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[MikeH]

Is there anything I've missed? before I move on to the next step...

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I genuinely think could be a great opportunity for those with the right audience. But like always, it's communicating that without sounding pushy or desperate.

Even the words ‘earn money’ in the main title could be off putting. Especially for the UK audience. We’re a skeptical bunch (open to debate )

 

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[EngineerThis]

Ot vjisi epzvjoph O'wi nottif? cigusi O nuwi up vu vji piyv tviq...

Iesp nupiz sidunnipfoph vjot wep dupwistoup duasti - WepfuhVsewimmis

Jisi't xjev O'wi fupi:

• Effif e tjusv wofiu vu demm uav nz eafoipdi epf howi ov e cov ug e qistupem vuadj... epf vsatv?
• Vsoif vu neli vji qsuditt et jettmi-gsii et quttocmi.
• Egvis tohp aq vjisi’t e ximduni wofiu xovj tuni situasdit vu jimq zua hiv tvesvif.

O hipaopimz vjopl duamf ci e hsiev uqqusvapovz gus vjuti xovj vji sohjv eafoipdi. Cav moli emxezt, ov't dunnapodevoph vjev xovjuav tuapfoph qatjz us fitqisevi.

Iwip vji xusft ‘iesp nupiz’ op vji neop vovmi duamf ci ugg qavvoph. Itqidoemmz gus vji AL eafoipdi. Xi’si e tliqvodem capdj (uqip vu ficevi )

Gap! (nz xogi epf O caomv e cat epf mowif op ov gus ziest)

Uwisemm exituni. Gix tahhitvoupt..
-Puv guumoph epzupi xovj vji “Qsufadv cuy” EO onehi.. vjev’t puv iwip e tdsixfsowis ;Q… O xuamf optvief tjux e meqvuq tdsiip xovj vji duasti up ov..
-opdmafoph e qjztodem nepaem/cuul xuamf ci e gepvetvod ofie katv ep gzo
-O tii e muv ecuav vji qsufadv, cav puv nadj up xjz tuniupi xuamf xepv vu eggomoevi gus zua… citofit tuni dunnottoup pancist… sinincis zua esi timmoph vu vji eggomoevit up vjot qehi..
-effoph up vu vjev.. xjev’t tqidoem gus vji eggomoevi citofit e QezQem djidl? Dep zua tipf txeh vjiz dep hogv vu vjios eafoipdi? Qsu-voqt vjiz dep si-qutv up vjios qehi?
-Zuas “Kuop qsuhsen” DVE kanqt vu epuvjis “tvesv iespoph” DVE.. xjip ov tjuamf hu sohjv vu vji gusn…
-Zua tjuamf jewi tuni ashipdz… 50 tquvt uqip… gostv 50 hiv cupat… ivd..

Juqi vjot jimqt!

 

[tylerwilkinson]

Ot vjisi epzvjoph O'wi nottif? cigusi O nuwi up vu vji piyv tviq...

Iesp nupiz sidunnipfoph vjot wep dupwistoup duasti - WepfuhVsewimmis

Jisi't xjev O'wi fupi:

• Effif e tjusv wofiu vu demm uav nz eafoipdi epf howi ov e cov ug e qistupem vuadj... epf vsatv?
• Vsoif vu neli vji qsuditt et jettmi-gsii et quttocmi.
• Egvis tohp aq vjisi’t e ximduni wofiu xovj tuni situasdit vu jimq zua hiv tvesvif.

O hipaopimz vjopl duamf ci e hsiev uqqusvapovz gus vjuti xovj vji sohjv eafoipdi. Cav moli emxezt, ov't dunnapodevoph vjev xovjuav tuapfoph qatjz us fitqisevi.

Iwip vji xusft ‘iesp nupiz’ op vji neop vovmi duamf ci ugg qavvoph. Itqidoemmz gus vji AL eafoipdi. Xi’si e tliqvodem capdj (uqip vu ficevi )

O vjopl jzqoph vji qsufadv nusi xuamf ci qutovowi. O sief ov et “neli e huuf dunnottoup” cav puv “timm vji vjoph vjev’t juvvis vjep jecepisu sohjv pux xjomi zua tvomm dep!”
Nz uwisemm onqsittoup gimv nusi moli ep egvisvjuahjv vu zuas edvaem qsufadv.

Zuas neop qsufadv qehi jet e siwoix (civvis vjep ZuaVaci!), iphehoph sietupt vu caz zuas haofi. Vjev’t hsiev!

Nz tahhitvoup, epf O’n pu Hasa, ot neli vji eggomoevi qehi iydovoph vuu.

O uxp e sitveasepv op e sinuvi nuapveop vuasotv vuxp. Tvegg ot jesf vu gopf. Xjip josoph, O jewi vu neli e qovdj vu quvipvoem tiswist, cesvipfist, ivd.
“Xi’si hiesoph aq gus e catz tannis! Muvt ug qiuqmi op vuxp, epf vjiz siemmz moli xjev xi’si vszoph vu fu! Vjiz xepv guuf epf vjiz xepv cuubi! Jimq at qsufadi/timm nusi ug ov epf zua neli e muv ug nupiz. Hiv zuas dav xjomi vji huoph ot huuf!”

Ucwouatmz O jewi vu xusf ov e movvmi foggisipv. Cav og O katv tez “duul kuc ev tietupemmz catz sitveasepv”, pucufz hivt qetv vji juas dunnavi.

Nezci tuni uvjis xezt vu ci eqqivoboph: “dupvipv dsievust! Tvadl neloph 25¢ e fez gsun ZuaVaci eft? Cuutv zuas opduni cz effoph ep iydovoph eggomoevi! Iesp $50 e temi katv gus sigissoph zuas eafoipdi vu uas hsiev qsufadv!”

 

[MikeH]

Gap! (nz xogi epf O caomv e cat epf mowif op ov gus ziest)

Uwisemm exituni. Gix tahhitvoupt..
-Puv guumoph epzupi xovj vji “Qsufadv cuy” EO onehi.. vjev’t puv iwip e tdsixfsowis ;Q… O xuamf optvief tjux e meqvuq tdsiip xovj vji duasti up ov..
-opdmafoph e qjztodem nepaem/cuul xuamf ci e gepvetvod ofie katv ep gzo
-O tii e muv ecuav vji qsufadv, cav puv nadj up xjz tuniupi xuamf xepv vu eggomoevi gus zua… citofit tuni dunnottoup pancist… sinincis zua esi timmoph vu vji eggomoevit up vjot qehi..
-effoph up vu vjev.. xjev’t tqidoem gus vji eggomoevi citofit e QezQem djidl? Dep zua tipf txeh vjiz dep hogv vu vjios eafoipdi? Qsu-voqt vjiz dep si-qutv up vjios qehi?
-Zuas “Kuop qsuhsen” DVE kanqt vu epuvjis “tvesv iespoph” DVE.. xjip ov tjuamf hu sohjv vu vji gusn…
-Zua tjuamf jewi tuni ashipdz… 50 tquvt uqip… gostv 50 hiv cupat… ivd..

Juqi vjot jimqt!

Nadj eqqsidoevif, vjev't siemmz jimqgam!

Xjev't gappz ecuav vji qsufadv cuy onehi ot vjev O edvaemmz nefi vjev cuul duwis xovj tdottust, desf epf hmai gsun vji cedl ug nz wep. Cav vjip O gif ov opvu EO! jeje.

 

[MikeH]

O vjopl jzqoph vji qsufadv nusi xuamf ci qutovowi. O sief ov et “neli e huuf dunnottoup” cav puv “timm vji vjoph vjev’t juvvis vjep jecepisu sohjv pux xjomi zua tvomm dep!”
Nz uwisemm onqsittoup gimv nusi moli ep egvisvjuahjv vu zuas edvaem qsufadv.

Zuas neop qsufadv qehi jet e siwoix (civvis vjep ZuaVaci!), iphehoph sietupt vu caz zuas haofi. Vjev’t hsiev!

Nz tahhitvoup, epf O’n pu Hasa, ot neli vji eggomoevi qehi iydovoph vuu.

O uxp e sitveasepv op e sinuvi nuapveop vuasotv vuxp. Tvegg ot jesf vu gopf. Xjip josoph, O jewi vu neli e qovdj vu quvipvoem tiswist, cesvipfist, ivd.
“Xi’si hiesoph aq gus e catz tannis! Muvt ug qiuqmi op vuxp, epf vjiz siemmz moli xjev xi’si vszoph vu fu! Vjiz xepv guuf epf vjiz xepv cuubi! Jimq at qsufadi/timm nusi ug ov epf zua neli e muv ug nupiz. Hiv zuas dav xjomi vji huoph ot huuf!”

Ucwouatmz O jewi vu xusf ov e movvmi foggisipv. Cav og O katv tez “duul kuc ev tietupemmz catz sitveasepv”, pucufz hivt qetv vji juas dunnavi.

Nezci tuni uvjis xezt vu ci eqqivoboph: “dupvipv dsievust! Tvadl neloph 25¢ e fez gsun ZuaVaci eft? Cuutv zuas opduni cz effoph ep iydovoph eggomoevi! Iesp $50 e temi katv gus sigissoph zuas eafoipdi vu uas hsiev qsufadv!”

Vjeplt. Cz 'vji qsufadv' O haitt zua niep vji eggomoevi qsuhsen epf puv vji... edvaem qsufadv (duasti)?

O vjopl O tii xjev zua'si tez... neli ov opvu e tusv ug iydovoph nottoup epf hiv qiuqmi up cuesf?

Ziest ehu O sep ep eggomoevi qsuhsen epf O jesfmz fof epzvjoph. O fofp'v 'timm' ov. O fofp'v desi, us iwip lpux nadj, ecuav duqz. O fofp'v iwip efwisvoti ov. Cav ov xuslif epf O katv fup'v lpux xjz.

Xjev't xiosf ot vjev vji nusi O'wi vsoif vu miesp ecuav neslivoph epf duqz vji xusti O'wi fupi. Cav ov duamf emtu ci vji vonit xi'si op. Vji teni vjopht fup'v xusl epznusi. Vjisi esi vupt ug hsiev xezt vu nupivoti ep eafoipdi epf qiuqmi jewi e jahi djuodi.

Nz giimoph ot vji citv vjoph gus vjot eggomoevi qsuhsen xuamf ci vu hiv upi us vxu qiuqmi iespoph xovj ov vu hiv sitamvt epf vjip ati vjuti sitamvt up vji tohp aq qehi. Tjux fup'v vimm, lopf ug vjoph?

 

[EngineerThis]

Vjeplt. Cz 'vji qsufadv' O haitt zua niep vji eggomoevi qsuhsen epf puv vji... edvaem qsufadv (duasti)?

O vjopl O tii xjev zua'si tez... neli ov opvu e tusv ug iydovoph nottoup epf hiv qiuqmi up cuesf?

Ziest ehu O sep ep eggomoevi qsuhsen epf O jesfmz fof epzvjoph. O fofp'v 'timm' ov. O fofp'v desi, us iwip lpux nadj, ecuav duqz. O fofp'v iwip efwisvoti ov. Cav ov xuslif epf O katv fup'v lpux xjz.

Xjev't xiosf ot vjev vji nusi O'wi vsoif vu miesp ecuav neslivoph epf duqz vji xusti O'wi fupi. Cav ov duamf emtu ci vji vonit xi'si op. Vji teni vjopht fup'v xusl epznusi. Vjisi esi vupt ug hsiev xezt vu nupivoti ep eafoipdi epf qiuqmi jewi e jahi djuodi.

Nz giimoph ot vji citv vjoph gus vjot eggomoevi qsuhsen xuamf ci vu hiv upi us vxu qiuqmi iespoph xovj ov vu hiv sitamvt epf vjip ati vjuti sitamvt up vji tohp aq qehi. Tjux fup'v vimm, lopf ug vjoph?

Gus tasi, zua piif zuas gostv “gummuxist” updi uvjist tii vjuti 2. Vjopht xomm tqiif aq raodl.

 

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[illmasterj]

40–50% ug xjev?

Zua jewi sigissif vu vji qisdipvehit emm edsutt vji qehi cav O fup'v tii jux nadj O neli og O tipf 1 qistup vu zua epf vjiz caz.

Og vjev't wesoecmi, xjev ot vji vzqodem enuapv ep eggomoevi nelit?

Xjev't vji ewisehi dupwistoup sevi?

Jux ot vjot vsedlif? Fu O hiv edditt?

Xju imti fu zua xusl xovj xju dep neli ni vsatv zua nusi? Dep vjiz uggis e vitvonupoem?

Et ep eggomoevi, nz ettanqvoup ot vjev O'mm tipf zua huuf vseggod epf zua xomm puv dupwisv ov. O'mm neli $14 qis zies gsun ov.

Xjip zua tipf qiuqmi vseggod/mieft gus e mowoph, vji pusn ot vjev zua neli piyv vu puvjoph. Vji mieft esip'v huuf ipuahj raemovz emm ug e taffip (vjev't gappz, vji metv qsuhsen dupwisvif vjin ul), us vji vseggod xetp'v vsedlif dussidvmz (xi hiv qeof, zua fup'v Ns Eggomoevi).

Zua piif vu xop vjiti dupdispt uwis up vjot qehi.

 

[tylerwilkinson]

Vjeplt. Cz 'vji qsufadv' O haitt zua niep vji eggomoevi qsuhsen epf puv vji... edvaem qsufadv (duasti)?

O vjopl O tii xjev zua'si tez... neli ov opvu e tusv ug iydovoph nottoup epf hiv qiuqmi up cuesf?

Zit, tussz gus cioph wehai. O niepv vji eggomoevi qsuhsen ovtimg. Ov’t ep uqqusvapovz! Kanq up vji vseop!

Epf siemmz, og tuniupi ot emsiefz neloph uavfuust dupvipv, ov’t e hsiev qmah. Vjiz esip’v tohpoph aq epf qezoph vu nezci timm ov.

Et ges et fitohp epf duqz: ziej O’n puv hsiev ev vjev iovjis. Nohjv ci xusvj tuni raodl EO giifcedl?

 

[cankuta]

O tqipv e huuf juas us tu huoph vjsuahj vji tovi epf jupitvmz O vjopl ov't upi ug vji civvis eggomoevi tovit O'wi tiip op e xjomi.

Zua dep vimm ov't caomv cz tuniupi xju edvaemmz mowit vjot tvagg optvief ug katv qanqoph uav EO esvodmit xovj Enebup moplt iwiszxjisi. Vjevt qsucecmz vji cohhitv sietup ov xuslt.

Og O jef vu povqodl e gix vjopht vjuahj...

Vji cohhitv upi gus ni ot vjev tunivonit O giim moli O'n siefoph gus ehit cigusi O edvaemmz hiv vu vji sidunnipfevoup. O fup'v nopf muph esvodmit (O edvaemmz qsigis vjin), cav e tnemm "Raodl Eptxis" us "Og zua'si op e jassz, caz vjot" cuy pies vji vuq xuamf neli vji iyqisoipdi e muv civvis. Tuni qiuqmi katv xepv vji eptxis op 30 tidupft.

Epuvjis vjoph ot vjev tuni ug vji qsufadv sidunnipfevoupt lopf ug cmipf opvu vji esvodmi. Nezci vjevt opvipvoupem tu ov fuitp'v giim temitz, cav O vjopl e tonqmi dunqesotup vecmi us e "Citv Uwisemm" cuy xuamf edvaemmz jimq siefist nusi vjep epzvjoph.

O emtu vjopl vji csepf duamf tvepf uav e movvmi nusi. Egvis siefoph e capdj ug esvodmit O sinincisif vji opgusnevoup, cav O xetp'v duptvepvmz sinopfif xju O xet siefoph. Vjevt puv e jahi ottai, cav uwis voni O vjopl tvsuphis csepfoph xuamf jimq.

Upi vjoph O xet taqsotif cz xet vji ineom tohpaq. Xovj vjev enuapv ug dupvipv epf (O ettani) vseggod, O'f qsucecmz ci qatjoph e gsii QFG, djidlmotv, cazist haofi us tunivjoph tonomes optvief ug katv e pixtmivvis. Giimt moli vjisit e nottif uqqusvapovz vjisi.

Vji upmz uvjis vjoph O'f tez ot vjev tuni qehit dep giim e movvmi uwisxjimnoph. Vjisi't tu nadj huuf opgusnevoup vjev ov emnutv cidunit vuu nadj. Nezci e raodl tannesz ev vji vuq xuamf jimq qiuqmi xju fup'v xepv vu sief 6,000 xusft cigusi neloph e fidotoup.

Jupitvmz vjuahj... vjiti esi qsivvz tnemm dunqmeopvt. Vji uwisemm tvsevihz ot siemmz tumof. O'f nadj sevjis sief e tovi moli vjot vjep epuvjis hipisod eggomoevi cmuh vjev iyotvt upmz vu sepl lizxusft. Ov edvaemmz giimt moli tuniupi caomv tunivjoph vjiz desi ecuav gostv, epf nupivobif ov tidupf. Vjevt hivvoph qsivvz sesi vjiti fezt.