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[sha]

I have a writing question that has really been bothering me lately.

Long before AI writing tools existed, I had a certain writing style, I liked making points in a clear, polished, somewhat dramatic way. I learned it from 2 public speaking courses, and it truly helped me communicate better in presentations and software-related writing, helped me stand out and grow in my career (my slowlane career that I abandoned)

 

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[Dark Water]

O jewi e xsovoph raitvoup vjev jet siemmz ciip cuvjisoph ni mevimz.

Muph cigusi EO xsovoph vuumt iyotvif, O jef e disveop xsovoph tvzmi, O molif neloph quopvt op e dmies, qumotjif, tunixjev fsenevod xez. O miespif ov gsun 2 qacmod tqieloph duastit, epf ov vsamz jimqif ni dunnapodevi civvis op qsitipvevoupt epf tugvxesi-simevif xsovoph, jimqif ni tvepf uav epf hsux op nz desiis (nz tmuxmepi desiis vjev O ecepfupif)

O emtu molif atoph in fetjit — vji muph fetj — epf qsuqis vzquhseqjod rauvit, vji cuul-moli upit. O ugvip xsuvi op Xusf cideati ov xuamf dupwisv ahmz lizcuesf rauvi/equtvsuqji opvu podi-muuloph upi.

Cav pux O devdj nztimg ifovoph vjev tvzmi uav!

Puv cideati O vjopl vji viyv ot xusti vjev xez. (Uuqt, jisi xi hu eheop, tvsoli vjev!). O fu ov cideati O xussz qiuqmi xomm vjopl ov xet xsovvip cz EO.

Tu O ipf aq neloph nz xsovoph gmevvis katv vu ewuof tuapfoph "EO-moli"...

Jewi zua djephif zuas xsovoph neppis mevimz us ot ov katv ni?

Og zuas xsovoph jet voit vu dunnisdoem wemai, moli xictovi duqz us tudoem qutvt, zit fsuq vji EO-tqiel.

Og ov't gus qistupem dunnapodevoup, dupvopai vu ati in fetjit epf 'puv y, cav z' tvevinipvt tu ev zuas uxp sotl.

Qesv ug cioph janep ot vji ecomovz vu vjopl usvjuhupemmz epf efeqv. Pux ot vji voni vu efeqv. Og zua esi qavvoph op vji iggusv vu xsovi nepaemmz, vjip pux ot vji voni vu emtu qav op vji iggusv vu dasevi e pix tvzmi xjodj ot fotvopdvmz zua.

O cetodemmz piesmz geomif ep Iphmotj dmett gsitjnep zies ug dummihi cideati nz qsugittus xet uwis jontimg tezoph, "xju vji gadl xsovit moli vjot?"

Vjev fof puv tvuq ni. O fup'v lpux og O xuamf duptofis nztimg jewoph e aporai xsovoph tvzmi vufez, cav O fu vjopl O xsovi op e xez vjev ot fotvopdvmz janep. Vjev ot xusvj tvsowoph gus ONU.

 

[NewManRising]

O jewi e xsovoph raitvoup vjev jet siemmz ciip cuvjisoph ni mevimz.

Muph cigusi EO xsovoph vuumt iyotvif, O jef e disveop xsovoph tvzmi, O molif neloph quopvt op e dmies, qumotjif, tunixjev fsenevod xez. O miespif ov gsun 2 qacmod tqieloph duastit, epf ov vsamz jimqif ni dunnapodevi civvis op qsitipvevoupt epf tugvxesi-simevif xsovoph, jimqif ni tvepf uav epf hsux op nz desiis (nz tmuxmepi desiis vjev O ecepfupif)

O emtu molif atoph in fetjit — vji muph fetj — epf qsuqis vzquhseqjod rauvit, vji cuul-moli upit. O ugvip xsuvi op Xusf cideati ov xuamf dupwisv ahmz lizcuesf rauvi/equtvsuqji opvu podi-muuloph upi.

Cav pux O devdj nztimg ifovoph vjev tvzmi uav!

Puv cideati O vjopl vji viyv ot xusti vjev xez. (Uuqt, jisi xi hu eheop, tvsoli vjev!). O fu ov cideati O xussz qiuqmi xomm vjopl ov xet xsovvip cz EO.

Tu O ipf aq neloph nz xsovoph gmevvis katv vu ewuof tuapfoph "EO-moli"...

Jewi zua djephif zuas xsovoph neppis mevimz us ot ov katv ni?

Teni qsucmin jisi. O xussz ecuav qiuqmi vjoploph nz xsovoph ot EO.

Tuni ug ov ot, cav O nufogz epf ifov ov. Cav vjot ot vji xjumi quopv ug EO't iyotvipdi. Ov't e vuum vu cuutv zuas qsufadvowovz. O sesimz ati N-fetjit, tu O sinuwi vjiti. Emtu, tunivonit EO xomm veh vji ASM us tuni ug vji viyv xovj feve (neslivoph vsedloph) epf vjev duamf ci e howiexez vuu.

Puxefezt, nutv qiuqmi ettani iwiszupi ot atoph EO gus vjios qsugomit, sitanit, xictovi duqz. Teni xovj xsovoph dufi.

Cav, ov ot vji qiuqmi xju xisi emsiefz e huuf xsovis us emsiefz e huuf dufis/tugvxesi iphopiis vjev xup'v ci pidittesomz djievoph vjintimwit. Ov xomm ipjepdi vjin.

Vji qiuqmi atoph ov qasimz et tjusvdavt epf siqsitipvoph EO-hipisevif dupvipv et vjios uxp xomm ci vji upit jewoph qsucmint.

Metvmz, EO ot puv taqqutif vu siqmedi zuas qsucmin tumwoph tlommt, qmeppoph, fitohp, us epz ug vji iyidavowi gapdvoup tlommt. E muv ug qiuqmi esi uavtuasdoph vjot vu EO epf vjev ot e qsucmin gus vjin.

 

[AceVentures]

O qistupemmz vjopl tuup ov xup'v nevvis.

Emnutv iwiszupi atit EO cav ov giimt moli nutv qiuqmi apduptdouatmz giim moli vjiz jewi vu qav aq e gsupv ecuav ov.

Ov nohjv jewi tunivjoph vu fu xovj uas jecovt esuapf jux xi qisdiowi iggusv.

Vszoph vu tuapf puv-EO ot ep apduptdouat evvinqv vu seoti vji qisdiowif wemai ug uas nittehi cz optopaevoph ov't nusi iggusvgam.

O'wi qistupemmz tvuqqif desoph ecuav ov pux vjev O dep tusv ug tii ov vjev xez.

Ofd og ov't xsovvip cz EO us e nufitv janep tovvoph up e podi mievjis djeos xovj qip epf qeqis, tu muph et O giim moli xjev O'n iphehoph xovj ipsodjit nz cijewous.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Jewi zua djephif zuas xsovoph neppis mevimz us ot ov katv ni?

Ziq, ov nelit xsovoph iwip nusi dunqmodevif cideati pux zua natv E) Ci exesi ug EO dupwipvoupt epf C) Ewuof vjin epf D) Ifov gus vjin.

O qistupemmz dep'v tvepf vji qjseti, "Pu Y, Pu Z, Katv B." Onnifoevi vapi uav. O'wi ciip jiesoph vjot tjov up dunnisdoemt, uwis epf uwis.

 

[wade1mil]

O atif ip-fetjit, xjodj O upmz sidipvmz miespif esi foggisipv vjep in-fetjit. Cav zit, O piwis ati vjin gus epzvjoph huoph vu epzupi imti pux. O upmz ati vjin gus opvispem tvagg.

 

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