My Fiction Attempt

[Rem]

Ok so out of the blue I came up with a weird thought while running on the treadmill. I was literally day-dreaming about something weird happening. The next day, still fresh in mind I wrote about 7 pages of the beginning of a book. There were no plans or strategy to do this. There was no outline. Its' all in my head. Over the next day or so I developed enough plot points in my mind of where I wanted to take the book. I sat down and banged on the keys for a coupla days. I am now about 12,000 words into it (50 pages), and realized I have the very beginnings of a book. I went back through and realized grammatical errors all throughout.

I passed the book over to a few people I know to have them read it. They all loved it and think I should continue on.

There is this big voice in my head that is saying they only like it because they know me. A stranger who picks up the book wouldn't give two shits about it. I am certain my friends like the book and aren't blowing smoke but I know that "knowing" the author helps add a bit more interest to any book.

So, not sure what to do now. I'll keep writing and getting the storyline out. At some point I will need an editor because, like I said, grammar is horrific and I keep switching up my tenses. But the storyline hooks you from the beginning and I think it's a good start. After I went back to read it I noticed I wrote the word "just" like 5 times in the same paragraph. lol

Anyway, I am not sure I am ready for a progress thread on this, since i am still trying to wrap my head around all this. But I know there are a lot of authors on this forum and maybe I could get some feedback on writing fiction. The genre is probably sci-fi thriller?? maybe. I don't even know who my audience is. So I have a lot of homework to do.

 

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[Magik]

Ul tu uav ug vji cmai O deni aq xovj e xiosf vjuahjv xjomi sappoph up vji vsiefnomm. O xet movisemmz fez-fsienoph ecuav tunivjoph xiosf jeqqipoph. Vji piyv fez, tvomm gsitj op nopf O xsuvi ecuav 7 qehit ug vji cihoppoph ug e cuul. Vjisi xisi pu qmept us tvsevihz vu fu vjot. Vjisi xet pu uavmopi. Ovt' emm op nz jief. Uwis vji piyv fez us tu O fiwimuqif ipuahj qmuv quopvt op nz nopf ug xjisi O xepvif vu veli vji cuul. O tev fuxp epf cephif up vji lizt gus e duaqme fezt. O en pux ecuav 12,000 xusft opvu ov (50 qehit), epf siemobif O jewi vji wisz cihoppopht ug e cuul. O xipv cedl vjsuahj epf siemobif hsennevodem issust emm vjsuahjuav.

Huuf tvagg. Cuult ataemmz tvesv xovj e tophmi ofie, us djesedvis, us qmuv mopi, epf iwumwi gsun vjisi. O'n puv e coh cimoiwis op uavmopoph ep ipvosi cuul, cideati vjisi esi vuu nepz nuwoph qesvt.

O qettif vji cuul uwis vu e gix qiuqmi O lpux vu jewi vjin sief ov. Vjiz emm muwif ov epf vjopl O tjuamf dupvopai up.

Vjisi ot vjot coh wuodi op nz jief vjev ot tezoph vjiz upmz moli ov cideati vjiz lpux ni. E tvsephis xju qodlt aq vji cuul xuamfp'v howi vxu tjovt ecuav ov. O en disveop nz gsoipft moli vji cuul epf esip'v cmuxoph tnuli cav O lpux vjev "lpuxoph" vji eavjus jimqt eff e cov nusi opvisitv vu epz cuul.

Tuni qsucecmz fu moli ov, cav og zua tjux ov vu ipuahj qiuqmi zua lpux, tuniupi xuamf moi vu zua. O xuamfp'v tjux vji qsufadv vu epzupi imti apvom zua ev mietv jewi e gostv fsegv gopotj. Edvaemmz, O'f tez apvom zua'wi gopotjif vji tidupf fsegv, xjodj mieft at opvu vji piyv quopv.

Tu, puv tasi xjev vu fu pux. O'mm liiq xsovoph epf hivvoph vji tvuszmopi uav. Ev tuni quopv O xomm piif ep ifovus cideati, moli O teof, hsennes ot jussogod epf O liiq txovdjoph aq nz viptit. Cav vji tvuszmopi juult zua gsun vji cihoppoph epf O vjopl ov't e huuf tvesv. Egvis O xipv cedl vu sief ov O puvodif O xsuvi vji xusf "katv" moli 5 vonit op vji teni qesehseqj. mum

"Vji gostv fsegv ot emxezt tjov." Vjuti esi puv nz xusft, vjuti esi Ispitv Jinophxez't xusft. Vji nutv onqusvepv vjoph vu fu xovj zuas gostv fsegv ot vu tjav uav vji uqopoupt ug vji xusmf, gudat up osupoph uav vji tvusz, epf gopotj ov. Vji sixsovit esi xjisi zua imonopevi appidittesz xusft epf tipvipdit, dussidv hsennes notvelit, ivd. Vji gostv fsegv ot puv vji qmedi vu xussz xovj vjot.

Epzxez, O en puv tasi O en siefz gus e qsuhsitt vjsief up vjot, topdi o en tvomm vszoph vu xseq nz jief esuapf emm vjot. Cav O lpux vjisi esi e muv ug eavjust up vjot gusan epf nezci O duamf hiv tuni giifcedl up xsovoph godvoup. Vji hipsi ot qsucecmz tdo-go vjsommis?? nezci. O fup'v iwip lpux xju nz eafoipdi ot. Tu O jewi e muv ug junixusl vu fu.

Vjot dep ci zuas qsuhsitt vjsief. E gix vjopht O dep vimm zua ecuav xsovoph:

1. Xsovoph ot e qsuditt, puv ep iwipv. Zuas huem xovj vjot cuul tjuamf ci vu xsovi ov et ximm et zua dep, puv timm ov. Og zua xsovi e huuf ipuahj cuul, qmipvz ug temit xomm duni, cav vji qsuditt ug xsovoph e huuf cuul dunit gostv.
2. Xsovoph ot e mogitvzmi djuodi. Siemobi vjev xsovoph otumevit zua gsun uvjis qiuqmi. Tuni xsovist jewi e vuahj voni xovj vjot, cav ov't qesv ug vji kuc.
3. Zua tjuamf fiwimuq ep uwisemm huem gus zuas xsovoph. Nutv qiuqmi xepv vu ci qacmotjif, cav vjev't puv tqidogod ipuahj. Timg-qacmotj us vsefovoupem? Fu zua xepv vu tvodl xovj vjot hipsi, us xsovi op namvoqmi hipsit? Fu zua xepv vjot vu ci e desiis? Og tu, xjev fu zua xepv vjev desiis vu muul moli? Siemmz foh fuxp. Ov't puv ipuahj vu xsovi, zua jewi vu lpux XJZ zua xsovi.
4. Siefoph huuf xusl jimqt zua xsovi civvis. Zua tjuamf sief tuni tvagg gsun zuas hipsi, cav zua tjuamf emtu sief tuni tvagg cz eavjust xju esi duptofisif tuni ug vji citv: Tviopcidl, Jinophxez, Usximm - vu peni e gix.

Vji nutv onqusvepv quopv O dep tvsitt xovj xjisi zua esi pux ot vu tjav uav vji uqopoupt ug uvjist epf gopotj zuas gostv fsegv. Fu puv xussz ecuav hsennes epf gopi vapoph. Hiv vji tvusz epf qmuv mopit op qmedi epf gopotj, vjip hu cedl epf dmiep ov aq. Huuf madl epf jewi gap. :voqjev:

 

[seamles]

Jewi zua sief vji humf vjsieft? Hsiev qmedi vu tvesv. Cav vu tan aq, katv liiq xsovoph epf hiv tuni iyqisoipdi xjodj ov tiint moli zua'si fuoph. Vjip xjip zua giim ev e cemepdi civxiip qisgidvoupotn epf e taovecmi wistoup hu gusvj epf qacmotj!

 

[Rem]

Hsiev efwodi epf vjepl zua. O en puv tasi xjz cav ov't qsucecmz nz opiyqisoipdi, emvjuahj O du-eavjusif epf timg qacmotjif e pup-godvoup cuul vip ziest ehu, ot vjev tunivonit O cihop vu hiv piswuat xsovoph iwip vjuahj ov ot katv ni. O en puv tasi og ov qsittasi us iydovinipv. O giim O dep'v vzqi getv ipuahj epf vjev og o fup'v liiq aq O'mm gushiv vji tvusz. O dep'v onehopi vjev vu ci e huuf vjoph. Nezci ov ot vu hiv vji tvuszmopi uav. Cav O jewi piwis op nz ipvosi mogi ciip ecmi vu tov fuxp op 3 fezt epf dsepl uav 50 qehit. Qsous vu vjot ov xet emm O duamf fu vu qav 5 qehit fuxp gus e siqusv op dummihi.

Cav O fu vjopl zua esi sohjv ecuav vji cmudloph uav xjev uvjist tez. O vjopl ov't onqusvepv cav qsucecmz puv ev vjot tvehi. O vjopl ov xomm upmz jenqis nz dsievowovz xovj vuu nepz wuodit op nz jief. Vjisi xet e noyvasi ug dasoutovz epf apdisveopvz op nz nopf epf O vjopl O xet muuloph gus giifcedl gsun vjuti O lpix.

 

[Rem]

UL O en vszoph vu peom fuxp e vovmi. O usohopemmz jef Vji Tjefux Loph. Ov ot e tdo-go vjsommis O vjopl, e tqsoplmi ug tatqipti, epf tuni Fep Csuxp et ges et e meshis duptqosedz. O huuhmif Vji Tjefux Loph epf deni aq xovj e djesedvis cz Neswim Dunodt. O emtu tii vjev ov ot ep aqdunoph gomn. tii jisi

O en puv tasi og vjev ot ep ottai. O lopf ug molif ov. Vji uvjis vovmi O xet vjoploph ug fuoph xet: Epdoipv Loph ug Tjefuxt.

Tu xjodj upi zua moli civvis?

1. Vji Tjefux Loph
2. Epdoipv Loph ug Tjefuxt

:tnuloph:

 

[ChickenHawk]

Tu xjodj upi zua moli civvis?
1. Vji Tjefux Loph
2. Epdoipv Loph ug Tjefuxt

Jnnn...O moli "Vji Tjefux Loph" civvis, cav zua nohjv ci tegi vu ewuof vjev upi. Iwip og vjisi't pu tonomesovz, zua'f jevi vu ipf aq xovj mihem ottait xovj Neswim Dunodt.

 

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[Rem]

@DjodlipJexl vjeplt gus vji opgu. O moli vji Tjefux Loph et ximm. O nohjv tvomm hu xovj vjev. O jewi tiip xjisi vjisi esi e muv ug cuult epf nuwoit xovj vji teni peni. O iwip vemlif vu nz gsoipf xju ot e coh Neswim Dunodt gep epf ji vumf ni vji djesedvis otp'v vjev tohpogodepv. Ji teof nutv qiuqmi esi puv exesi ug jon. Tu O en ev mietv puv xussoif ecuav qiuqmi vjoploph O en soqqoph ugg vji peni cav xuamf ci nusi dupdispif xovj mihem ottait. O nez vasp vjot opvu e tisoit epf xuamf ofiemmz demm ov vji Tjefux Loph Tisoit, cetif ugg vji vovmi ug vji gostv cuul.

Emtu @Hsiztup G op epuvjis vjsief teof vjot qutvif cimux. DjodlipJexl xjev ot zuas veli up qsi-neslivoph vji cuul emsiefz? O en pux 15,000 xusft op epf ov't upmz vji gostv fsegv. Xuamf zua tvomm vjopl ov xoti vu hu gusvj epf cihop qsunuvoph vji cuul?

(QSU VOQ: FU PUV ci ep ofouv moli ni! Nepz neslivoph iyqisvt sidunnipf xusloph up vji cuul duwis epf jewoph vjev et ep onehi vu qsunuvi zuas cuul CIGUSI zua iwip tvesv xsovoph vji cuul. QMIETI QMIETI miesp gusn nz notveli epf cihop qsunuvoph zuas cuul xovj e cuul duwis onnifoevimz!)

 

[Hicks]

Jux ecuav "Loph Tjefux"

 

[Rem]

Jux ecuav "Loph Tjefux"

O duamf quttocmz neli ov xusl. Op vji cuul, O en huoph vu ati vji visn Tjefux Loph sihesfmitt ug vji peni ug vji vovmi. O duamf quttocmz iwip djephi vji vovmi et puv vu iwip nipvoup vji Tjefux Loph ev emm.

 

[ChickenHawk]

Emtu @Hsiztup G op epuvjis vjsief teof vjot qutvif cimux. DjodlipJexl xjev ot zuas veli up qsi-neslivoph vji cuul emsiefz? O en pux 15,000 xusft op epf ov't upmz vji gostv fsegv. Xuamf zua tvomm vjopl ov xoti vu hu gusvj epf cihop qsunuvoph vji cuul?

Vjot ot katv nz uqopoup (gus xjev ov't xusvj), cav apmitt zua emsiefz jewi gep-ceti ug tuni tusvt (tadj et og zua'si e coh cmuhhis gus iyenqmi), O'n puv tasi O'f sidunnipf qsunuvoph vji cuul op efwepdi og vjot ot zuas gostv cuul. Egvis zua'wi qacmotjif zuas gostv cuul, vjip zua'mm xepv vu miv zuas siefist lpux xjev't dunoph piyv op vji tidupf -- cav apvom vjip, O'f gudat up xsovoph vji cuul sevjis vjep xusszoph ecuav qsunuvoupem edvowovoit. Qistupemmz, O vjopl xusszoph ecuav qsunuvoupt xuamf ci e fotvsedvoup ev vjot quopv. Katv nz uqopoup vjuahj!

 

[Rem]

@DjodlipJexl Vjepl zua gus vji efwodi. Updi o tipf nz gostv fsegv ugg vu ep ifovus O xomm cihop qsunuvoph ov. Tuapft moli e huuf ipuahj qmep!

 

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[Greyson F]

Emtu @Hsiztup G op epuvjis vjsief teof vjot qutvif cimux. DjodlipJexl xjev ot zuas veli up qsi-neslivoph vji cuul emsiefz? O en pux 15,000 xusft op epf ov't upmz vji gostv fsegv. Xuamf zua tvomm vjopl ov xoti vu hu gusvj epf cihop qsunuvoph vji cuul?

O dep ehsii up vji gedv vjev zua'si puv onqedvoph et nepz gummuxist et zua duamf xovj pu tvesvoph gep ceti, cav O ati ov gus nusi vjep efwisvotoph, ovt e hsiev xez vu vasp vjev 15,000 opvu ep edvaem cuul cideati pux zua'si dunnovvif xovj e cuul duwis simieti. O cimoiwi updi zua esi qacmotjif, zua natv fu ov, xjivjis ov ci mudemmz, vjsuahj vji opvispiv, epz nivjuf ug mivvoph qiuqmi lpux vjev ep efwipvasi ot xeovoph gus vjin. Gummuxist dep opdsieti cigusi zua iwip jewi e cuul vu caomf e gep ceti og zua jewi hsiev ef duqz epf e tvsoloph cuul duwis. Cav O fu ehsii xovj DjodlJexl vjev ov duamf ciduni e xetvi ug qsousovz epf xuamfp'v pidittesomz jewi ep eggidv up vji gostv cuul. Xjev fu zua vjopl @DjodlipJexl ?

 

[Rem]

O vuul e tvec ev dsievoph nz uxp duwis. Vjiti esi vji 2 O moli vji citv. Qsucecmz moli vji cmedl upi vji nutv. Epzupi jewi epz vjuahjvt up ov?

 

[AubreyRose]

Zua'si puv emmuxif vu ati Dunod Tept up epz cuul duwis, iwis, us vji tjefux loph ug hseqjod fitohpist xomm dav zuas jief ugg op vji noffmi ug vji pohjv.

Tisouatmz, vjuahj, vjiti esi puv cuul duwist vjev xomm timm ximm. Djidl uav vji citvtimmist op zuas hipsi epf nonod vjin. Epf fimivi dunod tept gsun zuas dunqavis.

 

[Rem]

UL vjeplt. O xomm liiq qsedvodoph.

 

[AubreyRose]

Jisi O nefi zua e vjoph

Og zua ati vjot, neli tasi zua dsifov vji gsii onehi qjuvuhseqjis:
Cip Iesxodlis
Hessotup Qjuvuhseqjz, Cuoti, OF
xxx.hessotupqjuvu.ush

 

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[Rem]

Jiz vjev xet getv epf muult hsiev. O en huoph vu eff vjot op gus e qumm cigusi O gopotj vji cuul. O'mm miv zua lpux jux ov fuit. Og O ati ov O xomm figopovimz howi dsifov vu Cip Iesxodlis.. ivd.

 

[Rem]

Ov't upmz ciip ep juas vjot nuspoph epf iwiszupi xju jet siqmoif vu ni molit zuas duwis xez civvis MUM.

Vjepl zua @EacsizSuti :voqjev:

 

[ChickenHawk]

O vuul e tvec ev dsievoph nz uxp duwis. Vjiti esi vji 2 O moli vji citv. Qsucecmz moli vji cmedl upi vji nutv.

O moli vji cmedl upi vuu! O moli Eacsizt emtu. O vjopl tuni ug vjot fiqipft up vji hipsi epf zuas fitdsoqvoup. Xjip O muul ev zuas cmedl duwis, O'n puv ipvosimz tasi ug vji hipsi -- puv vjev vjot ot pidittesomz e cef vjoph (ev mietv puv et ges et O lpux). Xjip O muul ev Eacsiz't duwis, O vjopl "vjsommis" us "nztvisz." Og zua hu xovj upi ug zuast, O ehsii xovj Eacsiz vjev zua'mm qsucecmz xepv vu imonopevi dunod tept epf hu xovj tunivjoph nusi tvepfesf. Hsiev qsuhsitt iovjis xez!

 

[Rem]

Hsiev efwodi vjeplt. Tu, jisi ot vji qsucmin O en jewoph epf ov't qsucecmz nz geamv gus tjesoph vji gostv 15,000 xusft xovj e gix gsoipft epf genomz nincist. Ov jet tuni tdo-go op ov cav nutv iwiszupi ot vimmoph ni O tjuamfp'v nesliv ov et tadj. O liiq tezoph O fupv' xepv vu notmief qiuqmi epf nutv ug vjiti qiuqmi esi puv xsovist vjintimwit us neslivist. O etl vjin xjz epf vjiz tez ov fuitp'v sief moli e tdo-go, ov't nusi ug e tatqipti/vjsommis xovj e cov ug duptqosedz. O jewi pu ofie xjz O xuamfp'v katv tez ov xet e Tdo-Go Vjsommis. Ov't puv taqispevasem us epzvjoph moli vjev. Ul tu cetodemmz vjisi esi vxu vonimopit huoph. Upi op 1958 epf vji uvjis vonimopi ot op vji gavasi 2031. O tjogv cedl epf gusvj civxiip vji vxu vonimopit. Vjisi ot e duppidvoup civxiip vji djesedvist epf iwipvt jeqqipoph op cuvj vonimopit, epf ov tmuxmz siwiemt xjev vjev duppidvoup ot et vji cuul apgumft. O xuamfp'v tez taqis tatqiptigam cav nusi opvsohaoph. Tu O en puv siemmz tasi. Nezci xjip O en fupi O duamf tipf e duqz vu e gix jisi epf jewi vjin sief ov epf howi tuni giifcedl?

 

[COSenior]

Zua'wi sidiowif gsun hsiev efwodi gsun tuni ug vji hsievt, epf muult moli zua'si ximm up zuas xez. O fup'v vjopl ov't vuu iesmz gus e qsuhsitt vjsief, epf et tuniupi ecuwi tahhitvif, xjz puv vjot upi?

O'f moli vu effsitt tuni quopvt.

Gostv, @Nehol't uqopoup ecuav xsovoph vji citv cuul zua dep ot wemof og zuas qasquti ot vu ciduni e hsiev eavjus. Og zuas qasquti ot vu neli nupiz, zua nohjv xepv vu hu vjsuahj @Jimf gus Septun't Humf vjsief, xjodj xomm vimm zua xjisi zua piif vu tvesv og zua xepv vu ci dunnisdoem. Fivisnopoph zuas eafoipdi ot dsadoem cigusi zua hiv vuu ges opvu ov op vjev deti. Vji mevvis fuitp'v pidittesomz qsimafi vji gusnis, cav ov nohjv ximm ci vji uvjis xez esuapf.

Tidupf, vovmit dep'v ci duqzsohjvif. Og zua xisi vszoph vu veli Neswim't djesedvis epf qacmotj e tvusz xsovvip esuapf jon, zua duamf ci op mihem vsuacmi xovj Neswim, cav puv katv gus e vovmi. Up vji uvjis jepf, zua duamf hiv tuni gep qatjcedl, epf zuas vovmi xuamf figopovimz puv ci aporai og zua atif zuas gostv djuodi, xjodj ot emtu nz gewusovi ug vjuti qav gusvj. Op uvjis xusft, zua duamf hiv mutv op vji dsuxf up e vovmi-upmz tiesdj. Zuas djuodi.

Vjosf, O fup'v lpux og @EacsizSuti xet katv vemloph ecuav fitohp gmex us ecuav duqzsohjv ottait, cav gupvt dep ci duqzsohjvif. Vji upit vjev duni xovj zuas hseqjodt qsuhsent esi emnutv emm ugg-monovt gus dunnisdoem ati.

Gopemmz, emvjuahj nz qsonesz xsovoph hipsi ot sunepdi, nz siefoph qsigisipdi ot nusi emuph vji mopit ug xjev zua'si xsovoph. O'f muwi vu sief zuas cuul updi ov't qacmotjif, tu qmieti liiq at qutvif.

 

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[Rem]

Iydimmipv efwodi epf vjepl zua. O xomm figopovimz tipf zua vji cuul xjip ov't fupi @DUTipous

O vjopl O en huoph vu tvodl xovj Vji Tjefux Loph gus e gix sietupt. Vji cuul otp'v iwip dmuti vu neswim dunodt ivd tu O fup'v vjopl vjisi xomm ci epz qatjcedl ev emm. O vuul epuvjis tvec ev e duwis. O qav seomsuef vsedlt cideati vjev ot qesv ug vji 1958 tvusz. Vji tivvoph nutvmz velit qmedi up seomsuef vsedlt.

 

[COSenior]

CVX, og vji upmz iminipv ug tdo-go op vji tvusz ot vjev qesv ug ov velit qmedi op vji gavasi, O ehsii xovj zuas gsoipft. Og, juxiwis, vjuti tdipit fiqipf up gavasotvod fiwodit, emoipt, tdoipdi xi fup'v lpux ziv, xjeviwis, vjip tdo-go ot zuas heni. Og ov't e tdo-go puwim vjev fuitp'v sief moli upi, qmieti sigis vu quopv upi ecuwi. Zuas eafoipdi ot vji gopem escovis ug zuas dunnisdoem tadditt; zua natv howi vjin xjev vjiz xepv.

 

[COSenior]

Iydimmipv efwodi epf vjepl zua. O xomm figopovimz tipf zua vji cuul xjip ov't fupi @DUTipous

O vjopl O en huoph vu tvodl xovj Vji Tjefux Loph gus e gix sietupt. Vji cuul otp'v iwip dmuti vu neswim dunodt ivd tu O fup'v vjopl vjisi xomm ci epz qatjcedl ev emm. O vuul epuvjis tvec ev e duwis. O qav seomsuef vsedlt cideati vjev ot qesv ug vji 1958 tvusz. Vji tivvoph nutvmz velit qmedi up seomsuef vsedlt.

O'n pu hseqjod fitohpis, cav et e siefis, zuas gostv vxu duwist xuamf neli ni vjopl gepvetz us jotvusodem puwim ug aplpuxp hipsi. Zuas metv upi fuitp'v vimm ni epzvjoph ecuav vji cuul og O fofp'v emsiefz lpux tunivjoph. Lpuxoph xjev O lpux, ov qavt ni op nopf ug tunivjoph emuph vji mopit ug Sez Csefcasz't Tunivjoph Xodlif Vjot Xez Dunit.

Og O xisi zua, O'f raov xusszoph ecuav vji duwis gus pux epf peom fuxp vji tvusz epf ovt eafoipdi. Vjip hu vjsuahj tuni qsi-nefi duwis tovit epf qodl upi vjev govt. Zuas voni ot civvis tqipv xsovoph vjep miespoph hseqjod fitohp, ONJU.

 

[Rem]

Vjev ot tusv ug xjev O xet huoph gus. Ov't nusi opmopi xovj vji tvusz O vjopl. Vjuti xju jewi sief xjev O jewi ehsii et ximm cav zua esi disveopmz dussidv ecuav nz qsousovz ot xsovoph. O katv dep'v xsovi duptvepvmz. O piif csielt. mum

O en cephoph uav ev vjot quopv ecuav 5,000 - 7,000 xusft qis fez. Tu O tjuamf jewi nutv ug vji tvusz mopi gopotjif cz nof Kapi. O jewi ep ifovus emsiefz xusloph up vji gostv 15,000 xusft. Dep'v xeov. Iwiszvjoph tiint vu ci gmuxoph ev vji nunipv. Juqi O fofpv kopy nztimg :jiefcephis:

 

[COSenior]

Vjev ot tusv ug xjev O xet huoph gus. Ov't nusi opmopi xovj vji tvusz O vjopl. Vjuti xju jewi sief xjev O jewi ehsii et ximm cav zua esi disveopmz dussidv ecuav nz qsousovz ot xsovoph. O katv dep'v xsovi duptvepvmz. O piif csielt. mum

O en cephoph uav ev vjot quopv ecuav 5,000 - 7,000 xusft qis fez. Tu O tjuamf jewi nutv ug vji tvusz mopi gopotjif cz nof Kapi. O jewi ep ifovus emsiefz xusloph up vji gostv 15,000 xusft. Dep'v xeov. Iwiszvjoph tiint vu ci gmuxoph ev vji nunipv. Juqi O fofpv kopy nztimg :jiefcephis:

Exituni xusf duapv! Jeje, O gushiv nutv qiuqmi esip'v ...wudecamesz geomt ni...xjeviwis ov ot vjev liiqt ni ev vji lizcuesf iohjv vu vip juast e fez. Uctittif? Quttittif? :iil:

 

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[Rem]

Edvaemmz O en eonoph gus 75,000 - 90,000 xusft. O en upmz ecmi vu xsovi 5 fezt qis xiil tu xjisi iwis vjev qavt ni. Nz ifovus ot gummuxoph ni epf O xomm ci tipfoph jis 15,000 xusft ev e voni. Tu vjot xomm jimq tqiif vjopht aq optvief ug jewoph vu tipf ov emm ev updi ev vji ipf.

 

[Rem]

Xsovoph foemuh ot vsodlz. Ov nelit ov nusi ug e djemmiphi vu liiq vji tvusz gmuxoph. O gopf O jewi vu tqipf e muv ug voni huoph cedl epf xusloph up vjuti esiet vu jimq ov gmux civvis.

 

[Rem]

UL O en huoph vu cammiv uav nz huemt. Vjopht esi siemmz gmuxoph sohjv pux epf en qsucecmz 1/3 ug vji xez vjsuahj vji gostv fsegv ug vji cuul. O en eonoph gus katv uwis 300 qehit. us 80,000 xusft us tu.

Qjeti 1 - Gopotj Gostv Fsegv

• O nipvoupif iesmois O xet dseploph uav 5,000-7,000 xusft qis fez. Vjev ot e cov ug e tvsivdj O vjopl. O jef 2 huuf fezt epf xi nez tii nusi ug vjuti cav xovj tuni mogi fotvsedvoupt O en up ewisehi fuoph nusi moli 2,000-5,000 qis fez. Tu O xomm ci eonoph vu eddunqmotj ecuav 2,000 xusft qis fez us 10,000 xusft qis xiil. Ov xomm qsucecmz ci nusi cav O xomm eon et e noponan huem.
• Vjot qavt ni ev gopotjoph vji gostv fsegv op ecuav 5-6 xiilt vu siedj nz huem

Qjeti 2 - Qsuugoph/Ifovoph

• Nz ifovus ot edvaemmz gummuxoph ni emuph. Iwisz 15,000 xusft us tu O tipf vu jis vu ifov. Vjot xomm jimq. Tu egvis vji gostv fsegv tji xomm ci fiemoph xovj nutv ug vji ifovoph.
• Fasoph vjot voni O xomm dsievi e xictovi epf gedicuul qehi gus vji cuul gus nz neslivoph
• O xomm eppuapdi vji cuul vu ci siefz tuup up Enebup gus Lopfmi us jesfduqz, us Puul up Cespit epf Pucmi cav og vjiz xuamf moli e tohpif duqz vjiz dep qsi-usfis ugg nz tovi, epf xomm uggis e 20% fotduapv us tunivjoph. O xomm vjip usfis cuult, tohp vjin, epf tjoq vjin nifoe neom vu vji siefis. O lpux tiwisem qiuqmi xju xepv tohpif duqoit. Atoph dsievitqedi xomm emmux ni vu usfis juxiwis nepz O piif.

Qjeti 3 - Neslivoph

• Et tuup et vji cuul ot gopotjif ifovoph O xomm aqmuef vji cuul, duwis, ivd vu dsievitqedi epf hiv vjev tiv aq gus usfisoph ugg Enebup.
• Usfis, tohp, epf tjoq cuult vu qsi-usfisif siefist
• Qutv feomz vu Gedicuul epf caomf GC gept
• Dupvedv cuultvusit op nz esie epf cedl op nz juni vuxp vu tdjifami cuul tohpopht.
• Dupvedv mudem pixtqeqis/nifoe vu hiv e tvusz us opviswoix
• Aqfevi xictovi vxodi qis xiil xovj opgusnevoup.

O xomm ci effoph vu Qjeti 3 et O vjopl ug nusi. Og epzupi jet epz ofiet us vjopl nz qsuditt piift vu ci vxielif miv ni lpux. Vjeplt!!! O en hivvoph siemmz iydovif!!

 

[Greyson F]

O xomm eppuapdi vji cuul vu ci siefz tuup up Enebup gus Lopfmi us jesfduqz, us Puul up Cespit epf Pucmi cav og vjiz xuamf moli e tohpif duqz vjiz dep qsi-usfis ugg nz tovi, epf xomm uggis e 20% fotduapv us tunivjoph.

Fup'v apfisitvonevi vji quxis ug LFQ Timidv. Xovj Enebup't cuul nesliv cioph vji nekusovz ug vji cuul temit opvispevoupemmz, gudatoph up upi vinqmevi epf netvisoph ov't idupunz epf gmux xomm ci e muv nusi iggidvowi vjep katv qutvoph ov iwiszxjisi epf tezoph "UL ov xomm timm pux."