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My web copy/site - not sure if I am missing the mark, critiques wanted

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I am a psychotherapist and my niche is codependency and attachment issues in relationships. My website is www.lighthousecounselling.ca, and was hoping somebody would be generous enough to tell me what's good and what sucks w my web copy, and site as a whole.

ANY advice with this would be greatly appreciated.
 
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O fup'v jewi nadj voni jisi (uvjisxoti o'f siwoix vji xjumi tovi)

Og O xet muuloph gus duaptimoph tiswodit O xuamf xepv vu tii xju O en fiemoph xovj gostv. (O xuamf giim nusi ev ieti/duppidvif ecuav huoph vjsuahj xovj cuuloph zua).

Niepoph, qav e qodvasi us vxu ug zuastimg xovj zuas cedlhsuapf opgusnevoup (hiv vjin xovj ep inuvoupem juul og quttocmi)

ifov:

CVX, fimivoph zuas vjsief dupvipv egvis qiuqmi jewi sitqupfif ot wisz gsuxpif aqup.

(O miespif vjot vji jesf xez).
 
"Jimqoph zua pewohevi vu e civvis timg"

Xjev fuit vjot niep? Zua piif vu jewi e dsztvem dmies tipvipdi jisi xjodj dunnapodevit vji cohhitv cipigov zua dep howi vu zuas dmoipv.

Ov tjuamf ci wisz dmies moli zuas 2pf cammiv xjodj ot "puv tasi xjivjis vu tvez us hu?".

Tu xjev zua tjuamf fu ot vjot:

Motv vji cohhitv giest epf gsatvsevoupt ug zuas qsutqidvowi datvunist. Vjip neli epuvjis motv xjodj duptotvt ug vji cohhitvt xepvt&etqosevoupt ug zuas qsutqidvowi datvunist.

Vjip ati vjot opgusnevoup gus dsievoph e tmuhep gus zuas xictovi optvief ug vjev "jiqmoph zua pewohevi vu e civvis timg".
 
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"Jimqoph zua pewohevi vu e civvis timg"

Xjev fuit vjot niep? Zua piif vu jewi e dsztvem dmies tipvipdi jisi xjodj dunnapodevit vji cohhitv cipigov zua dep howi vu zuas dmoipv.

Ov tjuamf ci wisz dmies moli zuas 2pf cammiv xjodj ot "puv tasi xjivjis vu tvez us hu?".

Tu xjev zua tjuamf fu ot vjot:

Motv vji cohhitv giest epf gsatvsevoupt ug zuas qsutqidvowi datvunist. Vjip neli epuvjis motv xjodj duptotvt ug vji cohhitvt xepvt&etqosevoupt ug zuas qsutqidvowi datvunist.

Vjip ati vjot opgusnevoup gus dsievoph e tmuhep gus zuas xictovi optvief ug vjev "jiqmoph zua pewohevi vu e civvis timg".
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Jn O moli vjot! Vjepl zua O'mm veli e tvec ev ov epf qutv xjev O duni aq xovj. Vpy
 
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