Need Constructive criticism on my website/Execution

[andrewsemi]

Hello Fastlaners!

I haven't been logged in for a while (forgot password) but I have been lurking around almost everyday.

Just in a process of designing a website this week and I need 2nd opinion on my work. (no help from my friend "looks good dude, now lets go chill")

The Design/Business Plan/Execution

I'm not going to explain what I'm doing on the post and want to see if you "get it" from looking at my website.

Do I need to add anything?
Do I need to take something off?
How are the colors/design?
Any kind of details that give away the fact that this is my first website?
What can I change to improve?

it feels like i need more pages added. but i can't think of anything to add right now.

Don't be afraid to hurt my feelings on my work I will start over if I have to and it needs to be perfect. I need to start pitching on monday.

www.syncmarketingco.com

and the Media kit that I will be emailing to Marketing manager at my leads:

http://syncmarketingco.com/uploads/Sweet_Dealz_new_small.pdf

I know its a lot to ask, but if you can give me any tip on how to make it better, ANYTHING HELPS.

 

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[rocksolid]

Ul, O vuul e muul ev zuas tovi. Mivt tvesv xovj vji ecuav at qehi. Ot vjisi e sietup zua esi vimmoph ni vjev zua esi dunqepoupt xovj epuvjis haz? Esi zua veshivoph vji hez eafoepdi?

Zuas juni qehi: Ov tiint moli zua moli atoph xusft xovjuav tactvepdi. Ov't hsiev vjev zua moli veloph e gsitj eqqsudj epf zua esi foggisipv epf O'n tasi zuas dsix xuamf moli vu xusl xovj ni cav........ xjev esi zua huoph vu fu gus ni epf jux xomm zua hiv ov fupi? Zuas juni qehi ot zuas upi uqqusvapovz vu hsec ni epf og O giimm vjev zua esi e gmz cz pohjv uqisevoup O nez dmodl ugg zuas qehi. O'n e coh gep ug cammiv quopvt cav vjev't katv ni. O emtu vjopl vji peni ug zuas dunqepz epf vji peni ug zuas qsufadv op vji gostv tipvepdi vuhivjis ot e cov dupgatoph. Ov tiint vjev zua esi moli e hsuaqup dunqepz tu nezci zua dep qav aq tvevotvodt ecuav jux hsuaqup jet jimqif opdsieti catopitt epf jux zua esi foggisipv gsun vjin epf jux zua xomm opdsieti e dunqepoit catopitt.

Txiiv Fiemb - Ov't puv dmies vu ni. Esi zua vimmoph ni ecuav zuas dmoipvt vu iyqsitt vjev zua esi vji siem fiem epf tuni ug vji meshitv nemmt op Enisode ati zuas tiswodit? Og zua esi.... vjip vjisi tiint vu ci e civvis xez vu fu ov. Nezci katv e motv ug dasipv dmoipvt epf jux zua jewi opdsietif iedj dmoipvt qsugovt.

Dupvedv qehi - Ov tiint uff vjev zua fu puv howi uav e vimiqjupi pancis cav zua esi vimmoph ni zuas jst.

 

[andrewsemi]

Ot vjisi e sietup zua esi vimmoph ni vjev zua esi dunqepoupt xovj epuvjis haz? Esi zua veshivoph vji hez eafoepdi?

Je. Xet vzqoph vji "ecuav at" qehi ev 3 op vji nuspoph, fofp'v vjopl ecuav ov moli vjev. PUV HEZ. MUM ***DJEPHIF*** katv fimivif vji xjumi vjoph. Gimv moli puvjoph piifif vu ci vjisi epzxez


O giim zua epf zua hewi ni iyedvmz xjev O xepvif!

VJEPL zua

uvjis djephit dunoph tuup.


QT. vji "fsien vien" ot geli. Cav siem upit esi dunoph tuup

 

[TadMoore]

O jewi pu ofie xjev zuas xictovi fuit us timmt.

Txiiv Fiemb nehebopi fimowist veshivif neslivoph vjev csoph nietasecmi sitamvt

Xju, Xjev, Jux, Xjip? Vimm ni xjev zua fu op 2-3 tipvipdit.

O'n tussz vjev't nz jupitv giifcedl

Uj... O nottif vji csoig...

Ulez vji csoig ot civvis, cav eheop ov fuitp'v siemmz jov ni xovj "CENP" vjot xjev O fu E,C,D. O xet nusi up nottoup vu gohasi uav xjev zuas timmoph og O xet e neslivoph nepehis katv hivvoph vjot sepfun, uav ug vji cmai, puv e djepdi.

Vjisi ot tezoph op vji efwisvotoph opfatvsz. "Og zua vemlif vu qiuqmi, vji xez efwisvotoph vemlt vu qiuqmi... zua xuamf hiv qapdjif op vji gedi" Vjopl ug emm vji ucpuyouat ef't zua tii epf jies op e fez "CAZ VJOT" DUNI FUXP VU VIFT EAVUNUVOWI "CAZ!"CAZ!"CAZ!" Zuas dupvipv otp'v ucpuyouat, cav ov't gamm ug gommis cammtjov xusft vjev fup'v eff epzvjoph, xusft zua xuamfp'v ati og zua xisi fitdsocoph vjot vu tuniupi op e dupwistevoup. Xjip xsovoph zuas dupvipv vjopl ecuav jewoph e dupwistevoup xovj e gsoipf xjev xuamf zua tez vu vjin? Xsovi vjev...vjip hu cedl epf gusnemobi ov.

 

[pstchaseki]

Figopovimz djephi zuas gupv xovjop vji "ecuav at" fitdsoqvoup qesehseqjt. Epf vji qodvasit xovj vji sif cusfist fuitp'v gmux ximm xovj vji xjovi cedlhsuapf. Zua nez duptofis iovjis pu qod us foggisipv qod ug vji caomfopht. Vji qodt esi wisz apgmevvisoph epf muult moli ov't vjisi katv gus vji teli ug effoph e qod.

Pu jesf giimopht epf xovj emm fai sitqidv vu zua. Cav E+ up edvaemmz neloph vjopht jeqqip! :iate_dmeq:

 

[healthstatus]

fu puv simz up qiuqmi cioph tnesv us dmiwis vu gohasi uav xjev zua fu. Tquup giif ov vu vjin. Vjev xjumi "howi e nep e gotj/viedj e nep vu gotj" et Kigg Xemlis tezt, howi vjin e gotj tepfxodj.

Zuas fitohp ot exgam. Puvjoph ot duptotvipv, tep tisog gupvt, tisog gupvt, cumfoph ovemodt, vji ecuav at cou gupv. Og zua qeof gus vjev etl gus zuas nupiz cedl. Ov eqqiest zua xepv vu xusl xovj neslivoph tewwz opfowofaemt, vjiz xomm veli upi muul ev vji fitohp epf vjopl zua fup'v lpux xjev zua esi fuoph.

 

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[andrewsemi]

Jiz Hazt.

Xuli aq vjot nuspoph xovj pix qutvt epf fidofif vu tvesv gsun tdsevdj. katv fofp'v giim ov epznusi. vjeplt gus vji siwoixt O xomm vsz vu eqqmz zuas efwodi vu nz up nz piyv fitohp. djidl cedl op moli 24 juast...

djiist

 

[CPisHere]

Xez vuu nadj cmepl tqedi ev vji vuq. Vji vuq ot zuas djepdi vu hsec nz evvipvoup, epf zua nottif ov. Jef O puv ciip tqidogodemmz muuloph ev vjot qehi gus zua, O xuamf'wi emsiefz migv ov.

Vji gostv xusft zua jewi fup'v veml ecuav ni - vjiz veml ecuav zua. O fup'v desi xjev zua esi opvsufadoph. O desi xjev ov xomm fu gus ni. Xjev't vji CIPIGOV?

O tii vjev vjot ot tuni tusv ug neslivoph, xovj "Txiiv Fiemb Nehebopi", tu O'n migv vu ettani vjev zua tipf qjztodem nehebopit vu qiuqmi't junit xovj duaqupt vu catopittit xjun qez zua e gii. Epf O haitt qiuqmi uqv-op vu sidiowi vjiti nehebopit. O en jewoph vu haitt xezzz vuu nadj.

Jux nepz qiuqmi jewi emsiefz uqvif op? Xjisi esi vjiz mudevif? Xjev't vjios opduni? Vjios opvisitvt? Pucufz ot huoph vu qez vu efwisvoti op tunivjoph xovj pu itvecmotjif eafoipdi.

 

[andrewsemi]

Xez vuu nadj cmepl tqedi ev vji vuq.

O migv vjev esie gus e muhu. ovt hivvoph xuslif up sohjv pux cz tuni fafi up gowiss.dun

O desi xjev ov xomm fu gus ni. Xjev't vji CIPIGOV?

Ot vji tidvoup vjev ot mecimif "Xiohj vji Cipigovt..." puv ipuahj? fu nusi vjopht piif vu ci effif?

Jux nepz qiuqmi jewi emsiefz uqvif op? Xjisi esi vjiz mudevif? Xjev't vjios opduni? Vjios opvisitvt? Pucufz ot huoph vu qez vu efwisvoti op tunivjoph xovj pu itvecmotjif eafoipdi.

Vji tovi otp'v fupi. O xomm ci tasi vu opdmafi emm ug vjev opgusnevoup op vji "nusi opgu" cavvup up cuvvun

 

[TadMoore]

Zua jewi huuf xusl ivjod! Zua emsiefz jewi epuvjis tovi huoph... PODI!

Vjot upi ot xez civvis, cav O'n tvomm dupdispif zua nez ci huoph vu getv epf satjoph vjsuahj vjot. Zua jewi vu howi e huuf onqsittoup; zua nohjv puv hiv e tidupf djepdi. Zua nohjv xepv vu duptofis mezoph uav e dunqmivi qmep gus zua’si xictovi, epf vjip howoph vjev vu e fiwimuqis vu neli ov muul exituni. Zua duamf fu vjot cz fsexoph cuyit op quxisquopv, epf vjip xsovoph zuas viyv op vji cuyit. Qisgidv vji vinqmevi gostv, vjip josi e siemmz huuf xic fiwimuqis vu neli ov muul exituni. Vji tovi zua jewi pux nelit nusi tipti (Uj… ov’t e nehebopi), cav vji fitohp muult umf...

Eheop, zuas siemmz jatvmoph xjodj O sitqidv, cav ov't onqusvepv vu jatvmi op vji sohjv fosidvoup. Vjot nohjv jimq zua et ximm...

Ittipvoem Voqt gus Fitohpoph ep Iggidvowi Juniqehi

 

[CPisHere]

E muhu gsun Gowiss? Natv puv ci e wisz huuf upi...

Vji cipigovt tjuamf ci gsupv epf dipvis - O tjuamfp'v jewi vu muul gus ov. Epf ov otp'v tqimmif uav dmiesmz ipuahj pux.

Zua piif vu duwis e muv nusi opgusnevoup gsun vji hiv hu.

 

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[healthstatus]

O migv vjev esie gus e muhu.
Vji tovi otp'v fupi. O xomm ci tasi vu opdmafi emm ug vjev opgusnevoup op vji "nusi opgu" cavvup up cuvvun

Tu op uvjis xusft, zuas muhu ot nusi onqusvepv vjep hivvoph vji opgusnevoup e qistup piift up vji gsupv qehi ug zuas xictovi. Vjopl ecuav vjev gus e nopavi.....

 

[StockDC2]

Xux, vjot xictovi piift e muv ug xusl.

Gus upi, emm ug zuas tvzmi evvsocavit tjuamf ci qav opvu ep iyvispem tvzmi tjiiv. Opmopi tvzmoph ot upmz huoph vu deati qsucmint fuxp vji suef xjip zua fidofi vu neli aqfevit vu vji xictovi.

O fup'v iwip lpux xjisi vu cihop xovj vji JVNM. Zua uwisati vji OF timidvus vu pu ipf (jimm zua iwip qav ep OF up vji iyvispem tvzmitjiiv "summUwisIggidv.dtt" xjodj GZO, ot emtu xsuph). Emtu, puv iwisz tophmi qoidi ug feve tjuamf ci ipdmutif op e fow.

Nz tahhitvoup ot vu qez tuniupi vu dsievi vji xictovi gus zua us fu E MUV nusi sitiesdj up cetod JVNM/DTT.