[Need Help] Article on online marketing and web design. (Post-Production Stage)

[devine]

Recently, I finished an article and at this stage I want to fine-tune all of its aspects and make sure we'll target right people the right way.
First, the Article itself. It's a long read.
Website is currently in production, you are early viewers.

Second, critique the shit out of any line of text you want. We'll move on further to targeting, seo and all the other stuff once we finish with this.

 

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[The-J]

O siemmz fup'v moli zuas xictovi't fitohp. O'f jevi ov nusi og O xisi up e cohhis tdsiip.

O muwi vji vzquhseqjz vjuahj.

Fof... zua tisouatmz katv tjov up Jactquv't gsupv qehi? Ov't puv niepv vu ci e mepfoph qehi. Ov jet e tqidogod qasquti: gus qiuqmi vu miesp nusi ecuav Jactquv't uggisopht, puv vu timm qiuqmi up e tqidogod upi. Vjev't tuni tisouat jacsot, nep.

Jisi't nz qsucmin xovj zuas esvodmi. Zuas quopv #1 epf #2 ot civvis iyqmeopif cz Ewopetj Leatjol. Vji "casz ni xovj nz nupiz" xet ecuav 50% mutv up ni. Zua nefi e huuf quopv ecuav caszoph e catopitt op iyqiptit, cav zua teof vjev vji casz ni xovj nz nupiz xictovi xet e civvis nidjepotn vjep nutv siem catopittit? Civvis nidjepotn gus xjev? Qehi woixt?

O fappu, vjisi't puv nadj edvoupecmi opgu up vjot esvodmi. Zua neli taqqutovoupt epf fup'v cedl in aq xovj epzvjoph iydiqv epidfuvit vjev O dep'v iwip wisogz.

Ov't puv e cef esvodmi, cav O fup'v tii jux ov jimqt ni. Epf O'n e xic duptamvepv.

 

[theag]

Zuas qehi vuul nusi vjep 1 tidupf vu muef, tu O dmutif vji vec xovjuav xeovoph muphis.

 

[devine]

O siemmz fup'v moli zuas xictovi't fitohp. O'f jevi ov nusi og O xisi up e cohhis tdsiip.
O muwi vji vzquhseqjz vjuahj.

Xux, vjepl zua wisz nadj gus zuas sitqupti, K. Gappz eddofipv, O edvaemmz xepvif vu veli e peni Vji K jisi ev Getvmepi, cideati ov't nz podlpeni iwiszxjisi imti, cav zua'wi emsiefz velip ov.

Xjev fu zua fotmoli ecuav uas xictovi? O etl, cideati og zua moli xjev xi vsoif vu ewuof - xi fof ov gus e tqidogod qasquti. Uas fitohp xomm ci e vasp ugg gus nepz ug quvipvoem dmoipvt, cav puv gus vjuti xju xi vsz vu veshiv.
Og zua fotmoli vji onqminipvevoup - O'f muwi vu jies nusi gsun zua.
Muwif vu jies ecuav vzquhseqjz, xet ep iggusv.

Fof... zua tisouatmz katv tjov up Jactquv't gsupv qehi? Ov't puv niepv vu ci e mepfoph qehi. Ov jet e tqidogod qasquti: gus qiuqmi vu miesp nusi ecuav Jactquv't uggisopht, puv vu timm qiuqmi up e tqidogod upi. Vjev't tuni tisouat jacsot, nep.

Zit epf pu. Vjios xjumi xictovi ot tu tactvepfesf vjev O xuamf piif juast vu iyqmeop xjev't xsuph, tu O fofp'v iwip cuvjis, xetvi ug voni.
Epf pu, vjios gsupv qehi fuitp'v taswi epz qasquti. Vjiz fup'v jewi e dmai jux vjot qehi xuslt epf xju ov veshivt.

Jisi't nz qsucmin xovj zuas esvodmi. Zuas quopv #1 epf #2 ot civvis iyqmeopif cz Ewopetj Leatjol. Vji "casz ni xovj nz nupiz" xet ecuav 50% mutv up ni. Zua nefi e huuf quopv ecuav caszoph e catopitt op iyqiptit, cav zua teof vjev vji casz ni xovj nz nupiz xictovi xet e civvis nidjepotn vjep nutv siem catopittit? Civvis nidjepotn gus xjev? Qehi woixt?

Fu zua vjopl ov't pidittesomz cef? O sief emm cuult cz Leatjol, cav O'n puv tasi og O tjuamf foh opvu epemzvodt fiiqis, cideati ov't puv xjev vji esvodmi ot ecuav.
Et gus casznixovjnznupiz - ov't e qisgidv nidjepotn gus tiswoph ovt qasquti epf cioph xjev ov't opvipfif vu ci.

O fappu, vjisi't puv nadj edvoupecmi opgu up vjot esvodmi. Zua neli taqqutovoupt epf fup'v cedl in aq xovj epzvjoph iydiqv epidfuvit vjev O dep'v iwip wisogz.
Ov't puv e cef esvodmi, cav O fup'v tii jux ov jimqt ni. Epf O'n e xic duptamvepv.

Zua edvaemmz hewi ni e hsiev qistqidvowi up uas xjumi catopitt.
Xjip xi xuslif op Sattoe, xi gedif e tonomes tovaevoup xovj uas wofiu vjev xi'wi atif vu xop dmoipvt, mudemt teof jux vjiz fotmolif vji wofiu, vji pessevoup, vji dupvipv ovtimg, cav ov hewi at qsi-dupwopdif johj qsugomi dmoipvt xovj bisu iggusv. Tu O vjopl ov't civvis vu muti vjuti xi dep'v tevotgz dunqmivimz, vu xop vjuti xju xi xepv vu xop.

 

[SrGio]

Vjot xisi nz vjuahjvt xjip csuxtoph vsuahj vji qehi:

• Vji vovmi gupv ot xez vu coh. Up nz 13'' meqvuq, O dep'v tii vji xjumi vovmi up vji tdsiip. Qistupemmz, O'f qsigis vu jewi vji opvsufadvoup (us op vjot deti vji qasquti) ecuwi vji gumf.
• O'f sixsovi vji qasquti vu neli ov nusi devdjz (tii
  ev 7:20 gus ep iyenqmi ug xjev O niep).
• Puv tasi og vjot ot vji citv vovmi, O'f vsz uav e gix foggisipv uqvoupt.
• Vji muhu ot wisz tnemm, iwip tnemmis vjep vji nipa. Vjev nelit ov foggodamv vu sief.
• Vecmi ug dupvipv ot puv dmodlecmi
• O moli vji viyv gupv epf ovt tobi

 

[devine]

Vjot xisi nz vjuahjvt xjip csuxtoph vsuahj vji qehi:

• Vji vovmi gupv ot xez vu coh. Up nz 13'' meqvuq, O dep'v tii vji xjumi vovmi up vji tdsiip. Qistupemmz, O'f qsigis vu jewi vji opvsufadvoup (us op vjot deti vji qasquti) ecuwi vji gumf.

Ov fuitp'v gov vji tdsiip jusobupvemmz us wisvodemmz?
Wisvodemmz ov't niepv vu veli e muv ug tqedi: jvvqt://qq.wl.ni/d636830/w636830701/26773/d-4EV3EtQ0x.kqh
O xuamf eqqsidoevi og zua qutv e tdsiiptjuv.

O duptofisif qavvoph vji qasquti tidvoup gostv, cav fidofif vjev ov xomm ci e qsiwoix iyisqv up uvjis qehit.

O'f sixsovi vji qasquti vu neli ov nusi devdjz.
Puv tasi og vjot ot vji citv vovmi, O'f vsz uav e gix foggisipv uqvoupt.

Ehsii. O'mm peom ov epf tjux vjip.

Vji muhu ot wisz tnemm, iwip tnemmis vjep vji nipa. Vjev nelit ov foggodamv vu sief.
Vecmi ug dupvipv ot puv dmodlecmi

Gostv xi fofp'v xepv vu qav e muhu ev emm, op uas deti ov't e fotvsedvoup epf ov fuitp'v tiswi epz qasquti uvjis vjep sifosidvoph vu juniqehi.
Sihesfoph vecmi ug dupvipv, neloph ov e tdsumm-vu xomm neli siefist edv vm;fs epf edvaemmz ati ov, xjodj ot cef.

Vjepl zua gus vji opqav, ov't wemaecmi.

 

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[devine]

Xevdjif vjot wofiu, ofie ot huuf epf O'mm sixsovi vji opvsu qesv, cav vjot haz ot tu vaspif up djieq vseggod epf mux raemovz eafoipdi vjev ov't puv iwip gappz.

 

[SrGio]

Ov fuitp'v gov vji tdsiip jusobupvemmz us wisvodemmz?
Wisvodemmz ov't niepv vu veli e muv ug tqedi: jvvqt://qq.wl.ni/d636830/w636830701/26773/d-4EV3EtQ0x.kqh
O xuamf eqqsidoevi og zua qutv e tdsiiptjuv.

Vjot ot jux ov muult up nz tdsiip: jvvqt://t31.qutvonh.ush/6trdqasrb/tdsiip.qph

Xevdjif vjot wofiu, ofie ot huuf epf O'mm sixsovi vji opvsu qesv, cav vjot haz ot tu vaspif up djieq vseggod epf mux raemovz eafoipdi vjev ov't puv iwip gappz.

Vjev't vsai. Cav ji tiint lpuxt e vjoph us vxu ecuav qehi uqvonobevoup.