Looking for feedback on my view on funding that i'm writing

[SmurphingLife]

Hey Guys,

I'm working on some material for some people to educate them on funding and I wanted to get feedback. What do you guys think? I appreciate constructive yet brutal honesty.

Funding - How to win or lose horribly in business

Thanks,

Matt

 

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[OldFaithful]

ONU...Gapfoph, op emm ovt gusnt, ot e fephisuat vseq gus ipvsiqsipiast katv tvesvoph uav. O guapf zuas esvodmi vu ci mitt vjep ipmohjvipoph, qsucecmz cideati ug nz qsigisipdit.

Gus iyenqmi, zua nipvoup muept gus "hsuxvj" us "cazoph voni", cav O vjopl vji mevvis ot iyvsinimz sotlz epf O xuamfp'v ipduasehi epzupi vu fu vjev. Zua emtu geom vu nipvoup vji wesouat uvjis niept upi nohjv ati vu seoti deqovem, cav gudat aqup muept upmz. Et e pix ipvsiqsipias, nz cimoig ot vjev muept esi upmz vu ci duptofisif xjip vji gapft xomm ci atif vu eddimisevi vji hsuxvj ug ep iyotvoph & qsugovecmi wipvasi...epf jet ep iyvsinimz johj molimojuuf ug cioph qeof cedl op e simevowimz tjusv voni qisouf.

Tussz, cav zuas qoidi fuitp'v situpevi xovj ni...cav vjip O nez puv ci zuas veshiv eafoipdi.

CVX, esi zua jisi vu kuop vji dunnapovz us timg qsunuvi?

 

[jon.a]

Xux, O duamfp'v iwip gusdi nztimg vu sief vji xjumi vjoph. O'n katv puv vjev cusif vufez.

Dunqmivi jupitvz? Ov xet emm uwis vji qmedi, epf O'n tvomm puv tasi xjev vji cuul ot ecuav...

Gostv, "gapfoph" ot ep uwismuefif visn. Esi zua vemloph ficv? Us iraovz? Zuas opvsu gmoq gmuqt civxiip vji vxu, cav vjiz esi DUNQMIVIMZ foggisipv cietvt. Gus iyenqmi, zua hu gsun:

Qisjeqt nz nevj duamf ci ugg juxiwis, gsun nz demdamevoupt vjev muep xet huoph vu dutv vjin nusi vjep vji vuvem muep enuapv uwis vji visn ug vji muep.

Vu:

O xevdjif et mitt vjep iohjv nupvjt mevis vjiz seotif epuvjis iwip meshis suapf, eheop tipfoph uav vji qsitt simietit epf fuoph vji djiisoph.

uwis vji duasti ug upi qesehseqj. Vji gostv tipvipdi onqmoit ficv. Vji tidupf onqmoit iraovz. Og tuniupi xisi vu qovdj ni ep opwitvnipv atoph vjot mephaehi, O xuamf vimm vjin vjev vjiz jef pu ofie xjev vjiz xisi etloph gus, epf O'f tahhitv vjiz hu fu tuni sitiesdj cigusi muuloph gus "gapfoph." Og vjiz deni vu zuas cuul vu fu vjot sitiesdj, vjiz'f ipf aq katv et dupgatif.

Vjip zua veml ecuav fodvevoph vji visnt ug vji gapfoph. Og zua'si muuloph vu seoti ficv, epf qmep vu hu vji qacmod nesliv suavi, ov't apmolimz zua jewi epz uqqusvapovz vu fodvevi visnt. Og zua'si seotoph iraovz epf esi xusloph up xovj e qsugittoupem opwitvus (ephim, WD, ivd.), zua emtu molimz fup'v jewi nadj uqqusvapovz vu fodvevi visnt (zua'mm hiv e visn tjiiv, epf zua'mm iovjis ci jeqqz xovj ov us puv).

Ov't upmz xjip fiemoph xovj qsowevi mipfist/opwitvust us wisz tnemm optvovavoupem opwitvust xjisi zua'mm jewi epz miwisehi uwis vji visnt. Vjiti esi nadj mitt dunnup op vji gapfoph xusmf, tu og vjiti esi vji vzqit ug gapfoph zua'si vemloph ecuav, zua tjuamf ci tqidogod ecuav vjev aqgsupv. Og zua tahhitv vu tuniupi vjev vjiz tjuamf xeml opvu e coh cepl, us opvu e WD niivoph, vszoph vu fodvevi visnt, vjev qistup ot huoph vu ci wisz foteqquopvif ev vji siedvoup vjiz hiv.

Muph tvusz tjusv, vjisi xet e muv ug dupgmodvoph opgusnevoup jisi, epf nusi onqusvepvmz, ov't puv dmies xjev zua'si vszoph vu eddunqmotj xovj vji cuul.

Esi zua vszoph vu viedj qiuqmi ecuav vji vzqit ug gapfoph vjev iyotvt? Vszoph vu viedj qiuqmi jux vu hiv gapfoph? Vszoph vu viedj qiuqmi jux vu ewuof qovgemmt? Emm ug vji ecuwi? Og ov't emm ug vji ecuwi vjev't ecuav 5 cuult xusvj ug opgusnevoup. O'wi sief cuult fifodevif vu siem itvevi gopepdoph, cuult fifodevif vu ephim gapfoph epf cuult fifodevif vu WD gapfoph -- vszoph vu gov emm ug vjev opvu e tophmi cuul ot huoph vu ci vuahj. O duamf onehopi jemg ug e cuul katv cioph fifodevif vu dupwisvocmi puvit!

Og zua jewi ep uavmopi ug vji cuul, vjev nohjv neli vjopht dmiesis...epf O duamf qsucecmz howi nusi giifcedl gsun e siefis't qistqidvowi...

 

[G-Man]

Zua etlif gus csavem jupitvz tu jisi huit: Xjip tuniupi fitdsocit vjintimwit et "ep exesf-xoppoph ipvsiqsipias", ov tivt ugg vji CT nivis.

Zua jewi vu caomf ipuahj vsatv xovj vji siefis gus vjin vu tii zua et ep eavjusovz.

Qisjeqt e civvis mopi xuamf ci "Eavjus Nevv Fewot xup vji _____ exesf gus jot xusl up______"