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If the original email is in Italian (and you're sending it out in Italian) then we're missing a LOT of nuance. It'll be very difficult for us to accurately assess the meaning. The English translation, of course, has many spelling and grammar errors and that hurts your credibility.
Also, you're offering a LOT for your first email. Offering a website right away is an easy way to end up in the junk folder. See if you can get them to talk to you for 5 minutes first. Offer real, specific value for their business up front. This works for me.
Also, you're offering a LOT for your first email. Offering a website right away is an easy way to end up in the junk folder. See if you can get them to talk to you for 5 minutes first. Offer real, specific value for their business up front. This works for me.