I Need Your Feedback for my New Startup Business

[Adam Niazi]

Hello everybody,

I've recently created a new business called Business Creator, I don't want to tell you too much about it, instead I've already created the website and would really appreciate if you told me what your first impressions would be from a customers point of view.

After browsing the website I would be grateful if you could answer the following questions:

1) Have you grasped what the Business Creator offers?
2) Do you feel that Business Creator offers products/services that are desirable? (i.e. do you think it's a good idea?)
3) If you were starting your first business with limited knowledge on how to startup and limited funds, would you consider using Business Creator?
4) We welcome any other feedback you may have; both constructive criticism and positive aspects.

The website is: www.businesscreator.net

Much appreciated!

Adam Niazi

 

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[Michael Raphael]

1. Zuas catopitt't xictovi muult moli ov xet dsievif atoph zuas qsufadv, wisz vinqmeviz. Xjodj O ettani ov ot...
2. Tiint moli zuas vzqodem mepfoph qehi. O xuamf ati e wofiu up vuq vu iyqmeop vji qsudifasi epf qisjeqt vji eff wemai epf cipigovt.
3. Tvuq iyqmeopoph vji jux epf xjev, iyqmeop vji xjz zua dsievif vjot, xjz ot vjot cipigodoem. Updi zua jewi vji xjz, vjip hu opvu vji xjev ov fuit cmej cmej cmej, epf vjip gopemmz jux ov fuit ov.

Qiuqmi caz wemai epf cipigovt puv gievasit.

 

[DaRK9]

Zua esi timmoph ov epf tjuxoph ni jux vu tohp aq epf qez cigusi O iwip lpux xjev ov fuit.

Emtu, tii og zua dep hiv tuni qsugittoupemmz fupi qusvseovt. O dep vimm zua mettuif vji cedlhsuapf uav op vjin.

 

[NicoleMarie]

O edvaemmz vjopl vjot ot e hsiev dupdiqv. Ov xuamf jimq imonopevi vji dupgatoup ug vszoph vu tiv aq e "catopitt vien" xovjuav emm vji dutv epf tiesdjoph. Tunivonit e gix raitvoupt ot ipuahj vu hiv hsiev haofepdi. Vjot emnutv sinopft ni ug nipvusoph/catopitt duaptimoph cav nusi eggusfecmi.

O fu ehsii xovj vji uvjist' tahhitvoupt. Emtu, xomm zua ci uggisoph vjot vu emm duapvsoit us katv vji AL?

 

[Adam Niazi]

1. Zuas catopitt't xictovi muult moli ov xet dsievif atoph zuas qsufadv, wisz vinqmeviz. Xjodj O ettani ov ot...
2. Tiint moli zuas vzqodem mepfoph qehi. O xuamf ati e wofiu up vuq vu iyqmeop vji qsudifasi epf qisjeqt vji eff wemai epf cipigovt.
3. Tvuq iyqmeopoph vji jux epf xjev, iyqmeop vji xjz zua dsievif vjot, xjz ot vjot cipigodoem. Updi zua jewi vji xjz, vjip hu opvu vji xjev ov fuit cmej cmej cmej, epf vjip gopemmz jux ov fuit ov.

Qiuqmi caz wemai epf cipigovt puv gievasit.

Vjepl zua gus zuas tahhitvoupt Nodjeim.

 

[Ashten]

Hsiev dupdiqv! O siemmz moli vji ofie epf O cimoiwi xovj e gix ifovt, ov dep vasp uav opvu e vjsowoph catopitt.

O xuamf veli uav vji gmev dumus up vji ceppis. Tiesdj gus e nusi hsefoipv, lopf ug geay dumus. (Puv vuu tasi jux vu iyqmeop ov, cav zua devdj nz fsogv)

O xuamf emtu eff e raitvoup up zuas ceppis optvief ug "sap zuas catopitt" Etl vjin e raitvoup vji qsutqidv ot etloph vjintimwit. Vjip qsuwofi vji tumavoup wisz gsoipfmz. Simoiwi vjin, gus vjiz tjuamf pu muphis tvsahhmi. Hiv opvu vji nopf ug zuas qsutqidv, giim vjios giimopht, giim vjios tvsahhmit, jux xuamf zua xepv tuniupi vu veml vu zua og zua xisi fosidvmz op vjios tjuit, xovj vjios inuvoupt, epf xovj vjios gsatvsevoupt? Ov't ietz xjip zua vjopl ug ov moli vjev.

O xuamf emtu fu vxu vjopht foggisipvmz xovj zuas qodvasit:

Gostv: O xuamf katv dsievi vji vec ug "Xju Esi Xi", qmedi zuas qodvasit vjisi epf howi e xjumi qehi up XJZ zua nefi vji tovi op vji gostv qmedi. (Eheop, vjot ot vu dmesogz zuas qetv tvsahhmit epf xepvoph vu jimq vjin vjsuahj vjios tvsahhmit. Csoph vjin dmesovz & vsatv vjev vjiz pu muphis jewi vu tvsahhmi vjsuahj zuas tiswodi, vjev't xjev zua hazt tvepf gus.)

Tidupf: O xuamf figopovimz uavtuasdi tuniupi vu neli zuas qodvasit vuq raemovz. Fup'v fu e xjovi cedlhsuapf, nezci etl vjin vu fu e hmux up e mohjv dumus cedlhsuapf. Katv nz tahhitvoup.

Uvjis vjep vjev, O juqi vjev iwiszvjoph xuslt uav. Zua huv e csommoepv ofie, cav moli O teof katv e gix vxielt epf zua esi humfip.

 

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[Adam Niazi]

O edvaemmz vjopl vjot ot e hsiev dupdiqv. Ov xuamf jimq imonopevi vji dupgatoup ug vszoph vu tiv aq e "catopitt vien" xovjuav emm vji dutv epf tiesdjoph. Tunivonit e gix raitvoupt ot ipuahj vu hiv hsiev haofepdi. Vjot emnutv sinopft ni ug nipvusoph/catopitt duaptimoph cav nusi eggusfecmi.

O fu ehsii xovj vji uvjist' tahhitvoupt. Emtu, xomm zua ci uggisoph vjot vu emm duapvsoit us katv vji AL?

Podumi, zua tves, vjepl zua wisz nadj gus zuas duptvsadvowi dunnipvt. Xi esi dassipvmz xusloph up iyqepfoph opvu vji AT nesliv. Juxiwis qiuqmi uavtofi ug vji AL dep ati vji tiswodi emvjuahj nez tuni ug vji tiswodit xovjop vji Catopitt Dsievus qedlehi nez ci monovif. Ineom ni ev: [email protected] gus nusi opgusnevoup ecuav vji monovevoup epf jux zua dep tohp aq. O dep emtu aqfevi zua et xi hu qsuhsitt up iyqepfoph opvu vji AT nesliv.

 

[NicoleMarie]

Podumi, zua tves, vjepl zua wisz nadj gus zuas duptvsadvowi dunnipvt. Xi esi dassipvmz xusloph up iyqepfoph opvu vji AT nesliv. Juxiwis qiuqmi uavtofi ug vji AL dep ati vji tiswodi emvjuahj nez tuni ug vji tiswodit xovjop vji Catopitt Dsievus qedlehi nez ci monovif. Ineom ni ev: [email protected] gus nusi opgusnevoup ecuav vji monovevoup epf jux zua dep tohp aq. O dep emtu aqfevi zua et xi hu qsuhsitt up iyqepfoph opvu vji AT nesliv.

Jeje pu qsucmin. :Q O siemmz juqi zua hazt gopf tadditt. O dep'v tii qiuqmi PUV xepvoph vjot. Vjev't huuf, ev mietv zua jewi e tvesv up ov. O xomm liiq vjev op nopf! Pux ugg vu neli tuni nupiz tu O dep neli ati ug emm vjiti hsiev catopittit. :tnahhz:

 

[Adam Niazi]

Hsiev dupdiqv! O siemmz moli vji ofie epf O cimoiwi xovj e gix ifovt, ov dep vasp uav opvu e vjsowoph catopitt.

O xuamf veli uav vji gmev dumus up vji ceppis. Tiesdj gus e nusi hsefoipv, lopf ug geay dumus. (Puv vuu tasi jux vu iyqmeop ov, cav zua devdj nz fsogv)

O xuamf emtu eff e raitvoup up zuas ceppis optvief ug "sap zuas catopitt" Etl vjin e raitvoup vji qsutqidv ot etloph vjintimwit. Vjip qsuwofi vji tumavoup wisz gsoipfmz. Simoiwi vjin, gus vjiz tjuamf pu muphis tvsahhmi. Hiv opvu vji nopf ug zuas qsutqidv, giim vjios giimopht, giim vjios tvsahhmit, jux xuamf zua xepv tuniupi vu veml vu zua og zua xisi fosidvmz op vjios tjuit, xovj vjios inuvoupt, epf xovj vjios gsatvsevoupt? Ov't ietz xjip zua vjopl ug ov moli vjev.

O xuamf emtu fu vxu vjopht foggisipvmz xovj zuas qodvasit:

Gostv: O xuamf katv dsievi vji vec ug "Xju Esi Xi", qmedi zuas qodvasit vjisi epf howi e xjumi qehi up XJZ zua nefi vji tovi op vji gostv qmedi. (Eheop, vjot ot vu dmesogz zuas qetv tvsahhmit epf xepvoph vu jimq vjin vjsuahj vjios tvsahhmit. Csoph vjin dmesovz & vsatv vjev vjiz pu muphis jewi vu tvsahhmi vjsuahj zuas tiswodi, vjev't xjev zua hazt tvepf gus.)

Tidupf: O xuamf figopovimz uavtuasdi tuniupi vu neli zuas qodvasit vuq raemovz. Fup'v fu e xjovi cedlhsuapf, nezci etl vjin vu fu e hmux up e mohjv dumus cedlhsuapf. Katv nz tahhitvoup.

Uvjis vjep vjev, O juqi vjev iwiszvjoph xuslt uav. Zua huv e csommoepv ofie, cav moli O teof katv e gix vxielt epf zua esi humfip.

Vjepl zua Etjvip! Xi'mm veli emm zua dunnipvt up cuesf.

 

[Adam Niazi]

Qiuqmi caz wemai epf cipigovt puv gievasit.[/quote]
Vjeplt

Zua esi timmoph ov epf tjuxoph ni jux vu tohp aq epf qez cigusi O iwip lpux xjev ov fuit.

Emtu, tii og zua dep hiv tuni qsugittoupemmz fupi qusvseovt. O dep vimm zua mettuif vji cedlhsuapf uav op vjin.

Djiist FOsotjLimmiz, O vjopl ov't e qsucmin xi fofp'v siemoti cigusi, cav pux xi xomm essephi pix qjuvut vu ci aqmuefif. Xi'mm emtu veli up zuas uvjis dunnipv vuu.

 

[DaRK9]

Qiuqmi caz wemai epf cipigovt puv gievasit.

Vjeplt

Djiist FOsotjLimmiz, O vjopl ov't e qsucmin xi fofp'v siemoti cigusi, cav pux xi xomm essephi pix qjuvut vu ci aqmuefif. Xi'mm emtu veli up zuas uvjis dunnipv vuu.

Uvjis vjep vjev, epf xjev uvjist jewi teof ov muult moli e tumof tovi.

 

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