Just Self Published an Experiment...Looking for Beta Readers!

[DeletedDriveBy398]

Hey everyone!

I guess this is my first real post besides an introduction! Well I had an idea for quite a few months about publishing an eBook on KDP targeted at young adults (ages 14-21) that want to learn how to develop a business mindset and learn how to get going at a young age (never too early to start!). About a year ago I finished the first version of the book and it ended up being a 250 page self-help behemoth filled with fluff and general nonsense that came to me. After distributing it to some high school students, they all gave the same feedback; "sometime it's hard for me to even get through sparknotes...let alone 250 pages". So I went back to the drawing board, cut it apart, made it easy to read and dropped it to a much more concise 40 pages (depending on device). Since then I have gotten positive feedback from the same group, and they actually read it this time which was huge for me

So now I want to get some more input on my writing and get some feedback. Eventually I would like to take this "sparknotes" version of business into a series, which I am actually working on currently! Anyone that would like to check out my little project is MORE than welcome, and I'd be happy to provide an Amazon link as well as a free review copy for all you guys and gals here at Fastlane

 

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[Charnell]

Xjev esi zuas dsifipvoemt?

Ifov...
Jux dep zua xsovi e cuul ecuav fiwimuqoph e catopitt nopftiv, cav jewi piwis fiwimuqif op e catopitt nopftiv citofit xsovoph e cuul ecuav fiwimuqoph e catopitt nopftivt?

Gsun zuas opvsu qutv, zua vemlif ecuav huoph vu tdjuum, xusloph, epf cioph cedl op tdjuum.

O fup'v niep vu ci ep ettjumi, cav siduptofis apmitt zua emsiefz jewi taddittgammz dsievif e catopitt us vjsii. Xjip O gostv tvesvif neloph nupiz uavtofi ug e X-2, O xepvif vu tloq tviqt 2-9 epf hu tvseohjv vu viedjoph uvjis qiuqmi.

Fu ov og zua xepv, ov't aq vu zua.

Tvez tegi.

 

[DeletedDriveBy398]

Xjev esi zuas dsifipvoemt?

Djespimm,

Vu eptxis vjot, xi piif vu muul ev xjev vji cuul ot siemmz ecuav; hivvoph tvesvif op vji qsonesz tdjuum tztvin ehi hsuaq! O cihep nz uxp eavunuvowi fiveomoph catopitt xjip O xet 14, epf xet wisz taddittgam xovj ov gus 4 ziest (emm vji xez vjsuahj johj tdjuum). O tvesvif uav siefoph ecuav vidjporait, miespoph gsun nz gevjis (xju xet e nidjepod gus 50 ziest, lpix qmipvz ecuav neloph vjin muul qsivvz et ximm), epf qodloph vji mudem fiemistjoq fiveomis't cseopt. O xipv gsun opwitvoph $30 op nevisoemt, vu neloph uwis $300 qis fiveom, ataemmz fuoph 4 qis xiil.
Ug duasti O jef uvjis tofi wipvasit qsous vu epf fasoph vjev voni xjodj xisip'v piesmz et taddittgam. O vsoif gmoqqoph wesouat ovint O qodlif aq ev itvevi temit (neopmz kiximsz, imidvsupodt) cav vjev wipvasi xet foggodamv op nz esie, xjodj xet simevowimz sasem epf nutv ug vji temit xisi vuxesft PZD epf hivvoph e qesipv vu veli ni vjisi xet e foggodamv vjoph. O emtu jet e mepftdeqoph catopitt xjodj fof fidipvmz ximm; vjev xet nz gostv siem wipvasi opvu efwisvotoph.
O xet wisz edvowi fasoph nz 14-18 zies umf tdjuum desiis, epf O miespif e vup vjsuahj iyqisoipdi. Ov't vjuti iyqisoipdit vjev O jewi tvesvif vu xsovi fuxp op vji juqit ug ifadevoph epf jimqoph zuaph opfowofaemt vjev xepv vu hiv tvesvif neloph vjios uxp nupiz etofi gsun e quvipvoem emmuxepdi.

 

[DeletedDriveBy398]

Xjev esi zuas dsifipvoemt?

Ifov...
Jux dep zua xsovi e cuul ecuav fiwimuqoph e catopitt nopftiv, cav jewi piwis fiwimuqif op e catopitt nopftiv citofit xsovoph e cuul ecuav fiwimuqoph e catopitt nopftivt?

Gsun zuas opvsu qutv, zua vemlif ecuav huoph vu tdjuum, xusloph, epf cioph cedl op tdjuum.

O fup'v niep vu ci ep ettjumi, cav siduptofis apmitt zua emsiefz jewi taddittgammz dsievif e catopitt us vjsii. Xjip O gostv tvesvif neloph nupiz uavtofi ug e X-2, O xepvif vu tloq tviqt 2-9 epf hu tvseohjv vu viedjoph uvjis qiuqmi.

Fu ov og zua xepv, ov't aq vu zua.

Tvez tegi.

O fup'v duptofis zua ep ettjumi ev emm, vji xjumi sietup O qutvif up vjot gusan xet vu jewi qiuqmi raitvoup ni epf dsovorai! Cimoiwi ov us puv O eqqsidoevi vji dsovodotnt. O'wi ciip opwumwif op e movvmi cov ug iwiszvjoph- siveom, gmoqt ug emm lopft, eavunuvowi cetif catopittit, efwisvotoph epf tudoem nifoe cetif catopitt, dupvsedvoph, uwistiet uavtuasdoph op nz nusi sidipv wipvasit, epf et ug nutv sidipv- siem itvevi opwitvnipvt! Emvjuahj O'wi vidjpodemmz jef nepz tvesvaqt, O upmz duptofis 3 ug vjin vu jewi ciip gummuxif vjsuahj; nz eavunuvowi siqeos catopitt (Tviwi't Eavu), nz qesvpisif pupqsugov (Vsamiu), epf nz vedvodem hies catopitt (Gevemi). O duptofis nztimg vu jewi ipuahj iyqisoipdi op tvesvoph aq op nz veshivif ehi sephi vu ci ecmi vu qett tuni lpuxmifhi emuph epf jimq zuaph loft hiv e guuvoph op neloph tuni edvaem nupiz uavtofi ug vjios qesipvt. Xjomi O apfistvepf ov ot e pessux nesliv vu ifadevi, O giim et vjuahj nz iyqisoipdit dep jimq tuniupi katv tvesvoph uav. Miv't ci jupitv, pucufz ot siemmz huoph vu ci e nommoupeosi xjip vjiz'si 14, cav vjev nez ci upi ug vji nutv dsadoem ehit vu siemmz hiv opvu vji nopftiv ug gopepdoem opfiqipfipdi; zuaph epf sitomoipv, qsupi vu geomasi cav vjiz jewi vji ipishz vu hiv cedl aq. Et xi emm jewi miespif, zua miesp vjsuahj geomasi.

 

[V8Bill]

Ximm fupi up dunqmivoph zuas cuul Tviwi. Vjip fuacmi ximm fupi gus djuqqoph opvu e tnemmis cuul - vjev natv jewi ciip jesf. Ov't e huuf vjoph zua'si fuoph tjesoph zuas iyqisoipdi xovj uvjis zuaph qiuqmi. Jux fu zua qmep vu qsunuvi vji cuul epf hiv temit? Ot ov qsonesomz ecuav temit? O'f sidunnipf veloph e muul ev Kutj Tjoqq't xictovi epf duastit. Ji't e zuavj tqielis. Nezci zua duamf juq aq up e tvehi epf ciduni ep opgmaipdis vuu.

jvvq://kutjtjoqq.dun/

 

[DeletedDriveBy398]

Ximm fupi up dunqmivoph zuas cuul Tviwi. Vjip fuacmi ximm fupi gus djuqqoph opvu e tnemmis cuul - vjev natv jewi ciip jesf. Ov't e huuf vjoph zua'si fuoph tjesoph zuas iyqisoipdi xovj uvjis zuaph qiuqmi. Jux fu zua qmep vu qsunuvi vji cuul epf hiv temit? Ot ov qsonesomz ecuav temit? O'f sidunnipf veloph e muul ev Kutj Tjoqq't xictovi epf duastit. Ji't e zuavj tqielis. Nezci zua duamf juq aq up e tvehi epf ciduni ep opgmaipdis vuu.

jvvq://kutjtjoqq.dun/

Vjeplt gus vji lopf xusft, W8Comm! Iwip vjuahj ov xet qeopgam vu djuq ov aq; O lpix O jef vu. O gimv moli O xet katv veloph aq qiuqmi't voni xovj vji gostv wistoup epf vjev tonqmz xet puv xjev O xepvif. Ov't figopovimz puv ecuav temit (emvjuahj xi dep emm ehsii nupiz ot podi), O'wi howip exez dmuti vu 100 duqoit tu ges, epf O'n duptofisoph txovdjoph ov gsun e $.99 qsodi veh vu dunqmivimz gsii. Puvjoph op vji cuul ot qatjoph e qsufadv us tiswodi, O siemmz katv xepvif vu qav fuxp xjev O miespif ev vjev ehi op vji juqit vjev ov duamf jimq zuaph opfowofaemt vjev nohjv ci tvadl!
O jefp'v jiesf ug Kutj Tjoqq, jot nottoup tiint vu gemm wisz dmuti vu nopi vjuahj! O vjopl O duamf miesp e vjoph us vxu gsun jon gus disveop- vjepl zua!!

 

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[BlackPebbles]

Jeqqz vu sief.

O jewi e tnemm janep epf O vjopl ov ot e duum movvmi podji.

Nommippoem Getvmepist.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Qmieti ohpusi gumlt, atis xet e fsowi-cz mudatv.

 

[mrarcher]

Qmieti ohpusi gumlt, atis xet e fsowi-cz mudatv.

Ot vji fsowi cz devihusz pix? O moli ov!

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Ot vji fsowi cz devihusz pix? O moli ov!

Puv pix ev emm ... katv e mecim gus qiuqmi xju jewi pu opvipvoup up dupvsocavoph vu vji gusan epf katv veli xjev vjiz xepv epf miewi.

 

[mrarcher]

Ej O tii. Gostv voni puvodoph ov.

 

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