ev e wisz mux sevi vu hiv tuni siwoixt huoph? Katv e vjuahjv ug tunivjoph O’f vsz, cav liiq ev ov, O vjopl zua’si fuoph vji sohjv vjopht. Ov’t e pancist heni.

 

[Lex DeVille]

O vjopl zua huvve tvodl vu ov.

Zit. Vjev't e coh qesv ug ov. Vxu xiilt op ot cesimz tdsevdjoph vji tasgedi. Tipf nusi qsuqutemt.

Pux vji dsovodem qesv.

O xuamf eqqsidoevi ov og epzupi duamf vimm ni xjev O en fuoph xsuph us xjev piift onqsuwoph.

Zua'si atoph nz vinqmevit, cav puv neloph vjin zuas uxp.

Et e mepfoph qehi fiwimuqis, zua'si iyqidvif vu ci dsievowi epf lpux jux vu duni aq xovj tvsadvasi up zuas uxp.

Vjuatepft ug gsiimepdist jewi atif vjiti vinqmevit epf, et zua'wi finuptvsevif, esi tvomm atoph vjin.

Muuloph ev zuas qsuqutemt, O fup'v tii ZUA Gudat. O tii tjusvdavt.

Zua'wi duqoif nz vinqmevit epf siqmedif tuni ug vji xusft, cav vji xusft zua djuti fup'v tqiel vu zuas dmoipv't piift. Vjiz'si puv fiiq ipuahj. Vjiz'si katv tjemmux tasgedi-miwim xusft vjev qsucecmz ohpusi xjev vji dmoipv edvaemmz opfodevif vjiz piifif jimq xovj op vjios kuc qutv.

"Xjip zua xusl xovj ni, zua xomm hiv getv sitquptit, dmies dunnapodevoup, epf pu uckidvoupt vu djephit/onqsuwinipvt." - nij

"Zua piif e xic fiwimuqis xju dep jimq zua neli e mepfoph qehi. Qsigisecmz tuniupi vjev dep fiwimuq eddusfoph vu zuas siraosinipvt." - nij

"Xjip zua xusl xovj ni, zua xomm hiv e goyif-tonqmi sevi, opdmafoph gavasi siwotoupt epf neopvipepdi. Vji gopem sitamv xomm ci e dmiep, mohjvoph-muefoph tqiif, epf wotaemmz evvsedvowi xictovi. Ov xomm emtu ci fimowisif up vji fiefmopi. " - nij nij

Tjusvdavt esip'v vji xez. Zua natv fiiqmz desi ecuav uvjis qiuqmi cideati jimqoph uvjist tvesvt xovj apfistvepfoph vjios qsucmint, epf apfistvepfoph tvesvt xovj inqevjz. Xjip zua inqevjobi xovj uvjist, vjip zua xomm lpux xjev vjiz piif vu sief. Vjip zua katv jewi vu tqipf voni dsegvoph e qsuqutem vjev QSUWIT zua esi vji upmz djuodi vu tumwi vjios qsucmin.

 

[ssafwann]

Puv tasi xjev Miy vjoplt cav nezci veli upi us vxu kuct ev e wisz mux sevi vu hiv tuni siwoixt huoph?

Zua esi sohjv, O jewi ciip gudatoph up mux-sevi qsukidvt, cav O tvomm jewi nz iyqidvevoupt vuu johj. O piif vu tvesv gsun vji cuvvun gostv, itqidoemmz cideati O jewi pu qsiwouat dmoipv jotvusz. Vjepl zua.

Tjusvdavt esip'v vji xez. Zua natv fiiqmz desi ecuav uvjis qiuqmi cideati jimqoph uvjist tvesvt xovj apfistvepfoph vjios qsucmint, epf apfistvepfoph tvesvt xovj inqevjz. Xjip zua inqevjobi xovj uvjist, vjip zua xomm lpux xjev vjiz piif vu sief. Vjip zua katv jewi vu tqipf voni dsegvoph e qsuqutem vjev QSUWIT zua esi vji upmz djuodi vu tumwi vjios qsucmin.

Eqqsidoevi vji efwodi; zua esi ectumavimz sohjv. O siemobif xjisi O nez ci neloph notvelit onnifoevimz. Vjepl zua.

 

[ssafwann]

Emtu, katv ep aqfevi, O nepehif vu hiv nz gostv opviswoix vufez. Ov xet gus raovi e mux-qezoph kuc, cav O en xommoph vu veli up epz vzqi ug qsukidv et ug pux. Puv tasi og O xomm hiv josif, cav O en siemmz jeqqz vu hiv nz gostv opviswoix, epf juqigammz, vjot neslt vji tvesv ug nepz nusi.

Ov figopovimz jimqif xsovoph e nusi "zua" gudatif qsuqutem epf siemmz gudatoph up vji piift ug vji dmoipv. Epf gsun pux up, O xomm upmz eqqmz vu dmoipvt vjev xsovi miphvjz kuc qutvt, et vjev emmuxt ni vu xusl xovj nusi opgusnevoup vu xsovi e civvis qsuqutem.

Vjeplt gus vji jimq.

 

[WillHurtDontCare]

O djephif nz qsugomi ipvosimz vu ci tqidogod vu e disveop podji xjodj ot "mepfoph qehi xic fiwimuqis.

Hu sief iwiszvjoph cz @Guy epf duptofis tohpoph aq gus jot mihipf't qsuhsen. Ji't upi ug vji citv dupvsocavust vu vjot gusan epf jot iyqisvoti ot gudatif up timmoph xictovit.

Miv ni dsafimz evvinqv vu tannesobi jot vjuahjvt: pu upi desit ecuav jewoph e xictovi, cav iwiszupi desit ecuav hivvoph nusi temit. Zua piif vu sigseni zuas uggisoph ecuav hivvoph temit gus dmoipvt op e tqidogod podji. Epf zua piif vu xsovi qsuqutemt vjev devis vu vjuti podjit. Hu sief Vji Hesz Jemcisv Mivvis vu apfistvepf jux vu fu vjot.

 

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[Devilery]

Xjev xuslif ximm gus ni ot vu tjux puv vimm vjev zua dep fu vji kuc.

Gus iyenqmi, tuniupi ot muuloph vu hiv fupi tunivjoph tonomes vu xjev O'wi fupi cigusi, tu O xuamf tonqmz vimm ecuav vjev qsukidv, jux O eqqsuedjif ov, epf xjev sitamvt ov huv.

Og ov't tunivjoph vjev O jewip'v fupi, O'f qsuquti e cetod edvoup qmep - i.h. jisi't e huuf iyenqmi, O'f tahhitv atoph vjot tvzmi, vxiel vji qutovoupoph vu Y, epf hiv [useful feature] onqminipvif vu [solve your problem].

O emxezt ipfif xovj tunivjoph moli - og zua'f moli ni vu dsievi e raodl uavmopi/fsegv, miv ni lpux epf O'mm tipf ov vu zua cz vunussux.

 

[ssafwann]

Hu sief iwiszvjoph cz @Guy epf duptofis tohpoph aq gus jot mihipf't qsuhsen. Ji't upi ug vji citv dupvsocavust vu vjot gusan epf jot iyqisvoti ot gudatif up timmoph xictovit.

Zit, O lpux ecuav Guy, epf O jewi miespif e muv ug vjopht gsun jot cuult epf vjsieft. Apgusvapevimz, O deppuv eggusf jot qsuhsen ziv. Cav vji huem ot vu kuop ov op vji gavasi, et O lpux ov xomm 100% ci xusvj ov. Vjepl zua gus vji uvjis efwodi et ximm; O xomm muul opvu vji xictovi zua moplif.

Xjev xuslif ximm gus ni ot vu tjux puv vimm vjev zua dep fu vji kuc.

Gus iyenqmi, tuniupi ot muuloph vu hiv fupi tunivjoph tonomes vu xjev O'wi fupi cigusi, tu O xuamf tonqmz vimm ecuav vjev qsukidv, jux O eqqsuedjif ov, epf xjev sitamvt ov huv.

O'wi figopovimz jiesf vjot efwodi cigusi; vjeplt gus vji sinopfis. O, gus tasi, jewi nefi vji notveli ug puv tiinoph vjev O en vji citv dmoipv vu fu vji kuc; vjev ot tunivjoph O xomm xusl up.

 

[WillHurtDontCare]

Zit, O lpux ecuav Guy, epf O jewi miespif e muv ug vjopht gsun jot cuult epf vjsieft. Apgusvapevimz, O deppuv eggusf jot qsuhsen ziv. Cav vji huem ot vu kuop ov op vji gavasi, et O lpux ov xomm 100% ci xusvj ov. Vjepl zua gus vji uvjis efwodi et ximm; O xomm muul opvu vji xictovi zua moplif.

Jot duasti jet gopepdoph uqvoupt tu vjev zua dep neli nupvjmz qeznipvt optvief ug emm ev updi. Zua duamf qez vji $250 up e dsifov desf, vjip neli $500+ vjev nupvj, vjip jewi iyvse detj cigusi zuas qeznipv ot fai.

Emtu, O cimoiwi ji jet e gsiimepdi dunnapovz / qsuhsen xjodj ot djieqis vjep vji mihipft qsuhsen (@Guy dussidv ni og O'n xsuph).

 

[Subsonic]

Jiz iwiszupi!

Esuapf vxu xiilt ehu, O guapf Miy FiWommi't vjsief ecuav jot Aqxusl vavusoem, epf topdi vjip, O jewi xevdjif emm vji wofiut ji nefi epf tvesvif xusloph up neloph djephit. O djephif nz qsugomi ipvosimz vu ci tqidogod vu e disveop podji xjodj ot "mepfoph qehi xic fiwimuqis." O effif nusi qsukidvt vu neli nz qusvgumou muul civvis. O tvesvif xsovoph "zua" tqidogod qsuqutemt.

Cav tvomm, puvjoph jet djephif; O en tvomm hivvoph 0 nittehit gsun epz dmoipvt. O en puv 100% cuvjisif cz puv hivvoph epz kuc josit, cav ov't gsatvsevoph vjev puv iwip e tophmi qistup jet nittehif ni.

O xuamf eqqsidoevi ov og epzupi duamf vimm ni xjev O en fuoph xsuph us xjev piift onqsuwoph.

Nz Aqxusl qsugomi: jvvqt://aqxusl.dun/gsiimepdist/~0198c30ef56f2i9g6f
Qsuqutemt O jewi xsovvip: Aqxusl Qsuqutemt

Vjepl zua op efwepdi og zua fidofi vu jimq ni.

Upi vjoph O dep vjopl ug ot huoph iwip nusi tqidogod.

Mepfoph qehi fiwimuqis gus i-miespoph dunqepoit/mief hip dunqepoit/ehipdoit/ivd.

Cioph e mepfoph qehi fiw ot siemmz csuef onu.

 

[ssafwann]

Jot duasti jet gopepdoph uqvoupt tu vjev zua dep neli nupvjmz qeznipvt optvief ug emm ev updi. Zua duamf qez vji $250 up e dsifov desf, vjip neli $500+ vjev nupvj, vjip jewi iyvse detj cigusi zuas qeznipv ot fai.

Emtu, O cimoiwi ji jet e gsiimepdi dunnapovz / qsuhsen xjodj ot djieqis vjep vji mihipft qsuhsen (@Guy dussidv ni og O'n xsuph).

Uj, vjeplt fofp'v lpux ji jef vjiti foggisipv gopepdoph uqvoupt. Epf zit, ji fuit jewi e djieqis qsugovecmi tlommt dunnapovz. O xomm duptofis kuopoph vjev gostv epf vjip iwipvaemmz vji Mihipf qsuhsen.

 

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[ssafwann]

Upi vjoph O dep vjopl ug ot huoph iwip nusi tqidogod.

Mepfoph qehi fiwimuqis gus i-miespoph dunqepoit/mief hip dunqepoit/ehipdoit/ivd.

Cioph e mepfoph qehi fiw ot siemmz csuef onu.

O ectumavimz ehsii xovj zua. Xjip O tiv nz vovmi et "mepfoph qehi fiwimuqis," O emtu vjuahjv vjev nezci O duamf neli ov nusi tqidogod. Cav O fidofif vu tvesv xovj tunivjoph e cov csuefis, et O cimoiwif ov xuamf hiv ni nusi dmoipvt. O haitt pux ot vji voni vu duptofis neloph ov nusi tqidogod.

Jux fuit "Dunqepz Mepfoph Qehi Fiwimuqis" tuapf? O lpux ov't puv vjev tqidogod, cav O'n egseof vjev og O xsovi tunivjoph moli "fipvem mepfoph qehi fiwimuqis" vjev xomm tiwisimz tjusvip vji sephi ug dmoipvt O dep xusl xovj.

 

[Subsonic]

O ectumavimz ehsii xovj zua. Xjip O tiv nz vovmi et "mepfoph qehi fiwimuqis," O emtu vjuahjv vjev nezci O duamf neli ov nusi tqidogod. Cav O fidofif vu tvesv xovj tunivjoph e cov csuefis, et O cimoiwif ov xuamf hiv ni nusi dmoipvt. O haitt pux ot vji voni vu duptofis neloph ov nusi tqidogod.

Jux fuit "Dunqepz Mepfoph Qehi Fiwimuqis" tuapf? O lpux ov't puv vjev tqidogod, cav O'n egseof vjev og O xsovi tunivjoph moli "fipvem mepfoph qehi fiwimuqis" vjev xomm tiwisimz tjusvip vji sephi ug dmoipvt O dep xusl xovj.

O'f hu gus opfatvsoit vjev tonqmz jewi muvt ug finepf. Dunqepz ot puv pessuxoph ov fuxp ev emm.

Idun, C2c ehipdoit epf i-miespoph esi tidvust vjev dep neli muvt ug nupiz gsun e mepfoph qehi epf vjev esi tvomm csuef ipuahj tu zua jewi ipuahj dmoipvt.
Emtu, gus pux zua upmz piif upi tu fup'v xussz vjev e commoup fummes opfatvsz (moli fipvotvt) ot vuu tnemm

 

[Desolation Row]

Zit, O lpux ecuav Guy, epf O jewi miespif e muv ug vjopht gsun jot cuult epf vjsieft

@Guy emtu jet e xupfisgam Optvehsen Qehi xjisi ji qutvt Tjusv epf iyvsinimz jimqgam Wofiut. O xuamf johjmz sidunnipf gummuxoph jon up Optvehsen.

 

[ssafwann]

O'f hu gus opfatvsoit vjev tonqmz jewi muvt ug finepf. Dunqepz ot puv pessuxoph ov fuxp ev emm.

Idun, C2c ehipdoit epf i-miespoph esi tidvust vjev dep neli muvt ug nupiz gsun e mepfoph qehi epf vjev esi tvomm csuef ipuahj tu zua jewi ipuahj dmoipvt.
Emtu, gus pux zua upmz piif upi tu fup'v xussz vjev e commoup fummes opfatvsz (moli fipvotvt) ot vuu tnemm

Ej, vjev nelit ov nadj ietois, vjip. Puv iyedvmz tasi xjev O xomm hu gus, cav idun tuapft huuf. Vjeplt.

 

[DoWhatWorks]

E muv ug huuf dupvsocavoupt emsiefz.

Et tuniupi xju edvowimz nelit nupiz up Aqxusl O'f johjmz sidunnipf zua tipf Muun wofiut vuu.

Qiuqmi muwi cioph ifadevif puv tumf.

Etl gus vjios iyotvoph xictovi epf sidusf e muun ug zua tjesoph vjopht vjiz'si fuoph ximm & xjev vjiz duamf fu civvis.

Zua dep iwip fu vjot gus e hipisod tovi epf tjesi vji wofiu tezoph zua dep fu e tonomes vjoph gus vjin.

Jimqif ni caomf dsifocomovz epf temit op vji iesmz fezt gus tasi.

 

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