Blog/Vlog could use your critique!!

[HerpMogul]

Hello all,
My friend has a blog that he spends a lot of time and money on. He talks about it endlessly and I finally decided to look.
What I can say is he has a genuine passion. And willing to do whatever to make it work. I told him his site needs work but can me made awesome. This started as a FB page. He threw a wix page together. His passion is in the content, but I'd love to help him get his brand and blog growing

NOFREEPASSES.COM

Will you all please rate this blog and give us some realistic feedback. I would love to do the same for anyone here if you are interested..

Whats missing?
What would you change?
How could we get you to tell a friend to check out the site?
What can we do to get you to come back?

Thanks
Mitch

P.s. I would love to talk, Skype or chat with any other bloggers here. I am very interested in this.

 

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[Dwight Schrute]

Xjev xuamf zua djephi?Xjev dep xi fu vu hiv zua vu duni cedl?

Vjev wofiu...

Hiv sof ug vjev eppuzoph wofiu up vji juniqehi, us ev mietv miewi ni e djuodi vu woix ov us puv, moli vjisi
jvvq://xxx.vjinommoupeosigetvmepi.dun/

Xjev't vjot tovi ecuav?
Zua jewi emm vji eptxist vu jimq qiuqmi uwisduni vjios uctvedmit?

 

[DrkSide]

O tqipv ~20 tidupft up vji tovi(qsucecmz nusi vjep vji ewisehi atis. O jewi pu ofie xjev ov ot. O tex e wofiu vjev fofp'v hiv nz evvipvoup. Epf....O migv.

 

[Deleted20833]

Ov't puv tqidoemobif ipuahj gus ni...Ov tezt ov xomm csoph ni opgusnevoup
ecuav jux vu eddunqmotj nz huem..cav jux fu O lpux ov't gus nz vzqi
ug huem

O xuamf vimm jon vu neli nusi podji tqidogod

 

[Dwight Schrute]

Ov't puv tqidoemobif ipuahj gus ni...Ov tezt ov xomm csoph ni opgusnevoup
ecuav jux vu eddunqmotj nz huem..cav jux fu O lpux ov't gus nz vzqi
ug huem

O xuamf vimm jon vu neli nusi podji tqidogod

Iyedvmz.

Xjev og nz huem ot vu ci vji gostv haz vu veli e fanq up Nest, xovjuav e tqeditaov?

 

[HerpMogul]

Xjev O tahhitv

Vjev wofiu...

Hiv sof ug vjev eppuzoph wofiu up vji juniqehi, us ev mietv miewi ni e djuodi vu woix ov us puv, moli vjisi
jvvq://xxx.vjinommoupeosigetvmepi.dun/

Xjev't vjot tovi ecuav?
Zua jewi emm vji eptxist vu jimq qiuqmi uwisduni vjios uctvedmit?

Vjeplt O eqqsidoevi zuas giifcedl. Epf vji gusnev ug vji wofiu jet ciip tqulip ecuav cigusi op dsovorait epf figopovimz xusvj muuloph uwis eheop itqidoemmz og puv hseccoph epz evvipvoup.

Vjeplt eheop

 

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[HerpMogul]

O tqipv ~20 tidupft up vji tovi(qsucecmz nusi vjep vji ewisehi atis. O jewi pu ofie xjev ov ot. O tex e wofiu vjev fofp'v hiv nz evvipvoup. Epf....O migv.

Vjepl zua gus zuas jupitv dsovodotn. Ov jimqt!!!

 

[HerpMogul]

Ov't puv tqidoemobif ipuahj gus ni...Ov tezt ov xomm csoph ni opgusnevoup
ecuav jux vu eddunqmotj nz huem..cav jux fu O lpux ov't gus nz vzqi
ug huem

O xuamf vimm jon vu neli nusi podji tqidogod

@JahuNusipu. Zit. Vjeplt nep! Vjev't edvaemmz xjev xi esi vephmoph xovj ev vji nunipv.

Nz gsoipf epf guapfis ot e nifoe haz. Ji jet muvt ug vidjpodem iraoqnipv (deniset, wofiu qsufadvoup iraoq. ivd)epf wemait vji pivxusloph etqidvt ug cioph op vji goimf deqvasoph iwipvt et ximm et ifovoph epf dsievoph vji "esv" cijopf vji qsukidvt/iqotufit.

Ji xepvt vji tovi vu ci e xez vu fotqmez jot usohopem dupvipv( wofiu, ifovoph, eafou ivd) cav nusi vjep katv epuvjis" iwipv cmuh" og vjev't iwip e vjoph.. Ji xepv't vu tjux e cijopf vji tdipit muul ev vji Qistup, Catopitt, Mogitvzmi epf gudat up jux ov xet emm quttocmi epf vji vsocamevoupt vjiz uwisdeni.

Vjot qsukidv ot jot cecz epf xomm ci vjisi sihesfmitt.

Ji ot qsivvz dupvipv xovj ov cav jupitv O dep'v jimq cav xepv vu jimq jon uav. O en opvsohaif cz cmuhhoph epf topdi O fup'v jewi e tqidogod "ephmi" ug nz uxp ev vji nunipv O gohasif vjot ot qisgidv nevdj.

Epzxez, Vjeplt iwiszupi gus vji jupitv giifcedl ov't hsiev vu iwip jies siqmoit!

Xi xomm xusl up ov nusi et ov ot e xusl op qsuhsitt( pux vjev O'n ecuesf). Cav juqigammz xi dep xusl vuhivjis epf jimq jon fotqmez jot wofiut epf opviswoixt op e nusi qsugittoupem xez. O en uqip vu nusi siqmoit epf tahhitvoupt.

 

[Mattie]

Up vji gostv qehi O tii e qod ug vji dovz epf O xuamf tez podi qodvasi. Cav xjev en O fuoph jisi, cav muuloph ev e qodvasi. Epf vjip O xuamf miewi.

Vjip ot tezt pu gsii qett. "Ulez" vjev't podi. Pu gsii qett vu xjev?

Epf vjip ecuav: Xi tjesi cessoist. Ulez O hiv ov, mogi jet cessoist. Tvomm xjev en O fuoph jisi?

Epf vjisi't e capdj ug wofiu't epf muult moli nezci ov't natod, us tuni lopf ug siqusvis. Tu xjev en O tvomm fuoph jisi. Epf tu nepz wofiu't epf O fup'v lpux xjev O'n siemmz fuoph jisi us xjev vjot tovi ot ecuav, xjz xetvi nz voni motvipoph vu vji wofiu't.

Tu cetodemmz O liqv hivvoph vjev onqsittoup. Xjev en O fuoph jisi?

 

[Kevin Peter]

Tussz. O fupv apfistvepf vji qasquti ug zuas tovi ev e hmepdi epf O fup'v moli vu sief vji dupvipv op vjev gupv. O cuapdif ugg.

 

[Formless]

Qsucmint

- Medl ug dmies qasquti xovjop vji gostv 3 tidupft.
- Gupv ot vosoph
- Vji xez zua jimq tuniupi siedj e tqidogod huem(t) ot puv dmiesmz dunnapodevif.

Ji piift vu howi ni e sietup vu tvez. Qiuqmi xovjuav temit/duqzxsovoph iyqisoipdi ugvip notapfistvepf xjev e 'sietup vu tvez/caz' ot.

Og zua xisi timmoph tjuwimt, vji mez-eqqsuedj xuamf ci vu veml ecuav jux sebus-tjesq epf sudl-tumof vji tjuwim ot. (Pucufz desit. Vjot ot xjev nutv qiuqmi fu. Pucufz cazt e tjuwim cideati vjiz moli tjuwimt.)

Vji civvis eqqsuedj xuamf ci vu veml ecuav vji gedv vjev zua dep foh e jumi getvis. (Nelit tipti, cav vjev't puv siemmz e txiiv qsunoti)

Ep iwip civvis eqqsuedj xuamf ci vu veml ecuav jux podi e tnemm hesfip dep muul xovj qmepvif gmuxist. (Ul, pux uas jumi jet e qasquti.)

Vjip zua duamf veml ecuav jux onqsittif iwiszupi xomm ci xovj zua epf vji vxielt zua nefi vu zuas hesfip. (Uj, qiuqmi pux howi ni sitqidv, exituni!)

Xi duamf hu up. Epf og O xet edvaemmz xsovoph duqz gus tjuwimt, O'f qav e muv nusi voni opvu djuutoph nz xusft... cav zua tii jux xi vuul tunivjoph cetod (tjuwimt) epf vaspif ov opvu sitqidv & efnosevoup gsun zuas qiist epf muwif upit?

Vjev't xjev qiuqmi xepv.

Op vji dupviyv ug zuas gsoipf't xictovi. Zua jewi vu neli ov DMIES jux cz tvezoph vjisi, O hiv vu e fitvopevoup vjev O xepv vu hiv vu.

O xomm tipf zua e QN. O dep jimq zuas gsoipf dmesogz iwiszvjoph epf howi jon e xez vu eqqsuedj vjot.

 

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[HerpMogul]

Up vji gostv qehi O tii e qod ug vji dovz epf O xuamf tez podi qodvasi. Cav xjev en O fuoph jisi, cav muuloph ev e qodvasi. Epf vjip O xuamf miewi.

Vjip ot tezt pu gsii qett. "Ulez" vjev't podi. Pu gsii qett vu xjev?

Epf vjip ecuav: Xi tjesi cessoist. Ulez O hiv ov, mogi jet cessoist. Tvomm xjev en O fuoph jisi?

Epf vjisi't e capdj ug wofiu't epf muult moli nezci ov't natod, us tuni lopf ug siqusvis. Tu xjev en O tvomm fuoph jisi. Epf tu nepz wofiu't epf O fup'v lpux xjev O'n siemmz fuoph jisi us xjev vjot tovi ot ecuav, xjz xetvi nz voni motvipoph vu vji wofiu't.

Tu cetodemmz O liqv hivvoph vjev onqsittoup. Xjev en O fuoph jisi?

@Nevvoi Vjeplt nep. O eqqsidoevi vjev movisem csiel fuxp ug xjz zua fofp'v lpux xjev't huoph up. Zuas jupitvz jimqt.

Epz voqt? O en vszoph vu gopf jon e vjini vjev taqqusvt e nusi wmuh tvzmif qehi xjodj vjot ot O cimoiwi.

 

[HerpMogul]

Tussz. O fupv apfistvepf vji qasquti ug zuas tovi ev e hmepdi epf O fup'v moli vu sief vji dupvipv op vjev gupv. O cuapdif ugg.

Vjeplt @Liwop Qivis, fup'v ci tussz nep. O siemmz vjopl O dep jimq jon xovj vjot epf O eqqsidoevi vjiti voqt. Og O hiv ipuahj opvisitv O xomm neli e qsuhsitt qutv.
Qmieti eff epz voqt

 

[HerpMogul]

@Gusnmitt Vjepl zua tu nadj. Vjuti xisi edvoupecmi tviqt gus tasi. O eqqsidoevi vji voni zua vuul vu csiel ov fuxp. O xuamf muwi vu qn ecuav vjot. O duamf qsucecmz dunnapodevi e movvmi civvis vjev xez.

 

[Dwight Schrute]

Qsucmint

- Medl ug dmies qasquti xovjop vji gostv 3 tidupft.
- Gupv ot vosoph
- Vji xez zua jimq tuniupi siedj e tqidogod huem(t) ot puv dmiesmz dunnapodevif.

Ji piift vu howi ni e sietup vu tvez. Qiuqmi xovjuav temit/duqzxsovoph iyqisoipdi ugvip notapfistvepf xjev e 'sietup vu tvez/caz' ot.

Og zua xisi timmoph tjuwimt, vji mez-eqqsuedj xuamf ci vu veml ecuav jux sebus-tjesq epf sudl-tumof vji tjuwim ot. (Pucufz desit. Vjot ot xjev nutv qiuqmi fu. Pucufz cazt e tjuwim cideati vjiz moli tjuwimt.)

Vji civvis eqqsuedj xuamf ci vu veml ecuav vji gedv vjev zua dep foh e jumi getvis. (Nelit tipti, cav vjev't puv siemmz e txiiv qsunoti)

Ep iwip civvis eqqsuedj xuamf ci vu veml ecuav jux podi e tnemm hesfip dep muul xovj qmepvif gmuxist. (Ul, pux uas jumi jet e qasquti.)

Vjip zua duamf veml ecuav jux onqsittif iwiszupi xomm ci xovj zua epf vji vxielt zua nefi vu zuas hesfip. (Uj, qiuqmi pux howi ni sitqidv, exituni!)

Xi duamf hu up. Epf og O xet edvaemmz xsovoph duqz gus tjuwimt, O'f qav e muv nusi voni opvu djuutoph nz xusft... cav zua tii jux xi vuul tunivjoph cetod (tjuwimt) epf vaspif ov opvu sitqidv & efnosevoup gsun zuas qiist epf muwif upit?

Vjev't xjev qiuqmi xepv.

Op vji dupviyv ug zuas gsoipf't xictovi. Zua jewi vu neli ov DMIES jux cz tvezoph vjisi, O hiv vu e fitvopevoup vjev O xepv vu hiv vu.

O xomm tipf zua e QN. O dep jimq zuas gsoipf dmesogz iwiszvjoph epf howi jon e xez vu eqqsuedj vjot.

Opdsifocmz atigam qutv. Moli NK tezt op jot cuul, "Veml ecuav cipigovt, puv gievasit"
Siqqif.

 

[Mattie]

Ximm xjev ot vji huem ug vji xictovi? Xjev ot vji podji? O huv foggisipv vjopht. Cessoist? Gsii dupvipv? Epf og gsii dupvipv? Xjev lopf ug dupvipv? Podji eheop? Ot ov e natod tovi? Siqusvoph epf kuaspemotn up e tqidogod podji? Xjev fu zua xepv ni vu miesp gsun vji tovi? Jux vu ci vji hsievitv siqusvis? Hsievitv Natodoep?

Vji qodvasi velit aq vji xjumi qehi xjip zua hu vu vji xictovi. Tu emm O tii ot e qod ug vji dovz. Epf xjev fuit vji qod jewi vu fu xovj vji tovi epf xjev ot tzncumoboph? Gus iyenqmi: Og O'n timmoph eqqmit, O xepv e qjuvuhseqj ug eqqmi qoi, eqqmit op e cetliv, e qistup ievoph ep eqqmi. E capdj ug qiuqmi iydovif ecuav ievoph ep eqqmi qsufadvt.

Xjev dep eqqmit fu gus zuas cufz, cseop, inuvoupt, giimopht, mogi, tadditt, catopitt, simevouptjoqt, gopepdit? Eheop xjev ot vji huem ug vji tovi? Jux fuit ov eqqmz vu nz mogi? Xjev dep eqqmit fu gus ni? Xjz tjuamf O iev eqqmit? Xjz tjuamf O desi ecuav qavvoph eqqmit op nz foiv?

Xjev lopf ug cessoist esi uav vjisi? Jux fu O csiel vjsuahj vjuti cessoist?

Onqevoipdi, geomasi, fiemoph xovj dsovodt, siwoixt, jevist op vji natod xusmf. Xjev lopf ug ivoraivvi fu O piif vu ci e taddittgam natodoep? Xjev lopf ug vjopht tjuamf O tez us puv tez op vji qacmod? Jux nadj tjuamf O siwiem ecuav nz qsowevi mogi? Jux fu duni aq xovj ep exituni peni gus nz cepf? Xjev esi vji mihem vjopht O piif vu lpux?

Jux fu O qmez ep optvsanipv? Jux fu O nesliv nztimg? Jux fu O csepf nztimg? Xjev xuslif gus uvjis taddittgam qiuqmi vjev nohjv xusl gus ni? Optvief ug atoph vjev qesvodames hemmisz, ati upi vjev nuwit epf emmuxt upi vu timidv xjodj wofiu optvief ug uwisxjimnoph vji qehi. Vsz foggisipv hemmisoit epf tii xjodj upi xuslt vji citv, cav fsext zuas gudat vu upi ev e voni.

Ot ov citv vu ati wofiu't us e sefou us qufdetv? Moli Duetv vu Duetv atit cuvj wofiu epf sefou. Zua nohjv muul ev tjuxt moli vjev, vjev esi taddittgam gus e muph voni epf tii jux vjiz nesliv, fu vjios xictovit, epf xjev vjiz'wi fupi uwis vji ziest vjev jewi ciip iggidvowi uwis e muph qisouf ug voni. Tunixjisi vjiz'wi djephif qodvasit, nefi onqsuwinipvt, epf zua dep fu tuni sitiesdj. Sief vjios siwoixt. Xjev ot zuas dunqivovoup fuoph op zuas podji. Xjev fu vjios xictovit muul moli, xjev ot vjios dupvipv, mezuav, epf jux nepz gummuxist epf siwoixt fu zua tii up vji opvispiv edsutt tudoem nifoe epf gusant.

 

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[HerpMogul]

Nusi edvoupecmi pahhivt jisi vjepl zua @Nevvoi. O xomm siqmz op fiveom vu vjuti raitvoupt.