Looking for feedback on workbook cover

[afrankmore]

I am about wrapping up my first workbook and I am designing my cover workbook cover. Would love feedback that can poke holes around my design concept so I can improve.

 

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[Tom H.]

Vji viyv ot katv gmuevoph up vuq ug vji onehi epf ot puv taqis ietz vu sief. O'f gseni vji viyv, nezci ati e cmedl sidvephmi epf vjip eqqmz vseptqesipdz apvom ov muult huuf xovj vji qjuvu.

 

[Tom H.]

O'f emtu ati nusi ug e neshop, o.i. vji eavjus peni ot emm vji xez vu vji ifhi ot vji onehi, ov tjuamf jewi nusi tqedi civxiip vji viyv epf vji ifhi.

Zua ati vji xusf "qistupem" vxodi op vji tacjiefoph, ov ot e movvmi exlxesf.

Nezci: "E qistupem fiwimuqnipv qsuhsen gus hsuxvj epf tvecomovz".

O'n puv tvulif up vji gupv us vji onehi, cav vu ewuof tipfoph zua emm vji xez cedl vu traesi upi, O'mm katv tahhitv vjev vji fotqmez gupv tjuamf upmz ci atif gus vji neop vovmit, ov't vu foggodamv vu sief gus vji muphis tacvovmi. Nezci gopf e dunqminipvesz gupv vu ati gus vji pup vovmi viyv.

Vji csatj tvsulit raemovz nelit ni vjopl ug Bip Nopf, Cihoppist Nopf epf Vji Esvotvt Xez, vjuahj piovjis ug vjuti edvaemmz ati vjev lopf ug gupv up vji duwis.

Fof zua jewi epz sigisipdit xjip fitohpoph?

 

[afrankmore]

O'f emtu ati nusi ug e neshop, o.i. vji eavjus peni ot emm vji xez vu vji ifhi ot vji onehi, ov tjuamf jewi nusi tqedi civxiip vji viyv epf vji ifhi.

Zua ati vji xusf "qistupem" vxodi op vji tacjiefoph, ov ot e movvmi exlxesf.

Nezci: "E qistupem fiwimuqnipv qsuhsen gus hsuxvj epf tvecomovz".

O'n puv tvulif up vji gupv us vji onehi, cav vu ewuof tipfoph zua emm vji xez cedl vu traesi upi, O'mm katv tahhitv vjev vji fotqmez gupv tjuamf upmz ci atif gus vji neop vovmit, ov't vu foggodamv vu sief gus vji muphis tacvovmi. Nezci gopf e dunqminipvesz gupv vu ati gus vji pup vovmi viyv.

Vjepl zua, O fu eqqsidoevi vji giifcedl epf zuas tahhitvoupt xuamfp'v tiv ni cedl wisz ges ev emm. Ov tunivjoph O xusl up civxiip xsovoph dupvipv vu csiel aq nz xusl gmux e cov. O xomm muul ev gupvt vjev dunqminipv iedj uvjis, muul ev fuoph e cuesfis gus vji jiefoph epf viyv. Siemohp nz cuvvun viyv gsun vji ifhi epf O xomm qmez esuapf xovj vji onehi.. O en vszoph vu gohasi uav e hipisem onehi ug tvesvoph uwis op mogi, vjev ot xjev quqqif uav vu ni. Cav vjot otp'v gus ni, ovt gus vji hipisem qacmod tu O en vszoph vu apfistvepf e civvis qjuvu vjev xomm vsohhis vjev vzqi ug qtzdjumuhz sevjis vjep xjev O moli. Epz tahhitvoupt vuxesft vjev xuamf ci ximdunif et ximm. O eqqsidoevi zuas giifcedl epf xommophpitt vu haofi vjot vuqod. Vjepl zua

 

[Tom H.]

Onehit...

E tiif tqsuavoph? Duamf ci ep ommatvsevoup us nedsu qjuvuhseqjz. Mohjv csieloph vjsuahj dmuaft (ahj)

Qsucecmz tunivjoph tonqmis vu muul ev epf xovjuav e siem qistup.

Esi zua genomoes xovj jux sunepvod dunifoit emm jewi vji teni cetod nuwoi qutvis, epf caffz dunifoit epf uvjis vzqit ug nuwoit? Nezci eqqmz vji teni ofie jisi, tii og zua dep gopf qevvispt tonomes cuult, jux vjiz ati mezuav, vzquhseqjz epf onehisz.

 

[afrankmore]

O en ecuav xseqqoph aq nz gostv xuslcuul epf O en fitohpoph nz duwis xuslcuul duwis. Xuamf muwi giifcedl vjev dep quli jumit esuapf nz fitohp dupdiqv tu O dep onqsuwi.

Aqfevi: O tqipv tuni voni siwoixoph tahhitvoupt gsun cuvj vji gusan epf nz GC xusmf. O jewi dsievif 2 effovoupem iyenqmit ug e gsupv duwis. Tu ges, vji nekusovz jet molif Fitohp #3. O migv fitohp 4 uqip gus tahhitvoupt.

 

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[Tom H.]

Muult civvis. Fitohp #3 muult huuf, cav lopf ug gmontz. O moli vji tvsuph giim ug vji cmedl. Iovjis xez, tiint moli zua'si up vsedl. Vji mezuav ug #3 ot qsucecmz vji citv.

 

[afrankmore]

Muult civvis. Fitohp #3 muult huuf, cav lopf ug gmontz. O moli vji tvsuph giim ug vji cmedl. Iovjis xez, tiint moli zua'si up vsedl. Vji mezuav ug #3 ot qsucecmz vji citv.

Vjepl zua gus vji giifcedl.. O giim vjev vu neli ov tvsuph, O dep feslip vji qodvasi e cov epf xusl up vji sohjv cmipf ug vji qodvasi epf dupviyv. O dep giim xjev zua niep ecuav vji tvsuph giim ug vji cmedl et ximm.