PROGRESS THREAD: GymJunkie (36Pounds.com)

[Gymjunkie]

i might read it lol..how long is it?

Well it is not long. I try to keep things as simple as possible. If you want and can, I will PM it to you later

 

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[maximus20895]

sureeeeee

 

[Gymjunkie]

sureeeeee

Great! For now it is a Word document.. gonna figure out how to make it .pdf later or tomorrow. Adding finishing touches now...

 

[Gymjunkie]

Finally finished the nutrition guide. It will be a really basic information for guys completely new to bodybuilding. I really hope that it will be helpful to many.. I am totally new to writing and we will see how the first time goes. Phew..

 

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[maximus20895]

Okay, so...

I have just read the first couple of pages. The main content is good, but there seems to be alot of "fluff" You talk about how this guide is simple, you don't claim to be an expert, you don't use scientific terms yada yada.

The readers do not want two or three paragraphs on this. They want to gain weight or build muscle. I would just delete all the stuff about what this is or is not about and go right to the point.

Your main content is good though. I will re read it and tell you more when I'm done.

 

[Gymjunkie]

Okay, so...

I have just read the first couple of pages. The main content is good, but there seems to be alot of "fluff" You talk about how this guide is simple, you don't claim to be an expert, you don't use scientific terms yada yada.

The readers do not want two or three paragraphs on this. They want to gain weight or build muscle. I would just delete all the stuff about what this is or is not about and go right to the point.

Your main content is good though. I will re read it and tell you more when I'm done.

Hmm... ok, I'll try to shorten it into one paragraph. I think there should be some kind of preface still. But definitely shorter then now

 

[maximus20895]

Okay good. Just keep away from fluff. Try to get to the point. The readers really don't care about anything thing else and that is who you are marketing to, the readers.

Let me read some more. I'll tell you if anything else needs improvement. Then you can edit it and I'll review the final copy for you.

 

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[Gymjunkie]

Okay good. Just keep away from fluff. Try to get to the point. The readers really don't care about anything thing else and that is who you are marketing to, the readers.

Let me read some more. I'll tell you if anything else needs improvement. Then you can edit it and I'll review the final copy for you.

Can't give you Speed..gotta spread some.. Two more coming for ya! I can't repay you!

 

[maximus20895]

haha alright. I read the first one you gave me. Like I said the content is good. Some of the words that you used or phrases need to be corrected. I'll read the 2nd one and edit it for you if you want ???

 

[johnny604]

Hi. stopping by to say i enjoy following this thread. I like to see the stats of your blog (wrt your set goals) << and all in relation to the changes you're making to it. So i hope to see more stats.
Haven't read through all the posts...As an easy/free traffic builder :
have you posted (pay others to post) in some of the top bodybuilding forums [w/ your link]? (I'd guess alot of people looking to solve the weight gain problem would go here.). Rank their posts from the most popular, and start posting in these. As well some of these major threads might even be great ideas for you to write about in your blog (and take related traffic from google.)

 

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[kurtyordy]

Hi. stopping by to say i enjoy following this thread. I like to see the stats of your blog (wrt your set goals) << and all in relation to the changes you're making to it. So i hope to see more stats.
Haven't read through all the posts...As an easy/free traffic builder :
have you posted (pay others to post) in some of the top bodybuilding forums [w/ your link]? (I'd guess alot of people looking to solve the weight gain problem would go here.). Rank their posts from the most popular, and start posting in these. As well some of these major threads might even be great ideas for you to write about in your blog (and take related traffic from google.)

I know some folks over at dp forums rent their sigs, might be worth looking into.

 

[biophase]

Great! For now it is a Word document.. gonna figure out how to make it .pdf later or tomorrow. Adding finishing touches now...

Download Bullzip pdf printer to make PDFs.

 

[maximus20895]

I'm editing it now bud. I'll make it a PDF and send the whole thing to ya.

 

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[Gymjunkie]

Hi. stopping by to say i enjoy following this thread. I like to see the stats of your blog (wrt your set goals) << and all in relation to the changes you're making to it. So i hope to see more stats.
Haven't read through all the posts...As an easy/free traffic builder :
have you posted (pay others to post) in some of the top bodybuilding forums [w/ your link]? (I'd guess alot of people looking to solve the weight gain problem would go here.). Rank their posts from the most popular, and start posting in these. As well some of these major threads might even be great ideas for you to write about in your blog (and take related traffic from google.)

Hi,

I will give more stats definitely.. although they are down.

And yes I am active in forums mate. Post a lot there. Probably third of visits come from there

Cheers

 

[Gymjunkie]

I know some folks over at dp forums rent their sigs, might be worth looking into.

And DP is?

 

[Gymjunkie]

Download Bullzip pdf printer to make PDFs.

I'll keep this in mind, I have found a converter online and will use this now, but thanx a lot, def. gonna use Bullzip later

 

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[imcmillionaire]

I think you have a nice road ahead of you. Make sure that you make daily progress toward you goal each day, so you don't fall of and start to lose track of where your going.

 

[Gymjunkie]

I think you have a nice road ahead of you. Make sure that you make daily progress toward you goal each day, so you don't fall of and start to lose track of where your going.

And a long one too! Thanx

 

[Gymjunkie]

It's official, Maximus20895 is an incredible guy! He's given so much help he should have more Reputation! I own him a favor!!!

 

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[Gymjunkie]

Ok, the guide is up. With huge help from Max, he edited it for me, since there were mistakes in grammar... I'm not fro USA or UK..so this is very important... Phew... Gonna see how it does now!

 

[maximus20895]

And DP is?

DP = forums.digitalpoint.com it's kidna like the warrior forum, but they sell different stuff too

It's official, Maximus20895 is an incredible guy! He's given so much help he should have more Reputation! I own him a favor!!!

Thanks. I'm glad to help.

Ok, the guide is up. With huge help from Max, he edited it for me, since there were mistakes in grammar... I'm not fro USA or UK..so this is very important... Phew... Gonna see how it does now!

I'm excited to see your success. This should motivate me to start working on my own stuff lol

Edit: I think you messed up on giving the link out. just make a folder called downloads and put the pdf in there. Give a link that links to 36pounds.com/downloads/basic.pdf or w/e I named the PDF lol

Edit once more: just change the link to:

http://36pounds.com/nutritionguide/Basics of Nutrition for Gaining Muscle.pdf

 

[Gymjunkie]

DP = forums.digitalpoint.com it's kidna like the warrior forum, but they sell different stuff too



Thanks. I'm glad to help.



I'm excited to see your success. This should motivate me to start working on my own stuff lol

Edit: I think you messed up on giving the link out. just make a folder called downloads and put the pdf in there. Give a link that links to 36pounds.com/downloads/basic.pdf or w/e I named the PDF lol

Edit once more: just change the link to:

http://36pounds.com/nutritionguide/Basics of Nutrition for Gaining Muscle.pdf

I did screw up issed:
I uploaded it to RapidShare for now..
Mate, definitely start your own project!!! This is one of the best things that can happen in life! The freedom, the contributing, the challenge.. all feels great!

 

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[Gymjunkie]

Ok, now that the guide is out. My main problem now is to take my content to next level from Good to Great.. for that I'm now gonna read my as.s off and test it later..

 

[maximus20895]

why don't you give out different kinds of exercises????

I would also advise you to change the link to your guide so they can download it within the site. It is much more professional and you can track how many people have downloaded it.

 

[Gymjunkie]

why don't you give out different kinds of exercises????

I would also advise you to change the link to your guide so they can download it within the site. It is much more professional and you can track how many people have downloaded it.

Because exercises I recommend now are the best. Those fancy exercises on machines are inferior to these. I am abbreviating bodybuilding, the biggest problem is information overload. Time to get back to basics

RapidShare counts downloads too. I just don't think it's that big of deal.

Edit: switched the links, but the one you gave doesn't work.. Rapidshare will be good for this time.

 

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[maximus20895]

boo! You should switch links. I'll give you the link again. I didn't know that you already had exercises posted.

 

[maximus20895]

Adrian, this link works. Just copy and paste it. When I click on it, it goes to the PDF. I'm not sure why it doesn't work for you.

http://www.36pounds.com/nutritionguide/Basics of Nutrition for Gaining Muscle.pdf

I can't make the url longer. The site automatically makes it a hyperlink. Just click the link and then copy and paste it. It should be longer.

 

[Gymjunkie]

Adrian, this link works. Just copy and paste it. When I click on it, it goes to the PDF. I'm not sure why it doesn't work for you.

http://www.36pounds.com/nutritionguide/Basics of Nutrition for Gaining Muscle.pdf

I can't make the url longer. The site automatically makes it a hyperlink. Just click the link and then copy and paste it. It should be longer.

I swear it didn't work.. gonna try now.

 

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[maximus20895]

yay! It worked. I'm so proud of you!!! Haha

 

[Gymjunkie]

yay! It worked. I'm so proud of you!!! Haha

Lol! Haha.. thanx for link