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I am preparing to send out a trial Trial/Product Testing letter to clients. The copy, envelope format, and structure has been thought out. I want to get your input. Interested in hearing your input on structure, layout, copy formula, and language. I've sanitized it enough to remove the product name, description, and personal details.
I've been reading Joe Sugarman to learn copy and you may see some of his axioms here. Assume the beginning letter of every paragraph is bigger font than the rest. Couldn't get it to format.
Keep in mind the goal of this letter is not to make a $sale but sell an idea for testing. I picked a tone which I thought best facilitated that goal.
All that being said rip it up, pay praise, or provide some criticism.
Cheers.
I've been reading Joe Sugarman to learn copy and you may see some of his axioms here. Assume the beginning letter of every paragraph is bigger font than the rest. Couldn't get it to format.
Keep in mind the goal of this letter is not to make a $sale but sell an idea for testing. I picked a tone which I thought best facilitated that goal.
All that being said rip it up, pay praise, or provide some criticism.
Cheers.
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