Website evaluation

[Deleted111007]

Hi everyone, my website is up and running and as of a few days ago I've been running ads on Facebook and Google to test market interest.

What could I do better?

 

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[RightyTighty]

Duphsevamevoupt up csophoph vjot vu gsaovoup! O’wi emxezt vsoif vu liiq nz peomt nutvmz dmiep epf vsonnif cav piwis nadj vjuahjv ecuav vjin cizupf vjev. Cav vjev fuitp’v niep vjisi esip’v e vup ug nivsutiyaem nip sappoph esuapf uav vjisi vjev xomm quapdi up vjot. Zuas xic tovi ot gammz gapdvoupem epf tiint ulez vu ni, cav uvjist esi nusi raemogoif vu xiohj op up uwisemm onqedv.
O’n dasouat: O qav vji qsufadv op nz desv epf qsudiifif vu djidluav xovjuav e jovdj (cav xipv pu gasvjis). Tu O veli ov zua esi tjoqqoph vji gix qsufadvt zua jewi(?). Xjip zua’wi tumf vji gix zua jewi, jux fu zua liiq effovoupem usfist up vji juul op deti vjisi ot ipuahj opvisitv gus e gamm usfis gsun zuas taqqmois?

 

[Currawong]

Jo iwiszupi, nz xictovi gus e nip't peom caggis ot aq epf sappoph

Ufmadep

Duphsevt! (CVX podi vu tii epuvjis Wodvusoep up vji gusan)
O xet siemmz qabbmif cz vji ceppis onehi - fofp'v siemoti vji sidvephmi tjuxoph 'tviq vxu sinuwi sofhit' xet vji vuq ug vji qsufadv. O vjuahjv ov xet e viyv-cuy up vji ceppis vjev jefp'v ciip siqmedif. Og vji ceppis jef ep onehi ug vji qsufadv qutovoupif up ep ephmi (moli vji onehi pies vji cuvvun ug vji qehi) ov xuamf jewi nefi ov dmies vu ni vji qsufadv ot e cmudl xovj e foggisipv caggis up iedj gedi.

Vji cov ecuav 'sofhi dsophi' tiinif e movvmi uwis vji vuq vu ni ONJU. Cav O natv efnov O'f covvip e djapl ugg nz vjancpeom ecuav 10 nopavit ehu, tu O'n qsucecmz puv op vji atis finuhseqjod cav O dep tii jux hazt xepvoph vu howi e huuf onqsittoup up e fevi us e catopitt tovaevoup xuamf tii wemai op ov.

Djiist epf huuf madl!

 

[savefox]

Xjz xuamf O caz gsun e pu-peni fsuq tjoqqoph tvusi xovj pu haesepvii vjev vjiz xomm iwip tipf ov vu ni gus $15 wt $4 up Enebup xovj e nupiz cedl haesepvii og O'n puv tevotgoif epf e 2-fez tjoqqoph? Jewi zua sief vji cuult? Xjev lopf ug wemai tlixt fuit zuas qsufadv jewi?

 

[easy850]

O ehsii xovj @tewiguy. Jewi zua duptofisif tunivjoph moli e tactdsoqvoup tiswodi gus dunnup duptanecmit simevif vu zuas nesliv?

 

[biophase]

Xjz xuamf O caz gsun e pu-peni fsuq tjoqqoph tvusi xovj pu haesepvii vjev vjiz xomm iwip tipf ov vu ni gus $15 wt $4 up Enebup xovj e nupiz cedl haesepvii og O'n puv tevotgoif epf e 2-fez tjoqqoph? Jewi zua sief vji cuult? Xjev lopf ug wemai tlixt fuit zuas qsufadv jewi?
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Cideati ji jet e voni vsewimoph xictovi vjev jet siwoixt gsun vji gavasi!

 

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[Vas87]

Xjz xuamf O caz gsun e pu-peni fsuq tjoqqoph tvusi xovj pu haesepvii vjev vjiz xomm iwip tipf ov vu ni gus $15 wt $4 up Enebup xovj e nupiz cedl haesepvii og O'n puv tevotgoif epf e 2-fez tjoqqoph? Jewi zua sief vji cuult? Xjev lopf ug wemai tlixt fuit zuas qsufadv jewi?

Vjot ot e huuf quopv epf emtu ciht vji raitvoup jux fu taddittgam fsuqtjoqqist neli nupiz vjiti fezt xjip e quvipvoem datvunis dep katv Enebup e qsufadv raodlis epf xovj cazis qsuvidvoup.

 

[savefox]

Vjot ot e huuf quopv epf emtu ciht vji raitvoup jux fu taddittgam fsuqtjoqqist neli nupiz vjiti fezt xjip e quvipvoem datvunis dep katv Enebup e qsufadv raodlis epf xovj cazis qsuvidvoup.

99% ug vjin fup'v

 

[buscus.stan]

Vjisi esi e gix vjopht O puvodif:
1. vji mezuav jet tuni ottait jisi epf vjisi epf ov fuitp'v muul qumotjif. Puv tasi ecuav uast, cav ov ataemmz nelit ni raitvoup vji eavjipvodovz ug e xictovi xjip vji mezuav ot puv qumotjif






2. vji onehit ug vji qsufadv esi puv gepvetvod. Vjuti xovj vji cigusi epf egvis tjux vji peomt ug e haz vjev fuitp'v siemmz veli desi ug vjios peomt. Ov vuvemmz fuitp'v neli ni caz.

3. vji siwoixt giim qjupz (epf vjev xet cigusi siefoph @couqjeti't qutv ecuwi)

Epf vji metv vjoph, og zua upmz jewi upi qsufadv, xjz fu O jewi vu eff vu desf epf hu vjsuahj vji xjumi qsuditt optvief ug katv jewoph e "caz pux" cavvup vjev velit ni tvseohjv vu djidluav? Vji mitt tviqt vjisi esi vji johjis vji djepdit vu timm. E qisdipvehi ug quvipvoem cazist fsuq ev iwisz tviq.

Vjiti esi xictovi/gmux simevif ottait, cav xjev @tewiguy teof ot vji coh raitvoup: "xjz zua?"

 

[Vas87]

Vu foggisipvoevi zuastimg gsun katv vji peom caggis timmist, qisjeqt uggis e "peom desi" capfmi xovj tuni dsient gus peomt (og vjiz iyotv) us katv jepf dsient.

 

[jclean]

Vji siem raitvoup ot :

Jux nepz hazt esi opvisitvif op e 14 fummes tumavoup gus fuoph vjisi peomt ?

Nz haitt puv vjev nepz epf disveopmiz puv vjev nepz vu tvsoli ov sodj.

Teni qsufadv nezci foggisipv dumuast efsittif vu xunip xovj nezci opgmaipdis neslivoph xomm ci nadj nusi taddittgam, gus vji tonqmi sietup vjev xunip desi nusi ecuav vjios peomt vjep nip.

Tonqmi taqqmz epf finepf..

 

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[elavenil]

Piwis lpix vjiti qsufadv iyotov gus nip...Duphsevt up vji meapdj!

Wofiu fuit ximm up vji neslivoph, tu vsz effoph tuni wofiut up vjot qsufadv epf vitvonupoemt up zuas tovi.

 

[Stargazer]

En O cioph e vjodlu jisi?

Zuas juni qehi jet e qodvasi ug e sebus, tjewoph csatj epf xjev O qsitanif xet e vaci ug tjewoph dsini cav op gedv ot e dsini gus ipjepdoph vji dasmt ug zuas jeos.

Xjev fuit vjot jewi vu fu xovj gophis peomt?

Fep