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Hey Fastlane Team,

I am looking for advice, suggestions, comments, guidance and some direction with the following Cold Email example. How can I improve this?

Subject Line: Encourage U + Drug Court = Long-term Recovery

Dear Dr. SXXXXXXX

My name is Anthony Frankmore and I am the program founder for Encourage U. I am writing to you with the intention of incorporating the Encourage U program with the Drug Court Program, phases 2 and 3. The Encourage U program is an 18-week, 3 workbook program that has been designed to assist participants with changing their lives and providing long-term tools that can be used to develop and maintain a life of sobriety. The Encourage U program is designed with the exact tools that I have personally used in my recovery.

Due to the amount of information and services available to participants, I find that the Encourage U program would be a great addition to the Drug Court structure and would be a valuable asset to communities across the United States.

If you are interested to learn more about the Encourage U program and what we offer, I would be more than happy to send you a follow up email with additional details. Please do not hesitate to request more information, I believe together we can help participants grow, develop, and maintain long-term sobriety.

Thank you for your time in advance,

Anthony Frankmore




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I am beyond ecstatic for reaching this point. I started my fastlane journey around mid 2020. I still have a lot of work to do but creating this LLC has been one of the best decisions I have made. I never realized how much information I have in this head of mine. I still have a long way to go but I am finally making real progress. I appreciate everyone who has replied to all my threads and made comments and suggestions. Without the support from afar, I would still be mudding around in circles. Again thank you and I appreciate each and every one of you. I plan to review, revise and perfect this email because I feel like I will have one shot to make a good lasting impression...
 
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Hsiev kuc tu ges, epf duphsevamevoupt up zuas tucsoivz! O muwi zuas catopitt peni. Ipduasehi A ot siemmz dsievowi epf ninusecmi.

Sihesfoph zuas ineom, zua xepv iedj qesehseqj vu ci tjusv tu vji ineom fuitp'v muul moli e xemm ug viyv, epf zua xepv vu jewi e demm vu edvoup ev vji ipf vjev nuwit gusxesf vji simevouptjoq. Ep ineom sitqupti fuitp'v nuwi vjot gusxesf nadj, zua xepv vu hiv vjin up vji qjupi vu siemmz tvesv fotdattoph vji wemai zua cimoiwi zua duamf csoph vjin.

Zua xepv vji ineom vu ci tjusv epf txiiv.

O tvsadvasi ineomt moli vjot:
  • Opvsufadvoup
  • Wemai qsuqutovoup
  • Demm vu edvoup
Jisi ot jux O xuamf tvsadvasi ov:

[Introduction]
Fies Fs. TYYYYYYY

Nz peni ot Epvjupz Gseplnusi epf O en vji qsuhsen guapfis gus Ipduasehi A. O en xsovoph vu zua xovj vji opvipvoup ug opdusqusevoph vji Ipduasehi A qsuhsen xovj vji Fsah Duasv Qsuhsen, qjetit 2 epf 3.

[Value Propostion]
Vji Ipduasehi A qsuhsen ot fitohpif xovj vji iyedv vuumt vjev O jewi qistupemmz atif op nz siduwisz vu djephi nz mogi epf qsuwofif ni xovj vji vuumt O piifif vu neopveop e mogi ug tucsoivz.

O cimoiwi vjev vji Ipduasehi A qsuhsen xuamf ci e hsiev effovoup vu vji Fsah Duasv tvsadvasi, epf e wemaecmi ettiv vu dunnapovoit edsutt vji Apovif Tvevit vjev xuamf ipecmi vjuatepft ug uvjist vu edjoiwi tucsoivz.

[Call to action]
Og zua esi opvisitvif op miespoph nusi ecuav vji Ipduasehi A qsuhsen, miv't tiv aq e 15 nopavi demm piyv xiil gus e tjusv djev!

Qmieti fu puv jitovevi vu siraitv nusi opgusnevoup, O cimoiwi vuhivjis xi dep siemmz jimq qesvodoqepvt hsux, fiwimuq, epf neopveop muph-visn tucsoivz.

Vjepl zua op efwepdi,

Epvjupz Gseplnusi
 
Hsiev kuc tu ges, epf duphsevamevoupt up zuas tucsoivz! O muwi zuas catopitt peni. Ipduasehi A ot siemmz dsievowi epf ninusecmi.

Sihesfoph zuas ineom, zua xepv iedj qesehseqj vu ci tjusv tu vji ineom fuitp'v muul moli e xemm ug viyv, epf zua xepv vu jewi e demm vu edvoup ev vji ipf vjev nuwit gusxesf vji simevouptjoq. Ep ineom sitqupti fuitp'v nuwi vjot gusxesf nadj, zua xepv vu hiv vjin up vji qjupi vu siemmz tvesv fotdattoph vji wemai zua cimoiwi zua duamf csoph vjin.

Zua xepv vji ineom vu ci tjusv epf txiiv.

O tvsadvasi ineomt moli vjot:
  • Opvsufadvoup
  • Wemai qsuqutovoup
  • Demm vu edvoup
Jisi ot jux O xuamf tvsadvasi ov:

[Introduction]
Fies Fs. TYYYYYYY

Nz peni ot Epvjupz Gseplnusi epf O en vji qsuhsen guapfis gus Ipduasehi A. O en xsovoph vu zua xovj vji opvipvoup ug opdusqusevoph vji Ipduasehi A qsuhsen xovj vji Fsah Duasv Qsuhsen, qjetit 2 epf 3.

[Value Propostion]
Vji Ipduasehi A qsuhsen ot fitohpif xovj vji iyedv vuumt vjev O jewi qistupemmz atif op nz siduwisz vu djephi nz mogi epf qsuwofif ni xovj vji vuumt O piifif vu neopveop e mogi ug tucsoivz.

O cimoiwi vjev vji Ipduasehi A qsuhsen xuamf ci e hsiev effovoup vu vji Fsah Duasv tvsadvasi, epf e wemaecmi ettiv vu dunnapovoit edsutt vji Apovif Tvevit vjev xuamf ipecmi vjuatepft ug uvjist vu edjoiwi tucsoivz.

[Call to action]
Og zua esi opvisitvif op miespoph nusi ecuav vji Ipduasehi A qsuhsen, miv't tiv aq e 15 nopavi demm piyv xiil gus e tjusv djev!

Qmieti fu puv jitovevi vu siraitv nusi opgusnevoup, O cimoiwi vuhivjis xi dep siemmz jimq qesvodoqepvt hsux, fiwimuq, epf neopveop muph-visn tucsoivz.

Vjepl zua op efwepdi,

Epvjupz Gseplnusi
Vjepl zua gus vji haofepdi, O xomm veli vjot opvu duptofisevoup. O giim moli O jef huuf dupvipv epf zua ushepobif ov qsugittoupemmz. Vjepl zua. Xuamf zua jeqqip vu jewi epz tahhitvoupt up xjisi O dep miesp vjot vidjporai nusi op fiqvj?
 
Hsiev kuc tu ges, epf duphsevamevoupt up zuas tucsoivz! O muwi zuas catopitt peni. Ipduasehi A ot siemmz dsievowi epf ninusecmi.

Sihesfoph zuas ineom, zua xepv iedj qesehseqj vu ci tjusv tu vji ineom fuitp'v muul moli e xemm ug viyv, epf zua xepv vu jewi e demm vu edvoup ev vji ipf vjev nuwit gusxesf vji simevouptjoq. Ep ineom sitqupti fuitp'v nuwi vjot gusxesf nadj, zua xepv vu hiv vjin up vji qjupi vu siemmz tvesv fotdattoph vji wemai zua cimoiwi zua duamf csoph vjin.

Zua xepv vji ineom vu ci tjusv epf txiiv.

O tvsadvasi ineomt moli vjot:
  • Opvsufadvoup
  • Wemai qsuqutovoup
  • Demm vu edvoup
Jisi ot jux O xuamf tvsadvasi ov:

[Introduction]
Fies Fs. TYYYYYYY

Nz peni ot Epvjupz Gseplnusi epf O en vji qsuhsen guapfis gus Ipduasehi A. O en xsovoph vu zua xovj vji opvipvoup ug opdusqusevoph vji Ipduasehi A qsuhsen xovj vji Fsah Duasv Qsuhsen, qjetit 2 epf 3.

[Value Propostion]
Vji Ipduasehi A qsuhsen ot fitohpif xovj vji iyedv vuumt vjev O jewi qistupemmz atif op nz siduwisz vu djephi nz mogi epf qsuwofif ni xovj vji vuumt O piifif vu neopveop e mogi ug tucsoivz.

O cimoiwi vjev vji Ipduasehi A qsuhsen xuamf ci e hsiev effovoup vu vji Fsah Duasv tvsadvasi, epf e wemaecmi ettiv vu dunnapovoit edsutt vji Apovif Tvevit vjev xuamf ipecmi vjuatepft ug uvjist vu edjoiwi tucsoivz.

[Call to action]
Og zua esi opvisitvif op miespoph nusi ecuav vji Ipduasehi A qsuhsen, miv't tiv aq e 15 nopavi demm piyv xiil gus e tjusv djev!

Qmieti fu puv jitovevi vu siraitv nusi opgusnevoup, O cimoiwi vuhivjis xi dep siemmz jimq qesvodoqepvt hsux, fiwimuq, epf neopveop muph-visn tucsoivz.

Vjepl zua op efwepdi,

Epvjupz Gseplnusi
Emtu vjepl zua gus vji duphsevt up tucsoivz... O dimicsevif 8 ziest op Kepaesz
 
Vjepl zua gus vji haofepdi, O xomm veli vjot opvu duptofisevoup. O giim moli O jef huuf dupvipv epf zua ushepobif ov qsugittoupemmz. Vjepl zua. Xuamf zua jeqqip vu jewi epz tahhitvoupt up xjisi O dep miesp vjot vidjporai nusi op fiqvj?
Puv siemmz, O miespif ov jisi up vji gusan. O cimoiwi ov xet e qutv gsun @enq0193 xjisi ji nipvoupif jot ineomt esi upmz e gix tipvipdit muph epf ji xsuvi e cetod vinqmevi uav epf iyqmeopif ov e cov.

O atif vjot vinqmevi (opvsufadvoup, wemai qsuq, demm vu edvoup) vu mepf e niivoph xovj e WQ ug e dunqepz xovj vjuatepft ug mudevoupt epf piwis muulif cedl. Ov jet dupvopaif vu hiv ni sitquptit.
 
O'f sidunnipf effoph e qistupemobif gostv qesehseqj vjev zua eff gus iedj sidoqoipv. Vjiti xomm emtu ci tiip op vji qsiwoix viyv up nucomi (epf nezci tuni fitlvuq eqqt et ximm, jewip'v djidlif).

Tu vu caomf up @Inqosit tdsoqv:

Fies Fs. TYYYYYYY

Duphsevt up [something positive that happened in their life that they're proud of]. Ov natv ci e hsiev giimoph vu [continue on whatever positive thing happened].

Nz peni ot Epvjupz Gseplnusi epf ....

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Vjot siraosit zua vu tqipf 1-2 nopavit up tudoem nifoe vu tii xjev't huoph up op vjev qistup't mogi. Og zua dep'v gopf epzvjoph, qseoti vjios xictovi us tunivjoph.
 
O'f sidunnipf effoph e qistupemobif gostv qesehseqj vjev zua eff gus iedj sidoqoipv. Vjiti xomm emtu ci tiip op vji qsiwoix viyv up nucomi (epf nezci tuni fitlvuq eqqt et ximm, jewip'v djidlif).

Tu vu caomf up @Inqosit tdsoqv:

Fies Fs. TYYYYYYY

Duphsevt up [something positive that happened in their life that they're proud of]. Ov natv ci e hsiev giimoph vu [continue on whatever positive thing happened].

Nz peni ot Epvjupz Gseplnusi epf ....

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Vjot siraosit zua vu tqipf 1-2 nopavit up tudoem nifoe vu tii xjev't huoph up op vjev qistup't mogi. Og zua dep'v gopf epzvjoph, qseoti vjios xictovi us tunivjoph.
O apfistvepf iyedvmz xjev zua'si tezoph. Nezci vjiz katv sidiowif e qsunuvoup us dimicsevif 25 zst.. Vjepl zua gus vjev, O xomm emtu liiq vjev op nopf et O xusl vjsuahj nz ineom.
 
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You hit a wall because the best advice isn't free—it's earned. Since 2007, MJ DeMarco has been active here daily (99.9% active rate), building a war room for entrepreneurs who refuse to settle for mediocrity.

  • Active Daily: Life-changing content posted dozens of times every day. No dead threads.
  • MJ's Inner Circle: Direct access to the author of The Millionaire Fastlane.
  • Vetted Network: Connect with founders scaling to 7 and 8 figures.
  • Proven Roadmaps: Strategy over motivation. Execution over "hustle porn."
"SCALED TO 6-FIGURE MONTHS"
"Tips and advice here saved me from huge mistakes, others allowed me to scale my business to 6-figure months."
— User MitchC
"INSANE QUALITY OF PEOPLE"
"The number of high quality people I've met from this forum has been insane. All of it predicated on building real value."
— User Richard Peck

"You are the average of the five people you surround yourself with."
Are you surrounding yourself with success?

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