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Need advice to help my retail site convert traffic into sales!

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This is how you sell knives for four figures:
Jay Fisher: Knife Maker, Artist, Photographer, Writer; Home Page

Now, this website "template" is about a decade+ old, but the pictures of the knives are awesome and the text is awesome. He spends tens of thousands of words describing why these knives are worth paying several grand for vs. buying something at a convenience store for $5.

Fisher's wait list to buy a customer knife is YEARS long (48 months).

That's how you sell a $3,000 knife.

Your site should have a similar page about the glories of a fabulous knife for food prep:
The Finest Knives

Why should I spend thousands on kitchen knives? Here's how Jay explains why to spend thousands on his tactical knives:

Top twenty reasons Jay Fisher knives are worth your money

The first thing you have to have is a knife that is worth $3000.00. The world in general knows very little about knives, and about fine knives, they know even less. By educating the public with realistic facts on why a knife is worth $3000.00 and not $300, is essential, but first you have to have a knife that is worth it! A factory made Japanese knife that is sold on the "Japanese fighting spirit" does not evoke either quality or experiential distinctions. Heartbeat of nations? Mystery? What the heck is it made of? How is it made and by whom? That's not a manufactured knife, is it? Do you really want to know why a knife sells for $3000.00? Two reasons: a client recognizes the value, and he can afford it. A guy that will drop 3k on a knife generally KNOWS KNIVES and knows the difference between a handmade work of investment grade art, and a knife that is manufactured in a foreign factory. No matter how good the ad copy, if you don't have a viable, established product and a proven record (16th century sword-smiths non-withstanding), you may sell some of them, but you won't have a successful business. I could go on and on (and often do), but I'll stop; you probably don't want to hear from a real knifemaker who's been at it for 30 years... About my old website: yes, it's just photos and words, a little PHP, and no CGI or Java, trickster CSS, or mousovers, or any of the gizmos that people use to get the attention. Just facts, photos, and realistic comparisons and 3 million hits a month. And, currently, I'm five years in backorders, and out of time for this post. Seems SEO is not so complex after all.
 
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Sushi Knifes So Sharp They Can Slice Flavor From A Single Atom

If You Have Ever Wanted To Make Divine Sushi Like the Master, and Totally Impress Your Date, Then Then These Knifes Will Lay Bare Your Ultimate Desire
What Do the Worlds Best Sushi Knifes And Dating Have In Common? I will tell you in just a minute, but first Let me introduce you to the "sushi Lifestyle" Where a California roll, is when every one rolls their eyes when you order. If you are a burst on fire, Leave No Nori unturned passionate about sushi lover, then you may have just stumbled upon the best kept secret in making sushi outside of the Edo District.

Get a good book on writing copy. pay 100 buck over at elance. get a new wordpress theme that is a store based theme, get your ugly mug off the home page. no one cares. make this a curation site, run some ppc and facebook ads to target your keywords before you do an ounce of SEO.

remember when someone comes to the site, its about them, and what they want, not you.

are you looking for the sharpest sushi knifes in the universe? I may have just the thing for you... Sharp enough to split atoms.....

good luck
 
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Well frankly, the first part of your whole sites home page need to be thrown out. (this is just my opinion)

Just your first line alone.

Too wordy, Too plain, your giving a phone number to ask questions for something they know nothing about yet. Your telling them you accept paypal.. who cares.. you need to get them to yes, and they will pay by any way necessary.

Your first line should read.. The best Sushi Knifes on the Planet.. (or something to that effect in huge bold letters)

You want to make sushi like the pro's you need the right tools:

Here are three quick videos that will turn you into a sushi god...

Click to play. Make a video about your best selling knife, but explain how to make a certain type of sushi.

Etc etc..
 

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Why should I buy now if in the future I'll get a better guarantee?
 

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why does everyone make life so difficult?



GTC maybe your product is great and will sell, maybe even at its best it will not sell, but doing what your doing is not clarifying anything because the presentation sucks.

Think about a snuggie, if it was not marketed correctly it would never sell. This is the same with your knives.

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go there and pay the 1k, 2k whatever it is get it done right by someone with proven conversion numbers.

Once the look is done your now about 2% on your way to success. If you can not move quickly and get things done your in trouble, you are wasting your time right now with what your doing.

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a website is the difference between a good salesman and a bad one, a good one can close and a bad one loses his job.


And the before you comment, do not tell me you dont have the money...i do not want to here that.
 

Jeremy

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This is how you sell knives for four figures:
Jay Fisher: Knife Maker, Artist, Photographer, Writer; Home Page

Now, this website "template" is about a decade+ old, but the pictures of the knives are awesome and the text is awesome. He spends tens of thousands of words describing why these knives are worth paying several grand for vs. buying something at a convenience store for $5.

Fisher's wait list to buy a customer knife is YEARS long (48 months).

That's how you sell a $3,000 knife.

Your site should have a similar page about the glories of a fabulous knife for food prep:
The Finest Knives

Why should I spend thousands on kitchen knives? Here's how Jay explains why to spend thousands on his tactical knives:

Top twenty reasons Jay Fisher knives are worth your money
 

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GTC...
I think some basic tweaks to your design in Big Commerce (using their point and click tools) could make a major difference. Right now it looks like you are trying to steal peoples money. To charge 3k for a knife you bet your a$$ you better make it look high-end. (Or at least current!)

I can help you make basic tweaks to it through the Big Commerce back-end. In my slowlane life I'm a web designer at an agency (no 99 designs here). We design and dev large corporate sites.

I won't charge you to make basic changes to it. PM me if you want.

I think if you clean it up it could go a long way!!!
After you clean it up using existing design tools/options, tweak your marketing copy, improve your videos and imagery.... and make some SALES, you can pour some cash into branding and a custom site.

In an unrelated question, how did you decide to sell sushi knives?
Did you see a need in the marketplace? Or did you notice they had a high margin and thought you could make quick cash?
 

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Jayfisher.. Thanks for posting, I for one like your site, I like your knifes...

Just a few months ago one of my friends showed and explained to me why he paid $16,000 for a knife..


I had no idea, then he showed me several more he had.


You are an artist.
 
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GTC1187

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Okay, around 11 weeks after building the site I have SEO traction and one of my keywords is now on Page 1 of Google. I am on the first page for "sushi knives" and the rest of my keywords are on page 2 with one flyer on page 5.
 
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GTC1187

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Hello, I recently started a new retail site called Home Page
I got over 30 hits my first day without any SEO, the question is, what can I do to increase my conversion ratio?
Any help would be awesome! Thanks guys!

Grant
 
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GTC1187

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And also, how to I get my page to stop saying homepage like it is up there? It says Home Page instead of anything else when it shows up in Google. I apologize for my lack of web savvy. :)
 

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Hello, I recently started a new retail site called Home Page
I got over 30 hits my first day without any SEO, the question is, what can I do to increase my conversion ratio?
Any help would be awesome! Thanks guys!

Grant

I would put call to action buttons on the home page under the pictures that say "Buy This Knife"

That should get you started...
 

iCashChex

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In the <head> section of your website, it will say <title>Homepage</title>. Change the word Homepage to whatever you want, and it will update automatically.
 

GTC1187

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Okay guys, I added a few things!
I added a picture and intend to add an intro video on the homepage.
I also added a blog, informative articles section, and a video section. I also added a section describing the origin of our products.
What do you think?
 

GTC1187

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I also coined a new phrase for the site, Sushi Lifestyle!
The exclamation point sets it off i think, what a relevant and exciting meme right? ;)
 
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Take some time to review the knives. Put up videos of unboxing and discuss the benefits of the manufacturers materials and the properties of the knives. What is it best used for and maybe even put up a section on proper techniques for use.

Being honest, the site's a little bland. Color it up a bit.
 

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You need to rethink this entire site, to convert.

1. No call to action..

2. Make the pics into a videos on how to use..

3. Hire someone on elance to make your site look right. I bet for a few 100 bucks, someone could make it look great.

Good Luck..
 

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Okay, I just totally revamped the content on my site! I'm looking into a better template, but I'm short on funds at this point.
I changed every page on the site to be more "grabbing" and there is a strong call to action on every page!

What do you think?
 

GTC1187

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Thanks bio, I'll change that ASAP!
anything else you could think of? I haven't even made one sale yet and I'm almost at 200 hits...
 
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Not to burst your bubble, but my guess, you can get 10,000 hits or a million and you will not sell a single Knife.

You have a long, long, long.. ways to go. Your site just does not sell.

Sorry. If it was just so easy we would all be rich.

Take a few days off and think about it.

Not a bad idea, just your execution sucks bad..
 

GTC1187

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Okay, I appreciate everything guys.
Over the next few days I will be transferring hosting of my domain from GoDaddy to Wordpress and I am going to get a nice store based template and download a shopping cart plugin called osCommerce.
Hopefully the cleaner, less sketchy site plus the strong calls to action all over the site will get some sales. I will update this thread.
 

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The problem with your site at this point is that is very hard to buy from you.

Home page has a few monster photo's that dwarf the buttons at the top. Once I had scrolled downward I was completely bewildered what this site was about. I hadn't even noticed the top row of buttons until I thought that this site must have a shop section somewhere. Then I started to look at found the buttons at the top.

One of your next actions should be to create vertical columns on your home page that contain combinations of small pictures with text. Let them click on a link that goes to a product page or to a shop page, but place the buttons somewhere to the right of the big pictures.

The big pictures can be made somewhat smaller.

Also, include a special temporary discount on your homepage with an action button.

Question. Where do you get the knives? Do you have them in stock?
(Don't worry about competition, I am in Europe)
 
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They have to be special ordered from Japan generally. It takes awhile too.
Basically, I have recruited a Japanese speaker with sales skills and experience to push my products to restaurants and I have a guy with his own web design/marketing company that is willing to work with me on a default payment basis. We should have the new site up within the next 3 days and looking sharp!
 

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So many things that can be improved.

First, I think your target audience is not experts, right? So, drop those wierd menu names. People will not understand, and it makes the whole navigation confusing and fustrating. Create more user friendly names. Invent your own categories...

"We Have The Best Sushi Knives On The Planet!"
What defines a great sushi knife? That's what should be there. Drop your features. Write the benefits. Go for the emotion feelings. Tell users what a great sushi they can make with the RIGHT knife.


"Be Sure To Like Sushi Knife Store On Facebook And Follow Us On Twitter!"


Why the hell should I "Like" your page? Drop that 'social media' B.S.

UNLESS you change that for this:

Find out delicious (and healthy) sushi recipes that will make your mouth water at our Facebook page. Click here.


Wish you luck
 

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Use smaller fonts, and add border to the site so it isn't stretched in all the window. Most sites are centered in the browser and have certain width.

To get some design inspiration go to Web Creme | Web design inspiration ;)
 
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Let me save you a few years of headaches. Dont use OScommerce, keep your domain at godaddy (not sure what your talking about moving it to wordpress??) get some hosting at like hostgator or some equivalent, then get magneto or even go with a hosted solution like bigcommerce.com (you wouldnt need hosting, just point your domain at their servers). Start with templates and make them work with your sites purpose. That will save you most of the wasted time.
 

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Sushi Knifes So Sharp They Can Slice Flavor From A Single Atom

If You Have Ever Wanted To Make Divine Sushi Like the Master, and Totally Impress Your Date, Then Then These Knifes Will Lay Bare Your Ultimate Desire
What Do the Worlds Best Sushi Knifes And Dating Have In Common? I will tell you in just a minute, but first Let me introduce you to the "sushi Lifestyle" Where a California roll, is when every one rolls their eyes when you order. If you are a burst on fire, Leave No Nori unturned passionate about sushi lover, then you may have just stumbled upon the best kept secret in making sushi outside of the Edo District.

Seriously, this is really good sales copy. Why hasn't this been incorporated into your site?

To be quite honest, your site makes my eyes hurt and the copy does not make me want to buy. The knives might be so sharp I'll never forget them, but your copy was so dull I had to recheck your home page to remember your pitch. It did not have me reaching for my purse.... the thought of slicing flavor from a single atom had me pulling out my credit card though. And you best believe that's a memorable line.

Please pay someone or sweet talk a friend with some experience in this area to help you out.
 

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